读后续写：溜冰 学案-高三英语写作专项

Craigwatchedhisoldsister,

Riley,andherfriendLizraceupanddownthelakeontheirskates(冰鞋),avoidingotherhockey(曲棍球)players.Their

skateblade

(刀片)lookedlikesilversmoke.Whenthegamewasover,thegirlsskateduptothebenchwhereCraigwassitting.CraigaskedRileywhatskatingfeltlike.

“WhenIgoreallyfast,IfeellikeI’m

flying,”shesaid.That’ssilly,thoughtCraig.Flyingissomethingbirdsdointheair,notsomethingpeopledooniceskates.ThenhewatchedRileygobackoutontheice.Sheskatedaroundandaroundtheedgeofthe

lake

withherarmspumpingandherscarftrailingbehindher.Soonshewentsofastthatherarmslookedlikewingsandherscarflookedlikeafeatherytail.Maybeskatingreallywaslikeflying.WhenRileysatdowntotakeherskatesoff,Craigsaid,“IwishIcouldfly.”Riley

retied

herskatelacesandcrouched(蹲下)nexttoCraig.“Getonmyback,”shesaid,andCraigdid.Rileystartedskating,butCraigdidn’tfeellikehewasflying.Itjustfeltlikeashakingpiggybackride.“You’retooheavy,”Rileysaid.“Ican’tgofastwhenI’mcarryingyou.”Sheskatedslowlybacktothebench.Craiggotoffherback.“Evenifyoucouldgo

fast,Iwouldn’tbeflying,”hesaidsadly.“Ineedskatestofly.”Rileydidn’tsayanythingonthewalkhome,butafewdayslatersheaskedCraigifhewantedtogoskating.“Towatch?”heasked.“Not,toskate,”shesaid

cheerfully.

“MomandIfoundapairofmyold

skates.Theymightfityou.”Theskateswerealittlebig,butwhenRileystuffednewspaperinthetoes,theyfit.Craigcouldn’tstopsmiling.Hedidn’twanttotakethemoff,buthehadtosohecouldwalktothelake.RileyandLizwentwithhim.Theycarriedtheirhockeysticksandawooden

chair.

HardlyhadtheygottothelakewhenCraigputhisskatesbackonandRiley

helped

himontotheice.翻译：1.克雷格怀疑地看了莱利一眼，不知道这把椅子是干什么用的。___________________________________2.他抬起眼睛，环顾了一眼湖面，湖面似乎很宽阔，边缘被雾气模糊了。___________________________________3.克雷格小心翼翼地把脚踩在冰上，带着强烈的怀疑和轻微的恐惧推着椅子i向前走。___________________________________4.当他向前移动时，他感觉到他的手紧紧地粘在椅子上，四肢僵硬而冰冷。___________________________________5.他们滑得如此之快，以至于他感觉到风轻轻地吹过他，湖岸边的树木也一闪而过___________________________________6.白色的荒野逐渐变成了一大片白云，而反射天空的湖面则与天空本身梦幻般地融化了。___________________________________7.克雷格在空中自由地伸展双臂，完全沉浸在大自然的美丽中。___________________________________8.有那么一瞬间，滑冰的念头溜走了，取而代之的是欢快的放松，告诉他自己其实在“飞翔”。___________________________________9.她在湖边滑来滑去，双臂摆动，围巾飘在身后。___________________________________10.很快，她走得如此之快，以至于她的胳膊看起来像翅膀，她的围巾看起来像羽毛般的尾巴。也许滑冰真的就像飞翔一样。___________________________________答案：1.克雷格怀疑地看了莱利一眼，不知道这把椅子是干什么用的。Craig

enquiringly

cast

Riley

alook,notknowingwhatthe

chair

wasfor.（notknowing非谓语）enquiringly

adv怀疑地同义词：disbelievinglydoubtfullydubitativelyenquiringlyskeptically·吉米探询地看着彼特，而彼特却耸耸肩。Jimmylooked

enquiringly

atPetewhoshruggedhisshoulders.（shrug记得双写）2.他抬起眼睛，环顾了一眼湖面，湖面似乎很宽阔，边缘被雾气模糊了。Raisinghiseyes,heglancedaroundthelake,whichseemed

broadanditsedgewasblurredwithmist.（非谓语结构+非限制性定语从句）blur

v

使…模糊不清；使暗淡·房子在薄雾中隐隐约约看不清。Thehousesappearedasa

blur

inthemist.3.克雷格小心翼翼地把脚踩在冰上，带着强烈的怀疑和轻微的恐惧推着椅子向前走。Craigcautiouslysethisfootontheice,

