2023托福独立写作

托福独立写作前言【题目主干】前言Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.本书题目仅给出了题目主干。除了特殊情况注明之外，所出现的题目均为这种形式。独立写作评分标准5分文章能够有效地完成任务要求；文章的组织清晰，有恰当的解释、举例和细节；文章内容连贯、统一；4分文章能够较好地完成任务要求，但是有些观点阐述地不够详细；论证总体上组织得不错，使用恰当的解释、举例和细节；文章整体内容连贯、统一，但是可能含有冗余、离题和不清晰的连接；语言使用较熟练，有较为丰富的词汇和语法结构，但是也可能有较为明显的小错误，但不影响总体理解。3分文章完成了任务要求，用了一些解释、举例和细节描述；能看出文章的连贯和统一，但分论点的衔接可能不清晰；语言运用稍有欠缺，可能在遣词造句上出现错误造成语义晦涩；有准确的语言和语法结构，但是多样性比较单一。2分文章只完成了部分任务要求，文章组织论证不够充分；解释、举例或者细节描述不太得当或者不充分；出现明显的用词不当；语法结构错误较多。1分文章组织非常混乱；基本没有细节，或者出现不相关细节；严重和频繁的用词和语法错误。0分文章仅仅从题目中抄了一些文字，或者完全离题，用非英语语言来写作或者空白卷。前言V前言独立写作分值转换前言原始分换算分原始分换算分5.0030原始分换算分原始分换算分5.00302.75184.75292.50174.50282.25154.25272.00144.00251.75123.75241.50112.50221.25103.25211.0083.0020VI 7天搞定托福独立写作目 录前言本书具有哪些特色独立写作出题方式独立写作评分标准独立写作分值转换Day1 1DoingschoolworkMostimportantcharacteristicforleadersProvidingfinancialsupportforartistsFacilitiesvs.teachersTakingpart-timejobsDoingschoolworkMostimportantcharacteristicforleadersProvidingfinancialsupportforartistsFacilitiesvs.teachersTakingpart-timejobsPubicrecognitionvs.moneyPraisinggoodpeopleandpunishingbadpeopleCompetitionvsfriendshipLowsalaryjobvs.highsalaryjobUsingprivatecarsvs.publictransportationChallengingdreamsvs.realisticdreamsPayfeesfordrivingornotArtistsvs.politicalleaders（society）Simplerlifevs.complicatedlife（technology）Day2 17Advicefromolderfriendsvs.peersAcceptideaornotPlayingvs.schoolworkBeingpolitetoothersFriendlierthaninthepastMoneyvs.friendshipCarsvs.airplanesLarge-sizepartyvs.small-sizepartyBeingpatientornotAssignhomeworkeverydayBuildingnewhousevs.preservingoldbuildingsEducatevs.entertain（television）UsingmobilephonesMaincauseofunhealthyeatinghabitsDay3 33★★★★★ ☆☆☆☆☆Jobvs.sociallife（happiness）PosingphotosonsocialnetworksitesTrydifferentjobsbeforelongcareerMoviesvs.physicalexercises（relax）Jobvs.sociallife（happiness）PosingphotosonsocialnetworksitesTrydifferentjobsbeforelongcareerMoviesvs.physicalexercises（relax）Work/travelbeforeuniversityMoviesthatareworthwatchingUrbanareasvs.ruralareas（takecareofTutorvs.friends（askforhelp）MotivationofbusinesspeopleUniversityattractsgoodstudentsImprovethequalityofeducationFreetimeUsingownknowledgevs.askingothersThemostsignificantthingpeoplelearnMostsignificantthingtoimprovehealthcare目录Day4 49目录Manyskillsvs.oneskillGettopnowacountryCompanyinvestmentSolveenvironmentalpollutionDependenceofyoungpeopleRelationshipbetweenneatroomandsuccessFactorsofeffectiveleadersTellingthetruthManyskillsvs.oneskillGettopnowacountryCompanyinvestmentSolveenvironmentalpollutionDependenceofyoungpeopleRelationshipbetweenneatroomandsuccessFactorsofeffectiveleadersTellingthetruthPayforpublictransportationHowtosolveenvironmentalissuesPrintedbooksvs.electronicbooksFactorofsuccessinlifeLessonsofplayingsportsTVvs.newspaperPrivacyDay5 65Oneprojectvs.manyprojectsImportanceoffamilyreunionFollowingstarsEducationofpeopleMovetoanewcitynon-majorOneprojectvs.manyprojectsImportanceoffamilyreunionFollowingstarsEducationofpeopleMovetoanewcitynon-majorclassesLikeothersvs.differentfromothersCityvs.countrysideGettoknowothersBuythingsmadeinourowncountryTelephonesvs.televisionsAbilitytoreadandwriteCannotdothingswellProtectenergyFamilyvs.friends（influence）Day6 