【中考英语】2023届（新版）初中英语满分作文范文及详解合集50篇（含解析）

【中考英语】2023届（新版）初中英语满分作文范文及详解合集50篇1．假定你是李华。李明同学正就读初中二年级。他在信中说，他在英语学习和生活中遇到了很多问题，请你用英语给他回一封信，给他提出一些建议。要点如下：...成良好的英语学习习惯；(havea...habit)2、学会与同学融洽相处；(getalongwellwith)3、多与老师交流；(communicatewithsomebody)4、理解并感恩父母。(thanksomebody(forsomething）注意：1.词数80〜100，开头已给出，但不计入总词数；2.短文必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearLiMing,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youtoldmethat___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.YoursLiHua【正确答案】参考范文：DearLiMing,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youtoldmethatyouhadsomeproblemswithyourEnglishlearninganddailylife.Asyourolderschoolmate,I’mfamiliarwiththatfeeling.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou:First,youshouldhaveagoodEnglishlearninghabitoflistening,speaking,readingandwriting.Second,ifyouwanttohaveagoodlearningenvironment,youshouldgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.Third,you’dbettercommunicatewithyourteachersasmuchaspossibleifyouhaveanyproblems.Finally,don’tcomplainaboutyourparents.Instead,youshouldthankthemfortheircare.Ifyoucandoalltheabove,I’msurethatyoucangetoveryourtroubles.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.YoursLiHua【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点和词汇，给对方回信，给出一些学习和生活方面的建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第二人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。2．李先生服装店正在进行打折销售，请参照价格表为该店设计一则销售广告。（30词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。）Mr.Li’sClochesStoreclothesskirtssockssweaterscolorwhite/blackallcolorredprice￥80￥2￥100SaleatMr.Li’sClothesStaresale.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________sale.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】Onepossibleversion:SaleatMr.Li’sClothesStoreComeandbuyyourclothesatourgreatsale.Ourclothesareonsale.Doyoulikeawhiteshirtorablackone?It’sonly80yuaneach.Wehavesocksindifferentcolors.Thepriceofeachpairisonly2yuan.What’smore,youcanbuyaredsweaterfor100yuan.Comeandseeforyourself!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一则广告。要求根据李先生衣服店提供的商品打折信息，为该店设计一则销售广告，向顾客介绍打折商品的信息，并通过对具体商品的颜色、价位等介绍，吸引顾客来购买。注意表达要准确，层次要清晰。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据店内商品的打折信息，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。3．假设你叫李华，是我市某校一名初三学生。请你根据以下提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Benson写一封邮件，谈谈你最近的烦恼。1.睡眠不足：每晚不足7个小时；2.引起睡眠不足的两点原因：(1)作业过多；(2)……3.睡眠不足带来的后果(写两点)。要求：(1)所写内容必须包括以上要点；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；(3)内容连贯并进行合理拓展；(4)100词左右；(5)邮件开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。DearBenson,I’mgladtowritetoyouagain.I’dliketotalkaboutmytroubleI’mfacingthesedays._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Writetomesoon.YoursLiHua【正确答案】例文：DearBenson,I’mgladtowritetoyouagain.I’dliketotalkaboutmytroubleI’mfacingthesedays.Ican’tgetenoughsleep.Icanonlysleeplessthansevenhourseverynight.BecauseIhavetoomuchhomeworktodoatnight.Ihavetostayupverylatetofinishit.Ialsoworryaboutthefinalexam.Iwanttogotothebestseniorhighschoolinourcity,butI’mafraidIcan’tdowellintheexam.IfIdon’tgetenoughgrades,mydreamwon’tcometrue.IamsoworriedthatIcan’tsleepwellatnight.SoIoftenfeelverysleepyinclass.SometimesIevenwenttosleep.Theteacherwasangrywithme.Ican’trememberwhattheteachersaidinclass,either.Itmademeterrible.Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Writetomesoon.YoursLiHua【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给提示谈谈自己最近的烦恼，要包含所有提示要点，写清楚自己的烦恼是睡眠不足，解释睡眠不足的原因及睡眠不足带来的后果。可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段讲自己睡眠不足并解释原因；第二段告知对方睡眠不足带来的不良影响；第三段请对方给自己建议。要做到语句通顺，无单词拼写和语法错误。