pushingthechairforwardwithstrongdoubtandslightfear.（非谓语+with结构）strongdoubt：强烈的怀疑4.当他向前移动时，他感觉到他的手紧紧地粘在椅子上，四肢僵硬而冰冷。Ashemovedforward,hefelthishands

tightlygluedto

thechair,limbsstiffandcold.glue

v

粘合；似胶般固着于n.胶；各种胶合物·我们全神贯注的注视着舞台。Oureyeswere

glued

tothestage.5.他们滑得如此之快，以至于他感觉到风轻轻地吹过他，湖岸边的树木也一闪而过。Theyskatedso

fast

thathefeltthe

windgentlyblowingpasthimandthetreesalongthelakebanksflashingby.（so...that句型，以及非谓语）flashby:一闪而过·我们的假期似乎一眨眼就过去了。Ourvacationseemedtojust

flash

by.美·电影《隐秘的生活AHiddenLife》台词Andyoucouldn'tseewhereitwasgoing,just...

thefieldsandtrees

flashing

by.你看不到它要开去哪里只看到

田地和树木飞快地倒退

6.白色的荒野逐渐变成了一大片白云，而反射天空的湖面则与天空本身梦幻般地融化了。Thewhitewildernessgraduallytransformedintoamassivepatchofwhitecloudwhilethelakereflectingthetheskydreamilymeltedwiththeskyitself.（优美描写）transforminto：转变为dreamily：adv.梦似地，朦胧地；爱梦想地·他把火点着了，游苔莎从椅子上恍恍惚惚地看着他。Helitthefire,Eustacia

dreamily

observinghimfromhercouch.7.克雷格在空中自由地伸展双臂，完全沉浸在大自然的美丽中。

Craig

stretched

hisarmsfreelyintheair,totally

immersed

inthebeautyofnature.

8.有那么一瞬间，滑冰的念头溜走了，取而代之的是欢快的放松，告诉他自己其实在“飞翔”。Foramoment,thethoughtofskatingslippedaway,andinitsplacewas

cheerful

surgeofrelaxation,

tellinghimthathewasactually“flying”.（用了无灵主语以及非谓语）surge：(感情等)洋溢,奔放·他赢得比赛时感到一阵激动。Hefelt

a

surge

of

pureadrenalineashewontherace.美·电影《地球的夜晚NightonEarth第4集:DarkSeas》台词Atlast,thetideisturning.

Hormones

surge.‎终于潮水开始转向荷尔蒙飙升。9.她在湖边滑来滑去，双臂摆动，围巾飘在身后。Sheskatedaroundandaroundtheedgeofthe

lake

withherarms

pumpingandherscarftrailing

behindher.

（用了with结构）10.很快，她走得如此之快，以至于她的胳膊看起来像翅膀，她的围巾看起来像羽毛般的尾巴。也许滑冰真的就像飞翔一样。Soonshewentsofastthatherarms

lookedlikewings

andherscarf

lookedlikeafeatherytail.Maybeskatingreallywaslikeflying.（用了写作手法：明喻，用物做喻体，增加了文章的文学感）参考范文：Thensheputhishandsonthebackofthechair.

Craigenquiringly

cast

Riley

alook,

notknowingwhatthe

chair

wasfor.‘Ithelpsyouskatesteadily.

Haveatry!’Craigcautiouslysethisfootontheice,

pushingthechairforwardwithstrongdoubtandslightfear.

Raisinghiseyes,heglancedaroundthelake,whichseemed

broadanditsedgewasblurredwithmist.

Ashemovedforward,hefelthishands

tightlygluedto

thechair,limbsstiffandcold.

Frustrated,Craigpushedthechairasideandexclaimed,“Notlike

flying!It’slikebeingledbyanoldhorse!”Rileydroppedherhead,

staringatherskates.Suddenly,abrilliantideasparkledinherbrain.ShewavedherhandforLiz.Afterawhile,eachgirltookoneofCraig’shands.

Andofftheywent.Theyskatedso

fast

thathefeltthe

windgentlyblowingpasthimandthetreesalongthelakebanksflashingby.

Thewhitewildernessgraduallytransformedintoamassivepatchofwhitecloudwhilethelakereflectingthetheskydreamilymeltedwiththeskyitself.

Craig

stretched

hisarmsfreelyintheair,totally

immersedinthebeautyofnature.Foramoment,thethoughtofskatingslippedaway,andinitsplacewas