适用于新高考新教材备战2025届高考英语一轮总复习写作专项提升Step2第4讲绚丽多彩的并列句和三大从句课件外研版

第四讲绚丽多彩的并列句和三大从句一、美观齐整的并列句并列句是用并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来的句子。在这一句型中,需要注意的是,连接并列主语时,有些句型要采取“就近原则”。1.并列关系常用句型或词语both...and...(既……又……),notonly...but(also)...(不但……而且……),neither...nor...(既不……也不……),when...(这时……),and(和),aswellas(和;又)(2022全国甲卷满分作文)Not

onlydooceansofferussufficientfood,buttheyalsomaintainthebalanceofnature.海洋不仅为我们提供充足的食物,而且还维持着大自然的平衡。2.选择关系常用句型或词语either...or...或者……或者……,not...but...不是……而是……,or或者,otherwise否则Eitherhecouldnotcomeorhedidnotwantto.他不是来不了就是不想来。3.转折关系常用词语but但是,however然而,while然而(1)(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,读后续写)Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.我们挨着坐了下来,但大卫不看我。(2)MyfriendJohntakesapositiveattitudetowardslifewhilehissisterdoesn’t.我的朋友约翰对生活采取积极的态度,而他的妹妹却不是。4.因果关系常用词语for因为,so因此Youonlyhaveanhourtocompletethegamesoit’samaddashagainsttheclock.你们只有一个小时来完成比赛,因此这是一次和时间的疯狂角逐。雕词琢句用并列句完成句子1.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)“TalkandTalk”isanamazingprogram

(并且它已经帮助我们拓宽了我们的视野).

2.Wecanfindthatitisveryattractivetogetentertainedfromthetoptwo,

(而其余的类型则很乏味).

3.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)Davidwassteppingforward

(这时他被一块大石头绊倒了).

4.(2022全国甲卷,书面表达)Someoceanshavebeenpollutedmuch,

(但许多人还没有意识到危险).andithashelpedustobroadenourhorizonswhiletheresttypesareverydullwhenhetrippedoverabigrockbutmanypeoplehaven’trealizedthedanger5.(2022全国乙卷,书面表达)65%ofthestudentschoosetolistentoEnglishsongs,

(而他们中只有12%浏览英语学习网站).

6.(2021天津6月卷,书面表达)Welookliketwins,

(但我们完全不同).

7.(2020全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)

(他不仅是我的父亲),butheisalsothepersonthatIrespectmost.

8.Hehastroubleinreading,

(因为他的视力不好).

whileonly12%ofthemvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesbutwearecompletelydifferentHeisnotonlymyfatherforhehaspoorsight二、富有文采的状语从句1.时间状语从句引导词:①常用的有when,as,while,assoonas,before,after,since,till,until;②特殊的有theminute,themoment,everytime,theinstant,immediately,directly,nosooner...than,hardly...when,scarcely...when(1)(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,读后续写)Itdidn’ttakelongbeforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.没过多久,他又站了起来,继续他的使命。(2)(2021天津3月卷,书面表达)Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundBeijingwhen

that

day

comes.我真诚地希望你的梦想成真,到那时我会很高兴带你参观北京。2.地点状语从句引导词常用:where,wherever,anywhere,everywhereIfyouaretravelingwhere

the

customs

are

totally

different

from

your

own,youmayfeelaculturalshock.如果你在一个风俗与你当地完全不同的地方旅游,你可能会感到文化冲击。3.目的状语从句引导词常用:sothat,inorderthat(2022全国乙卷满分作文)AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeakingso

that/in

order

thattheycandeveloptheircommunicationskills.就我而言,学生应该多听和多说,这样才能培养他们的沟通技巧。4.原因状语从句引导词:①常用的有because,since,as,for;②特殊的有nowthat,consideringthat,giventhat(2022全国甲卷满分作文)What’smore,oceanshaveagreateffectonworldclimatebecausetheycantakeinheatfromthesun.更重要的是,海洋对世界气候有很大的影响,因为它们可以吸收太阳的热量。5.结果状语从句引导词常用:so...that,such...thatYouareso

kind

and

considerate

that

we

hope

to

be

friends

with

younomatterwhereyouare.你们如此善良、体贴,无论你们在哪里,我们都希望成为你们的朋友。6.条件状语从句引导词常用:if,unless,incase,aslongas,onlyif,onconditionthat(2022天津6月卷满分作文)Anyone,as

