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AALesson3Jack案例1：ThetwochartsprovideinformationaboutthenumberofmarriagesanddivorcesintheUSfrom1970to2000,andshowthemaritalstatusofadultAmericansin1970and2000.Overall,therewasageneraldecreaseinthenumberofpeoplewhoweremarriedduringtheperiods.However,thedivorcesexperiencedfluctuationsandfinallyfellbacktothebeginning.Inaddition,thefigureofpeoplewhoweresinglerosein2000.案例2：ThebarchartsindicatethechangesinAmericanmarriagesanddivorcesratios,aswellasmaritalstatusfrom1970to2000.Overall,lessAmericanadultschosetomarryin2000comparedwiththeyear1970,whilethedivorceratedidnotchange.Meanwhile,thepercentageofAmericanswhomarriedconstantlyaccountedforthelargestpartinthesetwoyears.ThetwochartsprovideinformationaboutthenumberofmarriagesanddivorcesintheUSfrom1970to2000,andshowthemaritalstatusofadultAmericansin1970and2000.Overall,therewasageneraldecreaseinthenumberofpeoplewhoweremarriedduringtheperiods.However,thedivorcesexperiencedfluctuationsandfinallyfellbacktothebeginning.Inaddition,thefigureofpeoplewhoweresingle（figureforthosesinglepeople）rosein2000.ThebarchartsindicatethechangesinAmericanmarriagesanddivorcesratios,aswellasmaritalstatus（缺少冠词）from1970to2000.Overall,lessAmericanadultschosetomarryin2000comparedwiththeyear1970（thanin2000）,whilethedivorceratedidnotchange.Meanwhile,thepercentageofAmericanswhomarriedconstantlyaccountedforthelargestpartinthesetwoyears.描述：第一幅图描述的是成年人述的是成年人在和年婚IntroductionandThefirstbarchartshowschangesinthenumbermarriagesanddivorcesintheUSA,andthesecondchartshowsfiguresforthemaritalstatusofAmericanadultsin1970and2000.ItisclearthatthenumberofmarriedpeoplewashigherthanthatofthedivorcedintheUSAfrom1970to2000andthemajorityofadultAmericansweremarriedinbothOvertheentiretimeperiodthenumberofenquiriestoTouristInformationOfficemadein surpassedthatby ephoneandmail/letterrespectively.Thenumberofenquiresmadeby ephonewitnessedagradualdecreasebetweenJanuaryandFebruarybeforeincreasinginMarch.Theenquirynumbermadebymailandletterdeclinedwhilethatin during6months.OvertheentiretimeperiodthenumberofenquiriestoTouristInformationOfficemadein surpassedthatby ephoneandmail/letterrespectively.Thenumberofenquiresmadeby ephonewitnessedagradualdecreasebetweenJanuaryandFebruarybeforeincreasinginMarch.Theenquirynumbermadebymailandletterdeclinedwhilethatin during6months. IntroductionandThislinegraphillustrateshowtheofenquiriestoatouristinformationofficechangedbythreedifferentwaysfromJanuarytoJunein2001.Itisclearthatanincreasingnumberofpeoplechosetogetinformationbythemselvesorby ephone,whilewritingsandlettershaslostits波特中心城区三种发生率的最明显的信息：入室率,总体呈大IntroductionandThisgraphillustrateshowcrimerates(changed)inNewportinnercityduringtheperiod2003-2012.Itisclearthatthegreatestchangesoccurredinthenumberofburglaries,while oftheftremainedlowbutsteady.Itisclearthat…,while….Itcanbeseenfrom…thatItisapparentthat…占的最多makeup/constitute/accountforthelargestproportion/number/percentageof…占的最少makeup/constitute/accountforthesmallestproportion/number/percentageof…

