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写作技法点拨系列五、完美衔接过渡,巧妙起承转合【核心点拨】高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准要求“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”。要想在高考有限的时间里写出能获得较高分数的书面表达,就必须应用恰当的衔接过渡词汇来使句子、段落之间的衔接通顺自然,达到内容连贯,文章结构紧凑的目的。一、语句间常用的衔接过渡词汇表起始firstofall;accordingto;inmyopinion;asfarasIamconcerned;asfarasIknow;asforme表递进besides;what’smore;what’sworse;furthermore;inadditionto;additionally表并列also;aswell(as);or;either...or...;neither...nor...;notonly...butalso;both...and表因果therefore;thanksto;asaresultof...;becauseof;dueto;owingto表强调aboveall;indeed;surely;certainly;ofcourse;atleast;obviously表解释thatistosay;inotherwords;believeitornot;totellyouthetruth;namely;actually表比较justas;justlike;inthesameway;similarly表空间ontheleft/right;totheleft/right;ononesideof...ontheothersideof...;atthefoot/top/endof;inthemiddle/centerof...表时间atfirst;inthebeginning;next;then;later;abouttwomonthslater;afterawhile;soon;soonafterthat;afterthat;afterwards;sincethen;meanwhile;intheend;atlast;finally;forthefirsttime;thenextmoment;uptonow;beforelong;fromthenon;soonerorlater表转折或对比however;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary;inspiteof;afterall;infact;asamatteoffact表列举foronething...andforanother(thing);first;firstly;second(ly);third(ly);lastbutnotleast表举例forexample;forinstance;take...forexample;suchas;asfollows;andsoon表总结inshort;inaword;inconclusion;inbrief;generallyspeaking;tosumup;allinall二、段落间常用的衔接过渡词汇文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为起、承、转、合。“起”就是开头,“承”是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结。用于“起”的过渡词汇(用在段落或文章的开头)first;firstofall;atfirst;inthefirstplace;firstly;tobeginwith;tostartwith;recently;now;atpresent;inrecentyears;ingeneral;lately;currently用于“承”的过渡词汇(用在段落中的第一个扩展句中)second;similarly;inaddition;besides;then;furthermore;moreover;whatismore;whatisworse;forexample;forinstance;certainly;surely;obviously;inotherwords;especially;particularly;inparticular;indeed;still;third;truly;infact;atthesametime;nodoubt用于“转”的过渡词汇(用在段落中的第二个扩展句中)but;however;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary;incontrast;inanycase;nevertheless(虽然如此);otherwise;or;orelse;while;whereas;but;inspiteof...;yet;instead用于“合”的过渡词汇(用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中)inaword;ingeneral;inshort;aboveall;afterall;generallyspeaking;tosumup;finally;inconclusion;atlast;insummary;therefore;asaresult;thus;eventually;hence;onthewhole【即时应用】下面是一篇题为“Hastemakeswaste(欲速则不达)”的文章,请根据提示填写出恰当的过渡词以确保语篇连贯。Hastemakeswaste

Thereisanoldsaying,“Hastemakeswaste.”It’stheexperienceofourforefathers,however,itiscorrectandofgreatimportanceinmanycaseseventoday.

①______(表顺序)itteachesusthatweshouldn’tbeoveranxiousaboutquickresults.②_________(表转折)wewillfail.③__________(表递进)ifweemphasizetoomuchuponspeed,wewillsuffersoonerorlater.④______________________(表举例)ifwearetoohastyintests,itisverypossiblethatwemaymakesomemistakesorevenfail.⑤____________(表递进)wemayFirstlyOtherwiseInadditionForexample/ForinstanceWhat’smoreleaveabadimpressiononboththeteachersandclassmatesthatwearecareless.⑥___________________(再次举例)ifasportsmanishastyinanimportantgame,hemayloseaverypreciousopportunitytowinthechampionship.⑦__________(表结果)hewilllosetheconfidencetopickthepiecesup.ForanotherexampleAsaresultHastehasmanysideeffects.Ontheonehand,hastemayresultinwrongdecisionormoremistakes.⑧________________(表列举)hastemeansafailur