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987确的1、逻辑和结构：12、完成写作任务：0.5——需要观点的没有自己的观3、词汇：0.5——文章行文有明显模板痕迹：不要用somepeoplethink,however,theother inopinion.specially/especially4、语法：0.5——TopicsentenceThereareseveralreasonswhyIbelieve...)Firstreason(Firstly,...)+Example(Forexample,...)Secondreason(Secondly,...)+Example(Forexample,Alanguageismuchmorethansimplyameansofcommunication.Ithasavitalconnectionwiththeculturalidentityofthepeoplewhospeakit.Ifalanguagedisappears,awholewayoflifewilldisappearwithit,andwewilllosetherichculturaldiversitythatmakessocietiesmoreinteresting.Byspendingmoneytoprotectminoritylanguages,ernmentcanalsopreservetraditions,customsandbehavioursthatarepartofacountry’shistory.Ontheonehand,criminalsdoneedtobepunishedinsomeways.Aswhocommitsacrimemustlearnthatunlawfulactionshaveconsequences.Prisonsentencespunishoffendersbecausetheylosetheirdom,andareseparatedfromfamilyandfriends.Inthisway,prisonactsasadeterrenttomakepeoplethinkcarefullybeforebreakingthelaw.Lastyearinthe题干：Theroleofprisonsshouldbetopunishcriminalswhohavecommittedseriouscrimes.Trainingcoursesandeducationofferedtoprisonersareawasteoftaxpayer’smoneyDoyouagreeordisagree?——（opinion型）+problem&solution题干：SomepeoplethinkthatTheybelievethiswouldbenefitboththeindividualteenagerandthesocietyasawhole.Doyouagreeordisagree?:因+合适的句型（不是任何问题都是毫无异议或充满争论的）；2个论点。——句子之内：A是一件，一个动作（action）B是事情的结果（result）C是这个结果所造成的结果（endresult）BrowseitforoncesothatyouknowwhatkindofcontentsitcontainsWhenyouneedit,youknowwhichpartofwhichbooktoreferto.（毫无逻辑性，还没有主语）->Specifically,youbrowseitforoncetoknowtheprimetopicssothatyouknowwhichpartofwhichbooktoreferto.清晰版本：例如，中心句+正反论证：Onthecontrary、while结构版本：Anotherreason、Onthecontrary、What’smoreThemainreasonwhy...is;Anotherreason/argumentis...;Also...;Furthermore,....Oneproblemisthat...;Furthermore,...;Anotherdrawbackitthat...Fromabusiness,...;Intermsofeducation...;Fromasocialpointofview,...firstly,secondly,finally用 they，such等代词，还有vice（一）Opinion辩论题总体把握：Opinion型必须自己的观点，若观点一边倒，只论述自己支持的观点即1、Towhatextentdoyouagreeor——Inrecentyearsithas emorecommonforwomentoreturntoworkafterhavingachild.However,Idonotagreethatthishasbeenthecauseofproblemsforyoungpeople.——Itistruethatchildrenlearnacademicsubjectsatschool,butnotmanypracticalskills.However,Iwouldthendisagreethatschoolswouldteachskillslikebankaccountmanagementandcarmaintenance.——Inmyopinion,menandwomenshouldhavethesameeducationalopportunities.However,Idonotagreewiththeideaofacceptingequalproportionsofeachgender……——Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherornoternmentsshouldhelpseniorcitizens.Icompleydisagreewiththeideathat……——Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherornoternmentsshouldhelpseniorcitizens.AlthoughIacceptthatweallhavearesponsibilitytosavemoneyforretirement,Idisagreewiththeideathatelderlypeopleshouldreceivenosupportfromthestate.——Somepeoplebelievethathighschoolstudentswouldbenefitfromngunpaidworkintheirlocalcommunities.Icompleyagreethatcommunityserviceprogrammesforteenagersareagoodidea.——Havingthesamenumberofmenandwomenonalldegreecoursesissimply——Apartfromthepracticalconcernsexpressedabove,Ialsobelieve——Inconclusion,theselectionofuniversitystudentsshouldbebasedonmerit,anditwouldbebothimpracticalandunfairto……——Thefactthatmanhaswalkedonthemoonmightnothavehadadirecteffectonourdailylives,butitwasaninspiringachievement.开头：partly——ToacertainextentIagreethatvisitorstoothercountriesshouldrespectthecultureofthehostcountry.However,Ialsothinkthathostcountriesshouldacceptvisitors’culturaldifferences.——Itistruethatsomepeopleknowfromanearlyagewhatcareertheywanttopursue.WhileIacceptthatthismaysuitmanypeople,Ibelievethatothersenjoychangingcareersorseekingjobsatisfactionindifferentways.