long

asyouareinterestedinoralEnglish,canjoinus,toexploreanewworld.任何人,只要你对英语口语感兴趣,都可以加入我们,一起探索新的世界。7.让步状语从句引导词常用:though,although,evenif/though,while,特殊疑问词-ever,as,whether...or(not)...(1)(2023全国甲卷,书面表达)IhavelearnedfromXuXiakethatwhateverwedoweshoulddotheminpersonandexploretheunknownbravely.我从徐霞客身上学到了,做任何事情都要亲力亲为,勇于探索未知。(2)Everystudent,no

matter

how

talented

or

hard-working,willcomeacrossdifficultiesinhisorherstudy.每位学生,不管他或她有多么聪明、多么努力,在学习中总会遇到困难。三、光彩夺目的定语从句1.限制性定语从句与先行词关系密切,没有逗号与先行词隔开,应正确使用关系代词和关系副词。(1)(2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)Furthermore,forthosewhoareweakinoralEnglish,wouldyougivethemmoreadviceandchancestopracticespeaking?此外,对于那些英语口语较弱的学生,你会给他们更多的建议和练习口语的机会吗?(2)(2020江苏卷,书面表达)Ithasalwaysbeenanattractionforthose

whoarekeenonChinese.对于那些喜欢中文的人来说,它一直有吸引力。2.非限制性定语从句对所修饰的成分做进一步说明,去掉了也不会影响主句的意思,它与主句之间通常用逗号分开。(1)(2023全国甲卷,书面表达)OneofhisachievementswasthathediscoveredthesourceoftheJinshaRiver,whichheprovedwasthesourceoftheYangtzeRiver.他的成就之一是发现了金沙江的源头,并证明了金沙江就是长江的源头。(2)(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)Ourschoolwillholdathemeclassmeeting,which

willbeexhibitedontheEnglishwebsite.我们学校将举办一个主题班会,它将在英文网站上展示。3.“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句此结构中关系代词指人用whom,指物用which。(1)Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,during

whichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.搜集材料花了我们整整一周的时间,在此期间我们采访了我们的老师并拍摄了学校生活的各个方面。(2)(2020新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)LastSunday,ourschoolhelda5kmcross-countryrace,the

route

of

whichstartedfromourschoolgatetotheSouthMountain.上周日,我校举行了一场5千米越野赛,比赛路线从校门开始,一直到南山。4.which,as引导的非限制性定语从句which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。(1)Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentstoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,which

turned

out

to

be

extremely

rewarding.上周,我们带领外国学生体验了正宗的茶文化,结果证明非常值得。(2)As

is

often

the

case,peopletendtotalkloudinpublicplaces,annoyingothersaround.人们倾向于在公共场所高声谈话干扰周围的人,这是常有的事。四、丰富多彩的名词性从句1.主语从句(1)(2022全国甲卷满分作文)Firstofall,what

we

can

doisplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.首先,我们能做的就是重视我们的日常行为。(2)(2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)Inmyview,itisbetterthatstudentscanchoosetheirownpartnersbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesandpersonalpreferences.在我看来,学生最好根据自己的语言能力和个人喜好来选择自己的搭档。2.表语从句(that在表语从句中不作成分,但不能省略)(1)(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)Yourtakingmyinvitationintoconsiderationiswhat

I

expect.我希望你能考虑我的邀请。(2)(2022全国甲卷满分作文)The

most

important

thing

is

thatweindividualsshouldraiseourawarenessofenvironmentprotection,reducingourcarbonfootprintandlivingagreenlifestyle.最重要的是,我们个人应该提高我们的环保意识,减少我们的碳足迹,过绿色生活。3.宾语从句(注意语序和时态)(1)(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,读后续写)Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhat

had

happened.我迅速在人群中寻找学校的教练,问他发生了什么事。(2)I’dalsoliketoknowhow

much

I

have

to

pay

for

the

course

and

whether

accommodation

is

included.我还想知道我要付多少学费,是否包含住宿。4.同位语从句(前后互相解释,地位平等)(1)We

hold

the

firm

belief

thatthevisitorswillknowmoreabouttraditionalChinesecultureandatthesametimeenjoythebeautyofit.我们坚信游客会了解更多的中国传统文化,与此同时享受中国传统文化的美。(2)No

one

can

deny

the

fact

thatsmokingleadstolungcancer.没有人能否认吸烟能导致肺癌这一事实。雕词琢句句式升级/用从句完成句子1.Heranslowerthanothers,buthekeptonrunningandrunning.→

,hekeptonrunningandrunning.2.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)“TalkandTalk”isaprogram.Itisdesignedtointerviewsomepeopletotalkabouteverythingpositive,coveringlife,work,studyandsoon.→“TalkandTalk”isaprogram

somepeopletotalkabouteverythingpositive,cover