初三英语写作课课件

Loveanimals,lovetheworld._______Awritingclass1

HangzhouZoo地址:杭州虎跑路,西湖之南(tothesouthof)建园时间:1958年1.有种类170多种,如老虎,狮子,熊猫等2.有很多花草树木,因此非常漂亮.3.附近有许多宾馆,可以住宿,离西湖很近4.有许多公交车直达,交通便利.It’sonHupaoRoad.It

istothesouthoftheWestLake..Itwasbuiltin1958.Therearemorethan170kindsofanimals,such

astigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Therearemanyflowersandtrees.It

isverybeautiful.Therearemanyhotelsnearby

to

live

in.TheyareneartheWestLake.Itisveryconvenienttogetthere.Alotofbusesgothere.21.覆盖了所有信息点.2.注重文章的开头与结尾，做到开头“开门见山”,收尾“干净利落”。3.注意文章信息的自然过渡,以提升文章的文采，增强文章的可读性。可适当使用一些连词或过渡词。如：

and,so,then,but,what’smore,ofcourse,bytheway,ontheotherhand,asyouknow,inaddition,asfor..等。4.避免同种句型连续多次使用，可采用变通的方法，用不同的句式表达同一种意思。

如何算是一篇好文章3ItisonHupaoRoad.ItistothenorthoftheWestLake.Itwasbuiltin1958.Thereare170kindsofanimals,suchastigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Therearemanyflowesandtrees.Itisverybeautiful.There

aremanyhotelsnearbytolivein.TheyareneartheWestLake.Itisveryconvenienttogetthere.Alotofbusesgothere.

I’dliketotellyousomethingabout

HangzhouZoo.ItliesonHupaoRoad,

andistothesouthoftheWestLake.Asamodernzoo,itwasbuiltin1958.Nowtherearemorethan170kindsofanimals,such

astigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Treesandflowersareallaroundthere,soitisverybeautiful.

Ifyouwanttostayinhangzhouforsomedays,thehotelsnearbyareyourbestchoice,whicharenotfarfromtheWestLake.What’smore,alotofbusesgothere,youcantakeanyofthem.Itisveryconvenient.Anyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime!4

_______________________________Hangzhou.It____onHupaoRoad,___istothesouthoftheWestLake.As__________________,itwasbuiltin1958._____therearemorethan170kindsofanimals,suchastigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Treesandflowersare_____________.___itisverybeautiful.IfyouwanttostayinHangzhouforsomedays,thehotelsnearbyonNanshanRoadare__________________,_____arenotfarfromtheWestLake.___________,alotofbusesgothere,youcantakeanyofthem.Itisveryconvenient._______________________________.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutliesandamodernzooNowallaroundthereSoyourbestchoicewhichWhat’smoreAnyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime51.禁止投食2.不要离凶猛动物太近3.禁止恐吓动物(frighten)4.保持环境清洁,不乱扔垃圾(v.)ARule6１．假如你是杭州动物园维护队的一名志愿者，请你为动物园用英语写一个维护规则．71.禁止投食2.不要离凶猛动物太近3.禁止恐吓动物(frighten)4.保持环境清洁,不乱扔垃圾1.Don’tfeedtheanimals.

2.Stayawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals3.Youarenotsupposedto

frightentheanimals.

4.Don’tthrowlitterabout.

Keeptheenvironmentclean.(v.)ARule8２．今天，你陪一位来自美国的笔友汤姆参观杭州动物园，请你用英语向他解释这个木牌上的内容，开头已给出．并适当增加解释．

Tom,Itisjustaruleofthezoo.Itsays…

1.Don’tfeedtheanimals.

2.Stayawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals.3.Youarenotsupposedto

frightentheanimals.

4.Don’tthrowlitterabout.Keeptheenvironmentclean.9Tom,Itisjustaruleofthezoo.Itsaysthatyoushouldn’tfeedtheanimals,thatisbecausesomefoodmightbebadforthem.Andkeepawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals,fortheymayattackyou.Itistoodangerous.Alsoyouarenotsupposedtofrightenthem,eveniftheysometimesarenotfriendlytoyou.What’smore,don’tthrowthelitterabout.Itisourdutytokeeptheenvironmentclean.10审题要“三审”1.审话题信息,切忌粗枝大叶,东遗西漏.2.审话题范围,准确把握出题者用意,搞清写作重点.3.审文体形式.11Let’swatchashortvideo.12Becomingendangeredcutdownenvironmentpollution(water,air)killWhyaremoreandmoreanimalsbecomingendangered?13Writing:Writing:假设你是学校动物保护协会的成员，请你以Whatshouldwedotoprotectthewildanimals?为话题，根据中文提示叙述动物濒临灭绝的原因并阐述保护措施，用英语写一份发言稿：

原因

yoursteps（措施）１．滥砍树木

1.---２．猎杀，贩卖毛皮赚钱

2.---３．污染问题．

3.---注意：１．开头和结尾部分已写好．２．可适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语，使所写内容连贯．３．所写内容必须包括上面表格中观点和你自己的至少三个观点．４．词数：７０个左右．14Hello,everyone!Animalsareourbestfriends,buttheseyearsmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangered.Whatcausedthisproblem?Inmyopinion,firstly,Ithinkcuttingdownthetreesbythefarmersisoneofthereasons.Asaresult,animalscannolongerhideorhavenoplacetolivein.Also,manyanimalsarekilledbypeoplewhowanttoselltheirfursformoney.Besides,somepollutionlikewaterandairpollutionhasmadethesituationsmoreserious.

So

wehumanbeingsshouldtryourbesttoprotectthem.Ithinkthebestwaytotakegoodcareofthemisbuildingmorewildlifezoos.Andthegovernmentshouldpassmorelawstopunishthepeoplewhohuntthewildlifeorcutdowntoomanytreeswithoutpermission.Finally,keepingtheenvironmentcleanisalsoaquiteeffectivewaytoprotectthewi