2024.1月九省联考英语读后续写分析海豚的秘密讲义高三英语二轮复习

题目：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lastsummer,Hildaworkedasavolunteerwithdolphintrainersatasealifepark.Herjobwastomakesurethetankswerefreeofanyitemssothatthetrainerscouldtrainthedolphinstofetchspecificitems.However,onedayaftercleaning,oneofthedolphins,Maya,presentedHildawithacandywrapperfromthetank.WhenKatherine,thetrainer,sawthis,sheblamedHildaforhercarelessness.Upsetbutnotdiscouragedbythisevent,HildadecidedtodosomespyingonMaya.Thenextmorning,Hildaarrivedattheparkearly.Sheputonherscubagear（水下呼吸器）andjumpedintothetankforherusual,underwatersweep.Findingnothinginthetank,sheclimbedoutofthewaterjustintimetoseeKatherinejumpinginontheotherside.Afterwhathappenedyesterday,Hildaknewwhatshewasdoing.ShewatchedasKatherineperformedherunderwatersearch,butHildawasn'tsurprisedwhenshesurfacedemptyhanded.Duringthetanksweeps,Mayahadbeenswimmingplayfully,butnowthedolphinstoppedsuddenlyandswamtothebackpartofthetankwherethefilter（过滤）boxwaslocated.Shestuckhernosedownbehindtheboxandthenswamaway.WhatwasMayadoingbackthere?Hildawondered.Shejumpedbackintothewaterandswamovertotakealookbehindthebox,andherquestionwasanswered.HildathenswamacrossthetankfollowingMaya'spathandemergedfromthewatertofindKatherineremovingherscubagear.AsKatherineturnedaround,hermouthdroppedopen.TherewasMayaattheedgeofthetankwithab（梳子）inhermouthwaitingforhertreat.“Maya!Wheredidyougetthat?”demandedKatherine,takingthebandthrowingherafish.“Iknowwhereshegotit,”declaredHildaclimbingoutofthetankwithahandfulofitemsstillwetfromtheirwatery,restingplace.“What'sallthis?”Katherineasked,obviouslyconfused.注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“ThisisMaya'ssecret,”Hildasaidwithabigsmile.

NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.第一步：阅读线索：1.角色：希尔达：在海洋生物公园与海豚训练员一起做志愿者玛雅：一只海豚凯瑟琳：教练2.情绪：对此事件感到沮丧但并不气馁凯瑟琳转过身来，张大了嘴巴。凯瑟琳问道，显然很困惑。3.语言风格非谓语动词：她发现水箱里什么也没发现，就爬出水面，正好看到凯瑟琳从另一边跳了进去。表情描写：凯瑟琳转过身来，张大了嘴巴。形容词短语作状语：“这是怎么回事？”凯瑟琳问道，显然很困惑。第二步:阅读主题主题——目标：她的工作是确保水箱里没有任何物品，这样训练者就可以训练海豚获取特定的物品。主题——问题：玛雅，从坦克里给希尔达一个糖果包装…希尔达对这件事感到沮丧，但并不气馁，她决定对玛雅进行一些间谍活动。（回答：海豚把鼻子伸到盒子后面，然后游走了。）总结主题：只要让希尔达从盒子里拿出特定的物品来招待来访者和她自己。第三步推断情节“这是玛雅的秘密，”希尔达笑着说。主要写：希尔达是怎么泄露秘密的？思考：1.直接告知Maya的秘密？（这样会显得情节单调，很难拓展开来）2.间接告知：带着她一起进去看那个盒然后从中取出来一个物件。（这样就会有细节描写，尤其是是动作描写）1.看到她的困惑，示意她一起进去水箱。（遵循行动响应原则，一方的困惑，另一方的急切）2.希尔达进去取东西。3.凯瑟琳的反应（遵循行动响应原则）1.希尔达看到凯瑟琳眼中的困惑，示意她穿上水肺装备，再次跳进水箱。凯瑟琳紧随其后，急切地想看看希尔达有什么花招。

2.希尔达走到坦克后面，指着箱子和外面的东西。然后，她小心翼翼地靠了进去，摸索着找什么东西。

3.没过多久，她就拿出一个东西递给凯瑟琳。凯瑟琳惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingonMainwriting:HowtotreatMayaafterlearningthetruth?Reflection:Thisneedstobelinkedtothetheme:HerjobwastomakesurethetankswerefreeofanyitemssothatthetrainerscouldtrainthedolphinstofetchspecificitemsSowecandeterminetheplot:letMayafetchhersecretitems1.FollowtheActionResponseprinciple:havetwowomeninteractandspeak.ContinuingwithKatherine'spromptsentence,continuetoexpand:KatherinesaidthatIfinallyunderstandwhyIkeeplosingsmallthings.2.HildaResponse3.Katherine'ssuddenideatheme1.两人从水箱里出来后，会心一笑。“我就知道！怎么最近少了这么多小东西？”凯瑟琳说，有点不好意思误解希尔达。2.但希尔达回应道：“她只是在和我们玩游戏。”3.“好吧，为什么不让她从盒子里为来访的客人拿一些特定的东西呢？”凯瑟琳兴奋地喊道。

末句主题：在接下来的日子里，玛雅热情地向大家展示了她的秘密收藏，整个海洋生物公园每天都充满了欢乐的笑声。参考答案：“ThisisMaya'ssecret,”Hildasaidwithabigsmile.SeeingtheconfusioninKatherine'seyes,Hilda

gestured

forhertoputonthescubagearandonceagainjumpintothetank.Katherinefollowedclosely,

eagertosee

whattricksHildahaduphersleeve.Hildareachedthebackofthetank,pointingattheboxandtheitemsoutside.Thenwithgreatcare,she

leaned

into

grope

forsomething.

Itdidn’ttakelongbefore

shetookoutanobjectandhandedittoKatherine.Katherine’s

eyeswidenedinastonishment.NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.Afterthetwoemergedfromthetank,they

exchangedknowingsmiles.

“Iknewit!Howesomanysmallthingshavebeenmissinglately?”Katherinesaid,kindofembarrassedformisunderstandingHilda.ButHildaresponded,“She’sjustplayingagamewithus.”“Well,whynothaveherfetchspecificitemsfromtheboxforthevisitingguests?”Katherineexclaimedexcitedly.Inthedaysthatfollowed,Mayaenthusiasticallypresentedhersecretcollectiontoeveryone,theentiresealifepark

echoing

withdelightedlaughtereveryday.默写版：“ThisisMaya'ssecret,”Hildasaidwithabigsmile.__________________________________________________________希尔达看到凯瑟琳眼中的困惑，示意她穿上潜水装备，再次跳进水箱.Katherinefollowedclosely,

eagertosee

whattricksHildahaduphersleeve.____________________________________________________________希尔达走到坦克后面，指着箱子和外面的东西.Thenwithgreatcare,she

leaned

into

grope

forsomething.

Itdidn’ttakelongbefore

shetookoutanobjectandhandedittoKatherine._____________________________凯瑟琳惊讶地瞪大了眼睛.NowKatherinerealizedwhathadbeengoingon.________________________两人从水箱里出来后，会心一笑.

“Iknewit!Howesomanysmallthingshavebeenmissinglately?”Katherinesaid,kindofembarrassed