六级写作1评分原则及现象解释型

WritingLecture（一）GradingPrinciples采用总体(GlobalScoring)评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores)，而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

GradingCriteria本题满分为15分。2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。字数:至少120/150字110-119100-10990-9980-8970-7960-6950-59<49

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布局：三段式只写一段为0-4分，只写两段0-9分；作文评分标准示例2002.12Directions:

For

this

part,

you

are

allowed

thirty

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic:

It

pays

to

Be

Honest.

You

should

write

at

least

120

words

according

to

the

outline

given

below

in

Chinese.

1.

当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。

2.

诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。

Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue,therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety.Forexample,somebusinessmensellfakeproductstotheirconsumers;somestudentscheatonexams;someapplicantsfindjobsbyusingfakediplomas;somepeopletellliestoavoidresponsibilityoravoidbeingpunished.

Dishonestpeopleareshortsighted.Whattheydobringsharmnotonlytoothersbutalsotothemselves.Thosewhosellfakeproductsmaymakemoneyatfirst,butoncetheywerefoundout,noonewillbuytheirproductsanymore.Asaresult,theywilllosetheirfortune.Whatismore,theywillevenbesenttoprison.Incontrast,honestpeoplegainalot.Whattheydobringsbenefittoothersaswellastothemselves.Thosewhoalwaystelltruthorkeeptotheirpromisecanwintrustandrespectfromtheircustomers.Becausetheyaretrustworthyandrespectable,everyoneiseagertobetheirfriendandeveryonewantstobuytheirproducts.Undoubtedly,theywillmakeagreatfortuneintheend.

Inaword,honestywinstrust,respectandhonor.Soitisimportantthatweshouldbehonestinwhateverwedoandsay.14points

Nowadays,

many

people

choose

not

be

honest

in

our

modern

society.We

almost

can

find

such

things

every

day

of

our

life:

some

studentscheatin

the

exam

for

higher

marks;some

corporations

tell

wrong

data

to

the

public

in

order

to

get

more

investment;

and

some

doctors

treat

their

patients

with

unnecessary

and

expensive

medicines

in

order

to

make

money,

sometimes

damaged

the

patient’s

health,

even

their

life.

Seeing

this

situation,

I

think

it

must

be

changed.

Being

honest

willbenefit

not

only

others,

but

also

ourselves.

First,

your

honesty

will

make

others

willing

to

trust

you.

Second,

being

honest

can

lead

you

to

face

your

problem

bravely,

which

helps

to

solve

it.

And

the

last,

honesty

surely

helps

to

make

the

society

more

harmony.

So,

I

think

everyone

should

start

to

be

honest

and

everyone

should

have

the

idea

that

our

society

can

not

do

without

honesty.

11pointsIn

our

modern

social

life,

there

are

many

examples

around

us

show

many

people

are

cheated.

Advertisements

cheat

people,

salesmen

cheat

people,

even

one’s

closest

friends

cheat

him

or

her.

So

many

heartbreaks

are

heard

everyday

that

we

cannot

help

asking:

where

is

our

honest

exist?

Everybody

is

taught

honest

in

the

primary

school

or

even

in

the

kindergarten.

Honesty

does

good

not

only

to

ourselves,

but

to

others

as

well.

If

we

are

honest

to

others,

we

will

be

happier

and

be

in

a

better

mood.

Otherwise,

we’ll

feel

guilt

at

last.

To

a

company

and

its

advertisement,

honesty

will

bring

it

more

consumer

and

more

profit.

If

we

cheat

others,

friends

will

not

believe

you

and

they

will

leave

you

alone.

To

a

company,

no

consumer

will

buy

your

product

again!

So,

as

the

above

is

said,

it

pays

to

be

honest.

Let’s

create

a

morally

outstanding

social.

8points5

points

Withthedevelopmentofmoderneconomicandindustry,competitiveisbecomingmoreandmoreobvious.Atthesametime,theperformanceofdishonestisbecomingmoreandmoreclearly.

Nowadays,therearemanydishonestperformanceinoursociety.Forexample,somepeoplefoundthathesaledgoodshadpastthepreservationdate.Notthrowthemaway,theyrevisedtheperservationdate,andsaledthemagainafterseveraldays.Anothercaseinthepoint,apairofshoeswasmadefromgoat.However,inordertosaleatahighprice,thesalerswouldsaytheyweremadefromcowwhichhasgoodquality.Fromtheforegoing,wecanseethatdishonestdosenotonlyharmtoyourselvesbutalsoharmtoothers.Anditisnouseonlyrealisetheharmnessofdishonest.Weshouldbehonestfromnowonandbehonestinourdailylife.Itisonlythatpeopleallovertheworldarehonestthemourcountrywillbebeautifulandwealthy.

Nowinoursociety,manypeoplearenothonestindoingsoming.Weoftencanmeetwithsominghappenedcausebypeoplewhoarenothonest.Forexample,Nowwetakethebusneedcarrycentsown,andwhenyouupstairsthebus,youshouldputthecentintothemoneybox.Everypeopledothat,butsomeofthepeopleputtheotherthingsinsteadthecents.Foranotherexample,itismorenormalthatintheexamswecanalwaysfindsomestudentsseeothers.Iconsiderthateverypeopleshouldbehonest.Asapeople,honestshouldbefirst,becauseitcanmakeustobeincreaseandmakeoursocitydevelop.Indoingeverythingweshouldbehonestall,study,word,lifeandsoon.Ifyouarehonest,everypeoplewillbefriendtoyou,andwhowillregardyouaregoodpeople.

