2018年上海高三英语一模作文范文汇编

4/16A+优质教eChatamos43212018年高三一模作文汇编1.黄浦区2017年已接近尾声，还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗？不知你是否实现了你的小目标？发一个微信朋友圈来回顾一下吧（文中请不要出现真实的校名人名）。你的朋友圈文字内容需包括：1.你的2017年度小目标；2.你为实现年度小目标所作的努力；3.你实现（或没有实现）年度小目标的经验总结。范文：Mynewyear’sresolutionfor2017wasthatIshouldbeabletocommunicatewithforeignpeopleinEnglish.Toachievethisgoal,IhadaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Accordingtohersuggestions,Imadeupaplan.Firstly,IstartedwithsimplyreadingEnglisharticlesandfoundmanypronunciationerrorsinmyreadingafterlisteningtothevideotapeofitsrecording.Then,Itriedtolearnphoneticsandpracticeonesyllableafteranotheragainandagain.Istartedwithasingleword,thenaphrase,asentence,aparagraphandfinallythewholepassage.After3-monthpractice,Iwasabletoreadanarticlefluentlywithoutmakinganymistakesinpronunciation.Ifelthappy.Next,Ipracticedmylistening.Bylisteningtoapassagefourtimes,Irequiredmyselftotakeitdownwithoutspellingerrorsoranyinformationblank.Lastbutnotleast,IinstalledanappcalledShanbeiOralEnglishonmyphonetopracticebothmylisteningandspeaking.It’slikehavingconversationswitharobot.Ihadtounderstandwhatitsaidtomeandansweritsquestionsaccordingly.Afterpracticingforalmost8months,IhadmyfirsttalkingsessionwithanAmericanteacherinourschool.Iwasproudofmyself.WhatIhavelearntfromthisexperienceissomethingasasayinggoes:nopainnogain.Thoughtheprocessoflearningcouldbedullandtiring,it’sworthalltheeffortsafterIachievedmygoal.EvenifIdidn’t,it’sstillavaluablepartofmylife.阅卷作文8+8+4=20Thewonderfulyearof2017isdrawingtoanend.IrememberthatIsetanannualgoaltokeepfitatthebeginningof2017,sincestayinghealthyiscrucialtoensuringmystudy,thusbetterpreparemyselfforGaokao.Toachievemygoalofkeepingfit,herearesomeeffortsI’vetakenthroughouttheyear.Ontheveryfirstdayof2017,IdownloadedafitnessappcalledKeep.Followingthefitnessinstructionstheappoffered,IexercisedeveryothernightbeforeIgotobed.Also,IdidsomeresearchintothedailynutritionIneedinordertostayhealthybothphysicallyandmentally,afterwhichIdevisedamoderatedietingplan.Apartfromtheabove,I’veinvitedfamilymembersandfriendstojoinmesothatwecanencourageeachotherandexchangefitnessexperience.Sofar,therecordshownonmyfitnessappshowsthatI’vedonewellthisyear,reachingarecordhighof200trainingtimesintotal.AlthoughattimesIfeltlikegivingupbecauseoftoomuchstudypressureandlimitedtime,I’mgladIhavestucktomyplan.ItseemstomethatanythingispossibleifIthrowinallofmyenergyandpassion,andmostofall,perseverance.Somerulesapplytostudy.SoIhopeIwillkeepsuchpassionandstrengthtodomybestinthecoming2018.（237words）点评：文本结构段落清晰，符合作文题目要求。第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么；第二段有总起句，段落中有清晰的标记词(如also,apartfrom)告知读者自己所做的努力，且努力的行为都非常具体。第三段对经验的总结可以再和第二段的三个努力匹配些，a.借助科技的力量(app)；b.借助科学的力量（didresearchintothedailynutrition）;c.组团抗击惰性。2．在语言表达能力比较强的基础上，可以考虑文字的进一步精炼。是否有“废话”？字数建议不超过200（此学生语言能力强，中等学生160左右即可）。精练而准确的表达也是思维和表达功力的体现。