2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写专题：个人成长 人与自我 课件

一、真题链接TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney.”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“Sodo1,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!

Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish（完成）.”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcomUncleJohnsentus？Well,wecanmakepopcorn（爆米花）,andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”注意:1.

续写词数应为150左右:2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1：WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Para2：Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.二、真题解析2.1

整体把握：主题语境：人与社会--公益事业与志愿服务语篇话题：本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为Meredith一家的孩子在妈妈的引领下，帮助贫困小孩Bernard出主意，赚钱摆脱贫困。情节梳理：when：Theeconomywasindeclinewhere：inthetownwho：Mrs.Meredithandherchildren:John,Harry,andClara;Bernardwhat：Mrs.Meredithwasahelpfulwoman,whenshenoticedBernardwaspoorandsheaskedherchildrentohelphim.情节走向：1.通过第一段首句“WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.”可预测，续写思路为：开始行动--准备材料--制作爆米花--去教Bernard2.通过第二段首句“Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.”可预测，续写思路为：开始卖爆米花--慢慢学会做卖爆米花--成功脱贫--力所能及帮助别人2.2逐句写作：第一段：1.所以，他们一起去了当地的超市。So,theywenttothelocalsupermarket

together.

2.他们买了一袋玉米和一些特制的爆米花袋。Theyboughtabagofcornandsomespecialbagsforpopcorn.3.当他们到家时，他们做了很多爆米花，放在特制的袋子里。Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcorn

andputitinthespecialbags.4.带着爆米花，他们去了伯纳德的家。Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard’shome.5.他们告诉伯纳德怎么卖爆米花。伯纳德和他的父母非常感激。TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcorn.Bernardandhisparentswereverygrateful.

6.梅雷迪斯一家也很乐意帮助这个家庭。AndtheMeredithfamily

alsofeltveryhappy

tohelpthisfamily.第二段：7.他把爆米花带到房子里，把所有的爆米花都卖了。Hetookthepopcornaround

tothehousesandsoldallhispopcorn.

8.他挣了很多钱。然后，他想自立。Heearnedalotofmoney.Then,hewantedtobeself-dependent.

9.因此，他请梅雷迪思太太教他怎么做爆米花。Therefore,heaskedMrs.Meredithtoteachhimhowtomakepopcorn.

10.之后，他不仅卖爆米花，还往爆米花里加了奶油和盐，让爆米花味道更好。Afterthat,notonlydidhe

sellpopcorn,

buthealsoadded

creamandsalttothepopcorntomakeittastebetter.

11.伯纳德长大后成了一个了不起的人。Bernardgrewuptobearemarkableman.

12.他没有忘记梅雷迪思家人的帮助，他也尽力帮助那些需要帮助的人。HedidnotforgetthehelpofMeredith’sfamily,andhealsodidwhathecouldtohelpthoseinneed.2.3

范文赏析WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

So,theywenttothelocalsupermarkettogether.Theyboughtabagofcornandsomespecialbagsforpopcorn.Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthespecialbags.Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard’shome.TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcorn.Bernardandhisparentswereverygrateful.AndtheMeredithfamilyalsofeltveryhappytohelpthisfamily.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.

Hetookthepopcornaroundtothehousesandsoldallhispopcorn.Heearnedalotofmoney.Then,hewantedtobeself-dependent.Therefore,heaskedMrs.Meredithtoteachhimhowtomakepopcorn.Afterthat,notonlydidhesellpopcorn,buthealsoaddedcreamandsalttothepopcorntomakeittastebetter.Bernardgrewuptobearemarkableman.HedidnotforgetthehelpofMeredith’sfamily,andhealsodidwhathecouldtohelpthoseinneed.三、素材积累3.1

情绪类素材积累善良：kindness/goodness高兴：glad/please/cheerful/delighted幸运的：lucky/fortunate不知所措：beataloss/loseone’shead欣慰的：relieved/unworried因成功而喜悦

beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess3.2

动作类素材积累激发某人的激情

kindlesb.withpassion振作精神

keepupone’sspirits显示出极大的意愿

showagreaterreadiness帮助：assist/help捐赠：donate/giveaway被强烈地吸引

bepowerfullyattractedto挽救：save/rescue陪伴：accompany/keepsbcompany感谢：thankyoufor/showmyappreciationfor/showmygratitudefor/begratefulfor阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ihadadreamfromprimaryschool:toworkintelevision.Myparentsownedalittlegrocerystore,

soweweredefinitelynotfancypeople.Thankfully,mydadhadraisedmetohavealotofconfidence.Heoftensaid,“You

candoanythingyouwanttodo.”Mydadwasparticularlysupportive.Hewasmysteadyrock—alwaysthereforme.Withhishelpandencouragement,IwasadmittedtotheradioandtelevisionartsprogramatRyersoninToronto.IreallylovedtheprogramandworkedhardandIwasnamedthemostoutstandinggraduate.IfeltlikeIwasalreadylivingmydream.IbegantothinkthatmaybeIcouldapplyforaninternship(实习资格)inCBCorCTV.Luckily,GlobalTelevisionhadjuststartedbroadcastinginCanadathatyear.Ithoughttomyself:I'mnewandthey'renew,soifI'mgoingtogettoknowonepersonatGlobal,itmightaswellbethepresident.Iwasscared,butIknewdeepdowninsidethatthiswaswhatIwanted.WhenIcalledmydadandtoldhimmyplan,hesaid,

“Good,Faye.That'sexactlywhatyoushoulddo.”

