专题08上海高考议论类作文（解析版）

►专题08上海高考议论文类作文_________________________________________________________________________________________考点精考点精讲【考情链接】议论文，也称论说文，是就某一观点或概念进行论证并得出合理结论的一种文体，考査学生的语言水平和逻辑思维能力。命题的方式主要有：提纲式（给出汉语提示，要求学生论证）、图表式（给岀图片或图表，要求学生先描写再分析论证）、情景式（给出情景，要求学生描述分析）等。论说文在结构上是由论点、论据和结论组成,通常由引言段、中心段和结论段构成，中心段可以由一至多个推展段组成。引言段（Openingparagraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题—推展段（中心段/正文部分Bodyparagraphs）围绕主题开展叙述、讨论—结论段（结尾部分Concludingparagraph）对全文的总结和概括。论说文的类型通常有：观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等，各类型的论证方式有相异之处，每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。值得注意的是近年试题中经常出现记叙与结论相结合的叙议形式。【要点梳理】要点一：观点对比型此题型是通过就同一事件比较两个不同甚至对立的观点，或就同一问题比较两种不同的选择方法来阐明自己的观点或选择的方法。写作结构引入部分陈述观点1部分陈述观点2部分“我的观点”部分结论常用句型引入部分：.hasbeeaheatedtopicamongpeopletoday.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson..Nowadays,peoplearedividedonthequestionaboutwhether....Theissueofwhether...ornot...hasbeenwidelyargued/debatedcurrently.. ...isamonoccurrenceinourdailylife,butdifferentpeopleholddifferentattitudestowardsit.陈述观点1部分：.Somepeoplesuggest/think/maintain/holdtheopinionthat....Somepeopleprefertothinkthat....Thosewhoadvocate/areinfavorof...believethat....Thosewhocriticize/objectto/oppose...maintainthat...陈述观点2部分：.However/Nevertheless/Yet,otherpeopleholdadifferentpointofview.Theyinsistthat....Onthecontrary/Incontrast,therearestillmanypeoplewhodonotagree,andtheyclaim/argue/believethat....Ontheotherhand,noteveryonesharestheopinion.D.“我的观点”部分：. Formypart/Astome/Asfaras1amconcerned,Fdliketoagreetotheformer/latteropinion.. Frommypointofview,Iaminfavorof.../1amonthesideof.... Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright/thereissometruthinbothsides.. Tome/Incaseofme,1prefer.../theformeropinionismoreattractiveinthat...D.结论部分Insummary/Consequently/Inconclusion/Tosumup/Allinall/Inbrief/Inshort...词汇表达积累：Recentlysbhaveconductedasurveyconcerning（调查或研究的主题）...PeoplearedividedintotwosidesonthisquestionasA（观点一）andB（观点二）arebothobvious.（正方）ThosewhoadvocatethepracticearguethatAsurelyhassomemerits.（列举两个优点）Tobeginwith,...Besides,...（反方）Inthemeanwhile,thoseholdingtheoppositeviewmaintainthatB...（两点反对理由）4.（个人观点）Astome,IholdthatAoutweighB.Inthefirstplace,...Toplus,...Lastbutnotleast,...（自己的三点原因）5.Toputinanutshell,...（总结概括）要点二：问题解决型此题型是先指出某一问题或现象，然后提出解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在解决问题上，但有时题目中也要求对问题产生的原因或引起的严重后果做相应的描述，所以审题时，要注意弄清作文段落间的合理比例。写作结构指导问题陈述分析（原因/后果）问题解决结论（期望/展望）常用句型问题陈述.Recently/Nowadays,...hasbeeaseriousproblemwehavetoface........thephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic'sconcern..Thereisnodenyingthat...hasbeeaseriousconcernamongpeople.分析（原因/后果）.Thereareseveralreasonsfortheproblem..Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothephenomenon.问题解决.Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem..Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.结论（期望/展望）.Withthejointefforts,Iamconfidentthat....Aslongaswewewillresolvetheproblemeventually.词汇表达积累：1.问题描述：Recently/Nowadays,（问题或现象）hasbeeaseriousproblemwehavetoface.（问题或现象）thephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic'sconcern.Thereisnodenyingthat（问题或现象）hasbeeaseriousconcernamongpeople.问题原因：原因简述：Obviously,（问题或现象）istheresultof...（原因）原因详述：Thereareseveralreasonsforthe..../Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothe....（罗列原因）解决措施：FromwhereIstand,Istronglyinsistthatyoutakefollowingmeasurestotackle/solve/dealwiththeproblemimmediately.Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem.Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.