81CookingtimeEmailvs.telephoneFollowworldnewsCookingtimeEmailvs.telephoneFollowworldnewsRelaxwhiledoinghomeworkInvolvedinpoliticsGoodjobsvs.famousprofessorsMainroleofprofessorsvs.past（healthyfood）Adaptationvs.knowledgeSolvemostimportantproblemspeoplevs.olderpeople（enjoySetstrictrulesUnderstandingchildrenSolarenergyvs.traditionalenergyThreeorfourclassesvs.manyclassesDay7 97PlanningabilityNowvs.past（teaching）Pastvs.today（stayingPlanningabilityNowvs.past（teaching）Pastvs.today（stayingAdvertisingisnotusefulIntelligentfriendsvs.humorousfriendsMallsvs.smallshopsWearinguniformsOldvs.young（learningnewTheatersvs.home（watchOfficevs.homeThewaytotrulyrelaxDifficultclassesvs.easyclassesLargecompanyvs.smallcompanyCareerserviceforstudentsMoretimeforstudying索引 VIII 7天搞定托福独立写作★★★★★★★1Doingschoolwork1MostimportantcharacteristicforleadersProvidingfinancialsupportforartistsDay

Facilitiesvs.teachersTakingpart-timejobsTVprogramsmadeinourowncountryvs.foreigncountriesPubicrecognitionvs.moneyPraisinggoodpeopleandpunishingbadpeopleCompetitionvsfriendshipLowsalaryjobvs.highsalaryjob☆☆☆☆☆☆☆Usingprivatecarsvs.publictransportationChallengingdreamsvs.realisticdreamsPayfeesfordrivingornotArtistsvs.politicalleaders（society）Simplerlifevs.complicatedlife（technology）002 002 7天搞定托福独立写作003003Day1Day1Day101020304050607Day1Parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentodotheirschoolworkthemselvesinsteadofdoingittogether.Doing1schoolwork所属话题教育类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目Parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentodotheirschoolworkthemselvesinsteadofdoingittogether.Doing1schoolwork所属话题教育类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目家长与孩子一起写作业涉及方面家长/子（）/师/独立完成作业思路拓展同意孩子可以加深对所学知识的理解Childrencanhaveabetterunderstandingofwhattheylearninschool.充分发挥出孩子们的潜力Doingschoolworkontheirownletschildenfulfilltheirpoetia./增强孩子的独立性Itisagoodwaytodeveloptheirindependentthinkingandincreasetheirindependence.不同意增进父母与孩子之间的关系betweenandchildrencanbecomecloserbydoingschoolwork家长可以了解孩子学习情况Parentscangainabetterunderstandingoftheirchildren’sstudyinschool.提高孩子学习效率Childrenareabletostudymoreefficiently.学习笔记1所属话题事业成功类题目类型Day含绝对词类题目（1所属话题事业成功类题目类型Day含绝对词类题目（themostimportantcharacteristic）审题Mostimportant涉及内容/Day1leaders 涉及方面//leaders 涉及方面////领导品行20140205ML Leadershipisthemostimportantcharacteristicfora思路拓展不同意合作能力Theabilitytocooperateisveryimportantforaleader.交流能力Communicationskillisanothercrucialpart.组织能力Theabilitytoorganisealsoisimportantforleaders.责任感Asenseofresponsibilityisanimportantskillofgoodleaders.小技巧该题目中包含了绝对词（themostimportantcharacter），那么采用反驳的角度代”leadership，也就是文章主体段中每段均讨论另外一个“同样重要的”或者“更重要的”能力。上述内容给出了几个比较常见的个人能力。学习笔记004 004 7天搞定托福独立写作005Day1005Day1Day101Day101020304050607Day1Artists，likemusicians，shouldnotgetfinancialaidfromthegovernment.Providingfinancialforartists 1所属话题社会焦点类审题题目类型Artists，likemusicians，shouldnotgetfinancialaidfromthegovernment.Providingfinancialforartists 1所属话题社会焦点类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目政府是否支持艺术家涉及方面//系等支持艺术家思路拓展同意艺术家们已经有自己的收入而且通常都很高，不再需要政府的财政支持Fypicall，artistshavetheirowninomeswhichaextemelyhigh，anddonotneedhelpfromthegovernment.