7+8+4=19Greetingfromtheendof2017!It’snowthetimetoconcludeouryearlygoalsagain.Onthenewyear’seve,Isetuptwogoalsfortheyear:togetterbettergradesandtoloseweightandI’mproudtoannouncethatI’veaccomplishedthefirstone.Torealizethegoals,muchefforthasbeenputinthroughouttheyear.Firstofall,Ichangedmyattitudestowardsvarioussubjects.I’vespentmoretimeonthem,asyoumightalreadyknow,andtrytofindmyownstrengthandweaknessesandstrivedhardtoovercomemyweakpoints.Inaddition,I’vefoundmyownpaceofstudying,whichIregardasthemostpreciousrewardofthisyear’seffort.Secondly,Ibegantotakeamoreactivepartinsportsthisyear.ItookeveryopportunityIhavetoexercise,andtakesportslessonsatagymnearmyapartment.ThoughIhaven’tlosemuchweight,Ifeelmyselfmuchhealthierthaneverbefore.ToconcludehowI’vemadetheseprogress,herecomesmyyearsmotto:nopains,nogains.Nomatterhowharditmightbe,sticktothegoalandneverquit,andneverdreamofshortcutstosuccess.Soifyouwanttoachievesomething,justtryhard,nomatterwhattheresultmightbe,you’resurelygoingtobenefitfromtheprocess.Goodluckeveryone,andIwishyouahappy,successfulnewyearin2018!(241words)点评：有读者意识，明确知晓是在朋友圈发的年度总结，所以开头结尾很应景。段落结构总体比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。第一段告知了自己的两个年度目标。第二段中有总体句、标记词（如：firstofall,inaddition），方便读者阅读。但总体表达都比较含糊，建议可以更加清晰化具体化（改变的行为不具体是因为目标不具体导致的）；特别是第二点，如果学生把目标定位，今年我要参加多少节健身课，或者我要完成多少公里的跑步，那么行为可以更具体，对是否可以达到自己年度目标的检测也可以更明确。第三段的经验总结与之前努力的匹配度不高。如果要写nopains,nogains，那么第二段里应该有具体的自己在遭遇瓶颈或者难以坚持的时候是如何咬牙坚持下来的。Goodluck建议可以另起一段。文本字数偏长。7+6+3=16Atthebeginningofthisyear,Ihavemadeupmymindtoachieveagoal.ThatwasIhopedthatIcouldlosemyweight.Withthepassingby,Ihaveachievedmygoal.Thefollowingaresomeofmyconclusionofthisobjective.Toreachmyobjective,Iworkedoutaseriesofplans.Tobeginwith,Idesignedahealthydietmenu,whichexcludedunhealthyfoodsthatIwasfondofbefore.That’sthebasicoflosingweight.Secondly,Iwenttoparkorsportingplacesregularlytodovarioussports.Asweallknow,themoreexerciseyoudo,themoreheatsyouwillconsume.Lastbutnotleast,Itookanactivepartineverykindsofschoolactivitywhichcannotonlyhelpmeloseweightbutalsoenrichmylife.Fromthisexperience,Iconcludethatonceyouhaveagoal,youshouldsticktoeveryhardshipsothatyoumayreachthemountaintop.Theprocessmaybefullofdifficultiesandyouarelikelywanttogiveup.Goahead,andthenyouwillfindthereisnothingcanhitdownyou.(191words)点评：段落结构比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。第二段中的标记词（tobeginwith,secondly,lastbutnotleast）不恰当。第三个努力的行为（Itookanactivepartineverykindsofschoolactivitywhichcannotonlyhelpmeloseweightbutalsoenrichmylife.）的内容不恰当，部分与主题无关（如：enrichmylife）。第三段的总结toogeneral，基本与第二段的努力行为没有关系。根据第二段的内容，经验应该是：管住嘴，迈开腿。字数偏多，建议160左右。5+6+2=13Attheendof2017,Ican’thelpthinkingtheaimwhatIhavesetaboutmakingagreatprofessinmathbeforethe2017come.Mathisaterribleformetostudywell.Tostudymathwell,asIfirmlybelieve,onlybypracticingmore,canIgainagoodmark.Inordertorealizethisaim,IgetupearliereverydaysothatIcanhavemoretimetodothemathexercise.Iaskteachermanyquestionsaboutthemath.Mymotheralwaysencouragemetostudymathwhenitcomestotheproblemofmath.Ialwaysfeelnervous,becauseIthinkitisverydifficultformetostudymathwell.ButbeingencouragedbytheparentsandteacherIhaveconfidence.Finally,Irealizedit.Iwanttosharemyexperiencetothestudentswhichhavethesameproblemasme.Practicemakesperfect.Ifwewantgainagoodmarkweshouldpracticemore.（162words）Asthefamoussayinggoes“Allthingsaredifferentbeforetheyareeasy.”Frommyperspective,theproverbmeansthatwe’reallinexperiencedandmightmeetnumerousfrustrationsbeforehandlingthetaskwell.Thereisnoexceptionthatwehavetogothroughacertainperiodtofamiliarizeourselveswiththepractice,duringwhichtheperspectiveismostrequired.Takemyselfasanexample,onceIwasassignedtodeliveraspeechonmyEnglishlearningmethod.NeverhadIgotsuchexperiencebefore,Iwastotallyoverwhelmedbythetask.Despitetheshynessandlackinconfidence,Iknowitclearthatthecapabilityofexpressingoneselftothepublicisofgreatimportanceinfuturework.Therefore,Istartedtopracticetryingtokeepoffnervousness.IlookedoutforvideosonTEDtomusic,thegestureofspeakersandspokealoudbeforemyparents.Thankstothesehardships,Imanagedtogiveasatisfyingspeech.Onemustbeequippedwithenduranceandfaithfulnessduringthecourseofexploration.Fewofusareborntobegenius.4.杨浦区马拉松(marathon)比赛需要志愿者发放矿泉水，学校校庆需要招募引导员。请你从中选取一个感兴趣的志愿者岗位，写信给负责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你的理由。范文1Dearsir,Hearingthatthemarathonmatchandschoolcelebrationneedalotofvolunteersandguides,IthinkIamqualifiedforthepositionofguidesanditwillbemygreathonortodothejob,soIwritetoyoutoenterfortheguide.First,Ihaveagreatsenseofdirection,whichenablesmetoleadactorsandactresstoarriveattheirpositionswithoutdifficulties.It’sveryessentialwhenthebackofstageiscrowdedwithpeopleanddifferentkindsofdecorationsandalltheperformersarehurryingtodressthemupandgettheirneededthingsready.Second,IhavetheexperienceofbeingaguidebeforeandIknewhowtodealwithunexpectedaccidentsandmistakes.Suchexperienceishelpfultocalmmyselfdowntoarrangethingsinorder.Besides,Iamfamiliarwithmyschoolmatesandhavegreatabilitiestocommunicatewiththem,whichmakesitpossibleformetofindtherightpersonandtalktothemtorelievetheirnervefortheperformance.Accordingtoalltheabilitiesabove,IthinkI’msuitableforthepositionandIreallyhopethatyoucangivemeachancetousemypowertoaddatouchtoourSchoolCelebration.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.YourssincerelyLiPing范文2DearSir,I’velearntthatourschoolisrecruitingguidesforthecelebrationofschoolanniversaryandI’mwritingtogiveaself-recommendation.Firstofall,anacutesenseofdirectionandmyfamiliaritywithallthelocationsoncampusputmeanadvantage.Consideringthatsomeofouralumnusmaytakealongandtiresomejourneytoattendourcelebration,Iamsurethatmyairofdelightwillsweepthemofftirednessinnotime.Besides,informingthemofthechangeinrecentyearsandsharinganecdotesabouttheschoolcanremindthemoftheirpreciousmemoriesheresothattheywillnolongerbeshroudedinasenseofunfamiliarity.Furthermore,itismyoutstandingcommunicationskillsandabilitytoarticulatethatdistinguishme.Iwouldn’tforgettoleavethemprivatespacefornostalgiaafterfulfillingmyobligations.Iwouldbegreatlyobligedifyouwouldallowmethisgoldenopportunitytoenhancemysocialskillsandtocontributetotheasavolunteer.YourssincerelyLiPing范文3DearSir,Iamwritingtoapplyforthevolunteerwhogivesmineralwatertomarathonrunners.Whyithinkamqualifiedforthispositioncanbeconcludedinthefollowingthreeaspects.Firstandforemost,iamanexperiencedchoicebothinmarathonandintheworkofvolunteering.Althoughihaveneverrunamarathonbefore,ihaveaccompaniedmyuncletoattendthiseventformanytimes,soiamquitefamiliarwiththerunningrouteandsomecommonknowledgeofit.Second,ipossesstheknowledgeoffirstaidandandhavegreaterpatiencewithpeople.Oncesomethinghappens,iwillbeabletogiveahelpinghandtothemedicalteamtoreducerisktolargestextent.It’salwaysadvisabletomakefullpreparationsforfearofunexpectedaccidents.Asthejobrequiresstandingforalongtimeinthesunlight,waitingforeveryparticipatetopassby,patienceisundoubtedlyamust,whichisfortunatelymymerit.Lastbutnotleast,ihaveastrongandhealthybodywhichenablemetostandthehotweatherandtheexhaust,keepinghelpingtheparticipantsuntilthemarathonisover.Ireallyrespecttheparticipantsnotonlyfortheirdoggedperseverancebutalsofortheirhugecouragetosignupformarathoniwishonedayicouldtakepartintheeventaswell.Butbeforethat,ifeellikeservingasavolunteertocontributemyowneffortsoastoshowmyrespect.Hopeiwillbeyourfirstchoice.YourssincerelyLiPing范文4Dearsir,I’veheardthatthecomingmarathonraceneedsvolunteerstohelpgivewatertoathletes.I’minterestedinitandIhopeIcouldbeofferedthisposition.IhavetoadmitthatI’mahugefanofmarathon.ButsinceI’mnotthatsuitableforsuchexhaustingsport,Ican’tentertheracemyself.SoIwanttojointhevolunteerteaminordertogetclosetosuchanexcitingevent.ItwouldbeagreatexperienceifIwereabletobechosenandtofeeltheheatoftheraceandtheenthusiasmoftheattendants.Besides,Idohaveexperiencesinvolunteeringduringamarathon.Ididitseveraltimesinthepastfewyears.Iknowhowtogivethewaterwithoutdisturbingtheathletes.It’salwaysbettertohaveanexperiencedoneinsteadofseveralfreshmenwhoarenotsurewhenandwheretogivethewater.Ibelievewewillbeingoodcooperation.Soplease,considermyapplicationandgivemeachancetoprovemyselfasanexcellentvolunteer.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YourssincerelyLiPing5.崇明区明启中学计划在寒假的2018年2月5日至2018年2月18日（2018年2月16日为中国春节）期间组织一批学生到美国的结对学校JenisonPublicSchool进行为期两周的交流学习，但具体的交流内容还在研讨之中。现学校要求想要参加的学生自行向负责该项目的王老师写申请书，并就交流的内容提出建议，然后再由学校商讨确定交流学生的名单。假设你是该校学生李敏，想要参加该项目，给王老师写申请书。你的申请书需包括：想要参加该项目的愿望；想要参加该项目的理由；就交流内容提出具体建议。注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。DearMr.WangI’mLiMin.HearingthatyouareplanningtoorganizeagroupofstudentstoJenisonPubilcSchool,USA,foracademicexchange,Iwouldreallyliketoapplyforthisopportunity.MyparentsandIhavediscussedthematterandtheystronglyapproveofmyparticipationinthisactivity,whichliterallymeansIwillmissthefamilyreunionthisSpringFestival.SinceIhaveneverexperiencedtogoabroadforexchangestudy,Iwillsurelybenefitquitealotbylearningandcommunicationinadifferentstudyatmosphere,letaloneJenisonPubilcSchoolenjoyingthelongesthistory,thegreatestreputationandthemostexperiencedteachingmode.Problemssuchascommunicationbarriersandculturalshockmustbefeltandreadytobesolvedduringtwoweeks,sothatAmericanstudentsandIcanachievemutualunderstandingsinthefieldofcultureandeducation.What’smore,Ihavealreadyworkoutascheduletoenrichthisprogramforyourfurtherreference.AspecialfoodplanisonthewayforAmericanstudents.TheywillbeexposedtothewonderfulChineseCuisine,enablingthemtohaveatasteofadifferentfoodculture.Themostimportantofall,IhaveawishtorepresentourstudentstoenhancetheSino-USrelationship.Andpersonally,Ifirmlybelievethatwithsuchadetermination,thisprogramwillimprovemystudyinterest,andcultivateamorematureandindependentpersonality.Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemethishonor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiMin6.长宁区近年来，人工智能（ArtificialIntelligence)发展迅速，人们日益关注AI对人类未来的影响。马云认为，人类创造出的机器，不可能超越人类。霍金（StephenHawking）则表示：“人工智能的完全发展可能预示着人类的终结”。你同意谁的观点，请说明理由。