高三英语一轮复习读后续写情绪描写课件

人教版高中英语读后续写

情绪描写环境描写情绪描写包括人物的感受、情绪，是读后续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。合理的情绪描写与刻画，可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征，以及烘托故事高潮，进而突出语篇主题等。因此，合理的情绪描写在读后续写中是非常有必要的。情绪描写的四种方法例：Lisawasdelightedthatyoucouldstay.你能留下来，丽萨很高兴。分析：直接用形容词delighted表示丽萨开心的心情。1.直接利用恰当的表示情感的形容词、副词、名词或介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐2.利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感例：Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(TheGiftoftheMagi)德拉停止了哭泣，擦干了脸，她站在窗前，一脸沮丧地看着一只灰猫沿着灰篱笆在灰色的后院里散步。（《麦琪的礼物》）分析：句中连续3次使用了形容词gray，体现了德拉的难受和不开心。例：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.简看不到路，只能走了很长时间。她爬到一个高处后，转过身，希望能看到湖泊。令她惊讶的是，除了森林，她什么都看不到，远处是白雪覆盖的山顶。她突然意识到自己迷路了。分析：句中turnaround,hopingtoseethelake，通过动作描写，说明简满怀期望；Tohersurprise，利用介词短语体现简的吃惊；shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop，寓情于景，体现简的无望和失落。3.利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例1：“Absolutely!”repliedJohn,excitementshininginhiseyes.约翰答道：“一定！”，他兴奋得两眼放光。分析：利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写约翰的兴奋激动。4.利用高级句式和修饰成分细化感情细节例2：Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。分析：利用so…that倒装句型，描写熊生气的样子。情绪描写语料积累1.喜乐高分词块：inagoodmood心情很好beallsmiles喜笑颜开incheerful/highspirits兴高采烈betickledpink非常高兴roarwithlaughter放声大笑inseventhheaven极为高兴sb’sfacelightsup喜形于色beamwithpleasure喜不自胜1.喜乐高分词块：beassweetashoney像蜜一样甜grinfromeartoear满面笑容bewildwithjoy/delight欣喜若狂dancefor/withjoy手舞足蹈onthetopoftheworld心满意足brightenone’sheart使某人心情愉快toone’sdelight/joy令某人开心的是beseizedbyjoy欢欣鼓舞精彩好句：Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。Hestoodbythedoor,withjoybeamingfromhiseyes.他站在门边，眼睛里放出喜悦的光彩。Hesoonreturned,hiswholefacebeamingwithdelight.他很快就回来了，脸上洋溢着喜悦。1.喜乐根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Learningthechildren’sidea,Mrs.Meredithwasso1.

(高兴的)thatshesmiledbrightly.Then,thechildrengotdowntopreparingpopcorn2.

(高兴地).Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftfortheBernard’s3.

(高兴地)tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernard4.

(手舞足蹈),withtearsfillinghiseyes.Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparents5.

(也非常高兴).Later,6.

(令他非常高兴的是),thepopcornwassotastythatitsoonsoldout.Hesoonreturned,hiswholeface7.

(洋溢着喜悦).8.

(笑声在房间里萦绕).overjoyedcheerfullyjoyfullydancedwithjoywerealsoseizedbyjoybeamingwithdelightmuchtohisdelightLaughterlingeredaroundtheroom2.激动高分词块：flushwithexcitement激动得满脸通红with/inexcitement激动得conceal/hideone’sexcitement掩饰激动toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激动的是ascreamofthrill/excitement激动的尖叫声containone’sexcitement抑制某人内心的激动aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一阵兴奋精彩好句：2.激动Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情绪激动，难以成声。Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。Theboystopped,hisheartthumpingwithexcitementandanticipation.男孩停住了脚步，他的心怦怦直跳，充满了兴奋和期待。Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.听到这个消息，一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋得不能自已。根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnewtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1.

(妈妈激动不已).Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2.

(抑制她内心的激动),andwould3.

(振奋起来)likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround4.

(兴奋地).Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5.

(激动得尖叫起来),Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent.6.

(我们的眼里闪着激动的光芒),wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.awaveofexcitementtakingholdofMomcontainherexcitementcheerupwithexcitementlettingoutascreamofthrillWithoureyestwinkingwithexcitement3.悲伤高分词块：agloomyfeeling一种悲伤的情绪becutup伤心极了breakone’sheart伤心绝望bereducedtotears流泪cryone’sheart/eyesout悲痛欲绝withasinkingheart心情沉重feelblue情绪低落downinthedumps心情很难受3.悲伤高分词块：精彩好句：3.悲伤根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Iwasselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.ButIwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Onthedayofthecontest,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyselfandsufferedfromstagefright.IntheendIwalkedoffthestage,1.