政府不断的财政帮助会让艺术家有依赖感Gettingfinancialsupportmightcausethemtobecomedependentonthegovernment.政府对艺术家的财政支持对从事其他工作的人也不公平Itisunfairforpeoplewhohaveotherjobsthanartist.不同意有了政府的支持，艺术家可以更专心于创作有了政府的支持，“艺术外交”可以提升整个国家的形象Subsidizedartcanimpethetheimageoftheoutr.人们也可以更好地享受艺术带来的好处Millionsofpeoplecanbenefitalotfomthear.学习笔记/所属话题教育类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体哪一个对学生而言更为重要/所属话题教育类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体哪一个对学生而言更为重要涉及方面设备以及老师能给学生所带来的优势Day1设备老师1DayteachersFacilitiesvs.teachersImprovingfacilitiesismoreimportantforstudentsthanhavingfamousteachers.20140412MLImprovingfacilitiesismoreimportantforstudentsthanhavingfamousteachers.思路拓展同意学生更多时间都是自己在学习，所以对设备的需求更多Facilitiesaremoreimportantforstudentsastheyusuallyspendmoreontheirownthaninclass.学生可以有更多的实践经验Studentscouldgainpracticalexperiencebyusingthosefacilities./更先进的学习环境Havingbetterfacilitiesmeansstudentshaveabetterstudyingenvironment.不同意老师可以帮助学生解决不会的问题Teachersareabletoofferhelpstosolvesomeproblewsforstudents.老师可以帮助学生养成良好的学习习惯developgoodstudyhabitats/工作的机会Teachersmightprovidebetteropptwnitiesforpracticalorworkexperience.学习笔记006 006 7天搞定托福独立写作007Day1007Day1Day101Day101020304050607Day1兼1所属话题教育类审题Takingpart-timejobs题目类型1所属话题教育类审题Takingpart-timejobs题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目学生在校是否应该打工涉及方面学生///职Universitystudentsarenotsupposedtotakepart-timejobs. 思路拓展同意占用学习时间和精力Studentswouldneglecttostudystudyiftheydedicatethertimeandenergytopart-timejobs.有些工作对专业学习没有帮助Onthefaceofit，somepart-timejobsareuselessforhelpingstudentsdevelopusefulskills.生活的压力变大Doingmanydifferentthingsinceasespessueonstudet.不同意了解社会espsdwy.增加经济来源Part-timejobsgenerateincomeforstudents.减轻学习的压力Part-timejobscanreleasesomeofthepressurestudentsfeelfromstudying.学习笔记08 09 10 12 13 14 15/Day1自己其他国家的电视节目1所属话题 /Day1自己其他国家的电视节目Day 审题

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含比较级类题目（跨地域比较）/的电影电视节目哪个更有趣自己国家节目的优缺点（文化/语言/演职人员等）；其他国家节目的优缺点（效果/文化/新鲜感等）ComparedwithTVComparedwithTVprogramsmadeinothercountries，peoplemoreattractedtoprogramsmadeintheirown思路拓展同意本国节目所涉及的文化自己能更了解a能听懂自己国家节目的语言Audiencescanunderstandtheprogramsintheirownlanguagebetterthanforeighprograms.也更熟悉自己国家节目的演职人员Peoplearemorefamiliarwithactorsfromtheirowncountry.不同意别的国家节目制作效果更好Specialeffectsmakeprogramsmadeinothercountriesmoreinteresting.别的国家节目能展示一个不一样的文化让我们学习Peoplecanbeattractedbydifferentcultures.别的国家节目更有新鲜感Moviesmadeinothercountriescanbringfeshperspecti.学习笔记008 008 7天搞定托福独立写作009Day1009Day1Day1010203040506Day101020304050607/Day1公共认可金钱

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普通观点选择类题目用公众认可/金钱奖励努力工作的员工自我价值实现/个人目标/激励等Companiesshouldusepublicrecognitionratherthanmoneytorewardhardworking.20120608MLCompaniesshouldusepublicrecognitionratherthanmoneytorewardhardworking.思路拓展同意公众的认可是一种自我价值的实现Publicrecognitionisaealiztionofonspersonalalue.有人不仅仅是为了金钱而工作的Somepeoplehaveothergoalsthanmakingmoney.获得公众认可对个人以后的发展更有利Itisbeneficialforpeople’sfuturecareer.不同意金钱是生活的物质基础，对员工而言金钱更为实际Peopleneedmoneyforbasiclifenecessities.不仅可以激励员工本身，也可以带动其他员工更好地工作Itmightnotjustmotivatepeoplewhogetthemoney，butalsootheremployees.公司也不用花费更多的时间和精力，因为金钱最为简单、直接Rewardingmoneyismuchmoreeasierthanpublicrecognitionintermsofthecompanybecausethecompanydoesnothavetopaymuchtime.学习笔记08091008091012131415Day1Praisinggoodpeopleand1punishingbadpeople所属话题媒体类审题题目类型 Praisinggoodpeopleand1punishingbadpeople所属话题媒体类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目电影电视节目中应该惩恶扬善涉及方面惩恶扬善所带来的优缺点惩恶扬善Good-doersshowldbepraisedandevil-doersaresupposedtobeGood-doersshowldbepraisedandevil-doersaresupposedtobepunishedinmoviesandTVprograms.思路拓展同意给观众传递正能量Suchprogramscanmakepeoplemoreoptimistic.增强整个社会的正义感Suchaprogramcanstimulatesociety’ssenseofjustice.节目本身会因为符合大众想法而更受欢迎to不同意现实生活并非如此，容易误导人们Itisnecessarytotakeasimplisticjudgmentwithagrainofsalt.单一的惩恶扬善过于单调Peopleaskforawideningchoiceoftreatmenttowardsgoodandbadpeople.人们对于奖励和惩罚的理解不同Peoplehavediffeventunderstandingofbeingpunishedasonemasmeatisanothermaspoison.学习笔记0010 7天搞定托福独立写作Day1Day1Day1010203040506Day101020304050607所属话题社交关系类审题题目类型 涉及内容含绝对词类题目（always）竞争对友谊的影响涉及方面/Day1竞争与友谊1vsCompetitionfriendshipvsCompetitionbetweenfriendsisalwaysbadfortheirrelationship. 思路拓展不同意竞争可以促进双方进步，增进友谊Competitionconsolidatesfriendshipbymotivatingbothpersonstokeepimpronly.竞争可以鼓励双方互相学习Competitionencouragesfriendstolearnfromeach交朋友有很多方式，同样竞争也可以建立良好的友谊Therearevarioustypesoffriendship，andsomepeopleprefertobuildfriendshipthronghcompetition.小技巧该题目中包含了绝对词（alwaysbad），那么采用反驳的角度去论证会比较容易（通常学习笔记0808091012131415/Day1高薪资低薪资工作1 所属话题 /Day1高薪资低薪资工作Day 审题

含比较级类题目（横向比较）高薪假期少的工作/底薪假期多的工作哪类工作更好/各自的优缺点Ajobwithmorevocationbutalowsalaryisbetterthanajobahighsalarybutlessvocation.Ajobwithmorevocationbutalowsalaryisbetterthanajobahighsalarybutlessvocation.思路拓展同意压力小可以有时间去放松自己Someonewithajobthatoffersmorevacationtimecanelaxbete.压力小的工作可以有更多时间陪家人Peoplecouldenjoylifewiththeirfamilies.可以有时间拓展自己的兴趣爱好Peoplecanfocusontheirinterestsorhobbieswhentheyhaveajobwithalowsalarybutmorevacationtime.不同意金钱提供物质保障Aofinistoa高薪工作可以对家庭负责Peoplewithhigh-payingjobsareabletoberesponsiblefortheirfamilies.高薪工作对个人未来职业发展带来好处Ahighsalaryjobgivesanindividualacompetitiveedgeinhisorherfuturecareer.学习笔记012 012 7天搞定托福独立写作013Day1013Day1Day1Day101020304050607Day1/所属话题生活休闲类题目类型含比较级类题目审题比较对象/比较主体哪个更多涉及方面/所属话题生活休闲类题目类型含比较级类题目审题比较对象/比较主体哪个更多涉及方面////// 1公共交通私家车思路拓展同意因为污染严重，政府限制汽车出行Thegovernmentsetsstrictrulesabouttheuseofcarsaspollutionissoserious.城际公共交通系统更发达，不需要小汽车就能到达Therearenewmeansofadvancedpublictransportation，suchasmetros，enablespeopletogototheplacetheywantwithoutdriving.公民保护环境的意识增强，自觉绿色出行Awarenessofenvironmentalissuespromotespeopletodriveless.不同意人口持续增加导致车的使用量增多Thenumberofcarsgoesupasthepopulationincreasesdamticall.人人都能买得起车（人们生活水平提高，车的价格更便宜了）Peoplearewealthyandtheycanaffordmorecars.城市发展越来越大导致私家车的使用量增多edrsseeefysgrd.学习笔记Challengingdreamsvs.1所属话题事业成功类Challengingdreamsvs.1所属话题事业成功类题目类型普通观点选择类题目审题涉及内容人们应该追求的梦想涉及方面///Day108091012131415/realisticdreams挑战的现实的梦想 /realisticdreams挑战的现实的梦想思路拓展同意有挑战的梦想可以激发自己的潜能Havingchallengingdreamscaninspiepeopleoealietheirfullpoetia.有挑战的梦想可以锻炼自己的意志力Challengingdreamscanimpepeoplswillpe.有挑战的梦想可以指引人生的方向Challengingdreamscouldbeaguideormakingliedecisiom.不同意脚踏实地的梦想更容易接近Realisticdreamsaremoreattainable.脚踏实地的梦想有更多的满足感Peoplecanfeelasenseofsatisfactionwithdreamsdowntotheearth.