环境保护 热点02 -中考英语高分作文（广东专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点02环境保护一、话题作文1．在国家大力提倡的垃圾回收利用中，垃圾分类是一个提升垃圾利用率的有效途径。我们产生的垃圾中有很大一部分都是可以回收再利用的，如：废纸箱、废纸、易拉罐等。食物垃圾可以通过处理转化为燃料与肥料，不仅能够减轻环境压力，还能创造再生资源。为了让更多的人了解垃圾分类的好处，请你以“Wastesorting”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对垃圾分类的了解与看法。词数：80~150。Wastesorting_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】WastesortingWastesortingisputtingrubbishintodifferentbins.Wastesortingandrecyclinghavemanybenefitsforsociety.Itcanturnsomethinguselessintothingsthatareusefultopeople,anditcanalsohelptolowerenvironmentalpressure.Bysortingwaste,ourworldwillbecomecleanerandmorebeautiful.Beyondthat,cleanersspendalotoftimecollectingrubbish,sowastesortingcanhelptosavethemtimeandenergy.Iamasupporterofwastesorting.Thisismyadviceonhowtodoitbetter.Wecanmakesignsandnoticestoteachpeopleaboutwastesorting.Wecanalsoworktogethertofindmoreusefulandconvenientwaystosortwaste.Ibelievethatifwesortmorewaste,ourliveswillbemorecolorfulandwonderful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示及话题完成写作，写出垃圾分类的好处以及自己的看法等。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍什么是垃圾分类；第二步，具体介绍垃圾分类对各方面的好处；第三步，最后是介绍自己对垃圾分类的看法以及应该如何做。[亮点词汇]①wastesorting垃圾分类②alotof很多③helptodosth帮助做某事[高分句型]①Thisismyadviceonhowtodoitbetter.（“疑问句+不定式”结构）②ifwesortmorewaste,ourliveswillbemorecolorfulandwonderful.（if引导的条件状语从句）2．我们的校报将举办以环保为主题的征文活动。请同学们以I'dlike________toprotectourenvironment为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的环保措施。要求:1.确定主题，说明原因;2.围绕主题，进行叙述或阐述3.词数:80-100。注意:1.补全标题(参考词汇:tolivealow-carbonlife;tobeagreenconsumer;torecyclethings:tohavenewhabit等)2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数4.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。I'dlike________toprotectourenvironmentOurearthisindanger.It'severybody'sdutytodosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.I'dlike______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】I'dliketolivealow-carbonlifetoprotectourenvironmentOurearthisindanger.It'severybody'sdutytodosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.I'dliketolivealow-carbonlife,notonlyforourselvesbutalsoforourfuturegenerations.Low-carbonlifesavesmoreenergy.First,itisagoodideaforustogotoschoolonfootorbybikeasoftenaspossible.Second,remembertoturnoffthelightsandotherelectricalappliancesbeforeleavingtheroom.It’stimethatweshouldlivealow-carbonlife.Undoubtedly,thiswayoflifeismoreeconomical,healthierandhappier.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。本文以“我想过低碳的生活来保护我们的环境”为题展开描述，文中介绍了过低碳生活的原因及建议。2.点评：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是第三人称。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。3.高分亮点：短语：indanger处于危险中；notonly…butalso不但……而且；gotoschool上学；onfoot步行；turnoff关掉。句子：First,itisagoodideaforustogotoschoolonfootorbybikeasoftenaspossible句中it是作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语；Undoubtedly,thiswayoflifeismoreeconomical,healthierandhappier句中运用了形容词比较级。3．随着社会文明的不断进步，环境污染日趋严重，为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请以“Howtoprotecttheenvironment?”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80词左右。Howtoprotecttheenvironment?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Howtoprotecttheenvironment?Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.It’stimetotakestepstoprotecttheenvironment.Firstly,savewater.Wateristhesourceoflife,soit’sveryimportantforustosavewater.Notonlyshouldweprotectdrinkingwater,butalsoshouldwemakefulluseofit.Secondly,saveelectricity.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightsorotherelectricmachineswhenwefinishworking.Thirdly,saveforests.Pleasestopcuttingthemdownanduserecycledpaperinstead.Ifwecantryourbesttosaveresources,Ibelievewecanmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生以“Howtoprotecttheenvironment?”为题写一篇英语短文。[写作步骤]第一步，点明主题，需要保护环境；第二步，分步骤具体阐述如何保护环境；第三步，总结，表达自己的期望。[亮点词汇]①takesteps采取措施②notonly...butalso不仅……而且③makefulluseof充分利用④turnoffthelights关灯⑤cutdown减少[高分句型]①Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.（比较级+比较级，表示“越来越”）②Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightsorotherelectricmachineswhenwefinishworking.（祈使句的否定形式）二、材料作文4．假如你是王刚，上周日你们班在学校附近的公园里组织了一次环保活动。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文，简单描述这次活动，并谈谈你的感想。不少于80词。提示：1.清理废纸、塑料袋等废弃物；2.树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花草树木；3.向游客宣传污染的危害以及保护环境的重要性。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：OurclassorganizedanenvironmentalprotectionactivityintheparknearourschoollastSunday.Wedidlotsofhelpfulthingsinthepark.First,wecollectedtherubbish.suchaswastepaperandplasticbags.Second,wesetupseveralboardstoaskthetouriststotakegoodcareoftheflowersandtrees.Finally,wegaveaspeechontheharmofpollutionandtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Ithinkitiseveryone’sdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Ifwedon’ttakeactionnow,we’llhavefewcomfortableplacestostayinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。②时态：一般过去时为主。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中向游客宣传污染的危害以及保护环境的重要性，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周日班级在学校组织环保活动”引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从具体在公园的活动到最后宣传污染的危害及保护环境的重要性，重点介绍具体情况；第三步，简单收尾，表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①suchas例如②takegoodcareof好好关心③takeaction采取行动[高分句型]Ithinkitiseveryone’sdutytoprotecttheenvironment.(think后的宾语从句)5．地球是我们美丽的家园。作为地球的主人，我们应该好好保护它。在日常生活中我们应该如何去保护地球环境呢？请以Howtoprotectourenvironment为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：1.列举目前存在的环境问题。2.结合生活实际，谈谈如何去保护环境？至少三个方面。3.指出环境保护的重要性并发出保护环境的号召。写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。2.词数80-100词，书写规范，卷面整洁。3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Howtoprotectourenvironment

