初中英语 经历及感受

PARTTHREE第三篇写作妙解篇话题(一)

经历及感受典例分析初中生活即将结束,很多美好的回忆都留在脑海里。某英文报社正在举办以“我最难忘的班级活动”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文给报社投稿,说说你最难忘的班级活动是什么,你们在活动中都做了什么,以及你的感想和体会。[提示词语]trip,sunny,climbthehill,takephotos,picnic,excited[提示问题]·What'syourmostunforgettableclassactivity?·Whatdidyoudo?·Howdidyoufeel?Therearemanyclassactivitiesinmyemory._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作架构】【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是经历及感受。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点:(1)开门见山指出最难忘的班级活动(2)介绍本次活动内容(3)描述自己的感受2.时态:一般过去时3.人称:第一人称【基础写作】Ⅰ.根据所给提示词补全下列各句1.在我的记忆中有很多有趣的班级活动。(inone'smemory)__________________________________________________________________________________________________2.去动物园的这次郊游给我留下了最深刻的印象。(…impresssbmost)__________________________________________________________________________________________________3.让我与你分享一次最难忘的郊游。(share…with…)__________________________________________________________________________________________________Therearemanyinterestingclassactivitiesinmymemory.Thetriptothezooimpressedmemost.Letmesharethetripthatisthemostunforgettablewithyou.4.我们爬了山并且在山顶上拍了很多美丽的照片。(onthetopofthemountain)We

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climbedthemountaintooklotsofbeautifulphotosonthetopofthemountaincampedalongtheriverhadapicnictogetherⅡ.句子升格按括号中的要求改写句子。6.Thetripissomeaningful.Iwillneverforgetit.(用so…that…连接两个句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________7.Wesanganddanced.Wecheeredtheoldpeopleup.(用ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…连接两个句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________8.Wearrivedthere.Weclimbedthehillandsawlotsofbeautifulflowers.(用after连接两个句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________ThetripissomeaningfulthatIwillneverforgetit.Ontheonehand,wesanganddanced.Ontheotherhand,wecheeredtheoldpeopleup.Afterwearrivedthere,weclimbedthehillandsawlotsofbeautifulflowers.9.Thetripwasunforgettable.Itprovideduswithaspecialexperience.(用because连接两个句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________10.Wehadaridingtrip.(用Itwasthefirsttimeforusto…改写句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetripwasunforgettablebecauseitprovideduswithaspecialexperience.Itwasthefirsttimeforustohavearidingtrip.【连句成文】Therearemanyclassactivitiesinmymemory.Butamongallthoseactivities,thetriptotheFragrantHillisthemostunforgettableone.Itwasasunnyday.WemetattheschoolgateinthemorningandrodetotheFragrantHilltogether.Itwasthefirsttimeforustohavearidingtrip.Afterwearrivedthere,weclimbedthehillandtooklotsofphotos.Intheafternoon,wehadapicnicinthepark.Wetalkedandlaughedalot.Wefeltsohappyandexcited.It'sreallyawonderfultime.Iwillneverforgetit.拓展积累【导入主题】1.Personally,Istillremembermanyclassactivities.2.Inthepastthreeyears,therehavebeenmanyinterestingclassactivitiesthatIwillneverforget.3.ThereisoneclassactivitythatIwouldliketosharewithyoubecauseithasimpressedmemost.【描述活动】1.Wecampedalongtheriverandhadapicnictogether.2.Weclimbedthehillandtooklotsofbeautifulphotosonthetopofthehill.3.Wesawthebeautifulsunriseandjumpedupanddownhappily.4.WevisitedmanyancientbuildingsandlearnedmoreaboutChineseancienthistoryandculture.【结尾总结】1.Allinall,thistripwassointerestingthatIwillneverforgetit.2.Weweretiredbutexcitedandweallwanttogetthereagain.3.Ibenefitsomuchfromtheactivity.实战演练现在,某英文报纸正在开展以“遇见美”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈一谈生活中你遇见美的一次经历。主要内容包括你什么时候在哪里遇见了美,经历了什么事情以及你为什么觉得它美。[提示词语]visit,touch,impress,meaningful,amazing,memory[提示问题]·Whenandwheredidithappen?·Whatdidyouexperience?·Whywasitbeautiful?One

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version:Lastyear,IwatchedthemostbeautifulmovieofmylifeatanIMAXtheaterinBeijing.Onthegiantscreeninfrontofme,atruestoryfromhistoryandamazingfilmmakingcametogethertogivemeaverymeaningfulexperience.ThemoviewasDUNKIRK,andthestorythathappenedonthescreenwasaboutheroismandthesadrealityduringWWII.AsIwatchedthemovie,i