——一段Onone ——另一段Ontheother不是要不要什么东西/政策，而是如何用：makesure……don’toveruseAlthough……inevitablyaffectsthecostto……canbeminimized.——Inconclusion,itcancertainlybesatisfyingtopursueaparticularcareerforthewholeofone’slife,butthisisbynomeanstheonlyroutetofulfilment.2、Isitapositiveornegative——Itistruethatnewhavehadaninfluenceoncommunicationbetweenpeople.Technologyhasaffectedrelationshipsinvariousways,andinmyopiniontherearebothpositiveandnegativeeffects.中间：TheexpansionofEnglishhasalsobeen——Inconclusion,technologyhascertainlyrevolutionisedcommunicationbetweenpeople,butnotallofthe esofthisrevolutionhavebeenpositive.1、Doyouthinkadvantagesoutweigh——Itistruethatmanyaspectsofcultureare ingincreasinglysimilarthroughouttheworld.Althoughthistrendhassomebenefits,Iwouldarguethattherearemoredrawbacks.——Itistruethat……AlthoughIagreethatsomesecuritymeasurescanfeelrestrictive,Ibelievethattherearemorebenefitsthandrawbacks.——Thereareseveralbenefitsoflivinginacountrywithahotclimate.Themainadvantageisthat……Forexample……Anotherbenefitsofwarmweatheristhat……Also,……——Ontheonehand,gamescanbebothentertainingand——However,IwouldarguethatthesebenefitsareoutweighedbytheThereasonsforthistrendmayinvolve……However,therearecertainlydangersin……——Inconclusion,itseemsthatthedrawbacksofglobalisation,intermsofculturalhabitssuchastheclotheswewearorthefoodweeat,dooutweighthebenefits.——Inconclusion,itseemstomethatthepotentialdangersofgamesaremoresignificantthanthepossiblebenefits.——Myviewisthatyoungpeopleshouldbeencouragedtobroadentheirhorizons.Thebestwayto……2、WhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorThetwosidesarewell-matched.势均力敌——TherelativeimportanceofAandBisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhen……——Myownviewisthatthereisnoonemajorinfluenceina’slife.Instead,AandBareconstantlyincting.——Iallythinkthat……Aswithallquestionsofnatureversusnurture,theyarenotmutuallyexclusive.Without……without……——Inconclusion,Idonotthinkthateithernatureornurtureisthemajorinfluence……buthavepowerful——Inconclusion,Iagreethat……buttobereallygoodin……thensomenaturaltalentis3、Discussbothviews（andgiveyour①Discussbothviewsandgiveyour——Peoplehavedifferentviewsabouthowchildrenshouldbetaught.Whiletherearesomegoodargumentsinfavourofteachingchildrentobecompetitive,Ibelievethatitisbettertoencourageco-operation.——Somepeoplemaketheircareerchoicesaccordingtowhattheyenjoyng,whereascemoreimportanceonearningahighsalary.ally,Isupporttheviewthatjobsatisfactionandasenseoffulfillmentaremuchmoreimportantthanmoney.——Itistruethatsomeminoritylanguagesmaydisappearinthenearfuture.Althoughitcanbearguedthaternmentscouldsavemoneybyallowingthistohappen,Ibelievethattheselanguagesshouldbeprotectedandp.或者第一句后面直接+inmyopinion,thiscannotbetheresponsibilityofthe——Somepeoplemaketheircareerchoicesaccordingtowhattheyenjoyng,whereascemoreimportanceonearningahighsalary.ally,Ibelievethatbothcriteriashouldbegivenequalconsideration.——Thereareseveralreasonswhysavingminoritylanguagescouldbeseen——Despitetheabovearguments,Ibelievethaternment——Therearesomegoodargumentsforhavingonesetpunishmentforeach——However,Iwouldarguethatthecircumstancesofacrimeandthecriminal’smotivationshouldhaveaninfluenceonthepunishment.——Theoptiontostartworkafterschoolisattractiveforseveral——Ontheotherhand,Ibelievethatitismore——Advocatesofthisbelieve——However,theremaybebetterways——Educationisanimportantfactorwithregardtoal——Iwouldarguethatequalrightsandopportunitiesarenotinwithpeople’sdomtosucceedorfail.短期-长期：Inconclusion,itmaysavemoneyintheshorttermifweallowminoritylanguagestodisappearbutinthelongtermthiswouldhaveanextremelynegativeimpactonourculturalheritage.