读后续写助人类-Aneverydaymiracle讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Aneverydaymiracle,”theradiomentator

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began,“isawonderfuloramazingeventthatoccurs.”Thatattractedmyattention.AlthoughIwasanxioustohearmore,IhadtoturnoffthecarradioasIwasnextinlinetopickupmyfastfood.BecauseIstoppedatthedrivethrough(免下车餐馆)everymorningonmywaytowork,Iknewtheelderlyclerk,Mary.Soitwasn’tasurprisewhenshestuckherheadoutofthewindowwhilehandingmemyDietCokeandbegantalking.“Thetraditionalholidayising.Butmyfamilywon’thavethetraditionalholidaydinnerthisyear,”shesaidsadly.“Wecanceleditthisyear.Ican’tafforditanymore.”Itriedtosaysomethingforting,butmymindwasblank.Embarrassed,Isaidgoodbyeandbeganmy45minutedrivetowork.Ontheway,Icouldn’tgetMary’sdepressedexpressionoutofmymind.ThenIthoughtaboutthelocalannualauction(拍卖会)thatItookpartineveryyear.Theactivitywasheldannuallytoraisemoneyforthelocalfoodbank,aplacewherepoorpeoplecouldgetfreefood.IhopethefoodbankcouldhelpMary.Butthefoodbankwasstrugglingthisyear

becauseoftheeconomicdecline.Ihopedtheupingauctionwouldraisealotof

moneyforthefoodbank.Whenthedayoftheauctioncame,theorganizerssentanemailtoitsusualparticipants,“Guys,takeyoursecondhandthingstobeauctionedoffande!”Twodayslater,Iarrived

attheauctionsite,thelocalpark,withmy“treasures”.Justseeingeachotherwasexciting.Thesuncameout.Everyonewaslaughingandtalking.ButwhenIlookedaround,therewereonly22people.“Wewon’tmakeanymoneytoday,”IwhisperedtomylongtimefriendSandy.Alwaysoptimistic,shequicklyremindedme,“Everylittlebitwillhelpthisyear.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。

文本解读本文以人物为线索展开。作者每天早上在上班的路上都会在汽车餐厅停下来买早餐，所以作者认识那个上了年纪的店员Mary。一天作者买早餐的时候，Mary告诉作者今年的传统节日她和家人由于经济困难，不能吃上传统的节日晚餐了。于是作者想起了自己每年参加的当地年度拍卖会。这项活动每年举行一次，为当地的食品银行筹集资金，穷人可以在那里得到免费的食物。作者决定拿出自己的二手物品拍卖，然后将钱捐给食品银行，以此来帮助Mary和更多生活困难的人。

思路点拨①由续文第一段首句“我们拿出二手物品后，拍卖开始了。”可知，接下来可以描写作者和参与者开始拍卖物品，然后将拍卖到的钱捐给了食品银行，帮助了更多人。根据续文第二段首句可知，本段结尾还需要将场景切换到汽车餐厅。②由续文第二段首句“一看到我，Mary几乎跳出窗外，兴奋地说：‘你不会相信的！’”可知，本段接下来可以描写Mary开心地告诉作者自己从食品银行得到了足够的食物，作者很高兴，向她表示祝贺。结尾可以表达作者对这件事的感悟。

参考范文Afterwetookoutoursecondhandobjects,theauctionbegan.

Thoughthereweremuchfewerpeopleattendingitthanusual,everyonewasactiveanddedicatedtoraisingmoremoney.Whenitcametomy“treasure”—ausedcamera,thefinalauctionpriceof$100shockedme.Whatanunbelievablefigure.Finally,theauctioncollectedover$2000,whichmeantabout200familiescouldgethelpfromthefoodbankduringthistraditionalholiday.“MaybeMarycanhaveawonderfulholidaydinner.”Ithoughtwithrelief.Thenextday,Istoppedatthedrivethroughasusual.Uponseeingme,Marynearlyjumpedoutofthewindow,sayingexcitedly,“Youwon’tbelieveit!”

BeforeIcouldrespond,sheeagerlycontinuedtosaythatshehadgotenoughfoodfromthefoodbank.Seeinghertwinklingeyes,Ismiled.Reassuredanddelighted,Isenthermysincerecongratulationsandthendroveon.Turningonthecarradio,Iheardthewordsagain,“Aneverydaymiracleisawonderfuloramazingeventthatoccurs.”

亮点词汇1.bededicatedto(doing)sth.致力于（做）某事2.asusual

像往常一样3.continuetodosth.继续做某事4.reassured

adj.

放心的

高级句型积累1.

Thoughthereweremuchfewerpeopleattendingitthanusual,everyonewasactiveanddedicatedtoraisingmoremoney.（though引导的让步状语从句）虽然参加的人比平时少了很多，但每个人都很积极，致力于筹集更多的资金。2.Finally,theauction