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2021高考英语读后续写专题(十三)一:典题技法指导ThisstoryhappenedtomemanyyearsagobutIcanstillrememberitwell.WhenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkinginDenver,Iwasdrivingtomyparents'homeinMissouriforChristmas.Onmyway,Ifoundthatmycarwasrunningoutofgas.SoIstoppedatagasstationabout50milesfromfromOklahomaCity,whereIwasplanningtostopandvisitafriend.WhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister(收款台),Isaidhellotoacouple(夫妻)whowerealsopayingforgasandtheyrespondedwiththeirwarmsmiles.Itookoff,buthadgoneonlyafewmileswhenblacksmokepouredfromthebackofmycar.Mycarjustbrokedown.Whatatrouble!IstoppedandwaswonderingwhatIshoulddonextwhenacarpulledupbehindme.ItwasthecoupleIhadspokentoatthegasstation.Theysaidtheywouldtakemetomyfriend's.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytothecity,andwhenIgotoutofthecar,thehusbandgavemehisbusinesscard.Arrivinghome,Iwrotetohimandhiswifeathank-younoteforhelpingme.Soonafterwards,IreceivedaChristmaspresentfromthem.Intheirnotetheysaidthathelpingmehadmadetheirholidaysmeaningful.Yearslater,Idrovetoameetinginanearbytowninanearlymorning.Theroadconditionwasquitepooronthewayanditwassaidthatcarsbrokedownfrequentlythere.Anyway,Igottheresafeandsound.Afterthemeeting,IreturnedtomycarandfoundthatI'dgotaflattire(瘪胎).IwasatalosswhenInoticedthattheFriendlyFordDealership-ashopsellingFordcars--wasrightnextdoor.Iwalkedoverandfoundtwosalesmenintheshop.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmencametome.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyes.Paragraph2:Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit.二、写作思路1.确定主题:大主题是人与社会--良好的社会关系与社会交往。主旨是乐于助人,人生才有意义。原文中第三段最后一句--helpingmehadmadetheirholidaysmeaningful--体现全文的主题。所以结尾处须有点题。IwillneverforgetthelessonArthurtaughtme:Lifeismeaningfulwhenyoucangiveahandtothoseintrouble.2.时空变化:第一段情节发生的时间是会议结束以后afterthemeeting.地点是inashopsellingFordcars,第二段情节发生在作者的小车边,时间是第一段以后不久afterawhile。3.续写难点:第一段情节比较简单,第二段开头提示语理解有难度--Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit.应该思考的一个问题是they指代thecouple还是thetwosalesmen;另一个问题是轮胎漏气为什么要启动汽车startedit。下水时,最后安排启动汽车听发动机的声音,先检查汽车发动机是否有问题,确保汽车不会在路上breakdown。检查发动机以后,再补轮胎这样的情节安排应该是合理。另外,原文的thehusband在续写时应该给出姓名,原因是thehusbandgavemehisbusinesscard.Arrivinghome,Iwrotetohimandhiswifeathank-younoteforhelpingme.Soonafterwards,IreceivedaChristmaspresentfromthem.所以续写时thehusband以多年未见的好友(Arthur)身份出现。三、写作提纲Paragraph1:Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmencametome.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyes.1.Surely,itwasmylong-lostfriend,Arthur,alwayswearingawarmsmile.2.WhatacoincidencethatArthurwouldappearinfrontofmewhenIhadtrouble!Ithought.3.Forasecond,Istaredathimindisbelief,mymouthhangingopen.4.InthemeanwhileTominstantlyrecognizedmeandhegavemeahugehug.5.“Whatbringsyouhere?”heaskedwithapuzzledexpressiononhisface.6.SoItoldhimthatmycargotaflattireandthatconsideringthepoorroadcondition,itmightbrokedownonmywaybackhome.7.Knowingwhathadhappenedtome,hesaidthathewouldbegladtogivemeahandagain.Paragraph2:Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit.1.Afterlisteningtothesoundoftheengine,Arthurtoldmethattherewasnothingwrongwithit.2.Andthentheystartedtofixthetireandwechattedhappily.3.Arthurtoldmethatthethank-younotefrommeinspiredhimtoliveameaningfullifebyhelpingothers.4.Soonafterwards,hegotthetirefixed.5.Hegotup,wipedthesweatfromhisfaceandwishedmeapleasantjourney.6.Icouldn’tthankhimenough.7.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetthelessonArthurtaughtme:Lifeismeaningfulwhenyoucangiveahandtothoseintrouble.四:参考范文Paragraph1:Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmencametome.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyes.Surely,itwasmylong-lostfriend,Arthur,alwayswearingawarmsmile.WhatacoincidencethatArthurwouldappearinfrontofmewhenIhadtrouble!Ithought.Forasecond,Istaredathimindisbelief,mymouthhangingopen.InthemeanwhileTominstantlyrecognizedmeandhegavemeahugehug.“Whatbringsyouhere?”heaskedwithapuzzledexpressiononhisface.SoItoldhimthatmycargotaflattireandthatconsideringthepoorroadcondition,itmightbrokedownonmywaybackhome.Knowingwhathadhappenedtome,hesaidthathewouldbegladtogivemeahandagain.Paragraph2:Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit.Afterlisteningtothesoundoftheengine,Arthurtoldmethattherewasnothingwrongwithit.Andthentheystartedtofixthetireandwechattedhappily.Arthurtoldmethatthethank-younotefrommeinspiredhimtoliveameaningfullifebyhelpingothers.Soonafterwards,hegotthetirefixed.Hegotup,wipedthesweatfromhisfaceandwishedmeapleasantjourney.Icouldn’tthankhimenough.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetthelessonArthurtaughtme:Lifeismeaningfulwhenyoucangiveahandtothoseintrouble.二:课后练习读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Steve
wasthemostamazingpersoninallofMinneapolis,andhewasmycousin.Bytheageof19,StevewasastarbaseballplayerattheUniversityofMinnesota.Iwantedtobeexactlylikehim.SowhenSteveaskedmetogowithhimonaspringfishingtripinnorthernMinnesota,Iwasexcited!Afterplanningthetrip,wegathered
clothes
and
supplies,andbeganourgreatadventure.WereachedtheSuperiorNationalForestinnorthernMinnesotabyearlyevening.Onourwaytothe
campsite,Stevepointedtoasmallhousefarawayinoneofthemountains,sayingthatitwasthe
rangerstation
(护林站)wherethe
forester
worked.Finally,afteralongwalk,wereachedthecampsiteandsetupthecampasthesunwassetting.Steveknewallthetricksofanexperiencedwildernesscamper.Afterwegatheredenoughwoodfromthe
forest,hestartedthecampfireusingonlystoneandsteel—nomatches.Forsupperwefeastedonfreeze-driedbeef,wildriceandpeasoup.Iategreedilyafterallthatwork.Tiredenough,weclimbedintooursleepingbagsearlyandtalkedaboutourplansforfishingthenextday.Wewerestilltalkingquietlywhenasuddennorthwindpickedup;thetemperaturedroppedanditbegantosnow.Stevefoundawaytoincreasethetemperatureinsidethetent.Hedraggedalog(原木)fromtheforesttotheoppositesideofthecampfire.Thenhewrapped(包裹)aluminumfoil(铝箔)aroundthelog.Theheatfromthefirereflectedoffthefoilandintothetent.Soonimagesoflakefishwerefillingmydreams.Thesnowhadstopped,butsometimelaterapowerfulwindmusthavekickeduptheflamesofourdying
fire.IwasabruptlyawakenedbySteve.Ourtentwasonfire.Frightened,Iranoutofthetentimmediately.Thetentcollapsed(倒塌)withSteveinside.Withoutanythoughtofendangeringmyself,Ireachedintotheburningtentandpulledhimtotheicylake.Fortunately,wewerenotseriouslyhurt.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1:Later,aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm,weconsideredourdifficultsituation.
___________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Suddenly,weheardanoiseintheforest.
___________________________________________________________________________参考答案:参考范文:Later,aswestoodbytheburningtenttokeepwarm,weconsi
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