4．假定你是李平，请你对意大利交换生Armino的邮件进行回复，词数80词左右。To:LiPingFrom:ArminoHiLiPing,Howareyou?Ihopeyou’refineandnottoobusy!Ican’twaittoleaveforChinanextweek.ButcouldyoutellmesomethingaboutChinesetablemanners?WhatplacesofinterestcanIvisitwhenIaminyourcity?Seeyousoon!ArminoTo:ArminoFrom:LiPingHiArmino__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing【正确答案】Onepossibleversion:HiArmino,Gladtohearfromyouagain.Asyoumentionedinyouremail,thereareindeedsometablemannersinChina.Forexample,wearenotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Andit’simpolitetopointatanyonewithchopsticks.Asforplacesofinterest,IsuggestyougototheHangzhouNationalTeaMuseum,whereyoucanwatchteaartperformancesanddrinktea.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou!LiPing【详解】题干解读：题目要求以李平的身份给意大利交换生Armino的邮件进行回复；要求包含邮件中所提到的问题，并做出回应。写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称口吻。采用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，提到邮件里的餐桌礼仪；第二段：举例说明中国餐桌礼仪有哪些以及告诉Armino你的城市有哪些值得去的地方；第三段：期盼他的到来。5．下图描述了李华今年春节得到压岁钱(luckymoney)之后，他和父母对于如何花压岁钱产生的不同观点。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。要求：1．完整叙述图片内容。2．结合自己的实际陈述个人观点。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】范文：ThisSpringFestival,LiHuagotsomeluckymoneyfromhisrelatives.Hewasveryhappyandhewantedtobuysomethingdeliciousandsomethingtohavefun.Buthisparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutthis.Hismotherwantshimtobuybookswhilehisfatherwantshimtohelpthepoorstudentsinthevillage.Inmyopinion,Ithinkbothhismotherandhisfatherareright.It’shardtomakeachoicebetweenthem.Ihaveagoodidea.Lihuacanusesomemoneytobuysomebooks,thenhewillgetmoreknowledgeandimprovehimself.Asfortherestoftheluckymoney,hecanshowhiskindnessandgivethemawaytothestudents.Thenhewillfeelhappierfromhelpingothers.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示图片，详细描述图片内容，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题结合图片给出的提示，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。6．现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦而奋斗。请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么办?Students（study）BuildingBeautifulChinaBuildingBeautifulChina要求：1、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；4、词数：80词左右。短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。NowalltheChinesepeoplearemakingtheireffortstobuildbeautifulChinaandachievetheChineseDream.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】例文：NowalltheChinesepeoplearemakingtheireffortstobuildbeautifulChinaandachievetheChineseDream.Inthefields,alargenumberoffarmersworkhardeverydaytoimproveourlivinglevels.Inordertoproduceenoughvegetablesandfruit,theyarebusygrowingplants.Meanwhile,inhospitals,doctorsandnursesalwaystrytheirbesttosavepatientsdayandnight.Besides,theyalsotakegoodcareoftheold.Inourdailylife,wecanseemanypolicemeninthestreetsondutytoprotectpeople.Asforscientists,theyconcentratemoreonscientificstudiestoinventsomethingusefulandraiseourlivingstandards.Asstudents,whatshouldwedotobuildourcountry?Ithinkweshouldstudyhardtogetrichknowledgesoastomakecontributionstoourcountry.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。按照图片给的几种职业，谈论他们应该如何做贡献的。2.写作指导：本文主要第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。从农民，医护人员，警察，科学家这几种职业，谈论他们应该如何为建设美丽中国做出贡献，最后介绍自己的做法。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。7．下面是Kate在英语网站上发给网友们的救助帖。假如你是她的好朋友Peter，请你结合她的帖子内容，用英语给她回张帖子并提出你的建议。要求：1.回帖内容要紧紧围绕救助帖，可适当发挥，但必须健康向上；2.意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然；3.80词以上；4.