Unit3ConservationWritingWorkshop课件-高中英语北师大版2019选择性

新北师大版高中英语选择性必修一Unit3Conservation

WritingWorkshopWarmupBrainstorm.Farmanimalskept:cows,sheep,pigs,deer,donkey,rabbit,poultry(chickens,ducks,geese),fish…Others:feed,fodder(饲料),onalargescale,automatic,havenofreedom,cruel(cruelty),kill/slaughter,market,highproduction,meat(pork,beef,mutton,chicken,etc.),environmentalproblems…Warmup1Whatcanyouseefromthevideo?2Howdoyoufeelafterseeingthem?3Areyoufororagainstfactoryfarming?Why?PairWork:watchingthevideoclip,discussthequestions.ReadforWriting：FocusonStructureReadtheessayagain.Matchthefunctionstoeachparagraph.Para.1______ Para.3______Para.2______ Para.4______aconclusion(youropinion)bargumentsagainstthetopiccintroductiontothetopicdargumentsforthetopiccdbaPara.1IntroductiontothetopicPara.2ArgumentsforthetopicPara.3ArgumentsagainstthetopicPara.4Conclusion(youropinion)Argument+supportingdetailsArgument+supportingdetailsConclusion+youropinionReadforWriting1Whatisthemaintopicoftheessay?Theprosandcons(advantagesanddisadvantages/forandagainstopinion)offactoryfarming.Readtheessay.Answerthequestions.

Factoryfarminginvolveskeepingfarmanimalsinsidebuildingstoincreasetheproductionofmeatoreggs.Accordingtoaninstitute,“74%oftheworld’spoultry,43%ofitsbeefand68%ofitseggsareproducedinthisway.”ReadforWriting2Whatarethemainargumentsandsupportingdetailsused“for”and“against”factoryfarming?Themainargumentforfactoryfarming:apartfrombeingalotcheaperthantraditionalororganicfarming,itprovidesmorefoodforaworldpopulationthathasalreadyreachedsevenbillion,accordingtotheUnitedNations.Supportingdetails:notusemanyworkers,lowcosts,highproduction;sufferfromfewerdiseases.Themainargumentforfactoryfarmingisthat,apartfrombeingalotcheaperthantraditionalororganicfarming,itprovidesmorefoodforaworldpopulationthathasalreadyreachedsevenbillion,accordingtotheUnitedNations.Asfactoryfarmsdon’tusemanyworkers,thecostsarelowandtheproductionishigh.Moreover,factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseasesthanthoselivingoutside.ReadforWriting2Whatarethemainargumentsandsupportingdetailsused“for”and“against”factoryfarming?Themainargumentagainstfactoryfarming:opponentsoffarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.Supportingdetails:bekeptinsmallplaces,sufferterriblestress,haveanegativeimpactontheenvironment(wasteproducts,chemicalstocontrolinsects,drugstotreatdiseases).

Ontheotherhand,opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.Forinstance,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.Peoplewhofightforanimalrightsclaimthattheseanimalssufferterriblestress.Inadditiontothis,factoryfarminghasanegativeimpactontheenvironmentbecauseitcreatesalotofwasteproducts,andusesalotofchemicalstocontrolinsectsanddrugstotreatdisease(UKFarmingToday,2013).ReadforWriting3Whatisthewriter’sopinionaboutfactoryfarming?Weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.

