中考英语作文写作范例

中考英语作文写作范例邦德教育高俊昌作文写作范例目前，越来越多的家长花巨资送孩子出国学习，且呈低龄化趋势。部分教育工作者和家长并不赞成这一做法。某英语报社就这一问题做了调查，并开设了专栏讨论。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。注意：1.提示：政府应该采取措施建立各类学校以满足人们的需求；

2.词数：80左右重点词汇及句型点睛：国外：abroad/overseas同意：agree反对（不同意）：disagree花钱：cost/spend/take赚钱：make/earn(much)money接受教育：get/receiveeducation变坏：get/becomebad10多倍：costmorethan10timesmoneytostudyabroad38%38percent/apercentageof38满足…需求meetone’sneed/demand容易出错的句式结构：（注意避免）Have38percentpeople…表示“有多少人…”可用(Thereare***peoplewhoagreethat…)Studyabroadspendalotofmoney.Theyareeasytolearnbadwhenparentsnottoldthemwhattodo.Ifyoutryyourbest,youcanstudieswellinyourcountry.Alsointhestrangeenvironmenteasytobecomebad.常见写作失误题目要求写的要点不齐全；没有根据意思群进行合理分段；（常用三段式）字数相差甚远（要求80词，答卷上应写70至100）书写潦草、涂画严重偷分及高分秘籍If你不懂写，then你可以这样偷分：紧扣提示内容，提取要点，用最简单的句子翻译；如：Weshould…用关键字进行造句，然后不留空格连成一篇文章，注意书写整洁。If你想拿高分，then你应该这样做：注意审题，要点要齐全；注意避免语法错误（关键）务必根据意思群进行分段落，使得文章结构清晰明朗；多使用过渡词及提示词；如：Ontheonehand,ontheother(hand)/inone’sopinion…在正确的前提下，句式灵活多变，多用形式主语、定语从句、感叹句等句型；字写一定要清晰工整，不要求漂亮。智囊补充

常用文章过渡词及提示词：一方面，另一方面Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand/表达观点的（我认为）frommypointofview/inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned/除此之外inaddition/besides/what’smore/表示不同人有不同观点somepeoplethink…butothersthinkthat/总之Inaword/inconclusion表示顺序first,second,third,finally(last)参考例文

Nowmoreandmoreparentsaresendingtheirchildrenoverseasforfurtherstudy,evenatmiddleschoolage.However,thishascausedfiercediscussionamongpeople.

Ontheonehand,about38percentpeopleagreetosendtheirchildrenabroadforfurtherstudybecausetheythinkthatchildrencanreceivebettereducation.IftheylearnEnglishwell,theywillmakemuchmoneyinthefuture.Ontheotherhand,about62percentpeopledonotagree.Intheiropinions,itcostsabout10timesmorethanstudyinghome.Besides,childrenareeasytobecomebadinstrangeenvironmentbecausetheyarenotoldenoughtolookafterthemselveswell.

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