（罗列措施）结论（期望/展望）Withthejointefforts,Iamconfidentthat...Aslongaswewewillresolvetheproblemeventually.（期望对方采取建议解决问题）Theresidentswouldappreciateitifyoucouldtaketheadviceaboveaswellasanyothereffectivemeasures.（期望及时回复）Lookingforwardtoyourpromptresponse.要点三：说明利弊型此题型是要求针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其优缺点，然后表明作者对该事物或现象的看法。写作结构指导描述某事物或现象陈述该事物或现象的优缺点表明我的态度或看法常用句型陈述该事物或现象的优点.Thereareseveraladvantagesin...Thefirst/biggestadvantageisthat....Theadvantagesof...canbelistedasfollows.First...Besides.......isplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinpeople'slife.Foronething,...Foranother,...陈述该事物或现象的缺点.However,...justlikeanythingelse,hasitsnegativesideaswell..Inthemeanwhile,wecannotignorethedisadvantagesof....However,thenegativeaspectsof...arealsoapparent/evident/obvious.Tobeginwith,...Tomakemattersworse,...Worstofall,....Inspiteof/Despitetheadvantages/beneficialsides,ithasitsprehensivedisadvantages/sideeffects.表明个人态度或看法（利大于弊）.Astome,Ithinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages....AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthat...hasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages..Personally,Ithinkwhatismoreimportantisitspositiveside.词汇表达积累：Withtheincreasingpopularityof（事物），thereare（事物相关的现象）（利）Somepeoplebelievethat,paredwith...（事物）bringsus...andhelpsus...（弊）However,othersholdadifferentattitudetowards（事物）Theythinkitwilltakemorerisksdoing...Forexample,（举出弊端的事例）AsfarasIamconcerned,（事物）isunderconstructionnow.总结段落（客观看待）：Weshouldtakeadevelopingviewabout（事物）Despite（弊）itisobviouslyhelpfultosb.（利）as...【典例剖析】(2019上海高考英语作文）假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：1.介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；2.针对此事自己的态度以及理由。第一步：列提纲第一段：背景：__________________________________________________________________________观点：_________________________________________________________________________参考思路：背景：chargedomestictourists5dollarswhileforeigners15dollars观点：unfair，thepriceforticketsshouldbefair第二段：理由：1，_______________________________________________________________________2,________________________________________________________________________3,________________________________________________________________________参考思路：1，itattractsmoretourists，maketravelingthrive;2，bringjobsandconsumption,improveeconomy;2，protecttheoldhistoryanddisplaytheancientcity;第三段：总结（对观点的升华）总结：___________________________________________________________________________参考思路：notonlyimprovetourismbutalsoprotecttheancientcity第二步：思考主体段落的思路拓展：第一式：________________________________________________________________________第二式：__________________________________________________________________________第一式：分析原因：overseatouristswillbemorewillingtotravelhere第二式：分析结果：theimproveconsumptionandincreasedjobswillbenefiteconomy第三步：组织成句子第一段：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考思路：背景句：theticketpricesoftheancientcityfordomestictouristsisat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.观点句：Istronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.第二段：First：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What’smore：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lastbutnotleast:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考思路：Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeingchargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.What’smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeply-exploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.