高中英语作文写作教学课件公开课 观点议论

Whatmakesagoodessay?英语作文写作观点类基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析话题词汇、短语错误2.词汇、短语、句型贫乏3.句子语法错误4.连贯性差积累少语法不扎实篇章意识不足考场作文TIPS1.取悦评卷人:有清晰的整体脉络,有自然的段间衔接.经典的用词用句,有整齐美观的书写.2.经典的用句：

感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。写作基本步骤1.仔细审题，列举大纲。2．围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过度，确保连贯。4.先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。６５％的学生认为３５％的学生认为１．应该春游１．不应该春游２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康２．高考临近，没有心情玩３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习３．春游耽误学习观点类作文写作TheoutlineofthewritingConclusionparagraph:结尾Introductionparagraph:开头引出话题Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2高三学生______________

春游______________讨论_______________

高考临近__________________________________________接触自然_________________

精神放松_______________呼吸新鲜空气________________大脑休息__________________

没心情玩____________________耽误学习___________________

_________________相关词汇短语默写1.introduction(topic):2.body(supportingideas):3.conclusion:senior3studentsgospringoutingdiscussionwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnearbeclosetonaturerelaxthemselvesbreathesomefreshair

resttheirbrains（don’tfeellikegoing）(wastethetime)inmyopinion…主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.

1.introduction(topic):巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.

Thebodypart

Point1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）

翻译：Moststudents,about65%,areinfavoroftheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Thebodypartpoint1：表达观点一句型：…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…

Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康

Theythinkitgoodtodosth……sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion,itisofgreatbenefittodosth……翻译:Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthto

beclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairReason1：

表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…Finally/Lastbutnotleast/,....Reason2:活动是精神放松/大脑休息/有利于学习

（注意：两个观点之间的连接）翻译:What’smore，theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.表示递进、强调的关联词....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse…Reason2：Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.ConclusionHowever,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.Differentfromthose….,…peoplethink….Ontheotherhand,…somepeopleareagainsttheidea.

Point2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）翻译:Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）point2：

表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…Finally/Lastbutnotleast/,....Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩

翻译:Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.

Theysay/believe/holdtheopinion…that….Reason1：Reason2:春游耽误学习

翻译:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.表示递进、强调的关联词....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/Inadditio