Thepollutionisbecomingworseandworsetoday.Wehavenocleanwatertodrink.Peoplestillcutdownmanytrees.Someanimalsaregettingfewerandfewer.Somefactoriesarepouringdirtygasintothesky.Thepollutionnotonlyaffectsourlivesandhealth,butalsohasagreateffectinthefuture.

Inordertoliveabetterlife,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Weshouldn’tthrowawayrubbisheverywhere.Weshouldrecyclereduceandreusethings.Wedon’tuseplasticbags.Don’twastethingsandusethingsforaslongaspossible.Wemustplantmoretreesandstoppeoplefromcuttingthemdown.Thesecanhelpsavemoneyandreducepollution.

Wehopeourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Itisveryimportantforustoprotecttheenvironment.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据内容提示，介绍下在日常生活中我们应该如何去保护地球环境。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。文章可分为三段，第一段介绍目前的环境的问题；第二段介绍如何去保护环境；第三段介绍保护环境的重要性以及呼吁人们保护环境。行文做到无单词语法错误。6．塑料袋被称为“白色垃圾”，请根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，说明塑料袋的危害并提出建议。项目内容塑料袋的危害1．刮风时四处飘落，影响环境的美观；2．易被野生动物、家畜等误食．导致死亡；3．混杂在农田里影响农作物生长；4．燃烧时污染空气，等等。你的建议1．商家应遵守政府的规定有偿提供塑料袋；2．我们应……(提出至少2条建议)注意：1．短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。2．词数为90左右，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。3．参考词汇：塑料袋plasticbags；农作物crops

Asweallknow，plasticbagsmayflywiththewindandmaketheenvironmentugly．【参考范文】

Asweallknow．plasticbagsmayflywiththewindandmaketheenvironmentugly．Worsestill，animalsmayeatthembymistakeanddie．Withplasticbagsinthefields,cropscan’tgrowwillBesides,burningplasticbagswillpollutetheair．Sotryingtousefewerplasticbagsisimportant．

Ithinkalltheshopsshouldstopofferingfreeplasticbags．Weshouldtrytouseclothorpaperbagsinsteadofplasticoneswhenshopping．What’smore，wheneverweseeplasticbagsinthestreetsorfields，Weshouldpickthemupandputthemintodustbins．Ifeveryonetakesanimmediateaction,wearesuretobuildourcityintoamorebeautifulone．【详解】本文是根据提示写一篇对塑料—白色垃圾的认识，所以文章的时态为一般现在时为主，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，要使用高级的句式和词汇。写作中分析塑料袋的危害，发表自己的看法。写作中可借助情态动词may可能,can能,can’t不能,should应该。注意复合句的使用如Ithink…,Ibelieve…,及主从复合句的使用如：Ifeveryonetakesanimmediateaction,wearesuretobuildourcityintoamorebeautifulone．7．越来越多的游客喜欢美丽的山城重庆。我们作为生活在重庆的中学生，是否思考过我们的生活方式也会对城市环境造成很大的影响呢？请用英语写一篇题为GreenLifestyleinChongqing的短文，呼吁大家保护环境，绿色生活。信息提示：1.描述你在日常生活中的绿色生活方式（节约能源、绿色出行、循环利用、日常生活……）2.号召大家低碳生活，为保护环境，为创建美丽山城贡献力量。注意事项：1.120词左右，可适当发挥，行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。GreenLifestyleinChongqing______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：GreenLifestyleinChongqingAsweallknow,itisgreatlyimportantforustoprotectourenvironment.Soweshouldkeepagreenlifestyle.Indailylife,Ialwaystrymybesttoachieveagreenlifestyle.Forexample,Iusuallygooutbybikeorbusinsteadoftakingacar.Ialsosortoutourrubbishforbetterrecycling.Inordertosaveenergy,Ioftenmaintainairconditionerstwiceayearsotheywillrunefficiently.What’smore,Imakesuretoplantatreeeveryyear.Inmyopinion,ifeveryonelivesagreenlifestyleandprotectsourenvironmentactively,ourcity,Chongqing,willbemorebeautiful.Let’shavealowcarbonlifeanddoitnow!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，指出绿色生活的重要性。第二步，介绍自己日常生活中的绿色生活方式。第三步，呼吁大家进行低碳生活。[亮点词汇]①asweallknow众所周知②inmyopinion在我看来[高分句型]Inmyopinion,ifeveryonelivesagreenlifestyleandprotectsourenvironmentactively,ourcity,Chongqing,willbemorebeautiful.(if引导的条件状语从句)8．请以Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear为题写一篇关于保护水资源的短文。环境污染是当今世界上最大的问题，根据下面的提示，请用自己的话说一说应该怎么样保护我们的水资源。内容要点：1.生命离不开水资源。2.我们的饮用水在减少。3.水资源环境污染很严重。4.应该保护和再利用水。要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。2.要点包含有关信息，并且适当发挥。3.词数80左右。Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtearAsweallknow,waterisveryimportanttous.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutthis.Theyoftenwastealotofwater.Theypourdirtywaterintoriversandlakes.Theythrowrubbishintothem,too.Nowmoreandmoreriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Weshoulddosomethingtostopthepollution.Wemustprotectthewaterandfindwaystoreuseit.Ifwedon’t,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文根据题干中的提示内容介绍应该怎么样保护我们的水资源，可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示水的重要性；第二步，介绍现在水资源污染问题；第三步，介绍应该如何和再利用水。[亮点词汇]①asweallknow众所周知②careabout关心③o把……倒进……[高分句型]①Asweallknow,waterisveryimportanttous.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.(as引导的定语从句)②Ifwedon’t,thelastdropofwaterwillbeourtear.(if引导的条件状语从句)三、电子邮件9．假如你是李华，你们学校将组织一次环境保护志愿活动。请你给交换生Cathy写一封电子邮件，邀请她参加志愿活动。内容包括：1.活动的时间、地点：周日早上九点，学校附近的公园；2.活动的具体内容：捡垃圾，张贴关于环境保护的海报；3.活动的相关准备：做一张关于环境保护的海报，带一副手套，一个塑料袋；4.活动的意义：……写作要求：1.书写规范，词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2.要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥；3.邮件中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等。参考词汇：theschool’svoluntaryactivity学校志愿者活动；putupposters张贴海报DearCathy,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearCathy,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheschool’svoluntaryactivitytoprotecttheenvironment.We’llgototheparknearourschoolat9o’clockonSundaymorning.Wearegoingtopickuprubbishandputuppostersaboutprotectingtheenvironment.Ifyoudecidetojoinus,youcanmakeaposterandtakeitwithyou.Andyou’dbettertakeapairofglovesandaplasticbagwithyou.Ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbelesspollutionandourlifewillbebetter.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析］①题材:本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点和阐述活动意义，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。[写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图，邀请Cathy参加志愿活动；第二步，介绍此次活动的具体情况，其包括活动时间、地点、具体内容、相关准备和活动意义；第三步，书写结语。期待对方的回信。[亮点词汇］①takepart