中考英语复习写作-Friends课件

WritingCourse----FriendsIwannathankyouforthethingsyou'vedoneIwannathankyouforyourgenerosity,andI'llneverbealonethat'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______that'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______beenthroughthickandthintogether,throughtheupsanddownsyetwestillremain,andIcantalktoyouforeverthat'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______that'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______friendfriendfriendfriendListentoasongandfillintheblanks.Canyouguessthenameofthesong?FriendsWhatarefriends?Whenwearesad,wecan________friends.goshoppinggoonlinestudydoeverythingtalktocrywithaskcallstaywithseeafilmtellsharehelpremindWheneverwefeellonely,wecan__________friends.Ifwehaveproblemsinstudy,wecan________friends.Whenwehavesomethinghappy,wecan_________friends.Ifwedosomethingwrong,friendsmay_______us.Friendscan_______together.Sofriendsarevery_________.importantusefulvaluablenecessaryhelpfulgenerousLet'swatchavedioaboutfriendship!Goodfriendsmaysometimesbeangrywitheachother.It'susuallyhappytobewithfriends.Howtogetonwellwithfriends?Whatcanyoulearnfromthevideo??HoweverIftheyareintrouble,weshould________them.behappyforsharewithlearnfromhelpbewithtalkwithteachstudywithlistentoencourageWhentheyhavedifficultiesinstudy,wecan__________them.Whentheyarenothappy,wecan________them.Whentheygetsuccess,wemay_________them.Iftheyhavedifferentopinions,weshould_______them.gotoplayGroupwork:Workingroupsoffour,discussandmakelistsaboutfriends.FriendsWhyweneedfriends?Howtohavegoodfriends?Doyouhavegoodfriends?dosomethingtogetherhelpeachotherfeelhappylistenunderstandcareCanyouwritesomethingaboutmakingfriends?FriendsWhyweneedfriends?Howtohavegoodfriends?Doyouhavegoodfriends?Weshouldknowfriendsare________inourlife.Wecan_________withfriends.Tomakegoodfriends,we'dbetter________.Hi,Everyone!IamMr.Bean.Iamalonelyboy,Iwanttomakesomefriends,canyouhelpme???最近，班里新来了一名同学Mr.Bean,他有一些烦恼，你能帮帮他吗？书面表达(本题15分)根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。“友谊的小船说翻就翻”是2016年主流社交网络上流行的网络语言，对此你有何感想？请根据下面的写作要求，写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.我们为什么需要交朋友？2.我们该如何与朋友相处？（列举至少两点建议）3.呼吁同学们与朋友和睦共处。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实的校名和姓名。2.语句连贯，80词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

WritingpraticeAlmosteveryoneintheworldhasfriends.Howcanwemakeourfriendshiplastforever?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

beginningbodyending“友谊的小船说翻就翻”是2016年主流社交网络上流行的网络语言，对此你有何感想？请根据下面的写作要求，写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.我们为什么需要交朋友？2.我们该如何与朋友相处？（列举至少两点建议）3.呼吁同学们与朋友和睦共处。写作方法指导Beginning开头部分Ending结尾部分Body正文1、我们为什么需要交朋友？（朋友为什么是重要的？）2、我们该如何与朋友相处？3、呼吁同学们与朋友和睦共处。①Inmyopinion,it’s…tohavefriendsbecause…②Whenwe…,wecan…withfriends.③……First,weshould...Second,whenfriends…,weshould...Third,friendsmay…Fourth,...①Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun!②It’shappytohavefriends.③Noonecanlivewithafriend.④…CheckbyyourselfReadyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没有错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求第一档：12-15分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。第二档：11-12分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。第三档：8-10分内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚,但有一些语言错误。（以上为及格线）第四档：4-7分内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：0-3分只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚评分档次和要求Almosteveryoneintheworldhasfriends.Howcanwemakeourfriendshiplastforever?Inmyopinion,it’snicetohavefriendsbecausewecantalk,laughanddothingstogether.It’ssaidthatpeoplewhohavefriendsarehappierthanthosewhodon’t.Nowadays,manypeoplewanttoknowhowtomakefriendshiplastforever.Herearemysuggestions.First,weshouldbekindtoourfriends.Whenfriendsareintrouble,weshouldtryourbesttohelpthem.Second,wemusttrytounderstandeachotherandthinkofothersmorethanourselves.Friendshipisakindoftreasure.Wemustgetonwellwithfriends.SampleWirtealettertoyourbestfriends:●Tellyourfriendswhatinterestingthingsyourememberaboutthem●TellthemhowhappytobefriendswiththemHomeworkFriendshipIsLiketheBreeze友谊如微风

----byTerriFanningFriendshipislikethebreeze,友谊如和煦的微风，Youcan'tholdit,你握不住它，Smellit,闻不到它，Tasteit,尝不到它，Orknowwhenit'scoming,无法知道它何时光临，Butyoucanalwaysfeelit,不过你总能感觉到它，Andyou'llalwaysknowit'sthere,而且总能意识到它的存在，Itmaycomeandthengo,它可能会来了而又走开，Butyoucanknowit'llalwaysbeback.但你知道它总会回来。结束语当你尽了自己的最大努力时，失败也是伟大的，所以不要放弃，坚持就是正确的。WhenYouDoYourBest,FailureIsGreat,SoDon'TGiveUp,StickToTheEnd感谢你的到来与聆听学习并没有结束，希望继续努力Thanksforlistening,