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备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点01校园欺凌一、话题作文1.近年来校园欺凌事件频频发生,为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力,某中学围绕校园欺凌(bullyv.)问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华,以Howtoprotectourselvesinschool为标题写一篇短文,主要包括如下内容:1.校园欺凌对我们的影响。2.要求每个学生都学习相关知识。3.遇到校园欺凌时要冷静处置;及时告诉老师和家长;在校要友好待人,遵守校规……4.请求大家团结起来,校园会变得更美好。要求:1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;3.卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2—3分;4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sgettogetherandmakeanefforttostopbullying.I’mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.【参考范文】Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Sowewilllearnhowtoprotectourselvesatschool.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldkeepcalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldaskourteachersandparentsforhelpassoonaspossibleorwecancallthepoliceintime.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan’thaveanyrudebehavior.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Finally,followingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.Let’sgettogetherandmakeanefforttostopbullying.I’mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头,呼应短文结尾;要求我们对“校园欺凌”这个事件展开,并联系实际,发表自己的观点。2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主;要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中,不能遗漏要点;可以根据表达需要适当发挥,使文章内容更加充实、完整,但需要注意合理性,要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨;同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然。2.请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答,结合以下提示,以“HowCanWeProtect

OurselvesatSchool?”为题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。提示:1.谨慎交友。2.不参与打架斗殴。3.面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。参考词汇:1.

self-protection(自我保护)2.bully(n./v.欺凌)3.personalsafety(人身安全)4.haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗殴)HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture,doyouthinkso?【详解】这是一篇话题作文,以“HowCanWeProtect

OurselvesatSchool?”为题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料,认真审题,确定主题,确定要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点,列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。本文提纲:在学校我们如何保护自己?几乎每个学校都有欺负学校的行为。在我的学校里,我们有时会被欺负,一些学生会受到伤害,所以在学校欺负别人或被欺负对我们来说真的很不好。当我们遇到校园欺凌的麻烦时,我们应该阻止任何校园欺凌。例如,在发生欺凌行为之前,我们应该保持冷静。与他人交朋友时,我们应该总是友好和乐于助人。以下是我关于制止学校欺负的一些想法。首先,我们将学习如何自我保护,因为我们的人身安全是最重要的。第二,我们要时刻与他人和睦相处,不能有任何暴力行为。最后,遵守校规也是避免学校欺负的一种方式。我希望将来学校里不会发生欺负学生的事,你这么认为吗?【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,语言要规范,时态运用要正确,叙述清楚条里,信息表达清晰、完整,意思连贯。写作六步法:1.审题:文体,时态,人称。2.抓住要点:要点是否齐全,适当补充。3.扩充句子:通过增加状语,定语,连词,使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文,合理使用连词。5.改正错误:拼写是否错误,语法时态是否正确,连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文:注意书写工整美观整洁。3.校园欺凌事件屡有发生,而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑,不敢去学校,甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示:(1)Whatcanyouseeinthepicture?(2)Whatdoyouthinkofschoolbullying?(3)Whatwillyoudoifyouarebulliedoryouseesomebodyelsebeingbullied?要求:1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点,可以适当发挥;2、词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。参考词汇:mentalhealthproblems(心理问题)bullies(仗势欺人者)Inthepicture,Icansee______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Inthepicture,Icanseetwogirlsarebullyingonegirl.Bullyingoftenoccursinschools.Inmyopinion,schoolbullyingisaseriousproblemthathasgotmoreandmoreattentioninsociety.Beingbulliedcanmakestudentsfeelscaredorupset.Somestudentsareafraidofgoingtoschool.Schoolbullyingcanevenleadtomoreseriousmentalhealthproblems.Sohowshouldwestopschoolbullying?IfIseesomebodybeingbulliedorIambullied,Iwilltelltheteachersormyparentsatonce.Itisnotagoodideatodoanybadthingstothebulliesonmyown.【详解】1.题干解读:观察所给图片,根据所给提示和要求写一篇有关校园欺凌方面的短文,文中必须包含所给提示要点,可适当发挥,但短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。2.写作指导:本文主要是发表观点,提出处理方法,所以时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。写作时,可先描述图片中的现象,再发表自己的观点以及处理方法。保证内容完整、行文连贯、表达准确、书写规范。4.在日常生活中,人们会遇到各种安全问题,例如饮食、交通、防疫或校园欺凌(bullyv.)等问题。但有些同学不知道如何进行自我保护。基于此,为了提高同学们的自我保护意识,请以“SelfProtection”为题,用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:1.结合生活实际,谈谈自我保护的重要性。2.列举生活中的安全问题(至少两个方面),并分别提出合理化建议。写作要求:1.语言流畅,层次清晰,可以适当发挥。2.词数100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;书写规范,卷面整洁。3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!【参考范文】SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.Asstudents,wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedgoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough,wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Thesethreesuggestionsaregoodforustoprotectourselves.Weshouldadoptthesesuggestionstoprotectourselves.Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求结合生活实际讲述自我保护的重要性,讲述自我保护的一些建议。2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主,讲述自我保护的重要性及自我保护的一些建议,要叙述完整,条理清晰。二、材料作文5.为配合扫黑除恶专项整治工作,杜绝校园欺凌,打造和谐安定校园,作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。提示:1.尊敬老师(respecttheteachers),努力学习。2.与同学融洽相处(getonwellwith),互相帮助。3.不要与他人吵架,不偷盗他人物品。4.遵守学校的规章制度(followtheschoolrules),不下河洗澡,不携带管制刀具(restrictedknives)。5.不要私自会见陌生人,遇险应报警。要求:1.语句通顺,语意连贯。2.运用以上提示词,内容可适当发挥。3.作文开头已给出,不计入总词数。It’simportantforusstudentstohaveaharmoniousandstablecampus._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】It’simportantforusstudentstohaveaharmoniousandstablecampus.It’sgoodforourlifeandstudy.Asstudents,weshoulddosomethingtocreateaharmoniousandstablecampus.Firstly,weshouldrespecttheteachersandstudyhard.Secondly,weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates,andweshouldhelpeachother.Thirdly,weshouldnotfightwithothersorstealothers’things.What’smore,wemustfollowtheschoolrules.Wecan’tswimintheriversortakerestrictedknivestoschool.Lastly,weshouldnotmeetthestrangersalone.Andweshouldcallthepolicewhenweareindanger.It’sourdutytokeepourcampusharmoniousandstable.Let’sstartfromtoday.【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给提示,写一篇作文关于解决校园欺凌、打造和谐安定校园。2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第一人称行文。写作时涵盖要点,不要遗漏,内容可适当发挥,适当使用连词使文章更加连贯。最后力求语句通顺,无单词语法错误。6.近来,校园暴力频发,引起无数人关注。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示,以“Buildacivilizedschool”为题,用英语写一篇短文。要点具体内容现状危害恐惧;厌学;自卑;措施国家:颁布法律;社会:呼吁学校和家庭关注生命教育和心理教育;个人:就如何从自己做起,正确处理和同学的关系,提出你的建议(至少两点)。注意:1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;2.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。4.参考词汇:civilized文明的;psychologicaleducation心理教育;buly欺负(动词).BuildacivilizedschoolRecently,schoolbullyinghasbecomeaseriousproblem._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】例文BuildacivilizedschoolRecently,schoolbullyinghasbecomeaseriousproblem.15.6percentofstudentsarebulliedatschooland30.2ofthestudentsseeothersbullied.41%ofthevictimschoosetotellthepolice,teachersandparentsabouttheirsituation,while51%ofthemchoosetokeepsilent.Schoolbullyinghasagreatimpactonstudents.Theywillbecometiredofstudyingandbeafraidofanything.Andtheywillalsofeelinferior.Inordertochangethesituation,wemusttakeactions.Firstofall,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstopunishthesepeoplewhobullyothers.What’smore,schoolsandparentsshouldpayattentiontolifeeducationandpsychologicaleducation.Themostimportantisthatstudentsshouldrealizetheharmofbullyingandtrytogetonwellwithother.Whenintrouble,asktheadultsforhelpimmediately.Ihopethroughworkingtogether,wewillbuildacivilizedschool.【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要以“Buildacivilizedschool”为题根据表格内容写一篇有关校园暴力的文章,可适当增加细节。2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。第一段主要描述校园暴力的现状和危害;第二段讲述为阻止校园暴力采取的措施;第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。7.请你根据以下提示,以Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool为题,写一篇短文。要点如下:1.谨慎交友;2.不参与打架斗殴;3.面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。参考词汇:self­-protection(自我保护);bully(n.&v.欺凌);personalsafety(人身安全);haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗殴)Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowcanweprotectourselvesatschoolSchoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself­-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehaviors.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool”为题,根据提示要点的内容,从谨慎交友、不参与打架斗殴、面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护等方面写一篇短文;注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。三、讲稿8.近日,“校园欺凌”

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