读后续写默写课件 高三英语二轮复习

读后续写

默写清单读后续写情感描写1.喜乐：Katelaughed,happinessandhopebubbling(冒泡)withher.凯特笑了，幸福和希望围绕着她2.愤怒:Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的眼睛瞪着我。3.悲伤

（三选一）Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。2.IfeltlikeIwasfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。4.害怕:Myheartseemedtojumpoutofmythroat,andmylegsweretooweaktostand.我的心似乎从喉咙里跳了出来，我的腿太虚弱了，站不起来.5.惊讶:Theshockofthenewsquitetookmybreathaway.这消息的震惊使我大吃一惊。6.后悔:Shamehitting,thewomankeptsilent,havingnocouragetolookherhusbandintheeye.

羞耻感袭来，女人保持沉默，没有勇气直视丈夫的眼睛。7.烦恼:Helookedlikeanantonahotpot.他看起来像火锅上的蚂蚁。8.希望：Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametohim.在这黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个好主意。9.感谢：Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。10.Iswollowedtheemotiondownmythroatandmetherpaleblueeyes.我控制住我的情绪，看着她灰蓝色的眼睛。描写与head有关的动作noddedone’shead点头shookone’shead摇头描写与arm（手臂）有关的动作wavedhisarms.挥手grabbedherleftarm抓住左臂puthisarmsaroundher他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作heldone'shand抓住某人的手/shookhandswith与…握手/(handinhand手拉手)raisedone'shand举手/heldoutone'shand伸出手/tookone'shand牵某人的手tookout取出/拿出Herhandsshook/trembled她的手颤抖着描写与shoulder（肩膀）有关的动作lookedoverone'sshoulders回头看/shruggedone'sshoulders耸肩/tapped/pattedsb.ontheshoulder拍某人的肩膀描写与leg（腿）有关的动作herlegstrembled她的腿颤抖着draggedone'sheavylegs拖着沉重的双腿描写“说”这一动作温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说saidgently/added/insisted/sobbed/whispered描写“看”这一动作词：saw看见/spotted发现recognized认出observedsbdoing/dosth注意到某人做了/做过短语:staredat盯着看glaredat怒视glancedat瞥一眼带“eye”的表达：lookedsbintheeye直视某人的眼睛带“sight”的表达看得见：sb/sthbeinmysight/cameintomysight/sb.caughtsightofsth看不见：sb/sthbeoutofsight/fadedaway哭/笑：burstintotears/laughter(大哭/大笑)

couldn’thelpcrying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)

tearswelledupintheeyes眼泪涌出动作链描写Thekids

rushed

excitedlytothelake,

tookoff

theirclothesand

jumpedinto

thewater.孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。She

dashed

forward,

kneltdown

and

gathered

herson

into

herarmstightly.她向前冲过去，跪下来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里。Thesinger

anxiouslyglancedat

theaudience,

took

adeepbreathandbeganto

sing.歌手紧张地瞥了眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。Theoldmansatunderthesunset,

reading

thenewspaperand

listening

totheradio.老人坐在夕阳下，看报纸，听广播。Deeplymoved

bythestory,thechildrenbeganto

cry.深深地被这个故事打动，孩子们开始哭了起来Havingtoldthetruth,shewasinrelief.

说出真相后，她心里轻松了很多。Todistractthewolf,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.为了分散狼的注意力，我们往远处丢了一片面包。Touchedbythebeautifulsceneoutside,theCorgirushedintothesnow,barkingandjumping.被外面美丽的景色所打动，这只柯基快乐地冲进雪里，又叫又跳。Tearswellinguphiseyes,hethankedthepolicewithatremblingvoice.泪如泉涌，他颤抖着声音，感谢警察。Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,myspiritssank.

眼里满含着悔恨的泪水，我的情绪消沉。Faceblushingscarlet,heapologizedforwhathehaddone.满脸通红，他为他做的事情道歉。Herheartburning/filledwithfrustration,sheapologizedforwhatshehaddone.

她的心充满沮丧，她为她做的事情道歉。1.消极情绪：Afeelingofnervousnesssweptoverme.

一种紧张的感觉朝我席卷而来。IfeltIwasfloatinginanoceanofanxiety.我感觉我飘在焦虑的海洋中。2.动作描写：Aninnervoicetoldmethat

内心的声音告诉我...