(眼里饱含泪水).Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.Ididnotwinanyprizes.Ibitmybottomlip2.

(心里充满悲伤).Idraggedmyheavylegs3.

(心情沉重地)andmovedoutofthelecturehall.4.

(我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤模糊了我的双眼).Onenteringtheclassroom,5.

(悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落）.Thenextfollowingdays,6.

(我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里),notwantingtodoanything.myeyesfillingwithtearswithsadnessfillingmyheartwithasinkingheartIhungmyheadinsadness,greatsorrowcloudingmyeyesSadnesscameinwavesandtearsstreameddownmycheeksIfeltlikeIwasfloatinginanoceanofsadness4.恐惧高分词块：bestruckwithfear被恐惧击中fearcreepsoversb.恐惧笼罩着某人one’sfaceturnspale脸色变白behalfdeadwithfear吓得半死scare/frighten…todeath把……吓死strikefearintothehearts使胆战心惊shake/tremblewithfear/terror吓得发抖bescaredoutofone’swits被吓得魂不附体afloodoffearwellsupinsb.从心底感到害怕standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡shakealloverinacoldsweat浑身发抖，冒冷汗精彩好句：4.恐惧Iaminfearandalmostscaredtodeath.我很害怕，几乎要被吓死了。Hewassofrightenedthathiskneesknockedtogether.他吓得两腿直哆嗦。Theideaofbeingleftaloneinthedarkbighousemadeherhairstandonend.她一想到要独自被留在那所黑暗的大房子里，就毛骨悚然。Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。Mollyfeltthatthebloodinherbodyfrozerapidlyatthesightofthedarkfigureoutsidetheglassdoor.莫莉看到玻璃门外的黑影，感觉体内的血液好像迅速凝固起来。根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.1.

(恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围),andIwasunabletomoveaninch.2.

(惊慌失措中，我觉得两腿发抖，手心冒汗).Besidemewasmywife,3.

(她被吓得魂不附体).Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,4.

(她吓得要死).Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.5.

(我们感觉浑身血液凝固了)rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.AburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspowerExtremelyfrightened,IfeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweatingwhowasscaredoutofherwitsshewasnearlydeadwithfrightWefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze5.愤怒高分词块：beinapassion在盛怒中flyintoafury勃然大怒resist/containone’sanger抑制怒火flushwithanger气红了脸makeone’sbloodboil使某人愤怒flyoffthehandle大发雷霆tremblewithanger气得发抖aburstofanger一股怒火sb.’sfacefalls/darkens脸沉/黑了下来explodewithanger勃然大怒5.愤怒高分词块：betongue-tiedwithanger气得说不出话来setoffone’sanger让某人生气fuelone’sanger使某人更加愤怒stormout/into气冲冲地离开/闯入stampone’sfeetinanger生气地跺脚hittheceiling/roof怒火冲天shake/boilwithanger/rage怒火中烧blowupatsb.冲某人发火bered-cheekedwithanger气得脸通红getmadatsb.生某人的气精彩好句：Sheflewintoahowlingrage.她暴跳如雷。Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他连呼吸都喷着火焰和怒气。Helookedasifheweregoingtoburstwithanger.他看上去快要气炸了。Hegraspedthethinginbothhands,atideofrageburninginhisheart.他双手抓着那东西，一股怒火在心中燃烧。Theteacherhadafacelikethunderwhenthechildrenbrokethewindowwhileplaying.孩子们玩耍时打碎了窗户，老师怒不可遏。5.愤怒根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Thedooropenedandayoungmancamein.Shockedtoseeuspackingthingsintooursuitcase,theyoungman1.

(愤怒地大叫了一声，眼里闪烁着恼怒的光).2.

(他大发雷霆)andwasstampingabout.Heaccusedusofillegallyenteringhisroomandthreatenedtocallthepolice,whichscaredmychildrentodeath.Justatthatmoment,myhusbandreturnedafterhisgroceryshopping.Hearingtheman’srudewords,3.

(一股怒火在他的心中燃烧).Itseemedthatnosettlementwouldbepossible,andthesituationreachedaboilingpoint.4.

(争吵如火上浇油，于是他就像火山一样爆发了).Eventually,5.

