读后续写题型概述第二节解题策略与方法课件高三英语一轮复习

读后续写的解题策略与方法读后续写题型概述01写作思路Contents02“五点爆破”法03“五四三”法则04“七三四”法则三、“五四三”法则三、“五四三”法则【例题讲解】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Eightyearslater,hebecameanofficerinthearmy.

Onedayhewasinvitedbytheheadmasterofhisoldhighschool.

三、“五四三”法则（一）五R解读故事1.Readforcharacters2.ReadforconflictsAdam,headmaster,Adam’smotherAdamhadadesireforthelittlecup,buthefailed.三、“五四三”法则（一）五R解读故事3.ReadforplotsSatquietlyinhislastannualfunction.Triedhardandparticipatedinallactivitieswithoutwinning.Triedthetoughestbutsafestbet—“theStudentwithHighestAttendance”.Fatedidnotfavorhim—hewasabsentfortwodaystotakecareofhismother.三、“五四三”法则（一）五R解读故事4.Readforemotionalchanges5.ReadforthethemeconfidentdesperatelywantedaprizerestlesswithanxietyandexpectationwassuretowintriedhardtoforgetthefailurebuthisdreamwasaliveHowtodealwithfailuresandsetbacks三、“五四三”法则（二）四句定框架1.先写最后一句，即主题句2.再写衔接句，即第一段的最后一句3.根据每段的段首句写角色的情感Hebecameoneofthefamousofficersinhisarmy,andhiscolleaguesandsuperiorswereproudofhim.根据第一段的段首句写：Itwasveryhardforhimtotrain,buthenevergaveup.根据第二段的段首句写：Hefeltexcitedandmoved.三、“五四三”法则（二）四句定框架4.补充完整每段的中间部分第一段：Healwayshadadreamthathewantedtobeanexcellentofficerwithaprecioustrophy.Itwasobviousthathecameacrossmanyfailures,however,heknewthatexperienceisimportantandfailurebreedssuccess.三、“五四三”法则（三）三大原则1.Action—Response原则一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段最好有1至2句对话，但是不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种反应。2.Conflict—Solution原则一般而言第二段会有问题的解决方法，但本文和其他高考的读后续写文章出题不一样，因为解决方法在所给文章中就已经有了。同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。3.Negative—Positive原则写作中一定要体现情感的变化，但无论前面是怎样的变化，最终都应该是积极的。【优秀范文】Eightyearslater,hebecameanofficerinthearmy.

Itwasveryhardforhimtotrain,buthenevergaveup.Healwayshadthedreamthathewantedtobeanexcellentofficer,holdingthepreciouscup,gettingtheapplausefromtheaudiences.Itwasobviousthathecameacrossmanyfailures,however,heknewthatexperienceisimportantandfailurebreedssuccess.Stepbystep,hegotthehighpraiseandattentionofhiscolleaguesandsuperiors.Hebecameoneofthefamousofficersinhisarmy,andhiscolleaguesandsuperiorswereproudofhim.三、“五四三”法则阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。三、“五四三”法则注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mattneverplayedbecausehedidn’tthinkhewasgoodenough.

GrandfatherknewthisandwantedtohelpMatt.

三、“五四三”法则【参考范文】Mattneverplayedbecausehedidn’tthinkhewasgoodenough.Hewasafraidofmakingamistake.Hewasoldenoughandbigenoughbuthewastooafraidtotry.Hethoughthewouldneverbeabletohittheball.Thenhewouldleteveryonedown,andtheywouldlaughathim.Andifhehittheball,hewouldbetooslowtoruntofirstbase,orhemightmisstheballwhenitwasthrowntohim.GrandfatherknewthisandwantedtohelpMatt.Holdingaball,GrandfatherstrolledovertoMattandyelled,“Hey,Matt.”Mattjumpedupwithgreatsurprise.“Grandpa!”heshouted.“Iwanttoplaybaseball.Willyoudomeafavortoplaywithme?”Grandfatherasked.Matthesitated,headdown.“Sorry,Ican’t.Iplay…”“Comeon,boy!Let’shav