读后续写动作描写＋常用句型课件高三英语作文复习写作专项

动作描写头部动作loweredhishead低头伴随：Withhisheaddown/high低着头/昂着头手部动作拥抱：gavesb.awarmhug握手：shakesb.warmly（热情地）/firmlybythehand脚步动作rush/dashtowards朝...冲freezetotheground呆在原地stampone’sfeet跺脚腿部动作：walkslowlyto慢慢地走向withone’slegstrembling双腿发抖fall/fellover/tripover滑到，绊倒standup/rise/roseone’sfeet站起来各种走：movetowards/headfor/makeone’swayto朝...走去tiptoe踮起脚尖走limp一瘸一拐地走paceupanddown踱来踱去wander漫步stormout怒气冲冲地走drag/dragged缓慢而费力地行进enter进入各种跑：jog/jogged

慢跑pause停下来racerun/ran跑，飞奔makearushfor冲向...fly/flew飞跑dash/rush冲满分素材积累11--欢声笑语必背好词：①beamv.&n.眉开眼笑②grinv.&n.露齿而笑；咧嘴笑③gigglev.&n.咯咯地笑；傻笑④laugh大笑----laughtern.⑤roarv.放声大笑；喧哗（有震耳欲聋之感）⑥smilev.&n.微笑；微笑着说⑦chucklev.轻声地笑；窃笑；偷笑满分短语：beamwithjoy笑逐颜开，squeezeaweaksmile勉强一笑，smilesweetly/shyly/faintly/bitterly/broadly嫣然一笑/羞涩地笑/淡然一笑/苦笑/咧嘴一笑，shakewithlaughter笑得浑身直抖，weara(n)...smile面露……的微笑，laugh

fromeartoear笑得合不拢嘴1.Abrightsmileappearedonhisface.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。2.Inspiteofhisdisappointment,hemanaged/forced/squeezedaweaksmile.他尽管很失望，还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。满分素材积累12--哭泣必背好词：sobv.呜咽;tear;water;cryv.&n.哭泣;weepv.&n.无声地流泪;mistyadj.泪眼模糊的;wateryadj.眼泪汪汪的;tearfuladj.哭泣的；含泪的满分短语：havealumpinone'sthroat硬咽着;bewetwithtears泪流满面；bechokedwithtears失声痛哭1.TherewasalumpinmythroatandIcouldn'tspeak.我硬咽得说不出话来。2.Hiseyesgrewmistyashetalked.他说话的时候泪眼模糊。3.Shestaredatme,(with)tearstwinkling/shininginhereyes.她看着我，泪花闪闪。满分素材积累13--能看会说--说必背好词：add补充说，beg乞求，answer/respond回答，答复，ask/question询问，explain解释；辩解，complain抱怨，exclaim(因疼痛、愤怒、惊奇等）惊叫，呼喊，sigh叹息地说，swear发誓；允诺，call大声说，cry喊叫，大声说，shout呼喊，大声说，yell叫喊，大声喊，howl高声嚷叫，murmur低声说，咕哝，whisper小声说，scream尖声说，moan呻吟着说满分短语：inahigh/low/sweet/loud/soft/weakvoice用一个高/低/甜/响亮/柔和的声音，ina

pleasant/firm/rude/sadtone悦的/坚定的/粗鲁的/悲伤的语气1.Shelookedathimwithanangryglanceandsaidimpatiently“Leavemealone!”（“说”动词十副词）她生气地看了他一眼，不耐烦地说：“别烦我！”2."Whobroketheglass?"theboyaskedinatremblingvoice.(“说”动词+嗓音）男孩声音颤抖地问道，“谁打碎的玻璃？”3."There'snothingwecandoaboutitnow!"shesighed,pattingmeontheshoulderandleftsilently.“现在我们无能为力了！”她叹了口气，拍拍我的肩膀，默默地离开了。满分素材积累14-动物必背好词：smell/sniff嗅

bark狗吠

roar咆哮

bite-bit-bitten咬

scratch/rub抓，挠，擦

wagthetail摇尾巴

jump跳

howl嚎叫

fierce凶猛的

rush朝...冲去

pet抚摸满分短语：

holdittightlywiththepaws用爪子紧紧按住

shakethewholebody抖动全身

afluffylittlekitten一只毛茸茸的小猫

1.Thedoghasgoldenfurwhichfeelsverycomfortable，liketouchingthesoftcotton.小狗有着金黄色的毛，摸着十分舒服，像是摸着柔软的棉花一样。2.Thepuppyleapedtohisfeet，wagginghistailandhiseyessparklingwithexcitement.小狗跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴，眼睛闪闪发亮。3.Thewolfchargedstraightforme,bareditsteeth,andsniffedinhunger.狼径直朝我冲来，露出利齿，饥饿地嗅着。读后续写常用句型句型一：主+谓1,谓2and

(then)谓3她冲上前，跪下来，把我搂在怀里Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgathered

meintoherarms.

描述一系列的动作。如果是同一个主语做了两个动作以上，可以用这样的结构：主+谓1,谓2and

(then)谓3，

这可以进行大量的动作细节描写，完整的交代过程。句型二：非谓语(主动且完成:Havingdonesth),主+谓例1：

排了三个小时的队伍,他被告知票被卖完了.Havingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.句型三：非谓语(done被动),主+谓例2：

受到老师的责难和大家的嘲笑，他感到相当的不安和沮丧。Blamedbyhisteacherandlaughedatbyeveryone,hefeltratherupsetanddepressed.Skill2:当出现两个动作，而前后两个动作逻辑主语一致时，使用非谓语(done被动),主+谓句型四：主+谓,非谓语(主动用doing)例3：女孩开始吹她的口哨，尝试去吸引其他人的注意力。Thegirlbeganblowingherwhistle,

tryingtogetother’sattention。Skill2:当出现两个动作，而前后两个动作逻辑主语一致时，可用:主+谓,非谓语(主动用doing)句型五：强调句Itis...that/who...正是在那时，我才意识到，母爱是世界上最珍贵的东西。ItwasexactlyatthatmomentthatIfinallyrealizedmother’sloveweighedmorethananythinginthisworld.句型六：形容词做状语adj.andadj.满怀失望和沮丧，这个可怜的人回到了他的家。Disappointedandfrustrated,thepoormanmadehiswaybacktohisfamily.句型七：with伴随1.withtearsfillinghereyes,sheheldontometightlyandexpressedherheartfeltgratitudeonceagain.眼里满含泪水，又一次表达了她衷心的感谢。2.Withtearsstreamingdown,shesighedandwhispered,“Iamtotallyadisasterofeverything.”泪流满面，她边叹气边轻声说到，“我把一切都毁了”感受情绪:喜怒形于色----Heishappy.Hissmilebroadenedfromeartoear.Heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.Hegiggledandsquealedwithexcitement.facebodyvoiceSkill1:从面部/肢体和声音三个方面体现人物的喜怒哀乐.v.咯咯地笑v.长声尖叫感受情绪:套用固定句式例2:Shefeltagrea