Tosumup,despiteproducingcheapfood,factoryfarmingisbadfortheplanetandfortheanimalsthemselves.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.ReadforWriting4Howdoestheauthorpresent“for”and“against”factoryfarming?Para.1IntroductiontothetopicPara.2ArgumentsforthetopicPara.3ArgumentsagainstthetopicPara.4Conclusion(youropinion)Argument+supportingdetailsArgument+supportingdetailsConclusion+youropinionFocusonLanguageaccordingtoAccordingtoaninstitute,“74%ofworld’spoultry…areproducedinthisway.”moreoverMoreover,factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseases…ontheotherhandOntheotherhand,opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.forinstanceForinstance,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.inadditiontoInadditiontothis,factoryfarmingasanegativeimpactontheenvironment.inmyopinionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.LinkingExpressionsFocusonLanguageWhichofthelinkingexpressionsintheSentenceBuilderhasthefollowingfunction?1summarizinginformation2addingnewinformation3givingexamples4providingsourcesofinformation5contrastingstatementsSentenceBuilderFocusonLanguageaccordingtoAccordingtoaninstitute,“74%ofworld’spoultry…areproducedinthisway.”moreoverMoreover,factory-farmedanimalssufferfromfewerdiseases…ontheotherhandOntheotherhand,opponentsoffactoryfarmingsaythatitiscrueltotheanimals.forinstanceForinstance,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.inadditiontoInadditiontothis,factoryfarmingasanegativeimpactontheenvironment.inmyopinionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoreducethiskindoffarming,althoughwewouldhavetopaymoreforoureggsandmeat.2addingnewinformation5contrastingstatements3givingexamples2addingnewinformation1summarizinginformation4providingsourcesofinformationLinkingExpressionsWriting:Outlining.CompletetheoutlineofyouressayonthestatementyouhavechosenbasedonActivity3.体裁话题时态人称文章架构议论文ArgumentativeWriting以一般现在时为主；以第三人称为主第一段：提出论点：主题是青少年出国留学第二段：陈述赞成与反对的理由第三段：个人观点FocusonLanguageMoreusefulexpressionsTointroducepoints/argumentsfor&against:FocusonLanguageinaddition(tothis),furthermore,moreover,besides,apartfrom,whatismore,aswellas,nottomention(thefact)that,also,notonly…butalso/aswell/both…and,thereisanothersidetotheissue/question/argumentof…ontheotherhand,however,still,yet,but,nonetheless,nevertheless,evenso,although,though,eventhough,while,whereas,despite/inspiteof(thefactthat),regardlessofthefactthat…Toaddmorepointstothesametopic:Tomakecontrastingpoints:FocusonLanguageGivingreasons,examplesandfacts:Drafting.

UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.WritingHelpWritinga“For”and“Against”EssayIt’simportantto:haveaclearargumentstatement;include“for”and“against”opinions;supportyourownopinionwithexamplesandotherdetails;sumupyourargumentinthefinalparagraph.Editing.

Edityouressayinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.Doesthewritergiveaclearstatement“for”or“against”theissue?Doesthestructureflowwell(statement,mainargumentwithsupportingdetails,otherargumentsandconclusion)?Doesthewriteruseavarietyoflinkingexpressions?Doyoufeelthatthewriterhasastrongbeliefintheargumenthe/sheispresenting?EditingSheet1.Weshouldonlyhaveorganicfarming.

organic:relatingtofarmingorgardeningmethodsofgrowingfoodwithoutusingartificialchemicals,orproducedorgrownbythesemethods

adj.不使用化肥的，有机的，绿色的egOrganicfarming

isbetterfortheenvironment.

有机耕作对环境较为有利。organicfood/vegetables/milketc有机食品/蔬菜/牛奶等egTheshopsellsorganicfood.这家商店出售有机食品。organicwine有机葡萄酒2.Factoryfarminginvolveskeepingfarmanimalsinsidebuildings…

involve:

ifanactivityorsituationinvolvessomething,thatthingispartofitoraresultofitvt.包含，需要egWhatwillthejobinvolve?

这份工作包括什么？vt.

牵涉，牵连；（使）参与，参加involvein使牵连；使陷入；使聚精会神egTrytoinvolveasmanychildrenaspossibleinthegame.尽量让多一些孩子参与游戏。Iseemtohave

involvedmyselfinsomethingIdon'tunderstand.我似乎卷入了一件我并不知情的事情当中。根据括号内的汉语提示补全下面句子。1)Therewasaserioustrafficincident___________________________(涉及一群年轻人).2)Paintingtheroom___________________________(就需要把钢琴搬出去).3)Tom___________________________(热衷于集邮).4)________________________(家务事包括做饭),washingdishes,sweepingandcleaning.involvingagroupofyouthsinvolvedmovingoutthepianoisinvolvedincollectingstampsHouseworkinvolvescooking3.Forinstants,manyfarmanimalsarekeptinsmallspaceswheretheycanhardlymove.

forinstance:

forexample例如egLetyourchildmakesomeofthesmalldecisionsconcerninghisdailyroutine.For

instance,allowhimtochoosewhatclotheshewearsattheweekend.

让孩子在日常生活中作一些小决定。比如，让他自己决定周末穿什么衣服。4.Peoplewhofightforanimalrightsclaimthat….

claim:tostatethatsomethingistrue,eventhoughithasnotbeenprovedvt.声称;断言;主张

eg

Theproductclaims‘tomakeyouthinwithoutdieting’.

该产品声称“不节食也可让你瘦”。n.声称；（根据权利而提出的）要求egCanyougiveanyevidenceto

support

your

claim?你能提供证据支援你的说法吗？【拓展】

haveaclaimonsb.

对某人有……的要求权makenoclaim（表示不能做某事）自认为不