中考英语复习-写作课课件VIP

Processwriting

AWonderful______ Whichpicturemayshowyourfeelingswhenreferringtowritingacomposition?Lead-inCrazyUnhappy

HappyWhat'syourprobleminwriting?Learnsomeusefulstructuresandexpressionsforwriting.Learnhowtowriteacompositionabouttraveling.Learnhowtoenjoythebeautyofnature.LearningObjectivesAttheendofthisclass,studentsshouldbeableto:AWonderful__________要求：1.请把题目补充完整再作答。2.注意紧扣主题，语义连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。3.不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用YunnanInternationalSchool.4.字数不少于60字。

【Brainstorm】

Whatcanbewrittenintheblank?Forexample:AWonderfulfriendbookplacemoviestorygiftpartydaytrip【Analysethewritingrequirement】以AWonderfulTrip为例1.文体：本文叙述精彩的旅行，应为____________;2.时态：全文都为回忆过去发生的事情，应该用______________;3.人称：本文为介绍自己及同伴的旅游，应该用__________________________;记叙文一般过去时第一人称和第三人称

【WritingContents】

Howmanypartsshouldbewritten?Andwhatshouldbeincludedineachpart?PartOneBeginning(When,where,who...)PartTwoPartThreeBody(What,how,howlong...)Ending(Howdoyoufeel...)

【WritingSkills】

Whichoneisbetter?A.Iwanttoseeyouagain.B.I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.A.Hisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.B.Tohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.A.IthinkitisinterestingtolearnEnglish.B.IfinditreallyinterestingtolearnEnglish.1.善用词汇2.活用多种句型她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A.Sheisveryyoung.Shecan'tcarrytheheavybox.B.Sheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.C.Sheissoyoungthatshecan'tcarrytheheavybox.D.Sheisnotoldenoughtocarrytheheavybox.3.妙用关联词1).表示关联或递进and,besides,aswellas,both...and,what'smore,notonly...butalso...2).表示选择or,either...or...3).表示转折but,however,although/though,afterall,anyway...4).表示因果because,so,therefore,since,asaresult,for...5).表示结论allinall,inaword,inshort,generallyspeaking...Haveatry!!!

【UsefulStructures】PartOne---Beginning自我介绍Hi,mynameis...;Hello,I'm...过去时间表述Lastweekend;lastsummervacation;afewdaysago...去了北京gotoBeijing;takemetoBeijing;spendaholidayinBeijing;haveawonderfultripinBeijing;enjoyoneselfinBeijing..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewriteyourbeginning:

Lookatthepictures,writedownthekeywordsthatcometoyourmind.Thenchoosesomepicturestodescribeyourtrip.PartTwo---BodyMangshiGoldenToweramazing,beatuful,thousandsofpeople..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewriteyourbody:【UsefulStructures】PartThree---Ending心情happy/excited;tiredbuthappy....收获enjoynature;relaxoneself;broadenone'shorizon...难以忘怀unforgettable;rememberitforever...期望再来lookforwardto;can'twaitto/canhardlywaitto..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewriteyourending:Self-editingandPeer-editingDirectionforediting:Arethereanymistakesinspellings,tensesorstructures?Isthewritinghaveagoodwordchoice?Isthewritingcreativeandcoherent?Didyouusethevariousstructuresorjustrepeatedones?Demonstrationsomestudents'writingAWonderfulTrip

Hello.I'mGina,astudentinYunnanInternationalSchool.Lastsummervacation,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents. BeijingisthecapitalofChina,ithasaverylonghistoryandattractsmillionsofpeopleeveryyear.Weflewthere,becauseit'sfastandcomfortable.Astheoldsayinggoes,“OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.”So,wewenttotheGreatWallonthefirstday.Itwassoamazingthatittookmybreathaway.WehadagoodtimeinthePalaceMuseumtheotherday.ThereweresomanypeopleandItookalotofphotosthere.Besides,weenjoyedthefamousBeijingroastduck.Itwasre