书面表达三性训练完整性层次性合理性课件高考英语复习

书面表达三性训练——完整性，层次性，合理性（2016年新课标全国卷III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1、词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearBob,I’msorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Yours,LiHua1、文章无层次2、关键词缺失3、无法写出正确句子4、内容合理性出现偏差5、卷面书写问题：完整性层次性合理性DearJack,I’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tgotothemovieswithyouthisSaturday.Iwantyoutoknowwhathashappened.Justnow,mymotherreceivedacall,sayingmygrandmaisill.It’shalfayearsinceIlastvisitedherinthecountryside.Ireallymissher,whoplayedanimportantroleinmychildhoodwhenmyparentswerebusywiththeirwork.MyparentsaskedmetogowiththemtovisitmygrandparentsthisSaturday.Thus,Ican’tgowithyouasplanned.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.ShallIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilnextweek?Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Task1:阅读并分析短文Q1:这篇书面表达写作的内容是什么？Q2：这是什么类型的文体？你是如何知道的？Q3：内容要点有哪些？是如何展开的？Task1:阅读并分析短文与外国朋友Jack约好周六下午一起去看电影，但因故不能赴约，写信表示歉意。道歉信。I’mwritingtosaysorrytoyou...1.表示歉意2.说明原因

3.另约时间DearJack,I’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tgotothemovieswithyouthisSaturday.Iwantyoutoknowwhathashappened.Justnow,mymotherreceivedacall,sayingmygrandmaisill.It’shalfayearsinceIlastvisitedherinthecountryside.Ireallymissher,whoplayedanimportantroleinmychildhoodwhenmyparentswerebusywiththeirwork.MyparentsaskedmetogowiththemtovisitmygrandparentsthisSaturday.Thus,Ican’tgowithyouasplanned.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.ShallIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilnextweek?Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Task1:阅读并分析短文承上启下Q4：文中用到了哪些短语给你留下了深刻印象？Q5：文中有哪些句型是下次写作我也可以使用的？Task1:阅读并分析短文makeanapologytoyou...,sayingplayedanimportantroleasplannedputoffanyinconveniencecausedI’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoubecause...Iwantyoutoknowwhathashappened.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.ShallIsuggestthat...Task2:我来命题Task3:阅读并比较分析以下英语短文。Q1:以上三篇作文有什么相似之处？Q2：以上三篇作文有什么不同之处？Q3：以上三篇作文对我的启示是什么?(例如：篇章结构...)1.表示歉意2.说明原因3.希望获得对方原谅Passage1:另约时间、期待回复Passage2:×

Passage3:补偿措施情景Conclusion:道歉信第一段交代写信目的，因某事向某人道歉，恳请对方接收自己的道歉。Dear_____,I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmyapologythat_____（道歉的原因）Ifeelsorryforitandwantyoutoknowthereason.______（解释原因一）.Besides,_______(原因二).______(补救措施).

I’dappreciateitifyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmyintention.I’mterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.

Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段向对方解释导致自己所犯过失或错误的原因。第三段希望能够得到对方的理解和原谅，希望有机会弥补，并提出措施。Conclusion:参考句型PartI：“道歉”句式1.I’mwritingtoexpressmyapologythat.../apologize/makeanapologytoyoubecause/for(doing)...2.I’mterribly/indeed/deeplysorry(totellyou)that...3.I’mwritingtosaysorrytoyoubecauseIcan’tkeep/obeyourpromiseto.../that...Conclusion:参考句型PartII：“解释原因”句式1.Iwantyoutoknowthereason/whathashappened.2.Iwillbeverygratefulifyouarekindtolistentomyexplanation.3.Thisisowingtothefactthat...4.Thereasonformydelay/absenceisthat...Conclusion:参考句型PartIII：“得到对方原谅并提出措施”句式1.ShallIsuggestthat.../Iwouldliketosuggest...2.Iwouldappreciateitifyouallowmetomakeitanotherday/fixanotherday/日期/时刻(todo...)3.Isitconvenientforyouto...?Conclusion:参考句型PartIII：“得到对方原谅并提出措施”句式4.I’dappreciateitif/Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyand