英语03写作print作文心得

(文章中的)；精彩句型；文章里精彩的句子；默写（readingmakesafullmanwritingmakesanexactman）可以查出一些互译把精彩的文章翻成中文，过一段时间再复原成中文：the（副词的修饰，搭配，effectivemeasures等等，这样就比较精彩了。“Wheretolive,inthecityorthetitleSomepeoplethinkthatpeoplelivinginthecountryenjoymoreadvantagesthanthosewholiveinthecity.outline(提纲)1.convenoencesofthecity2.attractionsofthecountry3.disadvantagesofboth4.myPrivateNowadays,anyChinesecanenjoytheluxuryofowningaprivatecarifhecanaffordit.Outline：1.advantagesofowningaprivatecar2.disadvantagesofowningaprivate3.shoulditbenecessarytoenlargetheprivatecarmarket?Whyorwhynot?ForabetterunderstandingbetweenparentandPresentsituation:lackofcommunicationbetweenparentandpossiblea.differentlikesandb.c.suggestions:a.forparentsb.for９３年——Advertisementon1.Presentstate2.Reasons3.My９４年——Onmakingtheneedforfriendship（为什么要交朋友，友谊的必要性，理由truefriendship（解释性段落——十大经典段落之一）——参看９７年１月四（熟能生巧、六级考试（欲速则不达）myprincipleinmaking９５年——Theprojecthope（希望工程1.present 2.necessityofthe 3.my９６年（命题的巨大失败，因为它被猜到了）——Goodhealth1.importanceofgoodhealth 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3.myownpracticeinterpretthepictures（实际上同讲现状，只不过是图标上的predictthetendencyoftobaccoconsumptionandgiveyourreasons（容易写成畸形文章，所以说不成功）可以改为，第一，现在的状况第二项，为什么这样，第三预算未来（当年有不少0分作文，因为写了与图标无关的内容）蛋壳……，旁边有一首打油诗：各行各业兴承诺，欢迎监督不推脱，原writeoutthemessageconveyedbythegiveyour（步入正规，必写题目studyingthefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150youressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEETyouressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:（猴子原则effectofthecountry’sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife（现状possiblereasonfortheeffect（理由yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection（建议措施,,outline（也就是思路）２０００年是经典题型之三（也是必写题目Deduce（推断，推论）thepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures（画家的意图——十SuggestyourAbriefhistoryofworldcommercial０００年满分例文★Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharply/dramaticallydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,with(but的重心在后面，with表示伴随的状况重心在前面manyfishing-boats.（分析：Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdue（足够的充分的）attentionhastobepaidtothedecreased.Owingtooverfishingthenumberoffishhasobviouslydecreased.Ifweletthissituationcontinue/goasitis(describeasitis),wewon'tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.分析：第一句主Therefore,itisimperative（迫切的）forustotakeeffective（drastic,严厉的激烈的）*measures.Foronething,weshouldappealto（呼吁）ourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhance（提高增加）theawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.AlsoIbelievethatwehumans（human,humans=humanbeings）canovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.分析：第一句仍是主题句。每一*aseriesof一系列,takeaseriesofmeasures,这是要受到批判施，takeaseriesofmeasures是中文式英语，只能表明你的无知和不地道。１、本文１８５个词（180个词就不会扣分２、１２个句子（说两分钟左右的时间）Studythefollowingcartooncarefullyandwriteanessayinabout200YouressaymustbewrittenclearlyonANSWERYouressayshouldmeettherequirementsDescribethecartoonandthemessageDrawaconclusionandgiveyourcommentontheToday,theearth'sdesertsarespreadingandgettinglargeranddesertificationisaseriousproblemfacingtheworld.ThemajorreasonforthisisirresponsiblecuttingdownoftreesAsisshowninthefirstcartoon,whenpeoplecutdowntreesdesertforcesonandbecomesirrepressible.其问题就在于第一段就在分析原因 Asisshowninthepictureswecanthepictures,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetweenpeopleandthedesert.要想用句Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetweenpeopleandthedeserts.Inthefirstpicture,peoplearefleeingfromgreedysandhillsbecausetheyhavecutdownallthetrees.Thecaptionreads:Asthesandadvantages,weretreat.Inthesecondpicture,thepeoplehavereturnedcarryingtools,waterandyoungtreestoplantthelandagain.Thecaptionreads:Asweadvancethesandretreats.描述图片词汇两个方面：１词汇面的宽 thecaption=thewordsread ３图 Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograveconsequences,yetthetobaccocompaniesstillclaimthattheymakeavaluablecontributiontotheworldeconomy.Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwoviewpoints.Writeanessaytothenewspaper（评论）theirviewand2)justify（证明什么的合理性）yourstand.Inyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformationprovidedinthepicturesprintedbelow.shouldwriteabout200wordsonanswersheet(picture:theyear ４原因列举（alistofreason） ——主体段落 ６意图分析７利和弊（自己总结） ８结尾（自己总结）９建议措施１０预测未来（从没有出现过）学术性英语的功能段落考的是你的科研能力，（在，你还要会看一个问题比较客观的看，公正的看它的利与弊，你还要拿具体的事实和例证来说明问题，最后这样还不行，你作为搞研究来说，你不只是描述现状，不只是解释定义，不只是可观分析原因，分析利与弊，说它到底是什么样的真正的背后的是l而是acdmc，这是考研究生，不是去移民。dcnlpargrhP)找到一个focus。答案：Asisshowninthepictureswecanseeclearlythat（语法没问题，表意重复，可改Asisseen(shown)inthepictures,+clauseFromthepictures,wecanseeclearlythat+clause）withtheincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharply/dramaticallydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,withmanyThepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.Owingtooverfishingthenumberoffishhasobviouslydecreased.(decreased重复了三次，完全可以避免，第二个改为decline,第三个可用dropped，同样的词要避免Ifweletthissituationcontinue/goasitiswewon'tknowwherefishisinthefuture.（时态上的混乱，应该为,wedonotknowwherefishwillbeinthe题方法和建议。我们要掌握背诵20篇文章，这是第一篇：Fromthepictureswecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishesdramaticallydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,withmanyfishing-boats.Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedeclineofoceanresources.Owingtooverfishingthenumberoffishhasobviouslydropped.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,wedonotknowwherefishwillbeinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.AlsoIbelievethatwehumanscanovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.句型：Itseemstomethatthecartoonistissendingamessageabouttheimportanceoftreesinwaterandsoilconservation,andtheneedforeveryonetofightagainstthedangerofdesertification.Infact,whatheissayingisthatthesandhillswilldriveusawayfromthelandifwedonotagainstthem.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.(第二段两个句型，第三个是背的句子)第三段：（）Thebestwaytofightbackagainstthegreedydesertismadeclearinthesecondpicture.Therethelocalpeopleareactivelysettingaboutthetaskofplantingtreestoreclaim(改造)thelandandmakeitfertile.Thefactthattherearethreepeopleinjob,suggeststhatworkingtogether（齐心协力）isthekeytosuccessinthebattleagainstsoilerosion.句型：同位语从句：Thefactthat+clausesuggeststhatFromthepictures,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetweenpeopleandthedeserts.Inthefirstpicture,peoplearefleeingfromgreedysandhillsbecausetheyhavecutdownallthetrees.Thecaptionreads:asthesandadvantages,weretreat.Inthesecondpicture,thepeoplehavereturnedcarryingtools,waterandyoungtreestoplantthelandagain.Thecaptionreads:asweadvance,thesandretreats.Itseemstomethatthecartoonistissendingamessageabouttheimportanceoftreesinwaterandsoilconservation,andtheneedforeveryonetofightagainstthedangerofdesertification.Infactwhatheissayingisthatthesandhillswilldriveusawayfromthelandifwedonotagainstthem.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.Thebestwaytofightbackagainstthegreedydesertismadeclearinthesecondpicture.Therethelocalpeopleareactivelysettingaboutthetaskofplantingtreestoreclaimthelandandmakeitfertile.Thefactthattherearethreepeopleinthepicture，eachwithadifferentjob,suggeststhatworkingtogetheristhekeytosuccessinthebattleagainstsoilerosion.Pollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Asisshowninthecartoon,twocarsaregivingoffwastegasandthreepeoplearetryingtoavoidbreathinginthepoisonousgasbymaskingtheirfacewiththeirhands.Thepoisonousgassentoffbyfactories,domesticappliancesandautomobileshasmadetheairunhealthyforpeopletobreathe.（对图画进行描述）Thereisnodenyingthatautomobilesareindicationsofcivilization,progressanddevelopment;nevertheless,automobilescausetheseriousproblemofairpollution.Scientistshavewarnedthatunlesseffectivemeasuresaretaken,theproblemofpollutionwilleventuallygetoutofhand.Actually,peopleareshowingarealconcernovertheproblem.