回帖的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dearfriends,Idon’tfeelwellthesedays.IgetlotsofheadachesbecauseIhavenotimetoexercise.Myparentswantmetogetbettergrades,sotheysendmetomanyafter-schoolclubs,includingLanguageLearningClub,MusicClubandMathClubetc.Also,myelderbrotherisn’tnicetome.HerefusestoletmewatchmyfavoriteTVshow.Instead,hewatcheswhateverhewantsuntillateatnight.Idon’tthinkthisisfair.AthomeIalwaysfeellonelyandnervous.I’malwaysundertoomuchpressure.Isthatnormal?WhatcanIdo?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?KateDearKate,It’snoteasybeingyourage,andit’snormaltohavethesefeelings.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Peter【正确答案】例文DearKate,It’snoteasybeingyourage,andit’snormaltohavethesefeelings.Firstly,whydon’tyoutalkaboutyourfeelingswithyourparents?You’vehadsomuchpressurebecauseofschoolwork.Workinghardatschoolisveryimportant,butyoualsoneedsomefreetimetorelaxyourself.Trytocommunicatewithyourparents,andmakethemallowyoutodothingsyoulike.Secondly,whynotsitdownandcommunicatewithyourelderbrother?Youshouldexplainthatyoudon’tmindhimwatchingTVallthetime.However,heshouldletyouwatchyourfavoriteshow.Ihopethingswillbebetterforyousoon.Yours,Peter【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据Kate救助贴中的内容，针对她的问题和烦恼，以她好朋友Peter的名义给她回张贴子并提出你的建议。注意要包含所有的问题，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时来写作，针对她提出的问题提出相应的解决方法和建议；写作时可以适当用一些连词，短语或句型；使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也要符合语法结构，注意思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，通俗易懂。8．保持一份好心情（keepinagoodmood）有利于身体健康，也有助于学习。假如你是周川，你朋友李玲近来心情一直不佳，请你用英语写一封信，建议她如何保持一份好心情。要点提示：1.积极参加体育运动；2.保持健康的饮食习惯；3.与父母和老师多交流，与同学和睦相处；4.积极参加公益活动。参考词汇：公益活动volunteeractivity注意：（1）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校；（2）80词左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；（3）注意信件的完整性（必须有过渡语和结束语）；（4）短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥。DearLiLing,Iheardyouwereinabadmood.Howisitgoingrecently?Asweknow,keepinginagoodmoodisgoodforhealthandstudy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】例文DearLiLing,Iheardyouwereinabadmood.Howisitgoingrecently?Asweknow,keepinginagoodmoodisgoodforhealthandstudy.Whynottakepartinsomesports?Suchasrunning,skatingandplayingbasketballandsoon.Exercisingcanmakeyourelax.Second,youneedtocareaboutyourhabitofeatingfood.You’dbetternoteattoomanysnacks.Ithinktheyarenotgoodforyourbody.Doyouthinkso?Third,Ihopeyougetalongwellwithyourfriendsinyourschool.Youcantellthemyourtrouble.Maybeit’snotaseriousproblemwhenyouheartheiradvice.Youcanoftentalkwithyourteachersandyourparents.Listeningtotheirthoughts,youwillknowhowyoushoulddealwithyourlife.Haveyouheardofvolunteers?Theyoftenhelppeopleintrouble!Wouldyouliketojoinvolunteeractivities?Youwillbehappywhenyouhelpothers.Ihopeyouwillgetbettersoon.Yours,ZhouChuan【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。这篇作文要求以周川的身份给好朋友李玲写信，李玲最近心情不好，在信中应给她提出一些好的建议，让她保持好的心情。题干中给出了具体的写作要点，这也就是学生们写作的主要依据。四个要点必须都包括在内，不能遗漏。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段给李玲提出四个建议；第三段表达自己的期望，结束全文。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。9．假如你叫李华。最近，你收到美国笔友Mike的来信，想了解中国端午节的相关清况。请根据下列提示用英语写封回信。1．简要介绍我国的端午节（日期、习俗等）;2．你今年如何过节的（假期时间、具体活动等）。参考词汇：Chineselunarcalendar农历；zongzi粽子注意：1．词数80左右；2．文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike,Gladtohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheChineseDragonBoatFestivalandhowIspentitthisyear._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【正确答案】例文DearMike,Gladtohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheChineseDragonBoatFestivalandhowIspentitthisyear.TheDragonBoatFestivalfallsonMay5thofChineselunarcalendareveryyear.PeopleallacrossChinaeatzongzianddragonboatracesareheldinmanyplacestorememberagreatancientpersonQuYuan.Wehadthreedaysoffforthisfestivalthisyear.Duringthistime,Iwentforapicnicinthecountrysidewithmygoodfriends,and,ofcourse,atezongziwithmyfamily.IalsowatchedthedragonboatracesonTV.Ienjoyedtheholidayverymuch.lhopeyoucancometoChinanextyearandspendthefestivalwithme.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据美国笔友的来信，根据相关提示介绍一下中国端午节的情况。开头和结尾已经给出，我们只写正文就可以。2.写作指导：本文人称主要以第一人称为主。根据提示，先介绍端午节的日期、习俗等内容，此时采用一般现在时。然后具体描述今年如何度过的中秋节，此时采用一般过去时。写作时，注意保证条理清晰，通顺连贯。10．假如你是LiHua，你被评为学校的“美德少年”，初中三年的学习生活即将结束，你远在英国的表妹Linda即将回国学习，她来信请你给她即将开始的初中生活提出一些建议，请根据下面的要点提示，写一封回信。1.要点：在学校努力学习知识；关注社会新闻；培养兴趣爱好；在家里经常与家人交流；知错就改；在公共场合遵守规则；注意安全；乐于助人；你的建议……2.要求：(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；(2)语言要通顺，表达要正确；(3)要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当增加要点；(4)词数不少于60个英语单词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3.参考词汇：培养兴趣developinterests社会新闻socialnews与人交流communicatewith在公共场合inpublicDearLinda,I’mverygladtohearthatyouwillcomebacktoChinaandstudyinmyschoolnextterm.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,andI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouearlier.Yours,LiHua【正确答案】例文DearLinda,I’mverygladtohearthatyouwillcomebacktoChinaandstudyinmyschoolnextterm.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Atschool,youshouldstudyhardtolearnalotofknowledge,youshouldpayattentiontosocialnews,youcandevelopsomeinterestssuchasreadingbooksandplayingsports.Athome,youshouldcommunicatewithyourfamily.Ifyoudosomethingwrong,youshouldcorrectit.Inpublic,youshouldfollowtherules,especiallythetrafficrules,andyoushouldpayattentiontothesafety,don’tgooutaloneatnight;Youshouldhelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ifyouliketraveling,youcangoonatripinyourfreetime.Bestwishes,andI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouearlier.Yours,LiHua【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求你给的远在英国的表妹写一封信，对她即将开始的初中生活提出一些建议，要求包括在学校、在家里以及在公共场所应该怎么做给出你的建议，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第二人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；叙述建议时，应详细具体，语言通顺，表达正确，保证条理清晰。11．假定你是李华，为了鼓励同学们积极参加劳动，获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战，学校英文社团请你写一封倡议信，内容包括：1.倡议的原因；2.倡议的内容（如做家务、参加学校劳动、参与社会劳动等）；3.发出倡议。注意：1.词数80-100,开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。Dearfellowstudents,Wewillfinallygrowupsomeday,leavingourpatentsandfacingthechallengesinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】例文Dearfellowstudents,Wewillfinallygrowupsomeday,leavingourparentsandfacingthechallengesinlife.Weneedtolearnandpractisesomebasiclifeskillsbecausetheycanhelpbuildourworkingspirit.Firstly,wecanhelpdosomehousework,suchaswashingclothesorsweepingfloors.Therefore,wecanbecomemorepositivetofacethefuturelife.Secondly,cleaningclassroomsisourduty.Itiscomfortableforustostudyinsuchacleanenvironment.Thirdly,it'salsoagoodideatohelppickuplitterinourneighborhood.Thiscanhelpusbecomemoreresponsible.Allinall,let'stakeactionnow.Asmallactioncanmakeabigdifference.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是让你以李华的身份写一封倡议信，根据要点提示写作，鼓励同学们积极参加劳动。2.写作指导：本文写作时注意涵盖要点包括的三大项。主要以第一人称复数发出倡议，第三人称进行描述，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时注意层次分明，条理清晰，不要有拼写或语法错误。12．根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，要求条理清楚，文理通顺，意思连贯。为加强中学生的身体素质，教育部开展全国学生“Exerciseonehouraday”——“阳光体育”的活动，学生们非常赞成这一举措，但有不少家长们对这一活动持反对意见。请你以Shouldstudentsexerciseonehouraday?为话题，参照表格的信息，写一篇短文。Parents’ideas1.havelesssleepingtime2.havelesstimeforstudy3.gethurtpossiblyYourideas1....2....3....要求：1.所写内容必须包括表格中家长的想法和你的至少三个想法。2.开头已给出，不计入总次数。Nowstudentsaresupposedtohavesportsforanhoureveryday.Butparentshavedifferentopinions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】例文Nowstudentsaresupposedtohavesportsforanhoureveryday.Butparentshavedifferentopinions.Theythinkifteenagersexerciseonehouraday,theywillhavelesssleepingtime.Andtheyalsohavelesstimeforstudy.Besides,theymaypossiblygethurtiftheyarenotcareful.Inmyopinion,weteenagersshouldhavemoretimetodosportsinthemorningorafterschool.Asweknow,exercisecanmakeusstrongandrelaxed,anditcanmakeourschoollifemorecolorful.SoIthinkexerciseforonehouradayisnecessary.Maybewecanstudyharderandbetter.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学生应该每天锻炼一小时吗”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段描述一些家长对此的看法；最后一段表达自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。13．假设你是LiHua，请你用英文给你校外教Jim发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1.今天下午，你上体育课时伤了左脚，明天不能去上他的课。2.邀请他参加下周的英语俱乐部活动。时间：下周五下午4点；地点：初三一班；活动内容：用英文讨论暑假计划，并希望他能给同学们一些如何提高英语的建议。3.如果有问题，可以打电话或发电子邮件联系。注意：1.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3.词数70-110，开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,I’mLiHua,oneofthestudentsinyourspokenEnglishclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正确答案】参考范文：DearJim,I’mLiHua,oneofthestudentsinyourspokenEnglishclass.I’msorrytotellyouthatIcan’tgotoyourclasstomorrow.ThereasonwhyIaskforleaveisthatIhurtmyleftfootintheP.E.classthisafternoon.Besides,I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinintheactivityinourEnglishclubnextFriday.It’llstartat4p.m.inClass1,Grade3.We’lltalkabouttheplanforthecomingsummervacationinEnglish.Andwe’llbeverygladifyoucangiveussomeadviceonhowtoimproveourEnglish.Callmeorsendmeanemailifyouhaveanyquestions.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邀请信写作，写作时要按邮件格式书写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段叙述LiHua不能参加外教Jim课的原因；第二段邀请外教Jim参加英语俱乐部的活动，写作过程中要详细说明这个活动的时间，地点，内容以及希望他带来什么样的建议；第三段表达自己对外教到来的期望。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来说明邀请信的内容；第一段时态采用一般现在时，第二段采用一般将来时；在第二段说明活动具体要求时要认真按照写作要求，详细准确说明每一项内容，保证叙述完整，条理清晰。14．目前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯，保护自身安全，远离校园暴力。请以“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。内容要点如下：1.遵守学校纪律，听从老师、家长的教育，严格要求自己。2.远离网吧，按时上学、回家。3.待人礼貌、友好，不与同学打架。4.遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。要求：1.必须用到以上信息，可适当发挥；2.文章中请勿提及真实人名、校名等相关信息；3.词数在80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.要求句子连贯，语意通顺，书写规范。参考词汇：followtheschoolrules，bestrictwith，keepawayfromInternetbar，fightwithCampusViolence(校园暴力)happensfromtimetotimenowadays.Itisharmfulforstudents.Ithurtsnotonlyourbodiesbutalsoourminds.Asastudent,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】例文：CampusViolence(校园暴力)happensfromtimetotimenowadays.Itisharmfulforstudents.Ithurtsnotonlyourbodiesbutalsoourminds.Asastudent,weshouldfollowtheschoolrules.Schoolrulesplayanimportantroleinhelpingstudentstobehavewell.Weshouldlistentotheteachersandparentsandbestrictwithourselves.What’smore,keepawayfromInternetbar,oritwillhaveabadinfluenceonourhealthandstudy.Gotoschoolorgohomeontime.Tobeagoodstudent,wemustbepoliteandfriendly,donotfightwitheachother.Whenwehavetrouble,communicatewithourparentsandteachers.Theycanhelpustosolvemanyproblems.Ihopewewillallbecomegoodstudents.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。根据材料要点提示，从遵守校规校纪、诚恳待人接物、正确自我防范等方面展开。2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意涵盖题目中给出的要点，保证文章条理清晰、语句通顺。15．假如你是李华，就读于WenzhouTangheMiddleSchool。你想去美国的WashingtonInternationalSchool(WIS)读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信，争取让学校录取你。参考要点：●个人信息●学习成绩●爱好、能力●……要求：(1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息；(2)词数：110词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________