英语提升与雅思写作-图文

英语提升与雅思写作_图文.pptx什么是英语提升？为什么要提升？别跟我提CET-4，CET-6,600分又如何？也别跟我提TEM-4，TEM-8，80分又如何？考试英语困惑了我们，也戕害了我们，一代又一代走不出牢笼……祸国殃民论什么是英语提升？为什么要提升？祸国殃民自然是语不惊人誓不休，但是……对80%学生而言，让他们学习英语的确是在谋财害命！而他们学习英语，是在慢性自杀！什么是英语提升？为什么要提升？But

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较高境界能与Englishnativespeakers自由交流，几乎没有障碍能读英文报刊，迅速捕捉文章的gist能相当容易地听懂英语新闻，看懂英文原版电影，不用subtitles能用相当decent的书面英文通顺逻辑地表达自己的观点更高境界能很好地欣赏英文脱口秀节目（JimmyFallon;SethMeyers;Ellen…)能做双语同传（interpreting)能用英语进行辩论(debating)能用英语写SCI论文如何提升英语？以读促写阅读几本经典英文小说（PrideandPrejudice;Persuasion;TessoftheD’bervilles;FarewelltoArms…)长期阅读英文报纸(BBC;Washingtonpost;TheGuardian;TheEconomist;NationalGeographic;theNewYorker;the21stCentury…)长期阅读本专业英文文献(本专业期刊、著作）以听练说BBC;VOA;NBC;CCTV…Sitcoms:Friends;TwoandaHalfMen;TheBigBangTheory…Movies:Roman

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Ryan…如何提升英语？特别推荐/听力普特英语听力：/html/listening/在线英语听力室：如何提升英语？特别推荐/阅读《读外刊学雅思》：加公众号ieltswriting4u，即可阅读。提升雅思词汇：阅读外刊，记雅思词汇，准确，有效熟悉雅思阅读：外刊题材难度与雅思阅读相当积累雅思写作素材：外刊的语言表达和论证素材，一般模板不可比拟名家选注：知名雅思培训专家亲自选材注释英语阅读网：www.雅思高分策略雅思（IELTS）体现了英语提升精神听：既有信息类一般材料，也有讲座性学术材料说：与老外面对面交流，考验你用英语交流的综合能力读：来自外刊、有一定难度的语言材料写：既要求描写信息，也要求写议论文雅思高分策略雅思基本情况雅思是剑桥大学开发的全球性考试希望到英联邦国家留学、移民的外国人均需要参加雅思考试各个学校雅思分数要求有一定差异，好学校均要求总分6.5，单科不低于6分。剑桥大学需要总分7.5，单科不低于7分2014年，中国雅思考生达到59万人次很多大学已经开始“雅思计划”并出台相关政策雅思高分策略如何取得理想成绩？到培训机构学蒙答案、押题（what’stheuse?)自己苦背雅思词汇、做各种真题和模拟题（bitter,lonely,notefficient)提升英语水平，到靠谱的培训机构学习考试技巧（highlyrecommended)雅思大作文的三种题型Argumentation:

给出两个对立的观点，要求对其进行分析，然后给出自己的观点。

Afterhighschool,somepeoplegotocollegetopreparethemselvesforfuturecareer,whileothersgotojobmarkettoincreasetheirworkexperience.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.雅思大作文的三种题型Discussion

给出一个观点，要求分析这个观点是否合理/利弊，并提出自己的观点。

Inmanypartsoftheworldthereiscontinuouscoverageofsportontelevision.Somepeoplebelievethisdiscouragestheyoungfromtakingpartinanysportthemselves.Discussthisviewandgiveyourownopinion.雅思大作文的三种题型Report

给出一个现象/问题，要求分析这个现象/问题产生的原因及其后果，并提出解决办法。

Majorcitiesgrowintothesurroundingcountryside,asaresult,youngpeoplefromthecountryarenowlivinginthecity.Whatproblemsarecausedduetothecities'continuedgrowth?Whatarethereasonsandwhatsolutionscanyousuggest?

雅思作文的评分标准解读◆1.Taskresponse（论点+论据）◆2.CoherenceandCohesion（连贯）◆3.LexicalResource（词汇）◆4.GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（句子）雅思作文的评分标准解读雾里看花型：能围绕题目写点别人模模糊糊能看懂的东西=4分Withoutahealthybody,otherfactorsareneedn’ttoconsider.Becauseitisimpossibletoeverycitizenshaverighttodepriveothersinthiscivilsociety.Inconclusion,dependsondifferentsituation,lawscanbeintroducetobanjoininsomemachinework.雅思作文的评分标准解读半梦半醒型：勉强能看懂，有些正确的句子，有些正确的单词，词能达意=5分

Today,astheworldpopulationkeepsboosting,unemploymentisasevereandhardsolvingproblem.Inmyperspective,whethertheyshouldbearrestedreallydependsonhowseriousthelawthattheybrokeare.Instead,hecanbeeducatedinthepoliceofficeandpayafine,towarnhimnotdoitanymore.雅思作文的评分标准解读凑合着过型：有点想法，有点逻辑，多数能看懂，有点复杂句，有几个好词=6分

Wecandrawaconclusionthatthestudentsmayadapttothesocietyearlieriftheygotoworkimmediately.However,theyarenotskillfulenough.Itisabetterchoicetostudyindepth.Therefore,althoughthereareadvantagesforstudentstogotowork,theyhadbetterstudybeforeworking,unlesstheyaregoingtostudyartsubjectsinthefuture.雅思作文的评分标准解读明明白白我的心型：有些想法，有些清晰，有些好词，有些好句子，有些错误=7分

Inrecentyears,whetherthestudentswhograduatefromhighschoolshouldgotocollegeorgotojobmarketbecomesaheatedtopicamongpeople.Itisbelievedbysomethatcollegehelpsthemprepareforfuturecareerwhileothersthinkjobmarketcanincreasetheirworkexperience.Basically,law-breakersaresenttojailwiththepurposeofpreventingthemfrombeingagainstthelawandprotectinginterestofothercitizens.雅思作文的评分标准解读我的心思你最懂型：有思想，清晰，不少好词，不少好句子，错误很少=8分

Undoubtedly,thosewhodonotobeythelawsshouldbeputintoprisonsothattheywouldnolongerbeabletoharmothercitizens.Oncebeingputintojail,thelaw-breakersarealmostisolatedfromtheoutsideworldandtheywouldbewatchedalldaylong.Inaddition,sincetherearefewthingstodointheprison,thecriminalscanreflectwhattheyhavedonewrong,changetheirattitudetowardslifeorthesocietyandthinkabouthowtheycanhelptooffsettheimpactoftheirmistakeinordertobeforgiven.雅思作文的评分标准解读6、7、8分段作文比较6分：思想基本清楚，语言基本准确、通顺、无大错7分：思想比较清楚，语言比较准确、通顺、丰富8分：思想相当清楚，语言相当准确、灵活9分：思想非常清楚，语言非常准确、地道从6分段到7分段，要注意句式的丰富性（用点从句，用点if…,since…,though…引导的句子）从7分段到8分段，要注意思维逻辑的顺畅，语言表达的灵活性（句式多样，分词短语，介词短语，抽象名词主语）从8分段到9分段，要注意思维的深刻性，语言表达的地道性。（带有一定哲理性，读起来是真正的英语）高分作文分析Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Countriesarebecomingmoreandmoresimilarbecausepeopleareabletobuythesameproductsanywhereintheworld.

Doyouthinkthisisapositiveornegativedevelopment?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.高分作文分析-节奏5个段落290wordsPara.1:2sentences,43words,14%Para.2:3sentences,96words,32%Para.3:3sentences,66words,22%Para.4:2sentences,59words,20%Para.5:1sentence,36words,12%11sentencesinall,27.3words/sentence;53wordsinthelongestsentence;8wordsintheshortest.首位段1/3;中间段2/3。高分作文分析-节奏28words–15words(Para.1)15words-53words–28words(Para.2)23words–35words–8words(Para.3)24words–35words(Para.4)36words(Para.5)长短句配合，把握节奏感段落首句用短句，论证句用长句，段落结论句（若有）用短句。高分作文分析-用词Istronglybelievethatthismoderndevelopmentislargelydetrimentaltocultureandtraditionsworldwide.

(Para.1)Acountry’shistory,languageandethosareallinextricablyboundupinitsmanufacturedartifacts.(Para.2)Thiseventuallyputsold-schoolcraftspeopleoutofwork.(Para.3)Toseethesameproductsinshopstheworldoverisboring,anddoesnotimpelvisitorstoopentheirwalletsinthesamewaythattrinketsorsouvenirsuniquetotheparticularareado.(Para.4)高分作文分析-句型Thespreadofmultinationalproductscanoftenbringinitswakealossofjobs,aspeopleturntobuyingthenewbrand,perhapsthinkingitmoreglamorousthantheonetheyareusedto.（8-9分）

比较：Thespreadofmultinationalproductscanoftenmakepeoplelosetheirjob,becausepeoplewillbuythenewbrand,fortheythinkitis

morefashionablethanthelocalbrand.（7分）再比较：Moreandmoremultinationalproductscanoftenletpeoplewithoutjob,becausepeoplewillbuythenewbrand,theythinkthenewbrandisbetterthantheoldbrand.(5-6分）高分作文分析-句型Somemayarguethatallpeopleareentitledtohaveaccesstothesameproducts,butIsaythatlocalobjectssuitlocalconditionsbest,andthatfacelessuniformityworldwideisanunwelcomeanddrearyprospect.（8-9）比较：Somepeoplemaysay/claimthatallpeopleshouldbeallowedtousethesameproducts,butIsaythatlocalobjectsarebetter,andthatitisnotaverygoodpicturetoseetheworldhasthesameface.(6-7)再比较：Somepeoplemaysaythatweallshouldusethesameproducts,butIthinkthelocalthingsarebetter,Idon’tliketoseetheworldhasthesameface.(5)高分作文分析-句型Toseethesameproductsinshopstheworldoverisboring,anddoesnotimpelvisitorstoopentheirwalletsinthesamewaythattrinketsorsouvenirsuniquetotheparticularareado.(8-9分）比较：Itisboringifweseethesameproductsinshopseverywhereintheworld,andwewillnotbuythem,butwhenweseethelocalproducts,wemayopenourwallets.(6分）再比较：Itisboringtoseethesameproductseverywhereintheworld,youwon’tbuythem,butwhenweseethelocalthings,wemaybuyit.(5分）高分作文分析-句型…thenumberofcarsthatareexportedfromanothercountryshoulddecreaseandthepricesofcarshouldincreaseincasetheyareovercrowded.(5)比较：…thenumberofcarsimportedfromothercountriesshouldbecontrolledwhilethepriceofcarsshouldbeincreasedtopreventpeoplefrombuyingthem.(6)再比较：…whiletheimportationofforeigncarsshouldbediscouraged,thepriceofthedomesticcarsshouldbeincreasedtoupsetthepotentialbuyers.(8)高分作文分析-句型Iftheyusedthebusandtraininsteadoftheircar,theproblemwouldresolvealittle.(5)

比较：Iftheychoosetotravelwiththebusandthetraininsteadoftheircar,thetrafficproblemwillbecomelesssevere.(6)

再比较：Ifthepublicmeansoftransportationsuchasthebusandthetrain,ratherthantheirowncar,becometheirprimarychoice,thetrafficproblemwillbeeffectivelyalleviated.(8)高分作文分析-思维发展共5段。第一段点题，并提出自己观点：国家趋同现象不好；第二到四段分别从三个方面论述自己观点（第二段认为，国家趋同会丧失多元性和丰富性；第三段认为产品的国际化可能让本地工人失业；第三段认为，产品趋同会降低游客购买当地纪念品的欲望，从而影响旅游业），第五段重述自己的观点。因此，从文章结构上讲，本范文非常完整。老雅认为，唯一不足的是，作者显然没有考虑第2-4段中三个理由之间的逻辑先后顺序。其实，应该先从employment谈起，再谈tourism，最后谈culturaldiversityandrichness，这个顺序由浅入深，更为符合逻辑发展基本顺序。雅思作文-从7分到8分Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.

Somepeoplethinkthatalluniversitystudentsshouldstudywhatevertheylike.Othersbelievethattheyshouldonlybeallowedtostudysubjectsthatwillbeusefulinthefuture,suchasthoserelatedtoscienceandtechnology.

