读后续写个人成长类+我不是这个意思+讲义 高三英语一轮复习

试题呈现：阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theydon'tmeanitOurfamilymovedherefomChinatwoyears

ago,andwethoughtwewereprettywelladjustedtoAmericanways.ThisyearmyparentsdecidedtogiveapartyonChineseNewYearandinvitesomeofourAmenicanfriends.Thepartywentpretywell.Ourguestswereamazedattheflavorofallthespecialfoods.AfterthedinnertheythankedusforshowingthemwhatarealChineseNewYeardinnerwaslike."Ilovedthedishes.Youandthegirlsmusthavespenthoursdoingallthework."Mrs.O’Mearasaidtomymother.“Thegirlshelpedwiththecutingand

I'msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob."saidMother.Iheardalittlegasp（倒吸气）

frommyfriendKimO’Meara,whostaredwide-eyesatMother.WhenIaskedwhatthematterwas,shetoldmeshejustdidn’tundertandwhymymothersaidso.Ihadtolaugh."Shedosn'tmeanit.It’sjustthewayshetalks."Seeingherstillconfused,Iwentonexpaining,

“InChina,parentsconsideritgoodmannerstodenypraisesbouttheirchildren.Otherwise,

itwouldbethesameasbragging（自夸）."

Kimseemedalittlehesitant,butshenoddedanyway.ThatEaster,theO’Mearasinvitedourfmilyfordinner.MrsO’Mearacookedahugehamwhichweenjoyedalot.AsMrs.O'Meanstartedcuttingthecakefordessert,Mothersaid,"I'mnotsureiflcaneatonemorebite.ThatwasthebesthamI'veevertasted!""Aw,

thathamwasterrible,"saidKim."Ibetyoucoulddoalotbetter,Mrs.Yang."注意:1.续写短文词数应为

150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Therewasastunned（震惊的）

silencearoundthetable.Paragraph2:IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.我的课堂流程是：一、请学生讲讲前文的主题和情节：主题：两个家庭（一个中国家庭和一个美国家庭）过节互相邀请对方做客，在交流过程中免不了互相之间的赞美，由于东西方文化对待别人“赞美”的态度和回应不一样，引起了美国小孩Kim对待别人“赞美”的误解，并且弄得双方很尴尬，最后通过作者的解释化解了误解和尴尬。前文情节：我家新年请Kim一家来做客——Kim的母亲赞美我们姐妹帮助母亲——我母亲不好意思谦虚一下，说I'msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob.——Kim不理解我母亲为什么那样说——我做了解释Kim好像明白了——复活节Kim一家请我们去做客——我母亲赞美Kim的母亲火腿好吃——Kim来了一句thathamwasterrible弄得大家都很尴尬。二、续写情节构思：构思原则：两段首句定一框,

二框二首正能量根据两段首句，请学生说说第一段情节，重点是把过程叙述清楚（重点难点）,此时不谈细节。根据大家的意见，“叙述过程”三句话。Paragraph1:Therewasastunned（震惊的）

silencearoundthetable.1.OmearastaredatKim.Kimfeltembarrassed.2.Iwassurprised

andasked

“Whydid

youtalktoyourmotherlikethat?”3.Kim

replied,

“youhadtoldmenottopraisefamilymembersinfrontofothers.Itwasthesameasbragging.Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly.”根据第二段首句和正能量原则，接着请学生说说第二段情节，重点是把过程叙述清楚（重点难点）,此时不谈细节。根据大家的意见，“叙述过程”三句话。Paragraph2:IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.1.

I

comfortedher

and

explained,

“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’tpraisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelderly.”2.

Hearingthis,shesighedwithshame.3.

Sheapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehaviours.Hermothersaid,

”That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit.”三、请学生在适当的地方增添细节（注意：细节描写不要太多；学生一般都喜欢用对话但是不会写对话，对话一定要符合语境，精炼）第一段：1.Omearastared（coldly/angrily）

atKim.Kimfeltembarrassed（redface）.2.Iwassurprisedandasked

“Whydidyoutalktoyourmotherlikethat?”3.Kimreplied,

“youhadtoldmenottopraisefamilymembersinfrontofothers.Itwasthesameasbragging.Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly.”（续写过程中很少学生能表达清楚）

第二段：1.Icomfortedher（怎么安慰

Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown）

andexplained,“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’tpraisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelderly.”（续写过程中很少学生能表达清楚）2.Hearingthis,shesighedwithshame（怎么表达羞愧Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed）.3.（怎么表达难为情Droopingherhead）Sheapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehaviours.Hermothersaid,”That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit.”（结尾回扣主题）四、范文展示，学生背诵Therewasadeadlysilencearoundthetable.

O’mearawasstaringcoldlyatKim,whosefacereddenedwithembarrassment.Iwasalsoshockedatmyfriend'smeanremark.Clearingmythroat,Ifinallyasked,"Whatdidyoutalk

toyourmother

likethat?"Kimturnedaround,seeminglyannoyed,“B-butyouweretheonewhot-toldmethatsayingnicethingsaboutyourownfamilywasthesameasbragging!"shestuttered."Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly!”IfinallyknewthatKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown,andexplained“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’t

praisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelder."Hearingthis,Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed.Theawkwardsilencewassoonbrokenasthemisunderstandingwaserased.Droopingherhead,Kimapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehavior.Mrs.O'Mearawinkedather,joking,"That'sallright.Weknowyoudidn'tmeanit!”下水文：Therewasadeadlysilencearoundthetable.

Aoremainedsilent,juststaringcoldlyatJin'sface,whichhadturnedredduetoembarrassment.Iamalsoshockedandangryatmyfriend'sharshwords.Afterclearingmythroat,Ifinallyspokeupandasked,"Didyousaythattoyourmother?"Jinturnedaroundandcrossedhiswaist,seemingveryangry."B,butyoutellme,sayinggoodthingsaboutyourfamilyislikebragging!"Shestuttered."Ijustwanttokeepalowprofile!"IfinallyknewthatKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

Ipattedhershoulderinanattempttocalmherdownandexplained,"Usually,Chineseparentsdon'tpraisetheirchildrenasasignofhumilityinfrontofothers,butyoungpeoplearealwaysrequiredtorespecttheir