读后续写杜西先生和可爱的小猫让我不再害羞讲义2024接湖南省邵阳市高三第一次联考英语试题

邵阳市高三第一次联考(2024年1月23日)读后续写题目：Iwasanextremelyshygirlinprimaryschoolandcouldn’tmakefriendseasily.Myteacher,

Mr.Doocy,calledmymotherandexplainedthatIhadn’tspokenasinglewordinclass.Andwe

weremorethanhalfwaythroughtheschoolyear.Evenasalittlegirl,Iknewthiswasunusual.I

watchedthefreeandhappyinteractionofmyclassmateswithenvy.我在小学时是一个非常害羞的女孩，很难交到朋友。我的老师，杜西先生打给我妈妈，解释说我在课堂上一句话也没说。我们的学年已经过半。即使在我还是个小女孩的时候，我就知道这是不寻常的。我羡慕地看着同学们自由快乐的互动。MomtriedtoexcusemybehaviorassomethingthatIwouldoutgrow.ButMr.Doocywasstill

quiteconcernedaboutme.HeaskedMomifIhadsomethingathomethatIliked.Hesaidhe

wouldarrangeashowandtellactivityfortheclassifIbroughtittoschool.Mymomtoldhim

aboutmycatwhohadgivenbirthtoseveralbabycatsaboutthreeweeksearlier.Iwascrazyabout

thosebabycats.妈妈试图为我的行为开脱，因为我长大了。但杜西先生还是很关心我。他问妈妈家里有没有我喜欢的东西。他说，如果我把它带到学校，他会为班上安排一场表演和演讲活动。我妈妈告诉他我的猫在三周前生了几只小猫。我为那些小猫而疯狂。ThenMr.DoocysuggestedIbringthebabycatstoschoolthenextdayandintroducethemto

myclassmates.ItseemedthatMomdidn’tthinkthisshowandtellactivitywouldhelpmeand

hopedtodiscourageMr.Doocy.SheexplainedthatIwouldhavetobringthemothercatalongwith

thesixbabycatsbecausetheyweretooyoungtobeseparatedfromtheirmother.Sheprobably

thoughtthiswouldputanendtotheplan.ButMr.Doocysaidthatwasfine.然后杜西先生建议我第二天把小猫带到学校，把它们介绍给我的同学。妈妈似乎不认为这个表演和演讲活动会对我有帮助，希望能打消杜西先生的念头。她解释说，我必须带上母猫和六只小猫，因为它们太小了，不能和妈妈分开。她可能认为这会结束这个计划。但杜西先生说这很好。Inormallywalkedtoschool,butmymotherdrovemethenextmorningalongwithabigbrown

cardboardbox.Istruggledtowalktowardtheclassroomwiththeheavyload.Innotime,the

groupofbabycatscaughttheattentionofmyclassmates.Theireyeslitupinwonderwhenthey

caughtsightofmytinytreasures.Myheartbeatquicklyagainstmychestasprideswelledwithin

me.Ihadneverfeltsoimportantinmyentirenineyearsoflife!我通常步行上学，但第二天早上妈妈开车送我去，还带了一个棕色的大纸箱。我拖着沉重的负载艰难地向教室走去。很快，这群小猫就引起了我同学的注意。当他们看到我的小宝贝时，惊奇地瞪大了眼睛。当骄傲在我心中膨胀时，我的心在胸口快速跳动。在我整整九年的生命中，我从未感到如此重要！Mr.Doocyinstructedmetositonthestepsoutsidetheclassroomsoeveryonecouldgetagood

lookinsidethecontainer.

“CanIholdone?”

alittlegirlaskedaloudwithexcitement.Thenall

theotherchildrenchimedinlikeachoir,beggingtoholdoneofthebabycats.杜西先生让我坐在教室外的台阶上，这样每个人都能好好看看集装箱里的情况。“我能拿一个吗？”一个小女孩兴奋地大声问道。然后，所有其他的孩子都像唱诗班一样插话，乞求抱一只小猫。第一段：Inoddedandsaid,