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Althoughasignificantnumberofpeople(32%)gave‘other’reasonsordidnotgiveareasonwhytheyemigrated,thisaccountedforonly17%withregardstoimmigration.173Thetable1.showstheamountofhouseholdethatfivecountriesinEuropespendpermonthonfouritems.Overall,2.itisevidentthatallfivecountriesspendthemajorityoftheireonfoodanddrinkandhousing,but3.muchlessonclothingandentertainment.Housingis4.thelargestexpenditureitemforFrance,GermanyandtheUK,withallofthemspendingaroundonethirdoftheireonthis,at30%,33%and37%,5.respectively.Incontrast,theyspendaround6.aquarteronfoodanddrink.7.However,thispatternisreversedforTurkeyandSpain,whospendaroundafifthoftheireonhousing,butapproxima yonethirdonfoodanddrink.Allfivecountriesspendmuchlesson8.theremainingtwoitems.Regardingclothing,FranceandSpainspendtheleast,atlessthan10%,9.whiletheotherthreecountriesspendaroundthesameamount,10.rangingbetween12%and15%.At19%,Germanyspendsthemostonentertainment,whereasUKandTurkeyspend yhalfthisamount,withFranceandSpainbetweenThetableusesfoureconomicindicatorstoshowthestandardoflivinginfiveselectedcountriesin1982.Overall,itcanbeseenthatthequalityoflifeintheUSAwasfarhigherthantheotherfourcountries.Tobegin,theUSA,whichisadevelopedcountry,hadthehighestGNPat13,160dollarsperhead.Italsohadamuchhigherdailycalorieintakeandlifeexpectancy,andthelowestrateofinfantmortality.Theother countrieshadqualityofliferatingsthatwerelower.TherangeofindicatorsforEgypt,IndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilar,withEgypthavingthehighestqualityoflifeamongstthethree.However,theinfantmortalityrateinEgypt’swasslightlyhigherthanIndonesia’sat97deathsper1000comparedto78inBangladeshhadbyfarthelowestqualityoflifeinalltheindicators.ItsGNPwasonehundredtimessmallerthantheUSA’s.ItscalorieintakeandlifeexpectancywereabouthalfthoseoftheUSA,anditsinfantmortalityratewas10timesgreater.ThepiegraphdisystheprincipalcauseswhyfarminglanddeteriorateswhilethetableillustrateshowthreeregionsofthenetwereaffectedbythesefactorsintheWecanclearlyseefromthepiechartthattherearethreeprimarycausesoffarmlanddegradation,andover-grazingisthemajorone.ThetableshowsthatEuropehadafarhigherpercentageofunproductivelandcomparedtotheothertworegionsinthistimeperiod.Thepiechartrepresentsfourcauses,withover-grazingrepresentingthebiggestproportionatjustoverathird.Widespreadclearingoftreesandtheover-useofcropsconstitutenearlyonethirdandjustoveraquarterrespectively.ThetableshowsthatnearlyonequarterofEurope’sentiresurfacehadfallenvictimtodegeneration.OnlyasmallproportionofNorthAmerica’stotallandbecamelessproductiveat5%andOceaniawasmarginallyhigherwithavalueof13%.MixedThelinegraphillustratesthenumberofvisitorsinmillionsfromtheUKwhowentabroadandthosethatcametotheUKbetween1979and1999,whilethebarchartshowswhichcountrieswerethemostpopularforUKresidentstovisitin1999.Overall,itcanbeseenthatvisitstoandfromtheUKincreased,andthatFrancewasthemostpopularcountrytogoto.Tobegin,thenumberofvisitsabroadbyUKresidentswashigherthanforthosethatcametotheUK,andthisremainedsothroughouttheperiod.Thefiguresstartedatasimilaramount,around10million,butvisitsabroadincreasedsignificantlytoover50million,whereasthenumberofoverseasresidentsrosesteadilytoreachjustunder30million.Byfarthemostpopularcountriestovisitin1999wereFranceatapproximay11millionvisitors,followedbySpainat9million.TheUSA,Greece,andTurkeywerefarlesspopularataround4,3and2millionvisitorsrespectively.ThelinegraphillustratesthenumberofvisitorsinmillionsfromtheUKwhowentabroadandthosethatcametotheUKbetween1979and1999,whilethebarchartshowswhichcountrieswerethemostpopularforUKresidentstovisitin1999.Overall,itcanbeseenthatvisitstoandfromtheUKincreased,andthatFrancewasthemostpopularcountrytogoto.Tobegin,thenumberofvisitsabroadbyUKresidentswashigherthanforthosethatcametotheUK,andthisremainedsothroughouttheperiod.Thefiguresstartedatasimilaramount,around10million,butvisitsabroadincreasedsignificantlytoover50million,whereasthenumberofoverseasresidentsrosesteadilytoreachjustunder30million.Byfarthemostpopularcountriestovisitin1999wereFranceat