第三段：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BasedonwhatIstatedabove,thefairpricewillbenefitmoretouristsandtourisms.Notonlyitattractsmoretouristsbutalsodisplaysitsbeautifulscenery.Whatmattersmostisthatithasaprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdaysandconstructsnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.第四步：成文DearEditor,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine,itisapitytoreadthenewsthattheticketpricesofanancientcityfordomestictouristsareat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeingchargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.What’smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeply-exploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveaprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdayseverlastingdevelopmentoflocaleconomyandtourism,constructingnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifyoucanreplytomeassoonaspossible!Yourfaithfully,LiMin句式总结：1,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine2,Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.3,fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.4,which，withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.5,BasedonwhatIstatedabove,…6,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveaprehensiveinfluenceon…【真题回顾】(2020上海高考英语作文）你是明启高三学生李华，你想邀请王磊参加下周五郊外得露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远、交通不便等原因犹豫不决，请你写封邮件给小王，说服他一起去，信的内容包括：

（1）提出解决问题的方法/措施

（2）阐释音乐会的重要性/音乐会值得欣赏的理由

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题目综述今年的高考作文题，基本延续了近年来上海高考英语作文的出题方式。作文话题以生活情境形式出现，同时需要借助信件写作的模式来表达自己的一些看法和建议。02

审题要点①今年高考的话题依旧是围绕着同学们身边的生活来展开。同时也需要联想一些细节来展开自己的描写。例如，面对一场露天音乐会，同学们在实际生活中应该不会陌生，但是关于露天音乐会的场景，有哪些有意思的方面，这需要大家在平时的生活中留意观察。考试中时间有限，但是如果能够展开合理的联想，这对大家写作非常有帮助。②写作套用了近年来常用的信件套路，结合了实际生活的需要。这个和我们高考越发贴近实际生活场景这个大的方向是保持一致的。信件写作的基本格式和结构需要所有同学都能够熟练掌握。

（见下文）

③本质上来看，这依旧是一篇议论文。高中英语写作中，议论文的写作同学们务必掌握清楚。细细读来，这篇文章看似是在帮同学解决心中疑虑。如果落入这个陷阱，说明同学们在审题方面没有看透本质。其实这篇文章抓住议论文这个核心结构就可以了03

实用结构信件写作的基本框架Greeting:Useanappropriategreeting(DearMr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+lastname,orDear+firstname)Openingparagraph:

Usesetphrasetobeginyourletterandsaywhyyouarewriting(Howareyoudoing?Itwasnicetohearfromyou...etc)Mainpart:ThecontentofyourwritingClosingparagraph:Stateanythingyouwanttoemphasize.UsesetphrasestoendyourletterSignatureendings:Yours,allthebest,bestwishes...议论文的基本框架Introduction：Brieflyintroducethetopicyou'regoingtodiscuss.Sayhowyoufeelabout.Mainpart:(twoparagraphs)Choosetwomainaspectsoftheissueandwriteoneparagraphoneach.Explainyourideas/points,andgiveexamplesifpossible.Conclusion:Sumupbystatingyouroverallopinion.同学们只要把这两个框架融汇起来合理使用，就是本文的基本大纲。04

参考范文1：DearWangLei,It’sbeenawhilesinceIheardfromyou.Lasttime,IinvitedyoutoattendtheconcertwhichwillbeheldnextFridayinthecenturypark.Thoughyoudidnotreplytome,thehesitationwearingonyourfaceofferedmeaglimpseofwhatwasgoingoninyourmind.Maybeitistherecentghastlyweatherortheterribletrafficthathinderyoufrommakingupyourmind.However,asfarasIconcerned,it’sstillworthourefforts.Thisconcertisnotapopmusicconcertbutaclassicmusiconewhereseveralprestigioussymphonyorchestraswillperformmanywell-knownpositions.Itmustbeafeastforalltheaudience.Moreover,chancesarethatwemayhaveanalbumwithperformers’autographsonit.Youshouldnevermisssuchafabulousconcert!Intermsofdifficultiesyouareworriedabout,Ihavealreadyfoundsomesolutions.Myfatherwillbeavailableonthatdaysothathecandriveustothescene.Ihavemanagedtopersuadehimtomakehispromise.Inaddition,incaseofarainyday,Ihavepreparedtworaincoats.Iamconfidentthatwewillindulgeourselvesintotheelegantflowofnotes.Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourreply.Yours,LiHua参考范文2：DearWangLei,I'mLiHua.Havingsentyouaninvitationtoanoutdoorconcertforsomedays,Ihaven'treccivedyourreply.Areyoustillhesitanttomakeadecisionjustbecausetheconcertwillbeheldintheoutersuburbwhichisnotsoaccessibletopublictransportation?Honestlyspeaking，transportproblemisreallynotabigdeal.Wecandefinitelyfindawayout.Ifpossible,Icanaskmyfathertodrivemetotheconcert,andcertainlywecanpickyouupaslongasyoumakeupyourmindtogotherewithus.Inthiscase,thereisnoneedtoworryaboutthetraffic.Totellyouthetruth,asamusicloverlikeyouandme,thisoutdoorconcertisreallyworthgoingto.Haveyouseenitspublicitymaterials?ItreadsthatpopsingerslikeCheerChenandmusicbandslikeEscapePlanwillalsoperformatthisconcert,wheremusicians,singers,songwriters,musicbandsandmusicloverslikeuswillcontributetoandenjoyafeastofmusictogether.What'smore,asseniorthreestudentswhohavejustfinishedthecollegeentranceexamination,wearedesperateforachancetorelaxourselvesandrelieveourenormouspressure,andthisconcertprovidesuswithagoldenopportunitytoimmerseourselvesinourpurejoyformusicandridourselvesoftheheavyacademicburdens.Therefore,donothesitate,joinmeintheconcertandlet'shavefuntogether.SincetheoutdoorconcertistobeheldnextFriday,couldyoupleasetellmeyourfinaldecisionbeforetheendofthisweek?Reallylookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thanks.(285words)Yours,LiHua._____优选操练优选操练演练1：（2021·上海市徐汇高三期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，现有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对。作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其中一项，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。你的写作中必须包括：▪在三项方案中选择其中一项；▪对该方案提出建议；▪谈谈你提出该建议的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Recently,aheatedtopicofourclassisthatwehavetochooseonebestamongthreedifferentactivities,includingcharitysaletohelpstudentswithfamiliesintrouble,invitingEnglishexpertstointroduceeffectivelearningmethodsandholdingaNewYearPartyinourwinterholiday.Afteracarefulconsideration,theproposaltoholdaNewYearPartyearnsmyfavor.Severalsuggestionsaboutthepartyarelistedasfollows.Firstly,clearandabsorbingthememustbesettled.Onlywithaspecifictheme,canweeventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations.Besides,aproperscheduleandanamelistarenecessary.Inotherwords,whentoholdthepartyandwhowillattenditaresuretomakeabigdifferenceinitsevolvingpurpose.Lastbutnotleast,abouttheexpense,anyamountofmoneywespendshallbelisted,throughwhichwecanbettercontrolthewholeprocessandmakethefulluseoftheresourceswehave.Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,ifallthesesuggestionscanbecarriedoutstrictly,itisnosurprisethatourNewYearPartywillleaveadeepimpressiononeveryone.【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生从班长提出的三个班级活动方案中选出一个，针对选出的方案提出建议并给出理由。【精准解析】1.词汇积累一个热门话题：aheatedtopic→ahottopic获得了我的喜爱：earnmyfavor→isfavorable吸引人的主题：absorbingtheme→attractivetheme并且：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复杂句原句：Onlywithaspecifictheme,canweeventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations.拓展句：Ifwehaveaspecifictheme,wecaneventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations.【名师指导】【高分句型1】whentoholdthepartyandwhowillattenditaresuretomakeabigdifferenceinitsevolvingpurpose.（运用了who引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】Lastbutnotleast,abouttheexpense,anyamountofmoneywespendshallbelisted,throughwhichwecanbettercontrolthewholeprocessandmakethefulluseoftheresourceswehave.