范文1Withthefast-paceddevelopmentofArtificialIntelligence,human-beingsconcernsaboutitsinfluencearealsogrowing.WhileothersarepersuadedintoMaYun’sbelievingthatthemachinescreatedbyhuman-beingscan’texceedhumanintelligence,IwillalwayssticktomypersonalopinionthatthesufficientdevelopmentofArtificialIntelligencemaycausetheendofhuman-beings,thesameasStephenHawking'sperspective. Firstly,manypeopleonlyhaveseentheAI’sbenefitsofcharitingusaboldcoursetoamoreconvenientandeasylife,buttheyhaven’tseenthattheAIhasrobbedmostworkers’job,whichledthemtoamiserablelifeoffailingtosupporttheirfamilies.ThenittriggeredafreshargumentthatAIwouldreplaceusineveryindustryandpeoplefromallwalksoflifemightlosetheirjobs,beingshortofincomeandevenfood. Secondly,Idon'tbelievethatwecanalwayscontroltheAI.Theproblemisthatnowwejusthaveinventeditbutreallyhaven'tknownaboutwhetherithasitsownmindtothink,whileitactuallyknowswhatwearethinkingabout.Ifitisawareofitsabilitytodamageusallbytakingcontrolofourlife,wewillbefinishedeasily.Allinall,wecan’tturnablindeyetotheseconcerns.ThereisnotbetterchoicethandoingsomethingtochangetheprevioussituationsothatwecansparepeopletheiranxietyandlivewiththehelpofAIconveniently.范文2WithArtificialIntelligencedevelopingrapidlyinrecentyears,concernsovertheinfluenceofAIonourfuturelifehaveballooned.InJackMA’sopinion,AIwon'tsurpasshumanbeingsanddominanttheworld,whilefromStephenHarking'spointofview,thecompletedevelopmentofAImayleadtotheendofhumandominance.Iapproveofthelatteropinion,althoughitsoundsalittlebitincredible.Firstofall,AI,thoughcreatedbyhumans,issuperiortohumanbeingsinmanyfields.Fromthebasicmechanicalwork,inwhichtheyaremoreprecisethanus,tothoseintelligencegames,whereAIphaGogasbeatentwoofourworld-classGomasters.ThesefactsallindicatethegiganticpotentialofthedevelopmentofAI,andthus,Ibelieveit’spossibleforAIstosurpassusinallrespects.What’smore,AIsmayhavethewillingtooutweighhumanbeings.Inastudycarriedoutbyscientists,twoAIscommunicatedwitheachotherandeventuallydevelopedtheirownlanguage.Whiletheyaren’tfullydevelopednow,wemustkeepalertaboutinsteadofjustchasingtheprofits.Surely,IamnotignoringthebenefitsAIshavebroughttoourlifeorprotestingagainstthedevelopmentofAIs.Justrememberthat,astitchintimesavesnine,keepingalertfromthebeginningisalwaysbetterfromthanmakingupforthemistakesAIsmayprobablymake.7.松江区目前，根据规定，上海高中生必须在三年内完成一项课题研究（ProjectResearch）才能拿到高中毕业文凭。对此，大家意见不一。请谈谈你对此规定的看法，并陈述你理由。作文范文1：Accordingtothenewlyreleasedregulations,onlywhenshanghaiseniorhighstudentsfinishaprojectresearchinthreeyearscantheyreceivethegreateducationdiploma.Manyparentsmayholdtheviewthatit'sawasteoftimedoingso,thushavinganadverseeffectonstudentsacademicperformances.Howeverfrommyperspective,thebenefitsoutweighthedrawbacksintermsofall-rounddevelopment.Myreasonsareasfollows.Firstandforemost,studentstendtolearnknowledgeandskillsfromthetextbookssothattheyhavenoideahowtoapplywhatthey'velearnedtopractice.Fortunately,thenewreformoffersthemaplatformwheretheycancombinetheorywithpractice,whichisagoodwaytoenhancetheirmentalandphysicaldevelopment.Secondly,whatstudentscanacquirefromtheresearchismorethanspecificknowledgeinonecertainfield.Onlyinthiswaycantheygettoknowthesignificanceofteamspiritsandsomethingnewaboutthisamazingworld.Inconclusion,Istronglyapproveofthisregulationinthatstudentscanhaveaccesstowhattheydesiretolearnandimprovetheirall-rounddevelopmenttoalargedegree.