3.转折（个人努力或借助外界）：Withouthesitation/Withouteventhinking,Ididsth

毫不犹豫，我做了某事。4.转机：AndIsaw/feltaglimmerofhope我看到一丝希望5.失望：Unfortunately,whatIdidwasinvain/

withoutsuccess

/nouse.Iwasunsurewhattodonext.不幸的是，我所做的事是徒劳无功的，我不知道接下来该如何做。6.新法：Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,itsuddenlyoccurredtomethat

从句.在这黑暗和无助的时刻，我突然想到一个主意：八部创意法7.结果：感动：1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.不用说，他们被深深地感动了，尤其是Bernard最终找到了为家里赚钱的方法。2.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords.Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.

一瞬间，我的眼睛涌出泪水，我感动得说不出话来。我觉得如此温暖以至于我觉得我的胸膛有9个太阳。3.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears.我感激地点着头，眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀。4.Stunnedandmoved,Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.惊讶又感动，我盯着这个笔记，为我之前所有人都漠不关心的想法感到一阵愧疚。

八部创意法7.结果：notlongafterthat,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

从句.不久,...

WiththeaidofTom,Iapproachedtheproblemfinally.在Tom的帮助下，我最终解决了这个问题。Tomysurprise(delight),itturnedoutthat

从句令我吃惊的是，结局是....欣慰：Tohisrelief,..

使他欣慰的/放心的是

Awaveofrelieffloodedoverme.我感到如释重负。感谢：Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.眼睛中充满泪水，她表达了诚挚的感谢。MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenoughandeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.MollyandShawn在周二见面了，她说她非常感谢他及每一个帮助了她的人。八部创意法8.升华1.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.是爱让世界运转。Bernard也在他小小的内心世界深深地感受到了。2.Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”我决定传递爱给其他人。就像谚语所说的：“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。3.Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindnessthatMexicanfamilyofferedme.从那一天开始，每一次我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出援手，希望将Mexiacn一家提供给我的善意传递。4.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.有时候，小小的善行可能会足够有力，会有很大不同。

八部创意法第一段：

1.一种紧张的感觉席卷而来。1.Afeelingofnervousnessfloodedoverme.

【不同的文本，到底是什么感受要根据上文决定，记住不同的情绪词】2.我的手颤抖着，心脏似乎要从喉咙里跳出来。

2.Myhandstrembledandmyheartseemedtojumpoutofmythroat.3.毫不犹豫，我又按了一次琴键。3.Withouthesitation,Ipressedthekeyagain.4.不幸的是，我所做的事是徒劳无功的。我不知道接下来该怎么做了。4.Unfortunately,whatIdidwasinvainandIhadnoideawhattodonext.5.在这黑暗而无助的时刻，我突然想到我可以向老太太寻求帮助。5.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametomethatIcouldaskhelpfromtheoldlady.6.老太太拍了拍我的肩膀，温和地说道“不要担心，我们肯定可以成功的（makeit）。在她的帮助下我成功地解决了问题。6.Theoldladypattedmeonmyshoulderandsaidgently:“don’tworry.Wewillmakeit.”Withtheaidofher,weapproachedtheproblemsuccessfully.”

【看第二段开头，或许问题没有解决，那么就不需要写这一步，留到第二段写】

【注意：如果问题没有解决，但事情肯定也有了转机，可以换成语言描写、动作描写。如：6.她看着我的眼睛，温和地对我说：“我们再试试其他的办法”6.Shelookedmeinmyeyesandsaidgently:“Let’stryotherways.”】7.一种放松的感觉席卷而来。Afeelingofreliefsweptoverme.

第二段：1.动作描写2.情绪描写3.对话描写4.总结：这是一段多么令人难忘的经历啊。WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad.续写赏析WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.①So,theywentout,headedto

thelocalsupermarketandboughtmaterialsincludingabagofcornand

somespecialbagsforpopcorntogether.

②Agreatsenseofexpectationwellingupintheirhearts,they

carefullyopenedpopcornmachineandbegantomakepopcorn.③Havingmadetheporpcon,whichsmeltsweetanddelicious,theyputitinthespecialbags.Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard’shome,hopebubblingwiththem.TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcorn.:Bernardcouldgodoortodoortosellpopcorn.④Hearingtheidea,Bernardandhisparents

wereverygrateful,te