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somethingisashortaccountofit,whichgivesthemainpointsbutnotthedetails.CollinsEnglishDictionaryDiscoverEssayTypesTypeFunctionStructure人物+时间+地点+事件（起因+发展+结果）描写某事物的性质功用，即“对象+性质功用+利好”；针对某问题提出解决方法或措施，即“问题+解决方法”；介绍某现象及其原因和结果，即“现象+原因+结果”。论点+论据(+结论)记叙文NarrationTellastory说明文ExpositionMerelystatethefacts议论文ArgumentationConvincereadersthatheisrightArgumentation:toshowhisopinionaboutsomephenomenoniscorrectormoretruthfulthanothers'.Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changesthatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.

Scientificresearchinphysicsandbiologyhasvastlybroadenedourviews.Ithasgivenusadeeperknowledgeofthestructureofmatterandoftheuniverse;ithasbroughtusabetterunderstandingofthenatureoflifeandofitscontinuousdevelopment.Technologyintheapplicationofsciencehasmadebigadvancesthathavebenefitedusinnearlyeverypartoflife.

Thecontinuationofsuchactivitiesinthetwenty-firstcenturywillresultinevengreateradvantagestohumanbeings:inpurescience-awideranddeeperknowledgeinallfieldsoflearning;inappliedscience-amorereasonablesharingofmaterialbenefits,andbetterprotectionoftheenvironment.

Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhascreatedarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.

WilliamShakespearesaid,"Thewebofourlifeisofamingledyarn(纱线),goodandilltogether.''Theabovebriefreviewoftheapplicationofonlyonepartofhumanactivities-science-seemstoprovewhatShakespearesaid.Butdoesithavetobeso?Musttheillalwaysgotogetherwiththegood?Arewebiologicallyprogrammedforwar?Para1.Para2.Para3.Para4.Para5Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changesthatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.

Scientificresearchinphysicsandbiologyhasvastlybroadenedourviews.Ithasgivenusadeeperknowledgeofthestructureofmatterandoftheuniverse;ithasbroughtusabetterunderstandingofthenatureoflifeandofitscontinuousdevelopment.Technologyintheapplicationofsciencehasmadebigadvancesthathavebenefitedusinnearlyeverypartoflife.

Thecontinuationofsuchactivitiesinthetwenty-firstcenturywillresultinevengreateradvantagestohumanbeings:inpurescience-awideranddeeperknowledgeinallfieldsoflearning;inappliedscience-amorereasonablesharingofmaterialbenefits,andbetterprotectionoftheenvironment.

Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhascreatedarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.

WilliamShakespearesaid,"Thewebofourlifeisofamingledyarn(纱线),goodandilltogether.''Theabovebriefreviewoftheapplicationofonlyonepartofhumanactivities-science-seemstoprovewhatShakespearesaid.Butdoesithavetobeso?Musttheillalwaysgotogetherwiththegood?Arewebiologicallyprogrammedforwar?Para1.Para2.Para3.Para4.Para5Whichofthefollowingbestshowsthestructureofthepassage?概要写作步骤：

Step1定位

Locatetheessentialinformation；Step2改写

Rewritetheinformationinyourownwords；Step3修改

Addsomeconjunctionsandpolishyoursummary.Para.1

Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changesthatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.ReadforkeypointsortopicSentencesTip1:Keywordsareoftenrepeated.Tip2:Sentencesbeginningwithsignalwordslike“but”,“however”,“actually”etc.areoftenthefocus.Para.1

Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changes

thatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.Manythingscausedthechanges.theprogressinscience?Para.1

Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changes

thatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.Para.2

①Scientificresearchinphysicsandbiologyhasvastlybroadenedourviews.②Ithasgivenusadeeperknowledgeofthestructureofmatterandoftheuniverse;③ithasbroughtusabetterunderstandingofthenatureoflifeandofitscontinuousdevelopment.④Technologyintheapplicationofsciencehasmadebigadvancesthathavebenefitedusinnearlyeverypartoflife.Tip3:Omitdetailedinformation.ScientificresearchTechnologychangesadeeperknowledgeabetterunderstanding(Sentences2&3aredetailedinformationofSentence1.)

Para.3Thecontinuationofsuchactivitiesinthetwenty-firstcenturywillresultinevengreateradvantagestohumanbeings:inpurescience—awideranddeeperknowledgeinallfieldsoflearning;inappliedscience—amorereasonablesharingofmaterialbenefits,andbetterprotectionoftheenvironment.Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhascreatedarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.Para.4Tip4:Phraseswiththesamemeaningcoverthekeypoint.Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhascreatedarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.Para.4Tip5:Thetopicsentenceisnotnecessarilythefirstsentenceorthelastone,butitmustconveythemainidea.

①Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.②Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.③Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhascreatedarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.④Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.⑤AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.Para.4connectingsentencetopicsentencesupportingsentencesupportingsentencesupportingsentenceTip6:Ifallthesupportingsentencesgivethesameevidence,detailedinformationinvolvedshouldbepresentedinthesummary.Para.5Tip7:Questionscanbeusedtoemphasizeandexpressone'sopinion.