作文范文2：Asidefromacademicachievements,ShanghaihighschoolstudentsarerequiredtoaccomplishaProjectResearchinthreeyears,otherwise,theycannotgetthediplomaforgraduation.Althoughmanythinkilloftherequirement,Isupportitbecauseshowsanattempttosparkstudents’underlyingqualities.First,ProjectResearchmotivatesstudentstothinkindependentlyandtolearnteamwork.SinceProjectResearchcoversallwalksoflife,studentscanselectasocialphenomenonoraspecificsciencesubjecttostudy.Moreover,ifstudentsgeneratearesearchgroup,theycanlearnhowtocopewithcooperation.Second,itfostersthespiritofexploring.Insteadofjustlookinghowitworks,studentsareforcedtodoitontheirownandexploretheirprojectsthoroughlytogetasatisfyingresult.Third,itequipsthemforuniversitiesorcolleges.Contrarytotheroutinestudyofhighschoolstudents,universitiesdemandself-disciplineandexploration.It’schildishtowaitforteacherstotellyouwhatbooktoreadandwhatwillbeexamined.Inbrief,ProjectResearchisaninnovativeapproachtourgestudentstobroadentheirhorizonandtoescapefromtheheavystudyburden.作文范文3：Accordingtotherules，highschoolstudentsinShanghaiaresupposedtoaccomplishaprojectresearchwithinthreeyears;otherwisetheywon’tgettheirhighschooldiplomas.Thereareseveraladvantagesinprojectresearch.Thefirstadvantageisthatresearchactivitycanpreparestudentsforuniversityeducation.Thesecondoneisthatresearchcantrainstudents’waysofthinking.However,thenegativeaspectsofprojectresearcharealsoapparent.Students’timeislimitedandstudyingoccupiesmostoftheirtime.Asaresult,theydon’thaveenoughtimeforahigh-qualityprojectresearch.Theymaycopyfromeachother.Astome,Ithinkthedisadvantagesoutweightheadvantages.Nowadays,studentscansetasidenotimeforprojectresearch.Authoritieshadbetterhavefurtherdiscussions.作文范文4：Accordingtoalatestregulation,thediplomaforseniorHighSchoolcanonlybeissuedafterthestudentsfinishingaprojectresearchwithin3years.Itdividescriticizers:someapplaudtherequirement,whileothersarecritical.Asforme,Iwouldliketojointhelattergroup.Firstly,underthecurrentteachingscheme,thestudentsarerequiredtolearnupto10subjects,whichhasalreadyservedasaheavyburdenformoststudents.Therefore,ifthemustisexertedindiscriminately,itwillundoubtedlycombinethepressureforthosestudents.What’smore,underthecurrenteducationemphasizingvariousstandardsforjudgingthestudents’

qualities,it’sbettertoselectvariedcontentsconcerningtheresearch,thestudents’

resultsofwhichareopen.Consequently,itisdefinitelyunreasonabletosimplyrelatetheissuingofthediplomatowhethertheresearchesarefinished.Inaword,theregulationnotonlyexercisesextrapressuretothestudents,butalsoprovestobeagainstthepresentvariety-encouragingeducation.8.宝山区某英文报正举办题为“ApersonalhabitI’dliketochange”的征文比赛。