Withmyheartjustaboutpoundingoutofmybody,IcalledupthepresidentofGlobalTelevision.SuddenlyMr.Slaightwasonthephone.“I'veheardthatyourstudiofacilitiesareamazing.Icouldcomeateleveno'clockonMondayoreleveno'clockonSundayforatour.Whatwouldsuityoubetter?"Icaughthimtotallyoffguard.Hestutteredabit,andthenpickedaday.WhenIhungup,Iwasscaredbutexcited.Iarrivedatthestudioontheappointedday.WhenMr.Slaighttookmearound,helookedatmeandsaid,“Whatdoyouwant?"Hesoundedfuriousbutcurious.

“AllIwantisachancetoaudition(试镜)Ijustwantyoutoknowmyface,That’sallI’masking.”Ididn’tknowwhetherI'deverhearfromhimagain,burtwoweekslater,hissecretarycalled.

“Mr.

Slaightwantstoknowifyou’dliketocomeandauditionforanewschoollifeshow.”Iimmediatelyanswered,“Sure!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirect

intotheauditionand

began

myshortperformance.Paragraph2:FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTVwithmyparentsathomewatching.话题：实现理想（励志成长）主要内容：我一直努力实现去电视台工作的梦想。幸运的是新开播的加拿大全球电视台在招兵买马，我勇敢地给电视总裁打电话自荐，他给了我试镜的机会，我的梦想得以实现。WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheauditionandbeganmyshortperformance.

Withboldness,Ifinishedmyperformancerelativelysmoothlythoughpalmsweresweating.NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeedassignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirstpublicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.Aftersharingthethrillingnewswithmydad,Ireceivedthewarmestcongratulationsandexpectationsfrommyfamily.Picturingmyfamilieseagerlywaitingformyperformance,IworkeddayandnightasbusyasabeeforfearthatIwouldmakeafoolofmyselfliveonTV.FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTVwithmyparentsathomewatching.

Wearingfancydressanddelicatemakeup,

Iwassoproudbutnervousthatmyshowwouldbewatchedbysomanyaudience.MymindsuddenlywentblankasIwasimmersedinmythoughtsandtotallyforgotmylines.Deepfrownsgraduallyclimbedonmypartners’face,withwhosesuddenvigorouspull,Iwasdrivenbacktothereality.Isooncameupwithalittletricktomakeupfortheembarrassingblank.Astheshowwenton,soconcentratedwasIthatIhardlydaredtoevenblinkmyeyes.Aftermydebut,Irangmydadwithfrustrationanddisappointment,onlytoreaphistrustandencouragementagain.Itwasliterallydad'slovethatsupportedmealongmywaytobeanoutstandingactor.个人成长（人与自我）阅读下面材料.根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantlyrecognizable.I’dbeentellingmybestfriendMissiasillystoryandhadspunaroundinthelivingroomwhenIheardthatsoundandfroze.WhenIlookeddownatthecarpet,itwascoveredwithpiecesofsparklingred,pinkandclearglass.Missisaid."Oh,no,notthevase.”"Why?WhatdidIdo?”Myfacereddened.“Abby,thatglassvasewasoneofthefewitemsmyrelativesbroughtwhentheycametoAmerica”,

Missirepliednervously.“Ifyou’dbrokenanythingelseintheapartment,

I

would'vegladlysaidIdidit.Butyou’regoingtohavetotellmymomthatitwasyourfault,andshe'sgoingtobereallymad.”Iwasterrified.

I’ddestroyedapricelessfamilyheirloom（传家宝）.WhydidIhavetospinaroundlikethat?Wegathereduptheshatteredpieces.I

keptsayingthatmaybeitcouldbefixed,butMissisaidgentlyitdidn’tlookpossible.I

insistedwekeepthepieces.Theglasswassofragile,likeacolorful,swirlylightbulbhadexploded.Someofitbrokeevenmoreaswetriedtosweepitupcarefully.Missisaidhermomwouldbehomebysix.Mystomachwasinknots.Wouldhermomyellatmeorpunishme?WouldshetellmeIcouldn’tstayintheirapartmentfortheweekend?Icouldn'tstopplayingthe”fifteensecondsoverinmymind,mespinningfastandthesoundofglasscrashing.TheonlythingIcouldthinkof

tosay

was“I'msorry.”Acoupleofminutesaftersixweheardakeyturninthedoor.Hermomwashome.Rightfromthestart,wecouldseeshewasinagoodmood.Hello!It’shottoday.IwanttotreatyougirlstothatfrozenyogurtI

knowyoulike,Let’sgo!”hermomsaid.Shepointedattheopendoor.注意；1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:

“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething”Isaid.Paragraph2:Hearing

myapology,

Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.话题：个人成长主要内容：Abby无意间打碎了Missi家的传家宝---一只玻璃花瓶，为此她非常忐忑不安。她诚实地向Missi的妈妈道歉，她没有责怪Abby,宽慰她不要自责。这件事对Abby影响深远，使她成年后对人更加宽容和包容。参考范文“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething,