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读后续写：雀斑烦恼（教师版）一、原文WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles(雀斑).IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasdisappointed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.lhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion(肤色).Icouldn'thelpcomparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies(虎尾百合),seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike,"I'veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore."WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.Paragraph1:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.Paragraph2:

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.二、分句练习Para1：Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.（1）她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。【非谓语】①收到某人的回应receiveresponsefromsbNotreceivinganyresponsefromme,shequickenedherpaceanxiouslytothebathroom,checkingonme.②加快步伐去…quickenone’spaceto…③检查…checkon…（2）看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。①安然无恙inawholeskinSeeingmeinawholeskin,shebreathedasighofreliefandaskedmewhatwasgoingon.②松了一口气breathasighofrelief（3）她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。①一记重锤ahammerblowHerwordsseemedlikeahammerblow,tossingmeintodeepersorrow.②把…扔进…tosssbinto…（4）我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。①受伤地说utterininjuredtonesIutteredininjuredtonesthatIappliedthesamefreckle-removercreamasElizabeth's,butfrecklesappearedonmyfacemoreandmore.②涂applysth（5）知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”①也so+…+sbKnowingmysituation,shecomfortedme,"Itisnormalthatteengirlshavemorefrecklesontheirfacesthanusual.SodoIatyourtime,honey!"（6）我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。①情绪低落bedowninspiritsDowninspirits,Iturnedadeafeartowhatmymomsaid,trottingtowardsmybedroomhysterically.②对…充耳不闻turnadeafeartosth③冲向trottowards…Para2：Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.（1）当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。①看到sthcomeintoone’ssightWhenIopenedthedoor,beautifulElizabethcameintomysightwithabunchoftigerliliesinherhand.（2）她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。①对…冷漠beindifferentto/beunconcernedaboutFindingmeindifferenttohercoming,shehandedtheliliestomeandapologizedformy"accident".②把某物递给某人handsthtosb（3）伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。①羡慕某人某事admiresbforsthAndwhatElizabethsaidnextsurprisedme.Inherwords,Ifirstknewthatsheadmiredmeformydedicatedendeavorsinhoeingwhileshepaidexcessiveattentiontoherappearance.②专心致志的努力dedicatedendeavors③过度的excessive/ɪkˈsesɪv/（4）这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。①闪光点starrypointsAtthismoment,Ifinallyfoundthereexistedsomestarrypointsinme,justlikethosetigerlilies.（5）它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。①点缀着…bedottedwithThoughdottedwithugly"freckles",theyhadanaromawhichwasnotinferiortootherflowers.②香气aroma/əˈrəʊmə/③不如…beinferior/ɪnˈfɪəriə(r)/to三、最终自测Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”我几乎用颤抖的声音吼了起来。“她会冻死的。出去找她！”Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我，并为我的“意外”道歉。伊丽莎白接下来说的话使我吃惊。用她的话来说，我第一次知道她羡慕我在锄地上的努力，而她却过分注重自己的外表。这时，我终于发现自己身上有一些闪光点，就像那些虎百合一样。它们虽然有难看的“雀斑”，但却有着不逊于其他花的香气。最终范文Para1：Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.Notreceivinganyresponsefromme,shequickenedherpaceanxiouslytothebathroom,checkingonme.Seeingmeinawholeskin,shebreathedasighofreliefandaskedmewhatwasgoingon.Herwordsseemedlikeahammerblow,tossingmeintodeepersorrow.IutteredininjuredtonesthatIappliedthesamefreckle-removercreamasElizabeth's,butfrecklesappearedonmyfacemoreandmore.Knowingmysituation,shecomfortedme,"Itisnormalthatteengirlshavemorefrecklesontheirfacesthanusual.SodoIatyourtime,honey!"Downinspirits,Iturnedadeafeartowhatmymomsaid,trottingtowardsmybedroomhysterically.Para2：Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.WhenIopenedthedoor,beautifulElizabethcameintomysightwithabunchoftigerliliesinherhand.Findingmeindifferenttohercoming,shehandedtheliliestomeandapologizedformy"accident".AndwhatElizabethsaidnextsurprisedme.Inherwords,Ifirstknewthatsheadmiredmeformydedicatedendeavorsinhoeingwhileshepaidexcessiveattentiontoherappearance.Atthismoment,Ifinallyfoundthereexistedsomestarrypointsinme,justlikethosetigerlilies.Thoughdottedwithugly"freckles",theyhadanaromawhichwasnotinferiortootherflowers.

雀斑烦恼（学生版）一、原文WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles(雀斑).IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasdisappointed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.lhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion(肤色).Icouldn'thelpcomparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies(虎尾百合),seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike,"I'veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore."WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.Paragraph1:Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.Paragraph2:

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.二、分句练习Para1：Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.（1）她没有得到我的任何回应，就焦急地加快脚步向浴室走去，检查我的情况。【非谓语】①收到某人的回应receiveresponsefromsb②加快步伐去…quickenone’spaceto…③检查…checkon…（2）看到我安然无恙，她松了一口气，问我发生了什么事。①安然无恙inawholeskin②松了一口气breathasighofrelief（3）她的话像一记重击，把我抛进更深的悲伤中。①一记重锤ahammerblow②把…扔进…tosssbinto…（4）我受伤地说，我用了和伊丽莎白一样的祛斑霜，但脸上的雀斑却越来越多。①受伤地说utterininjuredtones②涂applysth（5）知道我的情况后，她安慰我说:“十几岁的女孩脸上的雀斑比平时多是正常的。我在你这么大的时候也是这样，亲爱的！”①也so+…+sb（6）我情绪低落，对妈妈的话充耳不闻，情绪激动地冲进卧室。①情绪低落bedowninspirits②对…充耳不闻turnadeafeartosth③冲向trottowards…Para2：Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom.（1）当我打开门时，我看到美丽的伊丽莎白手里拿着一束虎百合。①看到sthcomeintoone’ssight（2）她发现我对她的到来无动于衷，就把百合花递给我