2023学年完整公开课版八上Unit3Writing陈小梅

Unit3I'mmoreoutgoingthanmysister.Writingwinner陈小梅EnjoyasongWhatisthissongabout?Alifewithout(没有)afriendislikealifewithoutthesun.Friendsareveryimportantinourlife,soweshouldcherishthem.

朋友是我们生活不可或缺的部分，总在我们最需要他们的时候陪伴着我们。你最好的朋友是谁呢？你们有什么相同或不同的地方吗？你是怎样看待“朋友”这一含义呢？根据提示，以“My

Best

Friend

and

Me”为题，写一篇短文，比较你俩的特征，可适当拓展，80词左右。

Task1.Learntodescribe（描述）

andcompare（对比）

yourbestfriendwithyou.2.Writeashortpassageaboutyourbestfriendandyou.Level1（第一关：词汇）Level

2（第二关：连词成句、成文）Level

3（第三关：实践）写作通关Level1:Collectwords积累词汇Ready?

GoTakenotes!!!!Howtodescribepeople?studyhobby爱好lookpersonality（性格）lookheightbuildhairtallshortofmediumheightheavythinofmediumbuildlonghairshorthairstraighthaircurlyhairbe(am,is,are)have/hasbrainstormheavierthinnerpersonality(性格）quietshyoutgoingfriendlyfunnyserioushard-workingfriendlier,morefriendlylaziermorehard-workingfunniermoreseriousshierquietermoreoutgoinglazycomparativeform(比较级）personality(性格）hobby(爱好）like/enjoydoingbegoodatbetalentedinreaddancesingplaybasketballrunReadytoLevel2?Congratulationstopasslevel1!祝贺你通过第一关!Level2:连词成句、成文Ready?

GoISamtall******friendly******runfast********Iam_________Sam.=SamandIare_________.Iam_______________Sam.=SamandIare_________________.Irun____________Sam.=SamandI_____________.A+be+as形容词原形as+B.A+实义动词+as副词原形as+B.astallas

similaritiesAgoodfriendislikeamirror.bothtallasfriendlyas

bothfriendlyasfastas

bothrunfast3aIfyou’reWangLinglingandLiuLiliisyourbestfriend.SaysomethingaboutyoursimilaritiesWearebothtall.Wearebothpopular.IamasoutgoingasLiuLili.Wearethesameinsomeways.Wearebothtallandpopular.IamasoutgoingasLiuLili.Weliketomakefriendswithothers./It’seasyformetomakefriends.Ibestfriendsimilarities(共同点）根据自己的表格写出你与最好的朋友相同的地方。tallWearethesameinsomeways.—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————as…as…both5minsWearethesameinsomeways.Wearebothtallandpopular.IamasoutgoingasLiuLili.Weliketomakefriendswithothers./It’seasyformetomakefriends.Helpothers!ISamoutgoing*****playbasketball******study******Samis_________________thanme.Iplaybasketball______thanSam.Samstudies_______thanme.DifferencesA+be+形容词比较级than+B.A+实义动词+副词比较级than+B.harder

better

moreoutgoingIhavelongerhairthanLiuLili.Ilikereading,butLiuLililikessports.IammoreseriousthanLiuLili,butsheisfunnierthanme.Iammorehard-workingthanLiuLili,butsheissmarterthanme.However,wearedifferentinsomeways.IhavelongerhairthanLiuLili.

Asforhobby,Ilikereading,butLiuLililikessports.

Sherunsfasterthanme.

IammoreseriousthanLiuLili,butsheismuchfunnierthanme.

Shealwaysmakesmelaugh.

Iammorehard-workingthanLiuLili.Althoughsheissmarterthanme,Igetbettergradesthanshedoes.differencesIbestfrienddifferences(不同点）写出你与最好的朋友不相同的地方。lazyhard-workingHowever,wearedifferentinsomeways.———————————————————————————————————————————————————5minsA+be+形容词比较级than+B.A+实义动词+副词比较级than+B.However,wearedifferentinsomeways.IhavelongerhairthanLiuLili.

Asforhobby,Ilikereading,butLiuLililikessports.

Sherunsfasterthanme.

IammoreseriousthanLiuLili,butsheismuchfunnierthanme.

Shealwaysmakesmelaugh.

Iammorehard-workingthanLiuLili.Althoughsheissmarterthanme,Igetbettergradesthanshedoes.Helpothers!Howtowriteagoodpassage?

如何写好一篇文章

Everyoneneedsfriends.Idon’tthinkagoodfriendshouldbethesameasme.Mybestfriendis…Letmetellyousomethingabouther/himandme.Although

wehavesomedifferences,Ihopeourfriendshipcanlastforever!head?tail?bodyIbestfriendsimilarities(共同点）differences(不同点）Wearethesameinsomeways.However,wearedifferentinsomeways.Sample:Everyoneneedsfriends.Idon’tthinkagoodfriendshouldbethesameasme.

MybestfriendisLiuLili.Letmetellyousomethingaboutherandme.

Wearethesameinsomeways.

Wearebothtallandhavestraighthair.Wearebothpopularandoutgoing.Weliketomakefriendswithothers.

However,wearedifferentinsomeways.

IhavelongerhairthanLiuLili.Asforhobby,Ilikereading,butLiuLililikessports.Sherunsfasterthanme.IammoreseriousthanLiuLili,butsheisfunnierthanme.Shealwaysmakesmelaugh.Iammorehard-workingthanLiuLiliz.Althoughsheissmarterthanme,Igetbettergradesthanshedoes.Althoughwehavesomedifferences,Ihopeourfriendshipcanlastforever!

CongratulationstopassLevel3!祝贺你通过第2关！ReadytoLevel3?Level3:Ready?

GoHaveatrybyyourselves!

自己试一试！Task:Writing

将开头和结尾补充上去，同时对正文部分进行再次修改。Ibestfriendsimilarities(共同点）differences(不同点）

Everyoneneedsfriends