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.原文的问题分析结构不合理，引入话题太长（170/414，41%）句型死板(21sentences,414words)…itislikelythattheyhavecometoaparadiseofknowledgeaswellasfreedom.…itistheirturntochoosewhattheywouldliketostudy.…itismorelikelyforustoinsistonitandmakeagreatachievementinthefuture.…itcanbereallydifficultforhimtocometothepeakofhiscareer.…itisbetterforustolearnwhatwearereallyinterestedin…原文的问题分析句式控制不严密，不灵活：用了when,if,itis…,which…;但没看见分词短语，没看到抽象名词做主语；没看到比较句型。用词不考究，鲜能给考官留下深刻印象用了relieve,restrict,distinguish这个级别的词汇，没有看见生动的比喻或者修辞性词汇。结尾延伸得太厉害，引入了新话题。对原文的评价能围绕话题展开论述语言表达清楚，有较好的用英语句子和词汇来表达自己的思想结构不尽合理语言不够灵活多变表达和思维不够简练，比较拖沓表达地道程度不够创造性使用语言的能力不够Band:7Whenstudentsarerelievedfromtheheavyburdenofendlesshomeworkinseniorhighschoolsandgetenrolledinuniversities,itislikelythattheyhavecometoaparadiseofknowledgeaswellasfreedom.Allinall,itistheirturntochoosewhattheywouldliketostudy.唐老雅修改：Relievedfromtheoverloadedburdenofhomeworkinseniorhighschool,manystudentsgointocollegeonlytofindthattheyhaveplungedintotheseaofknowledgeandwithoutanybodytellingthemwheretoswim.However,somepeoplemaystarttoworryaboutuniversitystudents’freechoices——howcouldtheychoosewhattheyshouldstudyinthenextfouryearsatsuchayoungage?Howcouldtheyknowwhichsubjectisusefulandwhichisuseless?Whatiftheystudysometotallymeaninglesssubjectsandidletheirvaluabletimeaway?唐老雅修改：Somepeoplearefilledwithmisgivingsaboutuniversitystudents’freechoices:howcouldtheypossiblytell,atsuchayoungage,whichsubjectismoreusefulthanothersandchooseitastheirfocusofstudyinthenextfouryearswhichareprobablythemostvaluabletimeintheirentirelife?

Frommyperspective,thesepeopleseemtobetooconsideratetohavealong-termprogrammeforyoungstudents’development.Inmyopinion,choosingsubjectsbythemselvescanbemorehelpfulforindividualstudentsaswellasthewholesociety.Thatistosay,parents,universityandsocietyshouldencouragestudentstostudywhattheylike,insteadofrestrictingthemtocertainpracticalsubjects.唐老雅修改：Inmyview,however,suchconsiderationsseemrathersuperfluous,forchoosingasubjectbystudentsthemselvesisbeneficialbothtothestudentsandthewholesocietyaswell.Firstly,interestisthebestteacherinourlife.Whenwehavepassiononwhatwearedoing,itismorelikelyforustoinsistonitandmakeagreatachievementinthefuture.唐老雅修改Firstly,asthesayingaptlyexpresses,“interestisthebestteacher”,whichmeansonlywhenwehavepassionforsomethingcanwedoitbetter.Forexample,agoodteachermustlovehisstudentsandkeephisstudents’interestinmind;aprofessionaldoctorneedstobehumaneandsympathetictowardshispatients;atoppianistshouldbecrazyabouthiscomposition,tonamejustfew.Onthecontrary,ifapersonisnotfascinatedaboutwhatheisstudying,itcanbereallydifficultforhimtocometothepeakofhiscareer.唐老雅修改Agoodteachermustloveteachingandkeepthestudents’interestinmind,andaphysicianmustlovelife-savingbeforehecanbehumaneandsympathetictowardshispatients,whileapianistshouldbecrazyaboutplayingandthenbecomeatop-notchartist.Contrarily,apersonnotfascinatedbywhatheisdoingismuchlesslikelytogetanywhereinhiscareer.Secondly,thedifferencesbetweenusefulnessanduselessnessarehardtodistinguish,tosomeextend.唐老雅修改Secondly,theboundarybetween“useful”and“useless”subjectsisnotthatclear-cutassomepeoplemighthaveexpected.Scienceandtechnologyarecertainlyofgreatimportanceinthedevelopmentofoursociety,butothersubjectsrelatingtophilosophyandliteraturecanalsobepriceless,whichmaynotmakealargeprofitdirectly,butmayupdateourculturefromalongperspective.Sowecannotjustsimplysaywhichsubjectisusefulandwhichisuseless.Aslongasweputourheartintowhatwearestudying,wecanmakeituseful.唐老雅修改：Undoubtedly,scienceandtechnologyisofparamountimportancetothedevelopmentofourworld,butitdoesnotfollowthatotherlesspracticalsubjectslike