2019中考英语作文突破指导课件

中考书面表达突破新乡市一中中考书面表达突破新乡市一中11听力<152单项-83完形104阅读-255词语<76补全-57作文-20所剩5-10分钟，检查：分值高到低、难到易。中考英语大致时间分配——建议1听力<15中考英语大致时间分配——建议2一、题型特点：书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大：06年Non-smokingDay;07年“校园节约从我做起”;到09年的“APersonIwillneverforget”，10年_____isfun一、题型特点：3二、考查形式（体裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；二、考查形式（体裁）：4三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。影响作文分数的因素：1题目要求、内容要点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清晰；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整洁度；2010年河南中考评分标准：三、中考评分标准：影响作文分数的因素：2010年河南中考评分5四、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。四、做题步骤：6五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。五、作文一般框架：7满分作文标准：第一档：（15~13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）满分作文标准：第一档：（15~13分）8六、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;

Second,share…with…;

Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime——affectstudy;

Ontheotherhand,notsafe——stolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.六、如何列提纲：9七、如何列提纲：例2：计划安排型作文——谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom…,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;

Secondly,visittouristattractions;

Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervocation.)七、如何列提纲：10八、常见的作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes! Yours,

Lucy

八、常见的作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,11a书信开头常用语

Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?…/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?

I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…

I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...

Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.

Thankyouforinvitingmeto….a书信开头常用语Iamverygladtore12b书信结尾常用语

Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.b书信结尾常用语Bestwishes(to/for13二、口头通知常见写作模板：呼语及开场白部分：Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.正文部分：Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoattendit.Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes.Pleaselistencarefullyandwe’llhaveadiscussioningroups.Pleasecomeontimeanddon’tbelate.结束语部分：Pleasecomeandjoininit.Everybodyiswelcometoattendit.Ihopeyou’llhaveanicetimehere.That’sall.Thankyou.二、口头通知常见写作模板：14八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：2图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表达个人看法）

Asastudent,Iagreeto…八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：2图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或153说明利弊型Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…

However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…

Inmyopinion,个人观点…3说明利弊型Nowadays…isbec164不同观点型

Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.

Somebelieve…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…

Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…

Asforme,个人观点…4不同观点型Wemadeasurvey175解决问题型

Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.

Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…

Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.5解决问题型Recently,the…prob18九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToone’ssurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…inaword/inall九、常用过渡性词语19议论文常用连接词 表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示递进的：besides;what’smore;what’sworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;(forthereasonthat…);表示结果的：so;asaresult;so…that…;therefore;表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat…;(inorder)to…;for…;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;议论文常用连接词 20议论文常用连接词 表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;议论文常用连接词 21议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

议论文常用连接词 22议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

议论文常用连接词 23十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todo…Sb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb.)tov…It’snice/kindofsb.tov..It’stimeforsb.todosth.It’sawasteoftimeto…It’s…years/dayssincesb.+vedIt’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingIt’sapitythat…It’sanhonorto… 十、作文万能句式24十、作文万能句式I’m/We’renotallowedto…I’mafraidofmakingmistakes…Therebe…doing…Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…sthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthat…Itseems(im)possibletov…Itissaidthat…Asthesayinggoes,……and….aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetween…and… 十、作文万能句式25十、作文万能句式Ihavemadeupmymindto…Iamsurethat…Iamnotsurewhether/if…Iwouldrather….than…Itdoesn’tmatterif…Thankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter. 十、作文万能句式26十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learn…from…beproudof/takepridein…playanimportant/activepart/rolein…agreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelp(反义：withoutone’shelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentionto…takegoodcareof…makefriendswith…geton/alongwellwith…十一、作文万能短语27十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesby…graduatefrom…lookingbacktothepastthreeyears,…（用现在完成时态）

passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeupone’smindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon十一、作文万能短语28十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth. have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followone’sadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasic…skillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcan’twaittodo十一、作文万能短语29十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowith…workout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsof…athomeandabroadoneof…befullof…learnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov…十一、作文万能短语30十一、作文万能短语keep(on)tryingworryabout…/beworriedabout…inone’sspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpotherssaythankyouto…havefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelpbepopularwith…sharesth.withsb.knowlittle/muchabout…十一、作文万能短语31十一、作文万能短语do/tryone’sbesttov…be/feelsorryfor…helpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.in/duringclassbefore/afterclassteachsb.todosth.十一、作文万能短语32*词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于 100词。不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被 视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真 实信息。*33四、Languageerrorsinwriting

纠错四、Languageerrorsinwriting

纠34１.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudyingEnglish.

Itbadforourhealth.

IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.１.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudying352.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.

IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.

Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.2.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwa36Myfavoritesportisrun.

Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.

Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrun.Myfa373.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.

IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.3.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.Iw384.副词位置错误Iverythankher.

Iverylikefootball.

Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.4.副词位置错误Iverythankher.Ith395.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbody.

Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.

They

are

goodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.5.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbo406.缺介词或介词错误IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.

Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.

IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhometohelpme.6.缺介词或介词错误Ithankhimverymu41Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其他错误Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitin42It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）It’sgoodformyhealth.Noto43Let’spractise.Let’spractise.44Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）Findoutthemistakesinthef456.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）6.Iwillrememberedthatday4610.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibec4716.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）16.Weplayedsnowinfrontof4822.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.22.Heencouragedmetolookf49Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,soDuringthewinterholiday501.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯

…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersor51五、整洁性

1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。五、整洁性1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。524规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写4规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写532019中考英语作文突破指导ppt课件542019中考英语作文突破指导ppt课件55以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；六、实战训练以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字56Pre-writing1.审：2.定：“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价Pre-writing2.定：“MyEnglishTea57

befashionable

lovestudents,andcareaboutthestudents

belivelyandinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎befashionablelovest58MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing

4.连：连词成句，连句成篇MyEnglishTeacherWriting

4.连：59复写Rewriting：5、美——润色丰富要点；

6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。复写Rewriting：6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误60WritingMyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①She

isveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing612019中考英语作文突破指导ppt课件62homeworkhomework63请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内容要点如下：1． 谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2． 在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3． 对学生要求严格，4． 深爱学生。5． 谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。6． 你的感受及愿望。参考词语：1.graduatefromauniversity,大学毕业2.bestrictwith…,对……严格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人64三段式：首段：正文：结尾：谭老师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望三段式：谭老师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望65列出7个内容要点：

1）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。Helooksserious.He’sstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbui