2023届高考英语复习读后续写练习课件（当司机开车超速却被当警察朋友抓住）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习当司机开车超速却被当警察朋友抓住时1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Jacktookalonglookathisspeedometer(车速表)beforeslowingdown:73ina55zone.Fourthtimeinasmanymonths.Howcouldamangetcaughtsooften?Thepolicemanwassteppingoutofhiscar,thebigpadinhishand.Bob?Bobfromchurch?Jacksankfartherintohiscoat.Thiswasworsethanthecomingticket.Apolicemancatchingamanfromhisownchurch.Amanwhohappenedtobealittleeagertogethomeafteralongdayattheoffice.Jumpingoutofthecar,heapproachedthemanhesaweverySunday,amanhe’dneverseeninuniform.“Hi,Bob.Fancymeetingyoulikethis.”“Hello,Jack.”Nosmile.“Guessyoucaughtmered-handedinarushtoseemywifeandkids.”“Yeah,Iguess.”Bobseemeduncertain.Good.“I’veseensomelongdaysattheofficelately.I’mafraidIbenttherulesabit—justthisonce.”Jacktoedatastoneonthepavement.“Dianesaidsomethingaboutroastbeefandpotatoestonight.KnowwhatImean?”4续写原文“Iknowwhatyoumean.Ialsoknowthatyouhaveareputationinourneighborhood.”Ouch.Thiswasnotgoingintherightdirection.“Whatdidyouclockmeat?”“Seventy.Wouldyousitbackinyourcarplease?”“Nowwaitaminutehere,Bob.IcheckedassoonasIsawyou.Iwasmerely65.”Thelieseemedtocomeeasierwitheveryticket.“Please,Jack,inthecar.”Anxious,Jackduckedthroughthestill-opendoor.Bangingthedoor,hestaredatthedashboard(仪表盘).Theminutestickedby.Bobwrotesomethingonthepad.Whyhadn’theaskedforadriver’slicense?Whateverthereason,itwouldbeamonthofSundaysbeforeJackeversatnearthispolicemanagain.5段首句Para1：Bobtappedonthedoor,withafoldedsheetofpaperinhishand.Para2：Havingreadthe“ticket”,JackjumpedoutofhiscartofindBob.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jack因开车超速而被当警察的朋友Bob抓住后发生的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Bobtappedonthedoor,withafoldedsheetofpaperinhishand.由第一段首句内容“Bob敲了敲车门，手里拿着一张折叠的纸。”可知，第一段可描写Jack接过那张纸后所看到的纸上的内容。10续写思路分析Para2：Havingreadthe“ticket”,JackjumpedoutofhiscartofindBob.由第二段首句内容“读了这张‘交通罚款单’，Jack从车里跳出来去找Bob。”可知，第二段可描写Jack读完“交通罚款单”后的举动。11续写思路分析续写线索打开纸开始读——纸上的内容——转身看到Bob驱车离开——目送Bob，直到消失——开车回家——拥抱家人12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.打开：unfold/open②.驱车离开：pullaway/driveaway③.注视：watch/stare④.拥抱：hug/embrace情绪类①.难过：sad/grieved②.惊讶：surprised/astonished13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].OnceuponatimeIhadadaughter,whowassixwhenkilledbyacar.（由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2].Jackwatcheduntilitdisappeared.（until引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型3].Afull15minuteslater,hetoo,droveslowlyhome,prayingforforgivenessandhuggingasurprisedwifeandkidswhenhearrived.（现在分词作状语；when引导时间状语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Bobtappedonthedoor,withafoldedsheetofpaperinhishand.“Thanks.”Jackforcedasmileandunfoldedthesheetofpaper.Howmuchwasthisonegoingtocost?Whatwasthis?Certainlynotaticket.Jackbegantoread:DearJack,OnceuponatimeIhadadaughter,whowassixwhenkilledbyacar.Youguessedit—aspeedingdriver.Youcan’timaginehowsadIwas.Afineandthreemonthsinprison,andthemanwasfree.Freetohughisdaughter.AthousandtimesI’vetriedtoforgivethatman.AthousandtimesIthoughtIhad.MaybeIdid,butIneedtodoitagain.Evennow.Prayforme.Andbecareful.MysonisallIhaveleft.Bob.16范文呈现Havingreadthe“ticket”,JackjumpedoutofhiscartofindBob.HeturnedaroundintimetoseeBob’scarpullawayandheaddowntheroad.Jackwatcheduntilitdisappeared.Afull15minuteslater,hetoo,droveslowlyhome,prayingforforgivenessandhuggingasurprisedwifeandkidswhenhearrived.17范文译文鲍勃手里拿着一张叠好的纸，轻轻地敲了敲门。“谢谢。”杰克勉强笑了笑，打开那张纸。这个要花多少钱？这是什么？当然不是票。杰克开始读：亲爱的杰克，从前我有一个女儿，六岁时被车撞死了。你猜对了——一个超速行驶的司机。你无法想象我有多难过。罚款和三个月监禁，这名男子获得了自由。可以自由地拥抱他的女儿。我已经一千次试图原谅那个男人了，一千次我以为我已经原谅了。也许我做到了，但我需要再做一次。即使是现在。为我祈祷。小心。我只剩下儿子了。1