2014年8月28日fiona老师托福写作公益讲座

托福写作FionaContent独立写作框架TPO口语中适合写作的段子FAQ写作框架1）正正正一边倒（推荐打字速度慢的选择正正一边倒）开头理由1理由2（理由3）结尾2）正正负让步式开头理由1理由2admittedly，反面理由1结尾写作框架3）正负折中式开头正理由1反理由1结尾4）正开头正理由例子/实验结尾开头段写法（intro+stance）1）背景引入（概念引入）抓住问题中的关键词，如education/money，发表自己的看法。例：Somepeopleprefertomakefriendswithpeoplewhoaresmartwhileothersthinkthatit’sbettertoefriendswithsomeonewhohasasenseofhumor.Whichdoyouthinkisbetterandwhy?如：Friendsplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.Weneedfriendstobewithus.Ifwefeelupset,theycancomfortus;ifwefeelhappy,theycansharewithus.Friendsmakeourlifecomplete.2）题目总结转述简单对题目内容进行概括，之后进行改写，把句子扩展开来。加入多一点修饰性的形容词等。例：Somepeopleprefertomakefriendswithpeoplewhoaresmartwhileothersthinkthatit’sbettertoefriendswithsomeonewhohasasenseofhumor.Whichdoyouthinkisbetterandwhy?如：Thereareallsortsoffriendtypes.Someofthemareshyandsomeofthemmightbeextroverted.Sowearefacingalotofchoices.Somepeopleclaimthatitisreallycrucialtohaveafriendwhoisintelligent,becauseweneedsmartpeopletoenlightenus.Othersmightsuggestthatingfriendswithsomeonewhoishumorousismoreimportant.3）先扬后抑（先说明其中一种观点，再转折说另一种更好）先简单概括没有选择的好，再转折介绍选择的更好。例：Somepeopleprefertomakefriendswithpeoplewhoaresmartwhileothersthinkthatit’sbettertoefriendswithsomeonewhohasasenseofhumor.Whichdoyouthinkisbetterandwhy?如：Friendsareveryimportantinourlife.Selectingtherightfriendsisequallyimportant.Somepeopleclaimsthatbeingfriendswithsomeonewhoissmartisbetterbecauseheisabletoopenoureyesandhelpuswithstudies.However,Ithinkingfriendswithsomeonewhohasasenseofhumorismorebeneficial.4）名言警句或者惯用语开头例：Somepeopleprefertomakefriendswithpeoplewhoaresmartwhileothersthinkthatit’sbettertoefriendswithsomeonewhohasasenseofhumor.Whichdoyouthinkisbetterandwhy?分析：分手容易，交友不易，且交且珍惜。如：Itissaidthatfindingatruefriendisjustlikefindingtherightpersontospendtherestoflifewith.Friendsplayanimportantroleinourlife.Stance

1）问答Ifyouaskmewhichisbetter,myanswerwoulddefinitelybetheformer/latter.2）一般Ipersonallybelievethat….3）比较Some…whileothers…正文写法1）topicsentence+explanation+exampleSamplewriting1Ithinkpeoplewhohaveasenseofhumorhasthepowertolightenupourworld.Theyareabletospeakandactinwaysthatcouldmakeuslaugh,especiallywhenweareinbadmoodorhavingahardtimedoingsomethingright.Takeastoryinmyreallifeforinstance.MybestfriendFionaisthemosthilariouspersoninthisworldIthink.Sheisreallygoodatusingherexaggeratedbodygesturesandfacialexpressionstomakemelaugh.Twomonthsago,IlostmypetdogTony.HeranawaysomedayandIjustcouldn’tfindhim.IlookedeverywhereandIfelthelplessandsadbecausehe’sbeenstayingwithmeforoverfiveyears.Icriedallday.Thenatnight,Ireceivedananonymousemail.IclickedonitandfoundashortvideoclipwhereFionawasdressingadogcostumeandtalkinglikearealperson.Shesaid,Iwashavingagreattimewithanewfamily.I’mdyingandIdon’twantyoutoseemelikeway.Icriedoutloud.Fionawasright,maybeTonywaslivinghappilywithanicefamily.Thankstoher,Ididn’thavetofeelupsetanymore.正文写法2）topicsentence+explanation+dataAccordingtoasurveyconductedby…,oneofthemostfamous…throughouttheworld,…正文写法3）topicsentence+explanations分论点+两个方面（if...;if…）正文写法4）topicsentence+explanation+comparisonSamplewriting2Ithinkpeoplewhohaveasenseofhumorhasthepowertolightenupourworld.Theyareabletospeakandactinwaysthatcouldmakeuslaugh,especiallywhenweareinbadmoodorhavingahardtimedoingsomethingright.Butifwestaywithsomeonewhoisreallyboring,sayhenevertelljokesorhethinkseverythingyousaydoesnotmakeanysense,lifewouldbeboredtodeath.Ibelieveinthisway,therelationshipbetweenyouandthisfriendisnotgoingtolastverylong.