——Inconclusion,despitetheadvantagesoffixedpunishments,itseemstomethateachcrimesshouldbejudgerakingboththecircumstancesandmotivationintoaccount.——Forreasonsmentionedabove,itseemstomethatstudentsaremorelikelytobesuccessfulintheircareersiftheycontinuetheirstudiesbeyondschoollevel.——Inconclusion,itseemstomethatthereisapositiverelationshipbetweenAand②Discussbothviews,没有要求给出观点，那就不要给出——Whentheyfinishschool,teenagersfacethedilemmaofwhethertogetajoborcontinuetheireducation.Whiletherearebenefitstogettingajobstraightafterschool,therearealsogoodreasonswhyitmightbebeneficialtogtotcollegeoruniversity.——Officialsinmanycitiesarekeentodevelopefficientpublictransportsystems.Whilepublictransporthasmanybenefits,therearealsosomedrawbackswhichareworthconsidering.——Theoptiontostartworkstraightafterschoolisattractiveforseveral——Ontheotherhand,itisalsounderstandablethatmanystudentschoosetocontinuetheir——Inconclusion,thereareconvincingargumentsforstartingworkstraightafterschool,highereducationcanalsoleadtoasuccessful（三）Problemsandsolutions1、Exintheproblemsandsuggestsomesolutions.或者Whatcouldbethereason,andwhatcanbedonetosolveit?Itistruethatchildren’sbehaviorseemstobegettingworse.（Poorstudentbehaviourseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblem）Therearevariousreasonsforthis,andbothschoolandparentsneedtoworktogethertoimprovethesituation.Humansareresponsibleforavarietyofenvironmentalproblems,butwecanalsotakestepstoreducethedamagethatwearecausingtothenet.Thisessaywillbrieflydiscussenvironmentalproblemsandthemeasuresthaternmentsandindividualscantaketoaddresstheseproblems.Itisundeniablethatwildlifehabitatsarebeingdestroyedandwholespeciesofntsanimalsaredisappearing.Thereareseveralcausesofthisalarmingtrend,butmeasurescouldcertainlybetakentotackletheproblem.——Twoofthebiggestthreatstotheenvironment——LifestyleisamajorcauseofpoorernmentcouldcertainlymakemoreefforttoIndividualsshouldalsotakeresponsibilityfortheimpacttheyhaveon……TheyInconclusion,bothnationalernmentsandindividualsmustytheirpartin（四）混合型：Opinion1Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpollutionproblems.whatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Whatothermeasuresdoyouthinkmightbe——Trafficandpollutionaregrowingproblemsintoday’ssociety.ally,Idisagreewiththeideathathigherpetrolpricescouldsolvetheseproblems,andIbelievethatvariousothermeasureswouldbemoreconstructive.或者：Solvingtheseproblemsislikelytoneedmorethanasimplerise2MarriagesarebiggerandmoreexpensivenowadaysthaninthepastWhyisthisthecaseIsitapositiveornegativedevelopment?——Itistruethatweddinghave emorecostlyandextravagantinrecentyears.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis,andinmyminditisanegativetrend.3Nowadaysthewaymanypeopleinctwitheachotherhaschangedbecauseoftechnology.Inwhatwayshastechnologyaffectedthetypesofrelationshipsthatpeoplemake?Hasthisbeenapositiveornegativedevelopment?——Itistruethatnewhavehadaninfluenceoncommunicationbetweenpeople.Technologyhasaffectedrelationshipsinvariousways,andinmyopiniontherearebothpositiveandnegativeeffects.hashadanimpactonrelationshipsinbusiness,educationandsociallife.Ontheonehand,thesedevelopmentscanbeextremelypositive……OntheotherInconclusion,technologyhascertainlyrevolutionisedcommunicationbetweenpeople,butnotallofthe esofthisrevolutionhavebeenpositive.——主从：Thathefinishedwritingthecompositioninsuchashorttimesurprisedus——宾语从句：I'mafraidthatIcan't——表语从句：He ewhathewantedtobetenyears——同位语从句：Iheardthenewsthatourteamhad——独立主格：Themeetingbeingoverallofuswent——虚拟语气：Ifrailandbusservicesweremorereliable,fewerpeoplewouldneedto——Bringchildrenupandeducatingthemis——BringingupandeducatingchildrenThemajorityofthetopicstheprimetopics（好帅的用法Spendtoomuchtimeonit->overspendtimeonreason,用作动词"理解"，reasonwithsb跟讲道->Themoreyouwatch,themoreyoucanreasonthecharacters'behaviorsintheThekeyistomakewritingasahabitsothatyoucanimproveyour->Thekeyistohabityourwritingsothatitimproveseveryday.