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1.Directions:Inmodernsociety,moreandmorepeoplehaveapart-timejob.Itisheldthatdoingpart-timejobshasadvantagesanddisadvantages.What’syouropiniononpart-timejob?Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofPart-timeJob.【写作指导】这是一篇论说文,要求就兼职工作的利与弊发表自己的观点。第一段:引出兼职工作的利弊,并提出论点。第二段:一一分析兼职工作的利弊。如兼职工作可以带来更多的收人,但还可以影响人们的工作精力等。第三段:总结全文,提出兼职工作有利有弊。应该合理分配自己的精力,才能在各种工作中充分展现个人能力。TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofPart-timeJobNowadays,moreandmorepeoplenotonlyworkasfull-timeemployeesbutalsohavepart-timejobs.Althoughworkingparttimebecomespopular,Ithinkithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.(引出论点)Onthepositiveside,part-timejobcanbringextraincome.( 提出第一分论点,论述兼职工作可以带来多的收人)Apart-timejobisusuallyconsideredtobenothingbutlow-paidsimplelabor;however,intoday'ssociety,itcanbespecializedwork,evenbetterpaidthanafull-timejob.Consequently,moreandmorepeoplebecomewildinhuntingforpart-timejobs.Moreover,doingapart-timejobcanbepleasing,especiallywhenitissomethingoneisinterestedin. (第二分论点,进一步论述兼职工作的好处,提出如果兼职工作成为个人趣的话,人们将会更加热爱自己的兼职工作Acompanyemployeemaybecomeapart-timeguitarplayerjustbecauseheiscrazyaboutplayingit.Inthiscase,onewillbeinspiredwithpassionandtakeinfinitepainstodothepart-timejob.Talkingaboutthenegativeside,doingapart-timejobcanbeenergy-consuming,especiallyforthosewhoarebusydoingtheirfull-timejob.(第三分论点,提出兼职工作的弊端:兼职工作会影响到人的工作精力,会使人无法全心全意地投人到一项工作中)somepeoplegotopart-timeworkrightafterabusyday.Thatcanbeexhausting,soitisdifficultforthemtoconcentrateontheirwork.Inconclusion,doingapart-timejobcanbeadouble-edgesword.Oneshouldnicelybalancehimselfbetweenthefull-timeandthepart-timeone,sothathecantakethegood,avoidthebadandhavehisabilityfullydisplayedinbothfields.(总体概括并强调论点)2.SomeImportantCharacteristicsofaGoodColleagueInmodernsociety,wespendalongtimewithourcolleagues.Asfarasworkingclassisconcerned,acolleague'scharacteristicissometimescrucialtoateam'ssuccess.Onemayaskwhatkindofpersonpeopleliketoworkwith.Ithinktherearethreeimportantcharacteristicsforacompetentcolleague.(引出论点)Firstly,acolleagueshouldbecooperative.(提出第一分论点,提出一个好同事应该乐于与团队成员合作)Inthecompany,oneisexpectedtocooperatewithothercolleaguesandcontributetheireffortstotheteam.Inotherwords,oneshouldhavethesenseofcooperationduringhisorherwork.Onlyinthisway,onecanbeacceptedbyothersandworkwiththemhappily.Secondly,agoodcolleagueshouldbeadaptable. 第二分论点提出一个好同事应该可以适应不同的工作环境)Oneshouldnotbestubborntoonepointbutseektogetaccustomedtochangesinroutines.Agoodcolleagueshouldaccommodatehimselforherselftoanewtaskeasilyandcanthereforeconquerthedifficulties.Inthisway,onemaygetrespectfromhisorhercolleagues.Thirdly,agoodcolleagueshouldbehelpful.(第三分论点,提出一个好同事应该乐于助人)Hersheshouldalwaysbereadytohelpothers.Thosewhoaretoomeantogivetheirhelptootherswillnotgetothers’helpeither.Ingeneral,agoodcolleagueshouldbecooperative,adaptableandhelpful.Withthoseimportantcharacteristics,apersoncandevelopwellnotonlyinhisorhercareer,butalsoinhisorherlife.(总体概括并强调论点)亮点词句adaptablebestubbornto执着，在文章中表示一个好的通识不应该只把注意力集中在一件事上。getaccustomedto习惯与某事，在文章中特之指学会适应不同情况。accommodateoneselfto使……适应3.【写作指导】本题是一个对比选择型题目。要求就大学生住在校内与在校外租房孰好孰坏作出自己的评判。本题可结合实际生活形成两种思路:思路一:住在校内好,原因在于可以与同学交流学习和思想,上学节省时间。思路二:在校外租房好,原因在于时间比较自由,待人接物较方便,可以不受他人影响。LivingonCampusorLivingOutsideSchool?Nowadays,choosingarightlivingplacebecomesanimportantissueforcollegestudents.Someofthemprefertolivealonebyrentingaroomnearschool,whileothersprefertolivewithclassmatesoncampus.Asforme,Iliketolivewithclassmatesingroupdormitoryoncampus'(引出论点)Thereareseveralvitalreasonsformyopinion.First,it'sveryconvenienttoaskclassmatesQuestionsaboutcoursesandhavevariousdiscussionswiththem.