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1）总结上文。FromthepointsImentionedabove,….2）展望未来Thereisareasontobelievethat…I’msure…3）煽情PleaseletmequotesomethingIreadfrom…:“名言”.1Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Teachingisharderthanitwasinthepast.2Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Inordertosucceedindoinganewjob,theabilitytoadaptoneselftothenewenvironmentismoreimportantthantheexcellentknowledgeofthisjob.3

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Itismoreimportantforthegovernmenttospendmoneyonnewbuildingsthantopreservehistoricortraditionalbuildingsandhomes.4

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement.Moviesandtelevisionhavemorenegativeeffectsthanpositiveeffectsonthewayyoungpeoplebehave.5Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Inordertoattractgoodstudents,auniversityshouldspendalotofmoneyfundingsocialactivities.6Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Asmodernlifeesmorecomplex,itisessentialforyoungpeopletohavetheabilitytoplanandorganize.7Companyshouldusepublicrecognition,notmoneytorewardhardworking.8Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Thecar(automobile)hashadgreatereffecttosocietythantheairplanehasto.9

Doyouagreeordisagree:Technologydesignedtomakepeople'slivessimplerbutmakepeople'slivesmorecomplicated.10Agreeordisagree?Thereisnoreasontobeimpolite(rude)toanotherperson.Usespecificexamplesandreasonstosportyourstatement.11

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Studentscouldreceiveabetter,moreefficienteducationiftheyspend11monthsayearstudying.12

Agreeordisagree:MoviesandTVprogramsmadeinyourowncountryaremoreinterestingcomparingtomoviesandprogramsmadeinothercountries.TPO口语中的作文素材cooperationtpo27-task4antsworktogethertobuildbridgeoneantmovesforwarduntilitreachestheendofthetreebranchthenbackofitslegsholdontothebranchstretchoutitsbodyoutintheairanotherantdoesthesamethingwalkacrossthebodyofthefirstantandusebackofitslegstoholdontothefirstantsthenstretchoutitsbodyoutintheairtherestoftheantsdothesamethinguntilenoughantsconnecttheirlegstoformabridgeEnvironmental

protectiontpo24-task4macawbeautifulbirdwithcolorfulfeathersliveinrainforestwheretreesarebeingcutdownnoplacetoliveandpopulationdeclinedagroupofconcernedpeopleplantbacktreessavedthisbirdspeciesbusinesstpo28-task4diffbusinessstrategiestopromoteproductsrefute-and-persuadeinadvertising,firstpointoutdisadvantagesthenchallengethatbypointingoutthedisadvantagesinadvertisingpotsandpansfirstpointoutthepriceishigh,higherthanothercompanies'potsandpansnormallywon'tbuythen,saysthatit'sworththepricesinceitprovidesawarranty,whichmostofthecompaniesdon'tprovideifanythingiswrong,companycouldreplaceitfreelytpo18-task6

1thereisacompanythatsellstoycarsitstargetcustomersarekidssoifitplacestheadsduringtimewhenkidsarewatchingtvit'llmakesurethisagegroupwillbuy2acompanythatsellsboatsitstargetcustomersarepeoplewholivenearoceanorlakessoifthecompanycouldputtheiradsincitiesandtownsnearwaterit'llreachmorepotentialcustomersandsellmoreofitsboatsasaresulteducationtpo21-task4whenstudentsbehaveinappropriatelyintheclass,teacherswillfirstaskaquestion,thencontinuetheclasswithoutwaitingfortheanswerfromthestudentsagirlwouldalwayscallouttheanswertoquestionsitwasunfairtotheotherstudentswhoraisedtheirhandsintheairandwaitingfortheteacher'spermissiontoanswerthentheprofes