高中英语短文改错

WelcomeProof-reading短文改错Caution!slippery.Mindyourhead/watchyourhead

HanddryerSeriousandcareful体裁方面1,文体多为第一/三人称记叙文、应用文(以书信为主)。2,一般在100词左右。

3,时态一般过去时一般现在时。100字左右的文章（8—10句）无错误多词（一处）错词（八处）少词（一处）设题特点：1、短文改错的考点可分为三类：词法错误、句法错误行文逻辑错误。2、错误的形式缺词(missingword)

多词(unnecessaryword)

错词(wrongword)2016全国II卷Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome.Itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.

Ifwegoonatripabroad.Wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrom

books.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.错误项考查点分布情况年份冠词名词动词形容词副词代词介词连词句式合计2015II卷11301111110

考点规律分析名词：________water2.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.1.Westoppedtorestforawhileandtodrinksomewatersfromastream.3.I’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject._______________ideasubjects[考点剖析]1.可数名词与不可数名词的混用

2.

用于固定词组中的一些名词的用法

【解决方案】1.理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与联系.2.

记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊用法.

1.Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkathome;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudies.2.Aswe

climbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtold

stories.3.There

willanimportantgamenextmonth.动词及非谓语动词：___________dovisitedand前后动词时态不一致一般现在时与一般过去时错用^be缺少动词,特别是be动词4.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.5.Growingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon.6.MaryaswellashersistersstudyChineseinChina.

____________________werestudiesneeded主谓不一致第三人称单数形式错用主动语态和被动语态错用[解决方案](1)

通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主旋律(2)

结合语境，灵活运用时态形式.(3)

认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动.非谓语动词：1.Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquicklyandtheballoonwascomingdown.2.Afterhearyoursadstories,hewillsaysomewordsthatareniceandwarm.3.Inoticedmotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandayoungcouple.______________________keepinghearingoccupied[考点剖析]1.谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用.2.非谓语动词之间的混用.3.在并列结构中非谓语动词的误用.【解决方案】(1)

纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词所作的句子成分.(2)

系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能.(3)

前后联系，整体把握.1.

Ireadyoure-mailtomyparentsandshowedthemthephotoyousentittome.2.Finally,thementhrewawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.3.

AndIcan’tforgetthegoodfoodyoucookedforI.4.

Ihopethatbothyoutwocouldcomeandvisitussometimesoon.5.Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,“WhatcanIdo?”6.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher._____their___me代词：多代词代词指代不一致代词的主格和宾格错误不定代词误用_____myself反身代词使用错误^it少代词[解决方案

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顺藤摸瓜，理清短文中代词的指代关系，注意联系上下文。(2)

掌握it的各种用法

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准确把握代词的主格和宾格(I/me;he/him;she/her;we/us;they/them)、反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)、不定代词在文中的正确使用；

Observe,thinkanddiscoverfindouttheerrorsandcorrectthemsummarizewhatyoucanlearnaccordingtotheexamples(thetestpointsorwhatshouldbenoticedinourlearning)presentationgroupwork1.…butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!2.AnAmericanandaFrenchmandecidedtocrosstheseabetweenFranceandEnglandintheballoonin1784.3.IgainedsomuchconfidencethatIwentbacktoschoolasnewperson.4.WhenachildisfiveinEnglandorWales,hisparentsmustsendhimtotheschool.5.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.___an^a冠词：____a冠词的多用、少用和误用__the【解决方案】1.牢固掌握定冠词，不定冠词和零冠词的使用规律2.平时注意知识的总结和积累.1.Billinsistedinstayingnearthecar.2.Mostpeoplecanquicklygetforhelpfromadoctororgotoahospitalwhentheyareill.3.Iwas

sotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthe

pillow.4.Becausethehelpyougavemethatsummer,mylifechanged.___on介词：^of考点剖析:(1)

固定短语中，介词的误用.(2)

介词与连词或副词的混用.(3)

及物动词之后介词的多用或不及物动词之后介词的漏用.【解决方案】(1)

注意固定搭配的记忆.(2)

分清连词，副词和介词之间的区别和句法功能.1.Afteranhourorsowebegantofeelvery

frightening.2.Asaresult,peopleinthemodernworldgenerallylivemuchmorelongerthanpeopleinthepast.3.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsometea.4.Thetwomenthrewalltheirequipmentintothewatertomaketheballoonlight.__________frightened形容词和副词：_____late_____lighter考点剖析:(1)形容词和副词的混用(常见考点之一).(2)比较级和最高级的混用或误用.(3)近义词的误用.【解决方案】(1)

熟知形容词和副词的句法功能.(2)

结合短文内容，理清短文中形容词和副词比较等级的关系,准确使用形容词和副词.1.Inthelastfiveyearsthatthey’veclimbedchurches,highbuildingsandtelevisiontowers.2.Charlessaid,“AssoonIseeareallytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.”3.Wetriedtofixitandtherewasnothingwecoulddo.4.Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.^as____but从句及连词：______whose考点剖析:(1)并列连词but,and,or,so等词的混用、误用。(2)并列连词和从属连词的混用。(3)引导词的误加与漏用【解决方案】(1)

准确把握短文中的逻辑关系（词与词，句与句或段与段）(2)

分析句子结构，确定句子的类型(简单句，并列句，复合句)(3)

排除汉语影响,识别although…but或because…so等错误

动词形,名词数，还要注意形和副。

代词格,细领悟，固定搭配要记住。

非谓语,细辨别，冠,介,连要记牢。

逻辑错误需关注。解题方法口诀：三不改：标点符号不改字母大小写不改词语顺序不改四原则：以忠于原文为原则。错误以改动最少为原则。实词以改变形式为原则。虚词以添加或删除为原则。应注意的问题：Don'tforget下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.PracticemakesperfectMydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday._______There______don’t_______much______for_____hoursMydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends._____looks_____sit^to_________helpfulTipsforimprovingTips

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