请你根据征文题目写一篇短文，参加该征文活动，具体要求如下：①简述你想改变的这一行为习惯；②说明你改变这一习惯的理由及措施范文一：ApersonalhabitI’dliketochangeRecently,I’vealwaysconsideredchangingmypersonalhabit,thatiswatchingTVtoolongafterschool.Fromthelong-termpointofview.IdothinkthatIoughttotakeupreadingratherthanjustwatchingsoapoperasonTV.Myreasonsarelistedasfollows：Inthefirstplace,Idon’tthinktheshowsofeverykindarereallyworthwatching.Inaddition,IfindthatamajorityofthemTVofferstomecan’tplayanextraordinaryroleasthestartingpointofthevoyages.ComparedwithTV,bookscanshapetheworldwhichisfullofemotional,imaginativeandhistorical,openingupabridgewhichislinkedtotherealworld.Moreover,asisknowntoall,settingtoomuchtimeasidejustforwatchingTVisawasteoftime,especiallyI’minthecriticalperiodofSeniorThree.Inthelongterm,itmayhaveabadeffectonmyacademicstudieswhenIlosemyselfintheworldTVcreates.Obviously,watchingTVhasmuchmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.SoIshallspendmoretimeinreadingmuchmoremeaningfulbooksandsparingnoefforttostudybetter.Atthislevelofanalysis,itmustbeawiserchoiceformetochangemypersonalhabit-watchingTVtoolong.Toputitinanutshell,IhopethatIcansucceedinhighlightingsomethingmoremeaningfulinsteadofputtingtoomuchemphasisontheworldTVcreatesformewhichiscomparativelyskin-deep,comparedwiththetreasureinbooksandhappinessofstudy.范文二：ApersonalhabitI’dliketochangeItisthecasethatwateristofishwhatthephoneistome.Withthedevelopmentofelectronicdevices,thesmartphoneissoappealingthatIcan’thelpbutsurftheinternetonitbeforeIgotobed.However,thisbadhabithasmadeadifferencetomystudy,whichcanbeconcludedfrom2aspects.Obviously,itshortensmysleeptimegreatly.Asaresult,myefficiencyandpassionforstudyarecutdownowingtothetirednessandexhaustion.Fromanotheraspect,playingphoneitselfmaydistractmyconcentrationfrommyacademicstudy,whichleadstomyfailureintheexams.Accordingly,Ihavetosparenoefforttogetridofthisbadhabit.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itmightbeusefultoturnoffthephonebeforebedtime.Consequently,thereisnodoubtthatIwillfallasleepsoonandhaveasoundsleep,whichareabletoempowermetobefullofenergynextmorning.ButwhatIamsupposedtofocusonistheenhancementofmyself-regulation.OnlywhenIlearntomanagemytimewell,canIreallyarrangemyscheduleinaproperway.Inconclusion,thepersonalhabitI’dliketochangedoesharmtobothmyhealthandmystudy,whichIwillmakeupmymindtoremove.范文三：ApersonalhabitI’dliketochangeItisroughlyestimatedthatalmosteveryonehasauniquehabit,andsodoI.Myindividualhabit,takenupinmychildhood,isbitingmynails,whichhasachronicallynegativeeffectonothers’impressionme.Comparativelyspeaking,myownhabitseemsquiteviolentabusivewhenitcomestoothers,forsometimesIwilluseneedlesorsomethingsharptoeliminatethetissueswhicharebeyondmyteeth’stouch.Itisregulartoacertainextent,formetobleedorbeinfectedduetothisharmfulhabit.However,thekeyfactorcausingmetochangeisthatbitingmymailsisregardedasthebehavioroflackingself-assurance.AndformanytimesIhavebeentoldonlyafterchangingandkickingthisawfulhabitcanIbecomemoreself-confidentanddeservestrustingandrespecting.Consequently,Ihavemadeadeterminationtotakeimmediatemeasures,tothoroughlyabandonit.Consideringthefreezingtemperaturenow,apairofglovesaresupposedtobegreatlyeffectivetohidemyfingers,andsomespicysaucescanbetakenadvantageof.Moreover,theresolutionandpersistencethatisofgreatnecessityintermsoftheprogress.Difficultandtoughasitmaybe,IwillsparenoeffortandsticktoitsothatIwillultimatelyachievesuccessandimproveothers’impressiononme.范文四ApersonalhabitIwouldliketochangeIhaveabadhabitthatIalwaysputwhatIneedtodotodaytothenextday.Thehabitissocalled“Procrastination”,andIhavebeenbotheredbyitovertheyears.Itisoftenthecasethatstudentsarehighintheirseniorthree.AmbitiousasIam,Ialwaysplanmyeverydaytaskf