脚踏实地的梦想激发自己的积极性Focusingondown-to-earthdreamscanmakeiteasiertomotivateoneself.学习笔记014 014 7天搞定托福独立写作015Day1015Day1Day1010203040506Day101020304050607所属话题社会焦点类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目交通高峰期缴费通行涉及方面 政府/人民/交通/以及他们之间关系等Day1缴费通行1notPayfeesfordrivingornotPeopleshouldpayfordrivingwhenthereisagreatdealoftraffic. 思路拓展同意政府会因此而减少一些财政压力Thefinancialpressureonthegovernmentdecreasesasdriverspayfees.交通压力也会相应地减少Trafficcongestioncanbesolvedtoacertaindegree.周围的人们也会因此而得到好处Peoplewholiveclosetotheroadscouldbenefitaswell.不同意收取费用反而降低运行效率，并不能解决根本问题Payingfeesfordrivingcannottrulysolvetheproblem.政府已经在车辆购置中收取费用Driversalreadypaytaxwhentheypurchasea现在拥堵不代表未来也会，无法界定Suchapolicywillbenooriouslydifficultoimpleme.学习笔记080908091012131415/所属话题社会焦点类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体/所属话题社会焦点类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体谁对社会的贡献更多涉及方面///Artistsvs.politicalleaders（society）Day1艺术家政治领导 Artistscontributemoretothesocietythanpoliticalleaders. 思路拓展同意艺术家们丰富了人们的业余生活Artistsenrichpeoplsleisuetim.艺术家给人们提供了一些兴趣的方向Payingattentiontoartistsisagatewayforpeopletofindtheirowninterests/hobbies.艺术家们对这个社会的文化发展做出了很大的贡献Artistsplayanimportarntroleinbringingaboutculturalprocess.不同意保证了整个社会的安定Politiciansguaranteethesecurityofthewholesociety.很多严重的社会问题都是政治家来治理的，比如环境问题Manyseriousproblemsofsocietyaresolvedbypoliticians，suchasenvironmentalproblems.政治家有足够大的权力来满足人们的需求Politicalleadersareperfulenoughtomeetthedemandsfromsociet.学习笔记016 016 7天搞定托福独立写作Day101Day101020304050607Day1/所属话题科技类题目类型普通观点选择类题目审题比较对象/比较主体/涉及方面交通////Simplerlifevs.complicatedlife（technology）1/所属话题科技类题目类型普通观点选择类题目审题比较对象/比较主体/涉及方面交通////Simplerlifevs.complicatedlife（technology）1生活简单复杂思路拓展同意科技让交通更便捷Technology’sattractionisnothardtofathom.Itbringspeopleconvenienttransportation.科技让通讯变得更简单Communicationbenefitsalotfromtechnology.科技让教育变得更容易Educationisdevelopingdrasticallyduetotechnology.不同意汽车的出现给生活带来了一些安全、堵塞问题。Theadventofautomobilesincreasedsafetyhazardandtrafficcongestionissues.科技会给环境带来更多污染。Muchenvironmentalpollutioniscausedbytechnologies.通讯方面的发展给人们带来了一些困扰Troublescausedbycommunicationmakelifemorecomplicated.学习笔记★★★★★★2Negativeeffectsvs.positiveeffectsoftelevisionprograms2Advicefromolderfriendsvs.peersDay

AcceptideaornotPlayingvs.schoolworkBeingpolitetoothersFriendlierthaninthepastMoneyvs.friendshipCarsvs.airplanesLarge-sizepartyvs.small-sizepartyBeingpatientornot☆☆☆☆☆☆AssignhomeworkeverydayBuildingnewhousesvs.preservingoldbuildingsEducatevs.entertain（television）UsingmobilephonesMaincauseofunhealthyeatinghabits018 018 7天搞定托福独立写作019019Day2DayDay201020304050607Day2MoviesandtelevisionprogramsbringmoreMoviesandtelevisionprogramsbringmorenegativethanpositiveeffectsongoungpeople’sbehawior.所属话题媒体类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象正面影响比较主体哪类影响更多涉及方面///2电视影响思路拓展同意商业广告让年轻人对消费失去方向Commercialadvertisingmightcauseyoungpeopletofocusonconsuming.涉及暴力的影片容易误导年轻人Visualmediatodayissimplytooviolentforyoungpeople.让年轻人变得更为懒惰不同意好的节目可以为年轻人指引正确方向Goodmovies/programscouldbeacompassforyoungpeople’sbehavior.公益广告让年轻人更关心社会Publicserviceannouncementshelpthegowngtobemoreconcernedaboutsociet.