(无法抑制心中的怒气),myhusbandstormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.letoutayellofanger,withhiseyesshiningwithannoyanceHewasinafuriouspassionatideofrageburninginhisheartQuarrelsfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcanounabletocontainhisanger6.惊讶高分词块：精彩好句：Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.惊愕的表情在她的脸上蔓延开来。Itamazesmethatnoonethoughtoftheidea.让我惊讶的是没人想到过这个主意。Asparkofsurpriseflashesacrosshereyes.她的眼中闪过一丝震惊。Thewholebuildingshaking,Rachelstoodinherbedroomstiffeningwithshock.整个屋子都在摇晃，瑞秋吓得站在卧室里僵住了。ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大了眼睛。6.惊讶根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming“Iwantthattelephone”overandoveragain.AlltheChristmasshopperslookedon1.

(震惊地).2.

(我的妈妈脸上闪过一丝惊愕),sheorderedangrily,“Getuprightnow.”Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltantrum.3.

(令我震惊的是)mymothersuddenlylaydownbesidemeonthefloor,likewisekickingandscreamingoutforastringofsuchitemsasshewaseagertopossess.Seeingthat,4.

(我呆住了，动弹不得).Alltheon-lookersgluedtheireyestous,5.

(惊掉下巴).Dumbfoundedinitially,theythenburstintothunderousapplause,showeringpraiseonmymother.inastonishmentAsparkofsurpriseflashedacrossmymother’sfaceWhatshockedmewasthatIwasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtothegroundwithjawsdroppingtotheground7.紧张高分词块：holdone’sbreath屏住呼吸pacebackandforth来回踱步swallowhard强咽口水onpinsandneedles如坐针毡allofaflutter焦虑不安losesleepoversth.为某事担忧getstrungup非常紧张putsb.onedge让某人感到紧张不安7.紧张高分词块：withone’sheartinone’smouth提心吊胆的murmurinatremblingvoice用颤抖的声音小声喃喃stammer/stutterunderone’sbreath结结巴巴地小声说one’sheartfliesinto/isinone’smouth心提到嗓子眼儿have/feelbutterfliesinone’sstomach心里感到忐忑不安hide/conceal/holdbackone’snervousness/anxiety掩饰紧张/焦虑精彩好句：Mylipsquivered,bigtearsrollingdowncheeks.我的嘴唇颤抖着，大颗的眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。Icouldn’tsleepbutkepttossingandturninginbedallnight.我彻夜在床上辗转反侧不能成眠。Hespokethroughclenchedteeth,strugglingtokeephisvoicesteady.他咬紧牙关说话，努力保持声音稳定。Standinginfrontoftheline,Emilyfeltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.站在队伍的前面，艾米丽感到喉咙紧绷，手心出汗。7.紧张根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。WhenIfinishedmytestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.1.

(我在床上辗转反侧了一整夜，无法入睡).Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschooland2.

(紧张地)glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,3.

(感觉好像我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了).There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmyname.Inspired,Ipracticedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.WhenIwasstandingbackstage,4.

(紧张感席卷全身).Whenmynamewascalled,Icould5.

(感到心里忐忑不安).Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould6.

(感到手心冒汗，心跳加速).Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore7.

(不安的).8.

(我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了).Atthatmoment,myeyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,whichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,theauditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers.Icouldn’tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenightnervouslyfeelingasifmyheartwereinmymouthnervousnesscamefloodingovermefeelbutterfliesinmystomachfeelmypalmssweatingandmyheartracinguneasyMyheartwaspoundinghard,asifitwereabouttopop8.羞愧高分词块：bestruckdeadwithshame尴尬得要死blushwithembarrassment难为情得脸红hideone’sembarrassment掩饰某人的尴尬feelthebloodrush/rushingtoone’sface感到脸阵阵发烫beoverwhelmed/burdened/consumed/wildwithshame羞愧极了精彩好句：Herfacewashotwithshame.她羞得脸上火辣辣的。Shewascoveredwithshameatherfailure.她对自己的失败感到无比惭愧。Hecametomyoffice,shamefaced,toapologize.他一脸愧色，到我办公室来道歉。Withmyfaceburning,Idon’tknowwheretostart.脸上滚烫，我不知道该从何说起。Soshamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到非常羞愧，觉得脸上阵阵发烫。8.羞愧根据提示，将下面的语篇补充完整。Bynowwewerestandinginthelongholidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming“Iwantthattelephone”overandoveragain.“Becky,you’dbettergetupatonce,”mymothersaidwithatremblingvoice,1.

(涨红的脸上写满了窘迫).Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltan