【课件】Unit+3Reading+for+Writing+课件人教版必修第一册

SportsandFitnessLesson

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ReadingforWriting——

Write

a

page

in

a

wellness

bookLearningobjectivesYouareexpectedtobeclearaboutKayla’schangeandexperience.learnhow

to

make

comparisons

appropriately.writeapageforaclasswellnessbook

following

Kayla’s

sample.SlimmerVShealthierPre-readingPre-readingDoyouthinkyouarefit?wellnessphysicalhealthmentalhealthThestudentsexchangeideasabouthealthandfitnessinawellnessbook.1.WhatproblemdidKaylahaveinthepast?ShesparednoeffortstoloseweightandwantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTV.2.Whatdoesthesentence“Ialmostwentbananas”mean?Itmeansshenearlywentcrazy.3.Whatmadeherchangeherthinking?Shereadanarticlewhichtellspeopletobefitinsteadofcaringtoomuchaboutone’sweight.4.Whatdidshedotokeepfitlater?Shestartedthinkingaboutfitnessandaddedhealthyfoodstohermeals.ReadingforgistGoing

positivethepastthepresentturningpointworryworryactionactionAmIfat？AmIfit？positiveandhappyworried，anxious,madgobananas--gomad/crazythenfinallymoodmoodReadingforstructureandimportantdetailsItsaystoeatnormallyforfivedaysofaweek,butonlyeatverylittleontheothertwodays.ProblemWeightandlooksfitnessTurningpointReadanarticlethatsaid…ThepastThepresentActionsMoodIalmostwentbananasIbecomebothhappierandhealthierWorriedaboutmyweightTriedeverynewdietCutoutthefoodComparedmyselfwith…

lookedforthings…wrongwithRanDo30push-upsAddedhealthyfoodtomymealsMadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself

PhysicalhealthMentalhealthReadingforstructure1.Matchthemainideaofeachparagraph?Para.1changesinthinkingandactionsPara.2improvementinwellnessPara.3generalstatementoftheproblem2.HowdoesKaylashowherpositivechanges?

A.bygivingexamples

B.byaskingquestionsC.bymakingacomparisonD.bylistingsomedata.usefulexpressionstomakecomparisonsbut/though/althoughhowever,incontrast，onthecontrary,ontheotherhand，bedifferentfrom

...underlinethewordsandphrasesusedtomakethecomparisonmakesuchadifferencestartedthinkingaboutratherthaninsteadofstoppedInsteadReadingfor

languagefeaturesbutChoosetheproperwordsorphrasestoexpressthesamemeaningIusedtodrivetowork.NowIstarttowalktowork.Instead,ratherthan,insteadofNowIstarttowalktowork______________drivetowork.NowIstarttowalktowork______________drivingtowork.Idon’tdrivetowork.___________,Istarttowalktowork.ratherthaninsteadofInsteadratheradv.相当，有点儿（修饰动词）shehurtherlegratherbadly.她的腿伤的相当严重。We'reratherhopingyou'dfinishitbyFriday.我们希望你周五之前完成它。ratherthan而不是①复合介词结构，相当于insteadofIwouldlikeatearatherthancoffee.我想要一杯茶而不是一杯咖啡。②句中连接并列结构，相当于andnotHewashappy

ratherthan

sad.woulddo...ratherthando...宁愿做某事(而不愿做某事)Iwouldfailratherthangiveup我宁愿失败也不愿放弃。5W1HWhat(话题+体裁）ApageinawellnessbookWho（谁写？给谁写？/作者+读者）I

(writetoawellnessbook)Why（为什么写/写作目的）tosharemyexperienceofheathandfitnessWhen

（什么时候/时态）时态：一般过去时Where（什么地点）无

How

（怎么写）显性要素：myexperienceofheathandfitness

隐性要素：(对比过去和现在）1问题（担忧），行为，心情3转折点（为什么要改变）2现在行为的改变，心情（结果）ProblemIwantedtobehealthierandstrongerTurningpointThepast(whatyouusedtodo)Thepresent(whatyoudonow)ActionsIusedtoeatfastfoodalot.Iusedtogotobedlateandsleeplate.1.Ihavemorevegetablesateachmeal.2.Igotobedbefore11andneversleeplate.MoodIfelttiredandsleepyIfeelmoreenergeticandfit.Onepossibleversion:BeHealthierIamLiHua,ahighschoolstudent.Iwantedtobehealthierandstronger.EverytimeIclimbedstairs,Ifelttiredandbreathless.Whatwasworse,Ialwaysfeltsleepyduringclass.Ihavedecidedtochange.Forexample,Iusedtoeatfastfoodsooften,butnowIaddmorefruitandvegetablestomydieteveryday.Insteadofsleepinglate,Igetupearlyandgojoggingfor30minuteseverymorning.Now,Ibecomemuchstrongerandhealthier,andIfeelbetteraboutmyselftoo.Iammoreconfidenttomakenewfriendsandtrynewthings.Problem

Actions/changes

Results/moodbut

usedtoInsteadof

1.健康书常见句式：Summaryofhowtowriteawellnessbook1.Itisanhonorformetosharemyfavoritesportwithyou,2.Itmakesmefeelrelaxedplayingwithmyfriends.3.Itmakesmeridmyselfofstresswhileplayingwithmyfriends.4.Moreover,itprovidesmeavaluablechancetocommunicatewithothers.5.Iweeattoolittleortoomuch,orifwechoosethewrongfood,wemaybecomesick.6.Wecandosomethingtochangethepoorsituation.ProblemTurningpointThepastThepresentActionsusedto...becameweakerandweaker/...caughtacold/...wasinlowspiritsshowednointerestin...evenfounditdifficultto......decideto.../makealistof...starttotakejogging/...rath