高考英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样课件

高考英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样课件第一页，共15页。高考作文

第一页第二页，共15页。

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OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandmylittlesisterandArFufollowed.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysisterwalkedtotheriverandArFufollowedher. Shesawabeautifulfloweronthebankoftheriver,shewantedtopickit.Shefellintotheriver.WhenArFusawthat,itbarkedandjumpedintotheriverquickly.

Oneday,followedbymylittle

sisterandArFu,myparentswenttoworkinthefields.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysister,withnothingtodo,walkedtotheriversidenearbywithArFu. Atthesightofabeautifulflowerontheriverbank,shewantedtopickit.However,shefellintotheriver.SeeingthatArFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterassoonaspossible.2_________________________________________________________________________________________第二页第三页，共15页。书面表达评分标准：

北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准情景作文一、评分原则：本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。词汇和句式的多样性第三页第四页，共15页。(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with/for第四页第五页，共15页。我花了50块钱买这本字典。Spend…on/inItcosts/takes…toPay…for…Chargesb…for…Iwascharged$50forthedictionary.第五页第六页，共15页。我会尽我所能去帮助他。

do/trymybestdoeverythingIcan

doallthatIcan

dowhat/whateverIcan

Iwilltohelphim.I’llhelphimasmuchaspossible.第六页第七页，共15页。高考经典句型结构:1.It’syearssinceIworkedinBeijing.2.Itwon’tbelongbeforeyougetwell.3.ItwasnotuntilyoutoldmethatIrealizedmymistake.4.NotuntilyoutoldmedidIrealizemymistake.5.Itissaidthat

afirebrokeoutlastnight.6.Therealwaysexistbiggapsbetweendreamsandrealities.7.Shewas

soexcitedthatsheburstintotears.8.Workhard,andyouaresuretowin.第七页第八页，共15页。Hesatthere,____________（手里拿着书）。

____________

（eyes/closed）。

____________（背着书包）。____________

（nothing/todo)。

第八页第九页，共15页。Thereisagirl.Sheissittingbetweenus.

2.Thisisabook.Thebookwasboughtyesterday.

Thereisagirl

whoissittingbetweenus.Thisisabookwhichwasboughtyesterday.Rewritefollowingsentences第九页第十页，共15页。3.走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友.Whilehewaswalkinginthestreet,hemetanoldfriend.4._________________,thecitylooksbeautiful.Walkinginthestreet从天空中看，Whenitisseenfromthesky,thecitylooksbeautiful.Seenfromthesky第十页第十一页，共15页。由于不知道他的电话，他无法与Tom取得联系。Notknowinghistelephonenumber,hecan’tgetintouchwithTom.第十一页第十二页，共15页。Rewritethefollowingpassage：Theywentforawalkonthestreet.Theysawtheoldman.Hewasknockeddownbyacar.Thecarwaspassingby.第十二页第十三页，共15页。readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）请你根据以下四幅图(总分20)写一篇100词左右的短文。