好的影片所展现的文化可以年轻人学习，改变自己Theculturethatmovies/programsshowcouldhelpyoungpeopletochangethemselvesforthebetter.学习笔记08 09 10 12 13 14 152Day2所属话题社交关系类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体哪类人的建议对自己更有价值涉及方面所属话题社交关系类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体哪类人的建议对自己更有价值涉及方面 年长人建议的优缺（经验/性格/意义以及同龄人建议的优缺点（了解/共同话题/心智）等friendsvs.peers询问建议ComparedComparedtoadvicefrompeers，gettingadvicefromolderismorevaluable.思路拓展同意年长的人经验更丰富Olderpeoplehavericherlifeexperiences，basedonwhichtheycangiveusmatureanalysisandadvice.年长的人遇事更稳重Olderpeoplearemellowerinpersonalitycomparedwithpeopleofourownage.年长的人给出的建议更值得借鉴，因为他们会更全面地考虑问题Suggestionsfromolderfriendsaremoreworthyofdeferringtosincetheyprovidemorecomprehensiveviewsontheissue.不同意同龄人跟自己有着共同的兴趣爱好Peoplewiththesameagesharealotofthesameinterests.同龄人更能理解自己Peerscanunderstandusbetter.年龄小不表示心理年龄小oungpeopledonotnecessarilyhaveanimmaturesteofmin.学习笔记020 020 7天搞定托福独立写作021Day2021Day2DayDay201020304050607Day2ItisnecessarytoacceptotherItisnecessarytoacceptotherpeople’sideasinordertodowellgroupworks.2所属话题事业成功类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目/涉及方面接受他人想法对工作带来的优缺点接受他人批评思路拓展同意能听进别人意见的人才会进步Onlypeoplewhoacceptothers’ideascanmakeprogressintheirwork.不接受别人的意见会降低团队的凝聚力Teamcohesionwillbereducedwhensomemembersdonotfollowothers.不接受别人的意见会让人变得骄傲Refusingtoacceptotherpeopl’sideasendsupbeingaroga.不同意Theminorityisusuallyrig.坚持到底才会成功Itispersistencethatisattributedtosuccess.更容易树立威信Anassertivepersoncanmakepeopleeelthefulleigtofauthorit.学习笔记08 09 10 12 13 14 15DayDay2Playingvs.schoolworkPlayingvs.schoolwork2所属话题教育类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/的时间比较内容哪个时间应该更多涉及方面家长//////20131109ML/20121103ML/ParentsshoulddedicatemoretimeplayinggamesorsportswiththeirchildreninsteadParentsshoulddedicatemoretimeplayinggamesorsportswiththeirchildreninsteadofhelpingthemwithhomework.思路拓展同意保持孩子身体健康Parontsplayingwiththeirchildrenenablethemtostayhealthy.减轻孩子压力Itisaneffectivewaytoreleasestress.锻炼孩子合作精神Itisagatewaytohelpchildrenimprovetheircooperationskills.不同意增进父母与孩子之间的关系Therelationshipbetweenparentsandchildrencanbecloserbydoingschoolworktogether.家长可以了解孩子学习情况Parentscangainabetterunderstandingofwhattheirchildrenlearninschool.提高孩子学习效率Childrenareabletostudymoreefficiently.学习笔记022 022 7天搞定托福独立写作023Day2023Day2DayDay201020304050607Day2所属话题生活休闲类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目/所属话题生活休闲类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目/涉及方面 素质/政策/媒体宣传/压力/交流/生活节奏等Beingpolitetoothers2对他人礼貌aresupposedtobepolitetoothersanytime. 思路拓展同意个人素质提高Personalqualityimprovessothateveryoneispolitetoothers.政府出台政策Governmentpoliciesmakepeoplebepolitetoothers.媒体公益宣传Publicserviceannouncementbythemediahelppeopleperformpolitely.不同意现代生活节奏快Becauseofthequickpaceoflife.peoplecannotbepolitetootherssometimes.人与人之间交流更少导致彼此不能很礼貌Lesscommunicationa现代人们压力大oomuchpessueotribuesalotobeingrud.学习笔记帮助他人08 09 10 12 13 14 15帮助他人所属话题社会焦点类题目类型含比较级类题目（今昔对比）审题所属话题社会焦点类题目类型含比较级类题目（今昔对比）审题比较对象/比较主体什么时候的年轻人更愿意帮助别人涉及方面 育/力/府/私/力/生2Day2YoungYoungpenpleinthepastweremorelikelytohelpothersthanthose思路拓展同意随着教育水平的提升，人们帮助他人的意识增强了Theawarenessofhelpingothersisimprovedaseducationdevelopedalot.