上海市2021年高考英语冲刺模拟试卷分类汇编：书面表达 含答案

上海市2021年高考英语冲刺模拟试卷分类汇编

书面表达专题

2021届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷1

V.GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

如今，电子支付(electronicpayment)成为潮流，现金的使用频率越来越低。请你简要说明

电子支付在生活中的具体应用，并谈谈你时电子支付是否会取代现金的看法。你的文章必

须包括：

1.简耍说明电子支付在生活中的具体应用；

2.电子支付是否会取代现金？为什么？

【答案】Thereisagrowingtrendthatelectronicpaymenthasdominatedourlives,andweare

graduallysteppingintoacashlesssociety.

Takeaquicklookatyourdailylife,andyouwillfinde-paymenthascoveredeveryaspectof

lifetoday.IfshardtoimaginewithoutAlipayhowyoucanmakeonlinepurchasesonTaobaowith

afewsimpleclicks.WithoutWeChat,howcanyouunlockasharedbikeandpayforthefee?E-

paymentsarealsoalmostuniversallyacceptedbybrick-and-mortarstores.Inonesense,wenow

literallyhaveeverythingatourfingertipsthankstoelectronicpayment.

Eventually,Ibelieve,e-paymentwillreplacecash.Foronething,itstandsoutforits

incomparableconvenience.Notonlydoesitspareusthetroubleofcarryingcasheverywhere,but

italsosavesusenormousamountsoftimethatwouldhaveotherwisebeenwasted,forexample,

inlongqueues.Foranother,iteliminatesthenecessitytoworryaboutwhetherthebanknotes

you'vereceivedarerealoffake.E-paymentalsomakesiteasierforthegovernmenttosupervise

thecirculationofmoneybyofferingatransparentenvironmentforelectronicpayments.

Admittedly,e-paymenthasitsowndrawbacks,suchaspotentiallysevereconsequencesif

one'saccountishackedorstolen.Butwiththeimprovementofrelevantlawandregulations,the

problemissuretobekeptatbay.

Toputitinanutshell,electronicpaymentcansimplifydailyaffairs,regulatetheflowof

moneyandwillultimatelydominateoureverydaylife.Iamlookingforwardtoaconvenient,

time-savingandsafecashlesssociety.

2021届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷2

VLGuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

假设你是李华，学校学生会有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示），你希望加入其中一个。

请你写一封应征信，谈谈你的想法。内容必须包括：

1.你希望加入的社团

2.选择该社团的原因

3.你可以为该社团做些什么

注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。

DearSir,

IamLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudentfromClassoneGradethree.Hearingthenews

thatthestudentunionisrecruitingnewmembersforfourcommunitiesincludingScienceclub,

Englishtheatreclub,Ecoclubandsportsclubinmyschool,whichhasattachedmanystudents9

attention.NowIcanhardlywaittoforwardaformalapplication,hopingtojoina

communitythat1amkeenonafterclass

Asfaras1amconcerned,1ameagertojoinSportsclubbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstandforemost,notonlyshouldwegotoalllengthstostudyhardinordertoacquiremoreand

moreknowledge,butwealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness.Inthesecond

place,thereasonwhyIpreferSportsclubisthatdoingsportsisoneofthemostusefulwaysto

havearelaxationafterstudyingforalongperiod.Lastbutnotleast,doingsportsthatareinneed

ofcooperationamongstudentssuchasfootball,basketballandvolleyballcancultivateourteam

spiritsothatweareawarethatunionisstrengthandknowtheimportanceofcooperation.All

thesereasonsmakemebeabsorbedinjoiningSportsclub.If1amelectedtobeamemberof

Sportsclub,1willtakeactivepartinallactivities.What1candevotemyselftotheconstructionof

thecommunityisthatIcanconveythepositivetheoriesofsportstomyfriendsandclassmatesand

awakenthemtotherealizationthatjoiningSportsclubisthebestchoice.lamfascinatedbybeing

amemberofSportsclub.

I'dappreciateitsomuchifyoucouldpossiblyconsidermyapplication.Lookingforward

toyoureply.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求谈谈自己对于加入社团的选择及内心想法。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应征信（夹叙夹议）

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法（或总分总）

要求：

1.你希望加入的社团

2.选择该社团的原因

3.你可以为该社团做些什么

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

joinSportsclub

doexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness

oneofthemostusefulwaystohavearelaxation

cultivateourteamspirit

第三步：连词成句

LAsfaras1amconcerned,!ameagertojoinSportsclubbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

2.wealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness.