（makingxxasaxx是水verybeautiful,good这类抽象空洞的词汇（天气很冷——天气冷得刺骨Topromotethedevelopmentof-USrelations，needstoknowtheUSbetterandtheUSalsoneedstoknowbetter.应为：Topromote—USrelations，needstoknowtheUSbetterandvice4favourbehaviourcriticise,revolutionise,organise,learnt,愿意为你做这件事最好说doitforyou而不是用 ——"Shewas注定to eagreatpianist."destine和doom都表示，但是doom做名词还有的意思，所以这里要用destineinexpensivecheap好，youluckyguy要比youluckdog——Requirement:要求；demand:suchas,forFinally用在想陈述最后观点的时候；atlast表示准备好久（磨难）Mostpeoplemostof——搭配：leadto/contributeto/resultin+n；Increaseawareness——imperative英 美[ɪm'pɛrətɪv]adj.必要的，紧急的；势在必行Theundertakingwasnoteasy,shesaid,butitfeltproliferate英 美 vi.增殖；扩散；激增vt.使激增Duringthe1990's,computercompaniesAlternatively，作为一种选择/或者，Alternatively,youcanbeoneofthespeakers.aone-size-fit-allsolution beawareof amongstboththeyoungandtheoldExtravagantadj.奢侈的；浪费的；过度的；Aggravatevt.加重；使；激 alleviate英[ə'liːvɪeɪt]vt.减轻，缓exaggeratevt.使扩大；使增大itisnoexaggerationtosayqualitycontrolprovedaheadache.——Benefitvi，SocietybenefitasgetbenefitedIdea,u/csomeidea有名词的用名词，而不是动名词，thegrowingoffactoriestheAttheturnofthecentury。’sdiplomacyismost-Theturnofthecenturyfindsmostactiveonthediplomaticdiplomacy是没有生命的，activeInnovationisthesoulofanation’s-Innovationsustainstheprogressofasoulinnovation2、Formal:的、口语化的——Donotoveruse:it,be+ng,very,pretty,lotsof,——DonotoveruseImemyyouyour".Imemyyou主语很难找到具体的词语?那就不用主语吧!语态&代词theyYoumayspendamonthtopracticethebook(YOUisaggressivetothereaders)Bonus:->However,thecostofmultiplemonthsofpracticeisalwaysneeded.thereisthere——Donotusecasualwordsdoesnotmakesense,kindof,bunchesof，不能有缩写canbedoneto-——maybeitis，用itmay3、少用名言、中国的谚语，中国的例子（但可以inmanycountriessuchas4themainimportant,themainthing,theimportantYoudon’tneedtoworryaboutgrrmistakes.Afteransweringaquestion,youtryyourbesttoproofreadandfixit.（youyour是水分，没什么含义，想方法去掉）Afteramonthortwo,youcanreviewthepreviouswriting,proofreadagainandfixit.Becausewiththewritingexperiencethatyougainedfrompreviousmonths,youcanfindflawsinyourpreviouswritingandformulateageneralsolutiontofixit.Havingthebestteacherorthebestwritingbookisnotthekeyasaentry-levelwriter.Instead,youarethebestteacherofyourselfandyoucangainfeedbackfromyourselfifyouwantto.Thekeyistomakewritingasahabitsothatyour（writing很tolearnhowtowrite,butyoudon’twriteatall!读者的感受就是阅读过程中一直在被骂。——那么如何去除you进而让人看起来比较扎实？利用语态，确定谁是你的读——名词的动词用法（注意不是所有名词都有动词的形式），relatedGrrmistakesarenotaprimeconcernasaentry-levelwriter（去除第一句的水分：youdon'tneedtoentry-levelwriter，两者联系起来）Everytimewhenaquestionisansweredwritinglearnersgainexperiencebyproofreadingthearticle.（语态去除you，去除writinglearneryou）Sincethemoretheywritethemoresophisticatedwritingskilledcanberefined.（语态去除you，they去除you指代writinglearner）Specificallywhenreviewingthepreviousarticles,theflawsinpreviouswritingcanfoundandfixedeasily.（语态）Havingthebestteacherorthebestwritingbookisnotthekeyforaentry-levelwriter（you）.Instead,everyoneisthebestteacherofhimselforPeoplecangainfeedbackfromthemselvesiftheywantt.peopleyou）Thekeyistowritingasahabitsothatitimproveseveryday.（your是多余的，是水分）AfunnyfactisthatsomeEnglishlearners“try”theirbesttolearnhowtowrite,buttheydon’twriteatall!2 这是我写的基础写作，要求只能用五句话来概括所给出的材料。1511分Accordingtothesurvey70percentofthestudentsholdtheviewthatitishelpfultotakeexerciseslikerunning,yingbasketballinaparticulartime.Takingexercisesnotonlystrengthensourbodybutalsoavoidsillness.Anotherreasonisthatngsportscanrestourbrainaswellasmakeitmuchpowerfulwhenreviewing.Onthecontrary,30percentofthestudentsthinkthattheymightgetinjured.Wh