（事实上人们在真正担忧这个问题）Forexample,thereisanincreasinglyloudvoicefromthepublic（公众）forfirmactionagainstpollutionfromautomobiles（解Indeed,theearthisourhomeandwehavethedutytotakecareofitforourselvesandforourdescendants.Inmyopinion,weshouldworkoutconcretesolutionstotheproblemofpollutionfrompoisonousgasgivenoffbyautomobiles.Forexample,theautomobilesshouldbeequippedwithadevicewhichcandisposeofwastegassoastopreventitfrompollutingair.Onlyinthiswaycanwereallysolvetheproblemofairpollutioncausedbyautomobiles.（建议措施）Thispictureshowstwopeoplereadingtheannouncementonabillboard,andbeingshockedatthemessage.Thisisbecausethebillboardisadvertisinga"SaleofDeadBodies."Thecartoonisacriticismofthecarelessuseofsimplifiedcharacters.Obviously,theadvertiserwantstoinformpeopleofthesaleofsomethingelse-notdeadbodies!Butwedon'tknowwhatitis,becausethethreecharacterswhichmakeupthemessageareusedincorrectly.Nowadaystoomanypeoplenotonlydonottakeenoughcaretowriteproperly,theyeveninventtheirownsimplifiedwaysofwriting.Simplifyingtheold,complicatedcharactershasbeenagreatbenefit,enablingpeopletolearntoreadandwritequickly.Butweshouldsticktothestandardsimplifiedcharacters,makesurethatweusethemproperly,anddefinitelynotmakeupourownsimplifiedcharacters.Otherwise,whatwasintendedtomakecommunicationeasiercouldresultinmakingitmoredifficult.Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankindloveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herownunderstandingofit.（不是重心,不能展开）Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto（注意文体，是写议论文不是写信）showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaning（象征意义）ofthepicturegiveaspecificexample,and（举例参前，可以给多个例证giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowloveYoushouldwriteabout（建议措施，可以一个也可以更多）200wordsonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)对照。humans作名词，humanbeings很少使用。Give接双宾语。段落开头不宜使用举例，缺乏主题句。Need需要，needed需要的修改后（23515句）Loveisofutmostimportancetoushumans.Everybodynotonlyneedslove,butalsoshouldgiveotherslove.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,"loveisalampwhichisbrighterindarkerplaces."Thisisindeedtrue.Peopleindarkerplacesneedmorelightthanotherpeople.Maybeevenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlife.Maybejustathreadoflightwillcallforththeirstrengthandcouragetohelpthemstepoutoftheirdifficulties.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationofthisideathanthefollowingexample(s).(Numerousexamplescanbegiveneasily,butthesewillsuffice<足够>.)Forinstancewhensomeoneisstarvingtodeath,justalittlefoodandwaterfromyoumaysavehis(her)life.Again（又例如）,whenalittlegirlinapoorruralareadropsoutofschoolbecauseofpoverty,justasmallsumofmoneyfromyoumaysupporthertofinishschoolandchangeherlife.In(Under)thesecircumstancesyouhavegivenlovewhichislikealampinadarkplacewherelightismostneeded.（forinstance例二again，最后总结）fromothersandwealsogivelovetoothers.Sowhenyouseesomeoneindifficultyorindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogiveyourlovetohim(her).Ibelievethattherelationshipbetweenpeoplewillbeharmoniousandthatoursocietywillbeabetterplaceforustolivein.(20分)分析：第一个句子有三个错误。Generallybelievedahottopicmosttalkedabout这三个的意思是重复的。短语得分，givemorethought(stomorethoughtsshouldbegivento（我们必须，我们应该，号召性的语句）Loveisoneofour(/the)favoritetopictoday.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountriesandspeakdifferentlanguages,butloveissomethingcommontousall.Thepicturetellsusasimpletruth:loveislikealampwhichshinesmostbrightlyindarkplaces.Loveismostvaluablewhenitismostneeded.Forexample,onceIsawaforeignladygetlostinthestreet.ShecouldnotspeakChineseandnobodyseemedtobeabletohelpher.ThoughmyEnglishisnotverygoodandIamashyperson,Ithoughtsheneededhelpdesperately(绝望地).Iaskedherwhatshewanted.Shetoldmeshelostherway,soIshowedherthewaytoherhotel.Itwasasmallthingbutshethankedmeverymuch(/alot)becausemyhelpwasneededgreatly.Therefore（很关键的衔接词，连接上下文）,Myhelpwaslikealampinadarkplace.Ithinkweallshouldbelikealampinadarkplace,showingourlove,givingourhelptoothers,eventostrangers.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakethisworldaharmoniousandpeacefulone.Whenweusetheword"love"wedonotsimplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,whichisaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.Thepicturebelowillustratestherealmeaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.Infact,throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshaveregardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions.Asanexampleofthepoweroflove,weshouldrememberhowtheChinesepeopleofallnationalitiesrespondtothecalltohelpthevictimsofnaturaldisasterseveryyear.Althoughtheirincomesarestilllowbyinternationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydonothesitatetodonatewhatevertheycan-beitmoneyorgoods-tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.Moreover,theydothiswithnothoughtofgainforthemselves.Inmyopinion,thebestwaytoshowloveistohelppeoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.Weshouldalwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefamilymembersorcompletestrangers.Inthisway,wecanhelptomaketheworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,thedarkertheshadowsofsorrowbecome,themorebrightlythelampofloveshines. 97年命题不成功，99年是经典题型，是发展的阶段99Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEETYouressayshouldcoverthesethreeeffectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife（描述图表，相当于possiblereasonfortheyoursuggestionforwildlifeTHEUPSANDDOWNSOFPOPULATION15205词（背诵之第八篇文章Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidly（dramatically）inAmerica,andsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.（33）Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?Ithinkthereareseveralpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowthofpopulation(/asthehumanpopulationexpands改变了结构),moreandmorepeoplecameto(逐渐开始)livewheresomewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycannotadapttothenewenvironmentanddie.Second,althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,withthedevelopmentofindustry,thenaturalbalanceandtheecologicalenvironment（生态环境）aredestroyed.Thedeforestation(采伐森林)hasbecomemoreandmoreserious.So(锁定这一段,连接手段，必须有)someofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.（123）Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,thegovernmentsmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,thegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovenatureandprotectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepracticalactionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.（49）Wehavecometotheimportanceof…我们开始意识到…的重要性范文三（背诵的第九篇文章）ThetwochartsshowthattheincreaseintheU.S.populationhasbeenaccompaniedbyacorrespondingdeclineinthenumberofwildlifespecies.Fartoomanyspecieshavebeenlostalready.Thisposesadangertotheecologicalbalance.Asthehumanpopulationexpands,moreandmorewildanimalsarehuntedforfood,orbecausetheyarethoughttopresentathreattoman.Butstudiesshowthatoneoftheprimarycausesofthedisappearanceofwildlifeispollution,whichisoneoftheconsequencesofpopulationgrowthandeconomicdevelopment.Thismakesuswonderifmanisabletosharethisplanetinharmonywithotherlifeforms.Inmyopinion,itisimperative(迫切的)totakestepstoreversethedisturbing(令人困惑的)trendillustratedinthecharts.Onemeasurewouldbetoforbidthebuildingofcitiesinareaswherewildlifeisthreatenedwithextinction.But,moreimportantly,manmustlearntostoppollutingtheenvironment,orhehimselfwillbecomeextinct.ThetwoincreaseintheU.S.populationhasbeenaccompanied...Fartoomanyspecieshavebeenlost Thisposesadanger Asthehumanpopulationexpands,moreandmorewildanimalsarehuntedforfood...orbecause...theyarethoughtto...presentathreatto...butstudiesshowthatoneoftheprimarycauses...thismakesusotherlifeformsinharmonysharethisplanetInmyitisimperativetoInmyopinion,itisimperativetotakesteptoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthecharts.Onemeasurewouldbetoforbidthebuildingofcitiesinareaswherewildlifeisthreatenedwithextinction.But,moreimportantly,manmustlearntostoppollutingtheenvironment,orhehimselfwillbecomeextinct. disturbing令人困惑的illustratedinthechartsOnemeasurewouldbeto...But,moreimportantly,stoppollutingtheenvironmentor表示否则...theincreaseintheU.S.populationAsthehumanpopulationexpands......population...wildlife 相关同意语言点出现n ...wild...otherlife...wild..havebeenlost...disappearanceof...become...posesadanger...presentathread...isthreatened（背诵之第十篇Whatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshavetakenplaceinthepeople'sdailyexpensesinXi'anfrom1995to1999.Theexpensesonfoodhavedeclinedby30%whilethoseonclothingandrecreationhaveincreasedrespectivelyby9%and7%.ThestatisticsofriseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutcloselyrelatedtooneTherearetwofactorsaccountingforthesechanges.Developmentineconomyisanessentialoneinthefiveyears.Theincreasedincomeresultingfromeconomicgrowthplaysanimportantpartinthelessexpenseonfood.Hence,asmallpercentageoftotalincomeisenoughtocoverfoodexpense.Anotheroneisthechangesinlifestyle.Whenfoodpresentsnoworrytotheaverage,peoplebegintofocusmoreofinterestonhandsomeappearanceandhappyleisuretime.Asaresultofsuchashift,spendingonclothingandrecreationincreasesyearafteryear.Fromtheanalysesmadeabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthatpeople'slivingstandardsinXi'anhavebeenconstantlyimprovedbetween1995and1999.Withthefurthergrowthineconomyandmorechangesinlifestyle,thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthebetterdirection.Whatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshavetakenplacein..Theexpensesonfoodhavedeclinedby30%whilethoseonclothingandrecreationhaveincreasedrespectivelyby9%and7%.Thestatisticsofriseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutcloselyrelatedtooneanother.（虽然引用了若干数字但仍为粗线条描述，因为原文...increasedrespectivelyThestatisticsofriseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutcloselyrelatedtooneTherearetwofactorsaccountingfor...（还有占百分之多少的意思resultingfrom...resultingin表结果..playsanimportantpartAnotheroneis...（firstsecond）Asaresultofsuchashift...（这种变化的结果…）...increasesyearafterFormtheanalysesmadeabove,wemaycometoconclusion...thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthebetter 2对信息的看法——“猴子原则”)Timelimit:40Wordlimit:nolessthan150２、对信息的看法必须具体的描述13种一般性的评论（原因、趋势），杂论，杂议重中之重：情景+提纲+Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograveconsequences,yetthetobaccocompaniesstillclaimthattheymakeavaluablecontributiontotheworldeconomy.Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwoviewpoints.Writeanessay(包含评论,议论)tothenewspapercriticizing(评论,不一定是批评theirviewjustifyyourInyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformationprovidedinthepicturesprintedbelow.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET2. 考论证的能力。这种题的观点是来自数据、图表本身；规律性的东西——观点；数据性的东西——论证支持。Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethatcigarettesmokinghascausedseriousproblems.Butthetobaccocompaniesinsist（坚持主张）thattheycontributegreatlytotheworldeconomybypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsofworkers.Personally,Ibelievethatcigaretteproductionandconsumptionthreatenstodomoreharmthangood.Firstly,smokingisresponsiblefor（是造成什么的原因）manyfataldiseasessuchaslungcancer,heartdiseasesandsoon.Accordingtothesurvey,tobaccoconsumersaccountforabout20%oftheworldpopulation,andamongthem,threemillionpeoplediefromsmoking-relateddiseaseseveryyear.Thefactthattheoutputoftobaccoproductionisreducedfrom143.64billionpoundsin1994to142billionpoundsin1995alsosuggeststhatpeoplehavecometorealizethenegativeeffectsofsmoking.Secondly,tobaccoconsumptionisextremelywastefulofmoney.Asisindicatedinthepictures,200billionUSdollarsislostduetosmokingeachyear.Obviously,thetotallossofmoneyaroundtheglobesubstantiallyexceeds(大大超过thegainintheindustry.Inconclusion,astheeconomicdevelopmentaimsatmakingourlifebetter,wecannotsacrificeourhealthforshort-termfinancialbenefits.Ifwehavetospendmoreandmoremoneyprovidingmedicalservicesforthosewhosufferfromsmoking-relatedillnesses,thenotionofpromotingeconomyviatobaccoproductionisnotjustifiable.Itishightimethatwefoughtforthetotaltobaccoban.Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreebypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsof...threatenstodomoreharmthangood（来源于课文bigdams，任何一个句子都要有句Accordingtothesurvey(/diagram),accountfor占几分之几andamongThefact..alsosuggeststhat...在这幅画里面有三个人，每一个人都在作不同的事情这一isreducedfromhavecometorealize...（逐渐意识到thenegativeeffectsofAsisindicatedinthepicture(Accordingtothesurvey)substantiallyexceedsthegainintheindustryInthenotionof...isnotjustifiableItishightimethat Writeanessaydiscussing(讨论thetwooppositeopinionsgivenbelowgivebothsomereasons,andmakeyourcommentsorsuggestions.TherearetwomainopinionsconcerningthedevelopmentofprivatecarsinChina:Onemaintainsthattheirfreedevelopmentshouldbeencouraged,whiletheotherarguesthatitmustbesternlyrestricted.Timelimit:40Wordlimit:about200YouressaymustbewrittenclearlyonANSWERSHEET（第十二篇之背诵范文ShouldthedevelopmentofprivatecarsbeencouragedorrestrictedinChina?Tojudgethisissue,weshouldlookatthreeaspects:Whataretheadvantagesofprivatecars;whataretheirdisadvantages;andisChinareadyforthefreedevelopmentofprivatecars?Firstofall,theprivatecarisasymboloffreedom.Itenablesanindividualorafamilytotravelanywhereandatanytime,withoutrelyingonpublictransport.Itisconvenientforshoppingandtransportingchildrentoandfromschool.Moreover,inthecaseofillness,itcancarryitsownerorothersickpersontohospitalwithoutdelay.However,toomanyprivatecarscanleadtotrafficjams,thusslowingdownlifeandworkratherthanspeedingitup.Inaddition,automobilesaremajorpollutersoftheatmosphere.And,lastbutnotleast,themorecarsthereareontheroads,themoretrafficaccidentsoccur.ItseemstomethatChina,atitspresentstageofdevelopment,shouldrestrictthenumberofprivatecars.Foronething,itwouldbeawasteofresourcestobuildahugeautomobileindustryatatimewhenonlyafewpeoplecanaffordtobuycars.Foranother,thecountrymustfirstbringpollutionundercontrolbeforeaddingtotheproblemwithmorecars.ShouldthedevelopmentofprivatecarsbeencouragedorrestrictedinChina?Firstofall,theprivatecarisasymbolof However,toomanyprivatecarsleadtotrafficjams,ItseemstomethatChina,atitspresentstageofdevelopment,shouldrestrictthenumberofprivatescars....Title:HowtoImproveOrReformOurCurrentCollegeEntranceExaminationTimelimit:40Wordlimit:about200YouressayshouldbewrittenclearlyonANSWERSHEETYouressayshouldbebasedontheinformationgiven30040%以下，多数考革现行的高考制度?我的意见是…。（马上看成三点：123建议措施（背诵之第十三篇Statisticsshowthatnomorethan40%ofpeoplewhotakethecollegeentranceexamspass.Becauseacollegeeducationisregardedasthekeytoasuccessfulcareer,thisputsenormouspressureontheapplicants.Italsocausessocialproblems,asthosewhofailconsiderthattheyhavedisgracedtheirfamilies.Itseemstomethattheexamsareunfair,forthreereasons:First,applicantswithdifferentabilitiesarefacedwiththesametypeofexampaper,second,theresultsofamerethreedaysofexaminationaffecttheapplicant'swholefuture;andthird,applicantswhocanaffordprivatetutorsusuallyscorehighermarksthanthosewhoarepoorer,butperhapsmoreintelligent.Toimprovethesystemofcollegeentranceexams,Isuggestthefollowingsteps:theexampapersshouldbegradedtotakeintoaccountthedifferentlevelsofabilityandthedifferentbackgroundsoftheapplicants;inadditiontotheactualexam,acompleteassessmentoftheapplicant'seducationalachievementsshouldbemade;andtutoringinexaminationtechniquesshouldbemadeavailabletoall.PerhapsthemostinterestingpersonIhaveevermetisanItalianprofessorofphilosophywhoteachesattheUniversityofPisa.AlthoughIlastmetthismaneightyearsago,Ihavenotforgottenhisspecialqualities.Firstofall,Iwasimpressedfromthebeginningbyhisdevotiontoteaching.Becausehislectureswerealwayswell=preparedandclearlydelivered,studentsalwaysswarmedintohisclassroom.Hisfollowersalsoappreciatedthefactthathebelievedinwhathetaughtandthathewasalwaysstimulating.(引人入胜的)Furthermorehecouldbecountedonineveryclasssessiontoexplainhisideasinanimaginativeway,introducingsu