（运用了介词+which引导的的非限制性定语从句）演练2：（2021·上海·复旦附中高三月考）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启高一学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"TheelectronicdevicethatImusttakewhiletravelling"的征文活动。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备；2）你的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofelectronictechnology,ourtraveljourneyisbeingmoreandmorecolorful.Electronicdeviceslikeputers,cellphones,andiPadsarefillingourtimeonhigh-speedtrainsorplanes.Personally,thereisanotherelectronicdevicethatIwilldefinitelytakewithmeontheroad,andthatispowerbank.Firstly,powerbankissmallinsizeandcanbecarriedaround.Todaymoreandmorepeopleprefertotakephotoswithmobilephonesinsteadofcamerasbecauseitisimportanttobelightlyequippedwhentravelling,sopowerbankcanhelpavoidtheembarrassingmomentwhentheywanttorecordgoodmomentsbuttheirphonessuddenlyrunoutofpower.Powerbankisclearlyaportableandversatileelectronicdevice.Secondly,forlongdistancetravel,powerbankcanchargemymobilephoneintimesoastoavoidnotreplyingtomessagestimelyduetothesuddendeathofthebattery.IrememberoncewhenIwasonthetraintoNanjing,mymobilephonewasalmostoutofpowerwhenIwasabouttoarriveatthestation.Fortunately,thepowerbankIcarriedwasatimelyhelp,otherwiseImightnotbeabletocontactmyfriendinNanjingtopickmeup.Therefore,powerbankisanelectronicdevicethatIwillcarrywithmenomatterIamtravelingorgoingout.Finally,thesecurityofpowerbankistrustworthy.Thecurrentpowerbankgenerallyhasthefunctionsofchargecontrol,chargeprotectionanddischargeprotection,sowhenchargingourmobilephonesoriPads,wedon'tneedtoworryaboutexcessivecharging.Inaddition,thecurrentpowerbankcapacityishigh,whichmeansitcanchargedifferentelectronicdevicesatthesametime.Forme,powerbankisoneofthegreatestinventionsintheageofscienceandtechnology.Ifeelmoresecureandconvenientwhentravelingwithit.【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求假设你是明启高一学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"TheelectronicdevicethatImusttakewhiletravelling"的征文活动。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备；2）你的理由。【精准解析】词汇积累有趣的：colorful→interesting就我个人而言：personally→asfarasI’mconcerned避免：avoid→prevent...from...可靠的：trustworthy→reliable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofelectronictechnology,ourtraveljourneyisbeingmoreandmorecolorful.拓展句：Now,electronictechnologyhasdeveloped,whichmakesourtraveljourneybeemoreandmorecolorful.【名师指导】[高分句型1]Personally,thereisanotherelectronicdevicethatIwilldefinitelytakewithmeontheroad,andthatispowerbank.(运用了that引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]Inaddition,thecurrentpowerbankcapacityishigh,whichmeansitcanchargedifferentelectronicdevicesatthesametime.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)演练3：（2021·上海奉贤区致远高级高三月考）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启的学生李明，你的打算引入机器人，担任食堂服务员／图书管理员，在贴吧发帖，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括：1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一。2.阐述选择的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Dearheadmaster,SoappealingisyourplantointroducearobottoourschoolthatIdecidetorespondtoyouraskingforproposals.Frommyperspective,arobotismoresuitableforthepositionoflibrarian.Withregardtotherangeofservice,alibrarianneedsnotonlytoclassifybooks,butalsoputandfindthemintherightorderontherightshelf,whilebeingawaiterinvolvesservingtherightdishestotherighttable,doingsomecleaningandsoon.Arobotcanacplishthreeorfourlibrarians’workofsortingandlabelingbooksatthesametime.Intermsofworkingefficiency,arobotmaybemoreefficientindoingtheprogrammedmechanicalandepetitivekindofwork.Therefore,itismoreadvisablefortherobottoundertakethedutiesofalibrariangroupingcountlessbooksrepeatedly.Inanutshell,itisthemechanicalworkofalibrarianthattherobotismorepetentat.Hopethatmyadvicewillbeofgreathelptoyourdecision.Yours,Wanglei【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在贴吧发帖，就打算引入机器人担任食堂服务员或者图书管理员给出建议，并阐述理由。