MyNewBrother读后续写课件-高三英语二轮专题复习

MyNewBrotherContinuationWritingShaoxingYangmingHighSchoolYaoJiaqiAnalyzethetextReadthetextandfindoutitsmainideaand“my”emotions.climaxendingKNOWNUNKNOWNReadformainideaandemotionsunwillingreluctantP1:IwasunwillingtobeonstagewithmyadoptedbrotherHenry.emotionsmainideaAnalyzethetextunwilling/reluctanthurt/wronged

confusedembarrassedhelplessclimaxendingKNOWNUNKNOWNReadformainideaandemotionsunwillingreluctant?embarrassedhelplesshurtwronged

P2:IwasmisunderstoodbymymomforplayingjokesonHenrydeliberately.P4:Whileonstage,Irealizedmyskirtwasabouttodropbecausethedrawstringgotloose.P1:Iwasunwilling

tobeonstagewithmyadoptedbrotherHenry.confusedP3:Icouldn’tunderstandwhyHenrywasabsorbedinropeknots.emotionsmainideaDesigntheplot

Rightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully.WhatdidHenrydo?linking1ReadforcluesWhatcanweinferfromthefollowingsentence?Henryhadtheabilitytotiethedrawstringon“my”skirt.Designtheplot

Rightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully.WhatdidHenrydo?HowdidIfeel?

linking2linking1linking3HowdidIshowgratitude?WhatwasHenry’sresponse?What’sthetheme?surprised,relieved,...helpmetiemydrawstringsuccessful,smooth,...expressthanks,hughimtightly,...hugback,smile,nobigdeal,...Howwastheperformance?ReadforthemeTip1EchothetextChange:unwilling→acceptable2｜复现关键词块(para.2)Henrywasstealingmymother'slove.Hewasruiningmylife.e.g.Henrywas______stealingmymother'slove___ruiningmylife.Instead,he__________________________________________.itwon’tbe

sobadtoacceptmynewbrotherneithernorusedhisownpowertobringnewvigorintomylifeCallback:

stealmymother’slove;ruinmylife3｜形成对比意识e.g.Itwas

atthismoment

thatIrealized

familiesare____________________________(不是由血缘关系而是由爱所联结的).e.g.Itdawnedonmethat

thestringknot

ontheskirt

would

gountied,

__________________________andnever(但是家庭的结永远不会解开).Readforthemenotbondedbybloodbutbylovebut

thefamilyknotwouldn’tContrast:

not...but...Example1:Henry在台上的及时帮助Ver.1.0｜Herushedtohelpme.

Ver.2.0｜Sentencepattern:Sb.did1,did2,anddid3.(para.4)mymomtookmeasideandsaidinalowvoice.

Inoddedbutsighed.他毫不犹豫地快速靠近我，弯下腰/俯身蹲下来，为我系了一个牢固又漂亮的蝴蝶结。“搞定。”他悄声说道。Withoutasecondthought,he______________________,_____________________________and_________________________.“Nailedit.”Hewhispered.

approachedmequicklybentdown/droppedtoacrouchAccumulatethelanguagetiedabeautifulfirmbowknotTip2SplittheactionExample2:演出成功Ver.1.0｜Theshowwasahugesuccess.Ver.2.0｜侧面描写观众反应(para.4)Myheartbeatwildly.IforgotmyannoyanceatHenryforawhile.→Myheartbeatingwildly,IforgotmyannoyanceatHenryforawhile.

（独立主格结构）演出一结束，观众就投来赞许的目光，雷鸣般的掌声回荡在大厅周围。Themomenttheshowwasover,theaudiencecastapprovingglancesat

us,__________________________________________aroundthehall.AccumulatethelanguageTip3Adddetaileddescriptionfromdifferentperspectivesashower/stormofthunderousapplauseechoingExample3:我向Henry真心道谢Ver.1.0｜“Thankyou,Henry.”Isaidsincerely.Ver.2.0｜with复合结构/虚拟语气(para.4)WithHenryinvolved,itdidn'tseemsospecialanymore.

Ifonlysomeonecouldhelpmeout.e.g.我的声音颤抖着，脸发烫。我不得不承认，要不是有他的帮助/要是没有他出色的打结技术，我就不会鼓起勇气站在舞台上。Myvoicetrembled__________________________.Ihadtoadmitthat,

___________________________________________________________,I__________________________________tostandonthestage.butforhistimelyhelp/withouthiswonderfulknottingskillsAccumulatethelanguageTip4Fillwithadvancedstructureswouldn’thavepluckedupthecouragewithmyfaceburningWhatmakesagoodcontinuationwriting?SummarizeandappreciateSummarizeandappreciateRightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.Withoutasecondthought,heapproachedmequickly,droppedtoacrouch,andtiedabeautifulfirmbowknot.

“Nailedit.”Hewhispered.Shockedbywhathehaddone,Ifeltsomethingdeepinmymindbegantochange.Itseemedasifhiskinddeedshadmeltedmyheart.ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,Ifeltashamedofmyself.WhileIwaslostinthought,themusictookmebacktoreality.Weedgedtothestageandstartedourperformance.Themomenttheshowwasover,theaudiencecastapprovingglancesatus,astormofthunderousapplauseechoingaroundthehall.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully."Thank...you,Henry."Myvoicetrembledwithmyfaceburning.Ihadtoadmitthat,butforhistimelyhelp,Iwouldn’thavepluckedupmycouragetostandonthestage.Withouthiswonderfulknottingskills,theperformancewouldhavebeenquitedifferent.Henrypattedmegentlyontheshoulder,

anenormousgrinflashingacrosshisface,"Notaproblem.

Wearefamily,aren'twe?"

Tearsblurredmyeyes,

wor