“Yes.”我点点头说：“是的。”第二段：With

everyonesitting

inthe

classroom,

Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.大家都坐在教室里。杜西邀请我谈谈我的猫。

这道续写题出得很好，符合课标的命题要求！⑴学生熟悉的题材：校园生活、成长教育、人与动物和谐相处。⑵前文易懂，续写走向明朗，学生有话可写。

文本大意：我是害羞的女孩，半学期过去了我在班上还没有说过话。但我的老师杜西先生还是很关心我。他让我把一件心爱之物带到学校，他会为它在班上安排一场表演和演讲活动。于是我带了我为之疯狂的小猫。我带了一个棕色的大纸箱，里面有猫妈妈和刚出生的几只小猫。很快，这群小猫就引起了我同学的注意。当他们看到我的小宝贝时，惊奇地瞪大了眼睛。当骄傲在我心中膨胀时，我从未感到自己如此重要！然后，所有其他的孩子都乞求抱一只小猫。续写情节发展：很快，盒子里一只猫也没有了。猫们在我同学的怀里显得有点紧张和害怕。我非常担心，所以我立即要求他们把猫放回盒子里。就在这时，杜西先生腋下夹着一本书走进了教室。我站在舞台上非常紧张，但努力让自己平静下来。于是我开始分享关于七只猫的有趣故事。走下舞台时，我听到一阵掌声。然后，我想，“这次演讲不算成功,但下一个会更好。”下水作文：Inoddedandsaid,

“Yes.”

Soontherewasn’ta

single

catleftinthebox.Thecats

seemed

slightly

nervous

andscared

inthearmsofmyclassmates.

Soworriedwas

IthatIimmediately

demanded

they

putthe

cats

backinthebox.

WhenIsaw

thesix

littlecats

nestled

(偎依)

happilyagainst

theirmother’s

chest,

myheartwas

overflowing

withjoy.

Theminute

thebellrang,Imovedtheboxtomyseat.Justthen,Mr.Doocyenteredtheclassroomwithabookunderhisarm.

(83words)With

everyonesitting

inthe

classroom,

Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.

I

stoodon

the

stage,

thirtysix

pairsofeyeslooking

atmelikesearchlights.Mymindwentblank,

mybodyshaking.“Whoeverspeakspubliclyforthefirsttimewillhavebutterfliesinhisstomach.”

smiledMr.Moocy.

Itooka

deep

breathandremindedmyself,“Calmdown!

Bebrave!”

SoIbegantosharefunnystoriesaboutthesevencats.

Whensteppingoffthestage,Iheard

aroundofapplause.

Then,

Ithought,“Thisspeechwas

nosuccess

(不算成功),butthenextonewillbebetter.”

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官方范文：Inoddedandsaid,“Yes.”

ThenI,withgreatcaution,handedthebabycatsonebyonetomyexpectantandexcitedclassmates.Theygentlyheldkittensinturncautiously,asiftheywereholdingthemostdelicateartworkintheworld,pettingthemgentlyandobservingthem.Soon,theschoolbellrang,butallofusturnedadeafeartoitandnoonemovedorwantedtoentertheclassroom,evenMr.Doocy!Heallowedustositthereuntileachstudenthadaturnholdingthecats.Then,hewalkedmetothefrontoftheclassroomandwaitedforthestudentstoeinandsitdown.Stillexcited,myclassmateslikechirpingbirdswereexchangingideasaboutthelovelykittensuntilMr.Doocyhushedthem.

(127words)Witheveryonesittingintheclassroom,Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.

Standinginfrontoftheclass,Ireallyhadbutterfliesinmystomach,palmssweaty,notknowingwheretostart.Mr.DoocybegantoasksomequestionsandIbegantotellhowthemothercatlovedandlookedafterherbabies,whatkindof“home”Idesignedforthem,etc.Myclassmateswereallstaringatmeandlisteningattentively.DancingintheireyeswastheadmirationthatIhadneverexpected.Withasurgeofprideandconfidencerisinginsideme,Iraisedmyvoice.Afterthatclass,Iproudlysatamongmyclassmateswithanewsenseofachievement,andmyinteractionwithotherkidsincreased.HowmuchIappreciatedthehelpofMr.Doocyandmylovelycats!Butforthem,IwouldprobablystillbethatinordinatelyshygirlIusedtobe.

(138words)

[265words]默写版:Inoddedandsaid,“Yes.”

ThenI,withgreatcaution,handedthebabycatsonebyonetomyexpectantandexcitedclassmates.__________________________________________________他们小心翼翼地轮流温柔地抱着小猫，仿佛手里拿着世界上最精致的艺术品,pettingthemgentlyandobservingthem.Soon,_________________________________________________学校的铃声响了，但我们都置若罔闻，没有人动，也没有人想进教室,evenMr.Doocy!Heallowedustositthereuntileachstudenthadaturnholdingthecats.Then,hewalkedmetothefrontoftheclassroomandwaitedforthestudentstoeinandsitdown.______________________________________________________________我的同学们仍然很兴奋，就像叽叽喳喳的小鸟一样，在交流关于可爱小猫的想法，直到杜西先生让它们安静下来.

(127words)Witheveryonesittingintheclassroom,Mr.Doocyinvitedmetosaysomethingaboutmycats.

__________________________________________________________________站在全班同学面前，我真的很紧张