【精准解析】1.词汇积累吸引人的：appealing→attractive建议：proposal→suggestion关于：withregardto→concerning分类：classify→categorize2.句式拓展变倒装句原句：Withregardtotherangeofservice,alibrarianneedsnotonlytoclassifybooks,butalsoputandfindthemintherightorderontherightshelf…拓展句：Withregardtotherangeofservice,notonlydoesalibrarianneedtoclassifybooks,butalsohe/sheputsandfindsthemintherightorderontherightshelf…【名师指导】【高分句型1】SoappealingisyourplantointroducearobottoourschoolthatIdecidetorespondtoyouraskingforproposals.（运用了so…that句型，和倒装句）【高分句型2】Withregardtotherangeofservice,alibrarianneedsnotonlytoclassifybooks,butalsoputandfindthemintherightorderontherightshelf,whilebeingawaiterinvolvesservingtherightdishestotherighttable,doingsomecleaningandsoon.（运用了并列连词while引，动名词作主语和宾语）【高分句型3】Therefore,itismoreadvisablefortherobottoundertakethedutiesofalibrariangroupingcountlessbooksrepeatedly.（运用了it形式主语，不定式作真正的主语）_____好题必好题必测01：【上海市奉贤区奉城高级2022-2023学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题】假如你是明启的李华。你们即将开展英语周主题活动，提出以下几个活动方案，向全校征集意见。请你写一封信给学生会，选择一种活动，并说明选择它的理由。你的信须包括：1.描述这个活动的相关信息；2.通过与其他两种活动的比较说明你选择的理由。活动内容参与人员时间评价方式英语主题演讲比赛教师推荐（每班2人）2022年11月16日下午教师当场打分英语短视频比赛全员可参加（个人或组队）2022年11月7日~11月21日发布到公众号公开投票英语主题写作比赛全员可参加（独立完成）2022年11月23日下午教师与学生代表共同评分_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,Recently,hearingthatourschoolwillholdsomeactivitiestoimproveourinterestinEnglishlearning,whichincludeEnglishSpeechContest,EnglishShortVideopetitionandEnglishWritingpetition,IchoosetoparticipateintheEnglishShortVideopetition.EnglishShortVideopetitionwillbeheldfromNovember7toNovember21,2022.Allstudentscanparticipateinthepetitionindividuallyorinateam.Theworkswillbepublishedtotheschool’sofficialaccountandtheywillbevotedpublicly.paredwiththeothertwoactivities,theEnglishShortVideopetitioncanstimulatestudents’creativityandimprovetheirteamworkability.Besides,thewayofpublicvotingismorefairandequitable.Therefore,IwillchoosetheEnglishShortVideopetition.Ibelievethatthisactivitywillbeweledbythestudents.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封信，选择一种你喜欢的英语周主题活动，并说明选择它的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participatein→takepartin激发：stimulate→arouse此外：besides→what’smore因此：therefore→thus2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：paredwiththeothertwoactivities,theEnglishShortVideopetitioncanstimulatestudents’creativityandimprovetheirteamworkability.拓展句：paredwiththeothertwoactivities,theEnglishShortVideopetitioncanstimulatestudents’creativityandimprovetheirteamworkability,whichisbeneficialtoourfutureworkandstudy.【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently,hearingthatourschoolwillholdsomeactivitiestoimproveourinterestinEnglishlearning,whichincludeEnglishSpeechContest,EnglishShortVideopetitionandEnglishWritingpetition,IchoosetoparticipateintheEnglishShortVideopetition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Ibelievethatthisactivitywillbeweledbythestudents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）02：【上海市建平2022-2023学年高三上学期期中教学质量检测英语试题】假设你是汇文的李星，你很想成为一名美食评论员(foodcritic)，校报主编给你布置了一个任务——针对你校周围新开的一家中餐馆，写一篇餐馆评论(review)。你的文章应含有以下内容：·你的用餐经历；(可以提到食物质量，用餐环境，服务态度等方面)·你是否会推荐该餐馆。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TodayIwouldliketointroduceanewChineserestauranttoyou,whichiscalledShikeandislocatednearHuiwenhighschool.Ifyou