现在的年轻人更有能力去帮助他人Youngpeopletodayaremorecapableofhelpingothers.政府出台了相关的政策来鼓励人们帮助他人Somepoliciesarepublishedtoencouragepeopletohelpothers.不同意跟过去相比，现在的年轻人都比较自私，从小被宠坏了Youngpeopletodayarenotwillingtohelpothersastheyaresoselfish，beingspoiledwhengrowingup.压力太大让人们不愿意帮助他人Toomuchpressurecontributesalottopeople’snothelpingothers.现在的人们生活节奏快，他们没有时间去帮助其他人Peopletodaydonothavetimetohelpothersasthelifetempochangesquickly.学习笔记024 024 7天搞定托福独立写作025Day2025Day2Day201020304Day201020304050607所属话题社交关系类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目金钱是否会影响两个人成为好朋友涉及方面 友谊/梦想/兴趣爱好/目标/共话题/社会等Day22交友Moneyvs.friendship交友20120728MLTherichandthepoorcanstillbegoodfriends 思路拓展同意两个人因为共同的目标成为了朋友，而这与金钱的多少没有关系TwoPersonscouldbegoodfriendsforthesamegoal，whichmeansmoneyisnottheissue.两个人有着共同的爱好，所以成为了朋友Thetwomightsharethesameinterest.同样的经历可以让两个人成为好朋友Asimilarexperienceenablestwopersonstobecomegoodfriends.不同意财富不同，兴趣一般也不会相同Theywillhavecompletelydifferentinterestsorhobbiesfortheirdifferentlevelsofwealth.金钱的不同决定了目标和梦想也不一样Thewealthydifferencesbetweentherichandthepoormeantheyhavedifeetgoalsordeam.富人与穷人生活方式的不同导致他们不能成为好朋友Theyarenotabletobegoodfriendsduetotheirdifferentlifestyles.学习笔记0808091012131415/所属话题生活休闲类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题/所属话题生活休闲类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/比较主体哪个影响更大涉及方面Day2汽车飞机的影响2Carsvs.airplanes20110917ML Carscontributemoretopeople’slifethanairplanesdo. 思路拓展同意日常生活中汽车的使用频率更为广泛Anautomobilecanbeusedformanymoredifferentpurposesthanaplane.汽车相对比较便宜，更多人可以买得起Carsaremuchcheaperandthusaffordabletomanymorepeople.跟飞机相比，汽车更加贴近人们的生活Usingacarismuchclosertopeople’sactuallife.不同意飞机缩短了长距离的旅行时间irplanesshorothetravellingtimeoflongdistances.飞机打破了地域限制，实现了全球的联系Itieeseions，connectingthewholeworldtogethe.Airplanesaccomplishsometaskswhichwereimpossibletoapproachbycarsinthepast.学习笔记026 026 7天搞定托福独立写作027Day2027Day2DayDay201020304050607Day2Abigpartywithmanypeopleisbetterthanasmallonewithfriendsandrelativesonlyforcelebratinganevent.所属话题生活休闲类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/规模派对比较主体哪种派对更好Abigpartywithmanypeopleisbetterthanasmallonewithfriendsandrelativesonlyforcelebratinganevent.所属话题生活休闲类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）审题比较对象/规模派对比较主体哪种派对更好涉及方面Large-sizeparty2派对规模思路拓展同意人多比较热闹Alargenumberofpeoplecanhelpstobringlifetothe可以扩大社交网Peoplecouldenlargetheirsocialnetworkingatthe可以跟更多的人分享快乐Peoplecansharetheirhappinesswithmorepeopleatthe不同意和亲朋好友在一起会更舒服Itismorecomfortabletoenjoythetimewithclosefriendsandrelatives.规模小可以提高派对的质量Thereisatrade-offbetweenthesizeandthequalityoftheparty.邀请无关的人并不能真正为一个派对增添人气Invitingmanyirrelevantpeoplecannotreallyactivatetheatmosphereofthe学习笔记Day208Day208091012131415Whendecidetodosomething，peopleshouldtakeactionimmediatelyratherthanwait.Beingpatientor2Whendecidetodosomething，peopleshouldtakeactionimmediatelyratherthanwait.Beingpatientor2not所属话题事业成功类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目/涉及方面机遇///耐心思路拓展同意机会可遇不可求，一旦错过很难再碰到合适的Itishavdtomeetsomesuitableoppotunities.马上行动可以提高效率Itcanboostefficiencybytakingactionnow.耐心会让人们变得懒情Beingpatiencesometimesmakespeoplebecomeindolent.不同意可以增强自己的规划能力Bybeingpatient，wecanplanbetter.耐心可以避免冲动可能造成的严重后果Seriousconsequencescanbeevitablebypatience.耐心可以避免粗心问题Bybeingpatient，wecanavoidtheconsequencesofcarelessness.学习笔记028 028 7天搞定托福独立写作029Day2029Day2DayDay201020304050607Day22所属话题教育类审题everyday题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目涉及方面老师////2所属话题教育类审题everyday题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目涉及方面老师////布置作业思路拓展同意老师可以很好地了解学生对知识的掌握情况Itisagoodwayforteacherstobetertackstudet’poes.学生可以养成一个良好的学习习惯Itisgoodforstudentstodeelopaegularstudyhabi.学生可以更好地巩固知识Studentscanbeterunderstandwhttheyhelearnedtschoo.不同意作业重点并不在于它的数量Theamountoftimethatisspentonhomeworkisnotasimportantasthequalityofthehomeworkassignment.学习应该劳逸结合Studentsshouldkeeparightbalancebetweenstudyingandrelaxing.作业太多会让学生产生厌学情绪Studentstendtowithdwemotionall，whentheyfacemuchhomework.学习笔记/2所属话题社会焦点类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）Day审题比较对象//2所属话题社会焦点类题目类型含比较级类题目（横向比较）Day审题比较对象/buildings比较主体哪个更为重要涉及方面 展/全/构/史/文化/Day2新旧建设08091012131415ForForgovernment，buildingnewhousingismoreimportantpreservinghistoricalbuildings.思路拓展同意老建筑已经不再适合现代的社会Peoplehavetobuildnewbuildingssinceoldonesarenotsuitableforthepresent.老建筑因年代久远而存在安全隐患Historicalbuildingsmightbedangerousastheyaretooold.老建筑的一些结构不科学Thestructuresofoldbuildingsmightbeflawedbecauseofold-fashionedbuildingmethods.不同意老建筑代表了国家的历史Manyoldbuildingsarerepresentativeremainsofhistory.老建筑诠释了过去的文化Ancientculturecanbeunderstoodthroughstudyinghistoricalbuildings.一些老建筑有纪念意义Someoldbuildingsshouldbepreservedsincetheyareworthcommemorating.学习笔记030 030 7天搞定托福独立写作031Day2031Day2Day201020304Day201020304050607所属话题媒体类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目涉及方面知识////Day22电视目的Educatevs.entertain电视目的（television）Televisionshouldbeusedforeducationbutnotentertainment. 思路拓展同意从电视中可以获得知识Peoplecouldgainknowledgefromwatchingprograms.从电视中拓宽自己的视野Theyareabletoxpandtheirmin.从电视中可以锻炼自己的思考能力Criticalthinkingcanbelearnedfromtelevision.不同意教育形式已经很繁多，电视应该用来娱乐并起到解压目的Peoplearealreadyeducatedinmanydifferentways，sotelevisionbeusedforentertainment.电视的图像生效特点决定了它的娱乐功能ndedrtgosdl.电视直观的信息会让人们懒于思考，所以不能用于教育Peoplewillbetoolazytothinkduetothedirectvisualimageson学习笔记Day2手机使用080910121314Day2手机使用08091012131415UsingmobilephonesUsingmobilephones2所属话题社会焦点类审题题目类型 涉及内容普通观点选择类题目涉及方面 隐私/打扰别人/干扰信号联系他人等MobilephonesshouldMobilephonesshouldnotbeallowedtobeusedinpublictransportation.思路拓展同意公共交通上使用手机会泄露自己的隐私Usingmobilephonesmightcompromiseprivacy.公共交通上使用手机也会影响到其他人Usingcellphonesinpublictransportationmaydisturbothers.公共交通上使用手机可能会干扰信号，比如飞机Usingmobilephonesmayinterferewithothersignals，forinstanceonplanes.不同意人们需要随时与家人联系，所以应该使用手机Peoplehavetoconnectwiththeirfamilies，sotheyshouldbeabletousemobilephonesinpublictransportation.可以解决一些紧急情况Someemergenciescouldberesdvedbyacallfromamobilephone.工作需求，需要随时使用手机Manypeoplehavetousemobilephonesallthetimeforwork.学习笔记032 032 7天搞定托福独立写作Day201020304050607Maincauseofunhealthyeatinghabits所属话题Day201020304050607Maincauseofunhealthyeatinghabits所属话题环境健康类审题题目类型 主要对象含绝对词类题目（mostlycaused）涉及内容 广告/生活习惯/工作压力/时间限制健康饮食的意识等Day2不健康饮食Unhealthyeatinghabitsaremostlycausedbyadvertising. 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