y11millionvisitors,followedbySpainat9million.TheUSA,Greece,andTurkeywerefarlesspopularataround4,3and2millionvisitorsrespectively.ThetablegivesinformationonconsumerspendingondifferentitemsinfivedifferentEuropeancountries.YouwillbegivensevensentencesthatarebeingusedtodescribetheinformationintheSomeofthesesentencesarecorrect,whilesomearewrong.IdentifywhicharecorrectandwhichareIfthesentenceiscorrect,thenwrite‘correct’fortheanswerandtranslatetheminto .Ifitiswrong,writeoutthecorrectsentence.Thepercentageofconsumerspendingonfood,drinksandtobaccowassignificantlylowerinTurkey(32.14%)andIreland(29%)thantheotherthreecountries.ThecountrywiththehighestproportionofnationalconsumptiononleisureandeducationwasTurkey,at4.35%.TheSwedesspentapproxima ytwiceasmuchonfood,drinksandtobacco,astheydidonclothingandfootwear.ThepercentageofconsumerspendingonclothingandfootwearinIreland,SpainandTurkeywasTheproportionofmoneyspentonleisureandeducationinSpainstoodatjustoverThecountrywiththelowestpercentageofnationalconsumerexpenditureonfood,drinksandtobacco,andclothingandfootwear,wasSweden,at5.40%and15.77%respectively.Italyhadthesecondlowestpercentageofconsumerspendingonfood,drinksandtobacco,at16.36%,butthehighestpercentageofspendingonclothingandfootwear,atexactly9%. 处备注“需要Jack批改作文”。我会在3 可以和 确认Thelinegraphcomparesthenumberofcarthefts,measuredinthousands,infourcountriesfrom1990to1999.Overall,itcanbeseenthatcartheftswerefarhigherinGreatBritainthanintheotherthreecountiesthroughoutthewholetimeframe.Tobegin,cartheftsinSweden,FranceandCanadafollowedafairlysimilarpatternoverthefirstfiveyears,allremainingatbetween5and10perthousand.ThegeneraltrendthoughforFranceandCanadawasadeclineinthenumberofvehiclesstolenovertheperiod,withbothataround6in1999.Incontrast,Swedenexperiencedanupwardtrend,startingtheperiodatapproxima y8,andfinishingatjustunder15.Interestingly,cartheftsinGreatBritainstartedat18perthousand,whichfarexceededthatoftheothercountries.Itthenfluctuatedoverthenextnineyears,reachingapeakof20theftsper1000in1996,andendingtheperiodslightlylowerthanwhereitbegan,atapproxima y17perIELTSBarChart-ModelThebarchartshowsthechangingpatternsoftransportuseinaEuropeancityduringtheperiodfrom1960to2000.Inbrief,thechartshowsthattheuseofthecarasameansoftransportdramaticallyincreasedovertheperiodshown,whiletheothersfell.Indetail,in1960themotorcarwasusedleastasamethodoftransportwithonlyabout7%ofthepopulationusingthismethodbutcarusegrewsteadilyandstronglytofinallyreachabout37%ofthepopulationby2000.Thiswasamassive5-foldincreaseinuse.Overthissameperiod,however,thepopularityofwalking,whichhadbeenthemostpopularmeansoftransportwith35%ofthepopulationin1960havingitastheirpreferredwayofgettingaround,fellto10%.Bicycleusealsofellfromahighofabout27%in1960tojust7%inOntheotherhand,bususewasmoreerraticbeingpopularwithalmost20%ofthepopulationin1960andrisingtoapeakofabout27%in1980beforefallingbacktoabout18%in2000.(188ThebarchartshowsthenumberofBritishpeoplewhoemigratedtofivedestinationsovertheperiod2004to2007.Itisevidentfromthechartthatthroughouttheperiod,themostpopularcetomovetowasAustralia.EmigrationtoAustraliastoodatjustover40,000peoplein2004,whichwasapproxima y6,000higherthanforSpain,andtwiceashighastheotherthreecountries.Apartfromajumptoaround52,000in2006,itremainedaroundthislevelthroughouttheperiod.ThenextmostpopularcountryforBritonstomovetowasSpain,thoughitspopularitydeclinedoverthetimeframetofinishatbelow30,000in2007.Despitethis,thefigurewasstillhigherthanfortheremainingthreecountries.Approxi