3.Inthesecondplace,thereasonwhy1preferSportsclubisthatdoingsportsisoneofthemost

usefulwaystohavearelaxationafterstudyingforalongperiod.

4.Lastbutnotleast,doingsportsthatareinneedofcooperationamongstudentssuchas

football,basketballandvolleyballcancultivateourteamspirit.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

用词参考：

Asfaras1amconcerned

notonly...butalso...

Firstandforemost

Inthesecondplace

Lastbutnotleast

【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstandforemost,notonlyshouldwegotoalllengthstostudyhardin

ordertoacquiremoreandmoreknowledge,butwealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysical

fitness.（notonly位于句首的部分倒装）

[高分句型2]If1amelectedtobeamemberofSportsclubjwilllakeactivepartinallactivities,

（if引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型3]What1candevotemyselftotheconstructionofthecommunityisthat1canconvey

thepositivetheoriesofsportstomyfriendsandclassmatesandawakenthemtotherealizationthat

joiningSportsclubisthebestchoice.（what引导的主语从句）

2021届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷3

VILGuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

现在中国购物网站非常繁荣，很多人选择网上购物而不是去商场实体店购物，你更倾向于哪

种购物方式，并说出你的理由。

注意：请勿出现真实的学校及姓名。

Nowadays,onlineshoppinghasbecomeanirreversibletrend.Somepeopleclaimthatonline

shoppinghasmoreadvantageswhileothersmaintainthatphysicalstoresarebetter.

Frommyperspective,Ipreferonlineshoppingforthreereasons.Firstofall,itssuper

convenienceisofvitalimportancetomebecauseitenablesmetosavemoretimeandenergyfor

mywork.Secondly,morechoicesandmoredifferentkindsofcommoditiesareofferedonthe

InternetsothatIcancompareprices,types,qualitiesandcanevenrefertopeople'scomments

beforechoosingtheappropriateoneforme.Lastbutnotleast,onlineshoppingenablesmetobuy

thingsacrossdifferentcountrieswithouttravellingaroundtheworld,whichisofgreat

convenienceonadailybasis.

Allinall,onlineshoppingismoreappealingtomeandwilldefinitelykeepaccompanying

meinthefuture.

2021届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷4

V.GuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

假如你是Tom,在网上订了一款MP3作为生日礼物送给好朋友，但收到的MP3却存在

质量问题。请你给销售经理写一封投诉信。内容包括：

1.MP3有质量问题；

2.给你造成的损失；

3.你的合理要求.

Dearmanager,

I'mwritingtotellyouabouttheMP3IboughtlastweekfromyourcompanyontheInternet,

whichwasintendedformygoodfriendasabirthdaygift.

WhenIopenedthedelivery,Iwassurprisedtofindthewrappingpaperbroken.Whatwas

worse,IfindtheMP3doesn'twork,nomatterhowmanymeasuresIhavetaken.

WithreferencetomyorderNo.1314,thereisnodoubtthattheMP3youdeliveredreally

comesfromyourcompany,whosepoorqualitymademeverydisappointed,anditisthepoorMP3

thatmademesufferagreatlossfromit.Anyway,itcostme200yuan,whichIsavedfornearly

halfayear.Tosomeextent,thebrokenMP3hasnotonlybroughtmegreateconomiclossbutalso

lessenedmytrustasaconsumer.

Asmyfriend\birthdayisdrawingnear,IamanxioustoknowwhetheranewMP3canbe

redeliveredassoonaspossible.Pleasetakemycaseintodeepconsiderationratherthanturna

blindeyetomyrequirement.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifmuchattentioncouldbepaidto

myrequirement!

Yourstruly,

Tom

2021届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷5

WLGuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

学校学生广播正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（科学技术、兴趣爱好、文学艺术）

中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（旅行、环保、健身）中挑选一个纳入该电视台节目。假设

你是该校学生李华，给广播台长写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：

1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；

2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

参考范文：

GuidedWriting

DearPresent,

I'mwritingtoexpresssomeofmyopinionstowardsourschool'sbroadcastwhichintendsto

changeoneoftheprogramsfromsciencetechnology,interesthobbyandliteratureartandselect

oneofthemfromtravelling,environmentalp