Unit 5 Reading for Writing 写作课件【知识精讲+备课精研】 高中英语人教版选择性必修第二册 -

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manoeuvre?ReadandputA-E（P57)A.Chokingvictimsusuallyhaveonlyaboutfourminutesbeforetheycollapseandsometimesdie.B.Ifyouseesomeonechoking,firstcalltheemergencyservices.C.Chenwastednotime.D.Withchokingvictims,everyminutecounts.E.DoingtheHeimlichmanoeuvreonasmallchildisnotrecommended.CABEDFastReadingReadforthestructure

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theHeimlichmanoeuvrecommentsonthechokingincidentPart1:Para1-2Part2:Para3-5Part3:Para6①②③④⑤⑥thestoryofachokingincidentHowcanwewriteanarritiveessay?Whatcanwelearnfromthisarticle?readpart1carefullyAnarrativeessayshouldinclude:set-upconflictconclusionwhowhatwhere.........WhatdidChenWeido?What’stheendofthestory?...▪...▪...▪...010203Part1Part1ChenWei,ZhangTaoZhangTaowaschokingonsomesteakwhileeating.arestaurantinBeijingThefoodwasinstantlyforcedout,andZhangbegantobreatheagain.(Hewasfine)01Hewastednotime,gotupandrantothetableatonce.02WiththehelpofZhang’sfriends,hewasabletohelpZhangtohisfeet.03StandingbehindZhang,ChendidtheHeimlichmanoeuvre.Howcanwedescribeanurgentsituationvividly?formsexpressionsadj.adv.v.sentencestructures_________someonescreamingwas________onsomesteak,wasnow________histhroatwere__________himonthebackwastednotime,ranto...atonce,helpZhangtohisfeetdesperate

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holdingslappingwhenStandingTimetopractice!假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对他实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括：1.描述事故发生的经过；2.你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理)；3.简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。参考词汇：锅炉房boilerroom热水瓶thermosbottleWriting

StructurePart1set-upPart2conflictPart3conclusionPart4commentsstructure要点翻译1.烫伤非常严重。The____________wasverysevere.2.皮肤又红又肿。Theskinwasredand____________.3.我设法保持镇静，并快速回想在急救课堂上学到的内容。Imanagedto________________，andquicklyrecalledwhatIhadlearntinmy________________class.burnswollenremaincalmfirst-aid4.我立即把他的脚放到流动的凉水下，以减轻疼痛。Iplacedhisfeetunderthe__________________________________thepain.5.然后，我打电话叫了一辆出租车，并匆忙把他送往了医院。Afterwards,Icalledataxiand___________________________.6.在医院里，他接受了进一步的治疗。Inthehospital，hereceivedfurther____________.7.在那时我意识到了基本的急救知识是多么重要和实用。ThenIwas_________howimportantand__________abasic____________of_______________.coolrunningwaterrightawaytoeaserushedhimtothehospitaltreatmentawarepracticalknowledgefirstaidwas1.将句1和句2合并为含有so...that...的句子_______________________________________________________________2.将句3升级为含有现在分词作伴随状语的句子_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theburnwassoseverethattheskinwasredandswollen.Imanagedtoremaincalm,quicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidclass.词句升级3.将句5和句6合并为含有where引导的定语从句的句子_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________将句7升级为“only＋状语”放句首的倒装句_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterwards,Icalledataxiandrushedhimtothehospitalwherehereceivedfurthertreatment.OnlythenwasIawarehowimportantandpracticalabasicknowledgeoffirstaidwas.1.Finishthestory

2.Exchangeyourarticlewithyourpartner.3.Polishyourarticlewiththehelpofthechecklistonpage57.

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Oneday,LiMingandIwerewalkingbacktothedormfromtheboilerroomwhensuddenlyhisthermosbottleburstandtheboilingwatercausedinjuriestohisfeet.Theburnwassoseverethattheskinwasredandswollen.However,Imanagedtoremaincalm,quicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidclass.Iplacedhisfeetunderthecoolrunningwaterrightawaytoeasethepain.Afterwards,Icalledataxiandrushedhimtothehospitalwherehereceivedfurthertreatment.

OnlythenwasIawarehowimportantandpracticalabasicknowledgeoffirstaidwas.范文写作积累有关避免/处理紧急状况的一些表达:1、Bleeding:Try

to

stop

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bleeding.Press

a

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bleeding

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hold

it

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body

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