七年级下Module话题

好学义乌·名师云课Lifehistory七年级英语Module9Writing·Topic本模块的写作话题:“描述历史上或当代某个知名人物的成长经历。在写作此类文章时,要注意以下几点：1.中心突岀，前后意思连贯，逻辑性强。2.要求切实把握人物的主要事迹和贡献，不要遗漏写作要点，力求把人物、时间、地点和生活经历等介绍清楚。3.要特别突岀其英勇奋斗事迹等，给人以鼓舞和激励。4.在写作时一般采用第三人称和一般过去时来展开介绍。Task根据下面材料用英文，简要介绍BillGates的成功经历。1.1955年10月28日出生在美国的西雅图(Seattle)。2.小时候很聪明，最喜欢的科目是科学和数学。3.1968年开始用电脑。4.1973年进入哈佛大学(HarvardUniversity)。5.1975年和朋友PaulAllen创建了微软(Microsoft)。6.1994年1月1日和MelindaFrench结婚。有两个孩子。7.1999年写了一本书——Business@theSpeedofthought。BillGates1.BeginningBriefintroduction(简要介绍)2.BodyLifeexperiences(人生经历)3.EndingEvaluationsandinfluences（评价和影响）4.otherthings

StructureHowtowriteastructuredpassage?如何让文章有结构Tip1:Beginning-Body-EndingTherearelotsofsuccessfulpeoplearoundtheworld,andBillGatesisoneofthem.Beginning:Briefintroduction(简要介绍)世界上有许多成功之人，BillGates就是其中之一。Letmesharesomethingabouthislife.Howtomakerichsentences?如何让文章有逻辑Tip2:Use“transitionalsentence”使用过渡句1.1955年10月28日出生在美国的西雅图(Seattle)。2.小时候很聪明，最喜欢的科目是科学和数学。3.1968年开始使用电脑。BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Hewascleverwhenhewasyoung.Hewasgoodatscienceandmath.Hebegantousethecomputerin1968.Body:Lifeexperiences(人生经历)5.1975年和朋友PaulAllen创建了微软(Microsoft)。6.1994年1月1日和MelindaFrench结婚。有两个孩子。7.1999年写了一本书——Business@theSpeedofthought.Hefounded/setupMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994.Hehadtwochildren.HewroteabookcalledBusiness@theSpeedofthoughtin1999.4.1973年进入哈佛大学(HarvardUniversity)。HeenteredHarvardUniversityin1973.

BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Hewascleverwhenhewasyoung.Hewasgoodatscienceandmath.Hebegantoplaythecomputerin1968.Heentered

HarvardUniversityin1973.HefoundedMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994.Hehadtwochildren.HewroteabookcalledBusiness@theSpeedofthoughtin1999.Body

他很成功，也是世界上最富有的人之一Ending:Evaluationsandinfluences（评价和影响）Heissuccessfulandoneoftherichestpeopleintheworld.IhopeonedayIcanbeabusinessmanlikehim.

对你有什么影响呢？Therearelotsofsuccessfulpeoplearoundtheworld,andBillGatesisoneofthem.BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Hewascleverwhenhewasyoung.Hewasgoodatscienceandmath.Hebegantoplaythecomputerin1968.Heentered

HarvardUniversityin1973.HefoundedMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994.Hehadtwochildren.HewroteabookcalledBusiness@theSpeedofthoughtin1999.Heissuccessfulandoneoftherichestpeopleintheworld.Let'spolishHowtomakerichsentences?如何让句子丰富Tip3:Use“and”使用and连接两个动作Hewascleverwhenhewasyoungandhewasgoodatscienceandmath.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994andhadtwochildren.

Therearelotsofsuccessfulpeoplearoundtheworld,andBillGatesisoneofthem.BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Heiscleverwhenhewasyoung

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atscienceandmath.Hebegantousethecomputerin1968.Heentered

HarvardUniversityin1973.HefoundedMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994andhadtwochildren.HewroteabookcalledBusiness@theSpeedofthoughtin1999.Heissuccessfulandoneoftherichestpeopleintheworld.Let'spolishHowtowritelogicalparagraphs?如何让段落有逻辑Tip4:Usetransitionalwords使用过渡词，如after…，thenAshegrew,Twoyearslater,Afterthat,Therearelotsofsuccessfulpeoplearoundtheworld,andBillGatesisoneofthem.BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Hewascleverwhenhewasyoung

andhewasgoodatscienceandmath.Ashegrew,hebegantousethecomputerin1968.Heentered

HarvardUniversityin1973.Twoyearslater,hefoundedMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994andhadtwochildren.Afterthat,hewroteabookcalledBusiness@theSpeedofthoughtin1999.Heissuccessfulandoneoftherichestpeopleintheworld.Let'spolishHowtomakerichsentences?如何让句子丰富Tip5:Adddetails增加细节，如why，what，howhehadagreatinterestin...Byhishardwork,通过他的努力Therearelotsofsuccessfulpeoplearoundtheworld,andBillGatesisoneofthem.Letmesharesomethingabouthislife.BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Hewascleverwhenhewasyoung

andhewasgoodatscienceandmath.Ashegrew,hehadagreatinterestinthecomputerandbegantoplayitin1968.Byhishardwork,hewasadmittedto

HarvardUniversityin1973.Twoyearslater,hefoundedMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelindaFrenchonJanuary1st,1994andhadtwochildren.Afterthat,hewroteabookcalledBusiness@theSpeedofthoughtin1999.Heissuccessfulandoneoftherichestpeopleintheworld.Let'spolishHowtomakerichsentences?如何让句子丰富Tip6:Usegoodexpressions使用高级表达However,hisachievementisnotanovernightsuccess.然而，他的成就并不是一夜之名。1.Hisexperiencestrengthensourbrieftobeasuccessfulpersonlikehim.他的经历坚定了我们成为像他一样成功之人的信念。2.I’llstudyhardfromnowon.Ibelieve

wherethereisawill,thereisaway.从现在开始我要努力学习。我相信有志者，事竟成。3.Hardworkisthekeytosuccess.努力是通往成功的钥匙。

AnIntroductionofBillGatesTherearelotsofsuccessfulpeoplearoundtheworld,andBillGatesisoneofthem.However,hisachievementisnotanovernightsuccess.Letmesharesomethingabouthislife.BillGateswasbornonOctober28th,1955inSeattle,America.Hewascleverwhenhewasyoungandhewasgoodatscienceandmath.Ashegrew,hehadagreatinterestinthecomputerandbegantoplayitin1968.Byhishardwork,hewasadmittedtoHarvardUniversityin1973.Twoyearslater,hefoundedMicrosoftwithhisfriend,PaulAllen.HemarriedMelin