WilliamShakespearesaid,"Thewebofourlifeisofamingledyarn(纱线),goodandilltogether.''Theabovebriefreviewoftheapplicationofonlyonepartofhumanactivities—scienceseemstoprovewhatShakespearesaid.Butdoesithavetobeso?Musttheillalwaysgotogetherwiththegood?Arewebiologicallyprogrammedforwar??Itdoesn'thavetobeso.Theillneedn'tgotogetherwiththegood.Focusonrepeatedwordsorphrases;Noticesignalwordslike“but”,“sadly”,“however”,etc.Omitdetailedinformation.Thetopicsentenceisnotnecessarilythefirstorthelastsentence.Aquestioncanalsoworkasastatement.Howtolocatethetopicsentence概要写作三步法：

Step1定位

Locatetheessentialinformation；Step2改写

Rewritetheinformationinyourownwords；Step3修改

Addsomeconjunctionsandpolishyoursummary.概要写作之改写微技能：

（1）替换：

同义词替换；单词替换短语；短语替换句子……（2）转换：

词性转换；句式转换；语态转换；主语转换……

Para.1

Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changesthatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.Practice:Para.1

Thetwentiethcenturysawgreaterchangesthananycenturybefore:changesforthebetter,changesfortheworse;changesthatbroughtalotofbenefitstohumanbeings,changesthatputmanindanger.Manythingscausedthechanges,but,inmyopinion,themostimportantwastheprogressinscience.Theadvanceinsciencecontributed

mosttogreatchangestohumanlifeinthepreviouscentury.Practice:Para.3

Thecontinuationofsuchactivitiesinthetwenty-firstcenturywillresultinevengreateradvantagestohumanbeings:inpurescience—awideranddeeperknowledgeinallfieldsoflearning;inappliedscience—amorereasonablesharingofmaterialbenefits,andbetterprotectionoftheenvironment.Para.2

①Scientificresearchinphysicsandbiologyhasvastlybroadenedourviews.②Ithasgivenusadeeperknowledgeofthestructureofmatterandoftheuniverse;③ithasbroughtusabetterunderstandingofthenatureoflifeandofitscontinuousdevelopment.④Technologyintheapplicationofsciencehasmadebigadvancesthathavebenefitedusinnearlyeverypartoflife.Tip1：Findthelogicbetweenparagraphsanduseonesentencetoexpresstwoormorepoints(一句多点).Para.3Thecontinuationofsuchactivitiesinthetwenty-firstcenturywillresultinevengreateradvantagestohumanbeings:inpurescience—awideranddeeperknowledgeinallfieldsoflearning;inappliedscience—amorereasonablesharingofmaterialbenefits,andbetterprotectionoftheenvironment.Para.2

①Scientificresearchinphysicsandbiologyhasvastlybroadenedourviews.②Ithasgivenusadeeperknowledgeofthestructureofmatterandoftheuniverse;③ithasbroughtusabetterunderstandingofthenatureoflifeandofitscontinuousdevelopment.④Technologyintheapplicationofsciencehasmadebigadvancesthathavebenefitedusinnearlyeverypartoflife.Sincethenscienceinphysics,biologyandtheapplicationoftechnologyhasbenefitedusalot,whichwillcontinuouslybringgreateradvantages.Tip1：Findthelogicbetweenparagraphsanduseonesentencetoexpresstwoormorepoints(一句多点).

Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.

Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhas

createdarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.Para.4

Sadly,however,thereisanothersidetothepicture.

Thecreativityofsciencehasbeenemployedindoingdamagetomankind.Theapplicationofscienceandtechnologytothedevelopmentandproductionofweaponsofmassdestructionhas

createdarealdangertothecontinuedexistenceofthehumanraceonthisplanet.Wehaveseenthishappeninthecaseofnuclearweapons.AlthoughtheiractualusehassofaroccurredonlyintheSecondWorldWar,thenumberofnuclearweaponsthatwereproducedandmadereadyforusewassolargethatiftheweaponshadactuallybeenused,theresultcouldhavebeentheruinofthehumanrace,aswellasofmanykindsofanimals.Para.4Manhasalsoappliedthecreativityofsciencetodestructiveweapons,probablydamagingthelivingcreatures.Tip2:Changethepassivevoiceifnecessary.Para.5

WilliamShakespearesaid,"Thewebofourlifeisofamingledyarn(纱线),goodandilltogether.''Theabovebriefreviewoftheapplicationofonlyonepartofhumanactivities—scienceseemstoprovewhatShakespearesaid.Butdoesithavetobeso?Musttheillalwaysgotogetherwiththegood?Arewebiologicallyprogrammedforwar?Tip3:Turnthequestionintoastatementifitisaconclusionorsuggestion.Para.5

WilliamShakespearesaid,"Thewebofourlifeisofamingledyarn(纱线),goodandilltogether.''Theabovebriefreviewoftheapplicationofonlyonepartofhumanactivities—scienceseemstoprovewhatShakespearesaid.Butdoesithavetobeso?Musttheillalwaysgotogetherwiththegood?Arewebiologicallyprogrammedforwar?

Itisworthwhileto

consideravoidingthemisuseofscience.Step1定位

Locatetheessentialinformation；Step2改写

Rewritetheinformationinyourownwords；Step3修改

Addsomeconjunctionsandpolishyoursummary.概要写作三步法：

Theadvanceinsciencecontributedmosttogreatchangestohumanlifein