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应用文写作之建议信Howtowriteapersuasiveletterofadvice应用文写作之建议信Howtowriteapersua第二节：书面表达（满分25分)假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：

1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。

2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等3．祝愿他学习取得进步。

注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。第二节：书面表达（满分25分)Dear

Mike,

I

am

glad

to

receive

your

email

asking

for

my

advice

on

how

to

improve

your

Chinese

and

I

understand

your

problem.

Here

is

my

advice

for

improving

your

Chinese.

Firstly,

speak

Chinese

more,

both

in

and

out

of

class.

Try

your

best

to

com-municate

with

your

classmates

in

Chinese.

Don’t

be

afraid

of

making

mistakes.

I

think

the

more

you

speak,

the

better

your

Chinese

will

be.

Secondly,

in

order

to

improve

your

listening,

pay

more

attention

to

TV

hosts

when

you

are

watching

TV

at

home.

I’m

sure

you

will

make

great

progress

soonerorlater.In

conclusion,

I

wish

you

every

success

with

your

studies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdviceBeginning:WritingpurposeMainbody:Advice/suggestionsEnding:Wishes/wordsforencouragementDear

Mike,

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假设你是李华，得知你的老师Mr.Huang喜欢抽烟，并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯。请你给他写一封信，要点如下：1.担忧老师的身体健康，建议老师戒烟。

2.列出吸烟的危害：吸烟容易引发心脏病等3．祝愿他早日戒烟成功。

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