Butifyoudon'tbehonest,peoplemustunwillingtotrathwithyou.Soifyouarewanttobeagoodpeople,rememberhonestfirst.

2points六级作文题型现象解释型对比选择型问题解决型观点论证型应用文1.现象解释型基本方法为：描述现象→分析原因→得出结论或表明个人看法.2010.12Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewsonUniversityRanking.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前高校排名相当盛行;

2.对于这种做法人们看法不一;

3.在我看来……

Inrecentyears,allkindsofUniversityRankingListscanbefoundonsomeeducationalwebsites,ornewspapers.Therankingstandardsalsovary.Theselistshavegreatinfluenceonstudents.Theyareevenbecomingtheonlyscaletoevaluatethecollegesanduniversities。

Peopleholddifferentviewstowardthisphenomenon.Somebelievethattheselistshelpthestudentsalot,especiallyforthosewhowillchoosetheiruniversity.Whilesomeotherprotestvigorously.Intheirpoints,thelistisreallyridiculousandharmful.Inmyview,theuniversityrankingmayhaveitsownreferencevalues,butitsdisadvantagesoverweighitsvalues。

Forthoseuniversity-students-to-be,theyaresupposedtochoosetheschoolaccordingtohisorherownsituation,butnottheso-calledRankingList.What’smore,howabouttheuniversitystudents?Howdotheyfeelaboutthemselveswhentheyseetheranking?Thelistmaybecomesomeintangibleshacklesforthemiftheirownschoolrankspoorly。

Inanutshell,thereisnoeasymethodtoranktheseuniversities,buttheRanking,onlyhelpsstudentsignoretheessentials,namely,theirninety-ninepercentperspiration。2010.6DueAttentionShouldBeGivenTotheStudyofChinese

1。近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;

2。出现这种现象的原因和后果;

3。我认为…DueAttentionShouldBeGivenTotheStudyofChineseCurrently,thereisagrowingconcernfordifficultyinthemothertonguelanguageamonguniversitystudents.Foreignlanguagelearning,notChinese,hasbecomeacommonoccurrenceonourcampus.Obviously,more

andmoreexpertsarebeginningtobeawareoftheseriousnessofthisproblem.

Anumberofreasonscanbeeasilyfoundforthis.

Foronething,studentspaymoreattentiontoEnglishstudythanChinesetraining.Foranotherthing,thecompaniesfocusonthecandidates'foreignlanguageskills.What'smore,Chineseplaysalessimportantroleinuniversitycourses.Inotherwords,teachersalsofeelunnecessarytoholdfurtherstudiesonChinese.Consequently,languagelearnersfoundinabilityingainingEnglishsuccessfully,ortheymayfeelhavingdifficultiesinunderstandinginotherlanguages.AsfarasIamconcerned,thecorrect

andexactexpressioninChineseoughttobetheprimaryconcernforforeignlanguagesstudies,whichmeansChinese,ourmothertongue,isthefoundationforunderstanding,expressingandlearningotherlanguages.Obviously,itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventtheabovesituation.开篇

1）Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.

2）Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedlydiscussedtopic.

3）Recentlytheissuehasarousedgreatconcernamong……

4）Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover……

5）Accordingtoarecentsurvey,……

6）Withtherapiddevelopmentof……,……原因

1.Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.

2.Anumberoffactors/Variousreasonsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).

3.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.

结尾1)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...2)Itishightimethatstrictmeasuresweretakentostop...3)Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetakento...4)Inconclusion,itisimperativethat...5)Thereisnoeasymethod,but...mightbeofsomehelp.6)Tosolvetheabove-mentionedproblem,wemust...7)Insummary,ifwecontinuetoignoretheabove-mentionedissue,moreproblemswillcropup.8)Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,theproblemwillbesolvedthoroughly.9)Takingalltheseintoaccount,we...TransitionWords1.enumeration列举类2.example举例类3.compare&contrast比较与对比类4.causeandeffect因果类5.summing-up总结类TransitionWords1.enumeration列举类Inthefirstplace,then,finallyFirst(ly),second(ly),third(ly)Firstandforemost,second,thelastbutnottheleastInthefirstplace,furthermore,lastlyTostartwith,moreover,lastFirstofall,then,thirdlyForonething,foranotherOntheonehand,ontheotherhandbesides,inaddition,moreover,furthermore,what’smore,tomakethingstillworse2.example举例类

forexample;forinstance;suchas;like;take...forexample;acaseinpoint;namely;inotherwords;thatis;especially;inparticularEg.Myexperienceoflastyearisacaseinpoint.

Takehisfailureinthefinalexamasanexample,itisaveryobviouscase.

3.compare&contrast比较与对比

but;however;yet;otherwise;while;incontrast;bycontrast;onthecontrary;similarly;likewise;like;conversely;ratherthan;instead;ontheotherhand;equally;nevertheless;nonetheless;unlike;still;inthesameway;comparedwith...

4.causeandeffect因果类asaresult;since;because(of);thanksto;dueto;owingto;forthisreason;hence;thus;therefore;onthis/thataccount;onaccountof;consequently；accordingly

5.summing-up总结类inthiscase;accordingto;inaword;inbrief;inshort;tosumup；inconclusion;onthewhole;insummary;toconclude;inthelongrunEg.Therefore,itisnotdifficulttodraw/cometotheconclusionthat…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat…Tosumup,itishightimethatsomethingwasdoneabout…/everyone…Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat……

WritingAssignment1Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTestforNationalCivilServants.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below