( 原因一:跟同学交流学习非常方便)Themailtaskofstudentsistoachieveoutstandingacademicperformanceratherthananythingelse.Livingoncampusbenefitsnotonlymebutalsomyclassmatesaswecanhelpeachother.Second,itcanmakemehavebetterpersonalrelations.(原因二:有助于建立良好的人际关系)Itisnotenoughtocommunicatewithclassmatesandfriendsjustinclassroom.Instead,weneedseeandtalktoeachotherfrequentlyinsparetimesoastomaintainfriendship.Third,itcansavememuchtime.(原因三:节省时间)Livingoutsideschoolabsolutelywillcostmemoretimetogoforclassesandgetback.Putallthewastedtimetogether,that'sreallyaconsiderableamount.Withthesavedtime,IcanstudylongertoimprovemyGPA.Meanwhile,Icanalsoparticipateinmoreassociationactivitiesinordertomakenewfriendsandenrichmyschoollife.Inconclusion,livingoncampusisthebestchoiceforcollegestudents.Itcansavethemalotoftimetoconcentrateonstudyandestablishbetterpersonalrelations.Contrarily,livingoffcampuswouldproduceadverseimpactandthereforeshouldbeavoided.(总体概括并强调论点)亮点词句nowadays,choosingarightlivingplacebecomesanimportantissueforcollegestudents.择一个合适的住处已成为一个重要问题。themaintaskofstudentsistoachieveoutstandingacademicperformanceratherthananythingelse.校的首要任务就是取得优异的学习成绩，而非其它任何事情。associationactivities校内的社团活动GPAgradepointaverage的缩写，指各科成绩的平均积分点。4.Directions:AstherapiddevelopmentofChineseeducation,manystudentsareundergreatburdeninordertogetintothedoorofuniversity.Therefore,manyofthempaytoomuchattentiontoexaminationscoresandneglectextracurricularactivities.What'syouropiniononextracurricularactivities?Writeacompositionabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:TheImportanceofExtracurricularActivities【写作指导】这是一篇论说文,要求就课外活动的重要性发表自己的观点。典型的观点是:课外活动既可以丰富学生的业余生活,又可以拓展学生的世界观。第一段:引出课外活动的问题,并提出论点。第二段:第三段:总结全文,提出课外活动的重要性。TheImportanceofExtracurricularActivitiesUndertheheavyburdenofproportionofstudentsenteringhigherschool,moreandmoreschoolspaytoomuchattentiontothescoreoftheirstudents,andignorethecultivatingofstudents'comprehensiveability.Asaresult,studentsareledtoover-emphasizeallkindsofexaminations.Myideaisthatextracurricularactivitiesarecrucialforone'sgrowth.(引出论点)Firstandforemost,extracurricularactivitycanwidenstudents'pointofviewandbroadentheirmind.( 出第一分论点,)throughtheattendingofextracurricularactivities,studentswillgettoknowdifferentworldsandexperiencediversifiedfieldswhichcanhelptoenlargestudents'eyesightandenrichtheirlife.Moreover,extracurricularactivitiescanhelpstudentsdevelopdifferentkindsofabilities,suchascommunicationandcooperationcapability.Secondly,extracurricularactivitiescanstudentsgetadeeperunderstandoftheworldtheyrelivingin.第二分论点,指出课外活动可以使学生更好地了解世界)Astudentmaytakeasimpleunderstandingaboutaffairshappenedintheworld.Buttheextracurricularactivitiescanteachonenotonlyaspecializedskill,butalsotheoverallconsiderationabilityandthereforebenefitthestudentsalot.Ingeneral,thesignificanceofextracurricularactivitiesliesinthefactthattheycanenlargestudents,scopeofknowledge,broadenstudents'mindandhelpstudentsgetadeeperunderstandingoftheworldthatthey'relivingin.(总体概括并强调论点)亮点词句proportionofstudentsenteringhighereducation升学率overallconsiderationability全面思考问题的能力thesignificanceofextracurricularactivitiesliesinthefactthattheycanenlargestudents’scopeofknowledge,broadenstudentsmindandhelpstudentsgetadeeperunderstandingoftheworldthatthey‘relivingin课外活动不仅可以扩大学生的知识面，还可以拓宽学社的视野，使学生更好地认识世界。Directions:InChina,mostcollegestudentsliveindormitories,usuallywithhalfadozenstudentssharingasmallroom.Therefore,conflictsmayoccursometimes.Whatshouldwedoinordertoliveharmoniouslyinadormitory?Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:HarmoniousDormitoryLifeinMind.【写作指导】本文属于典型的自由发挥作文。一般说来,应该从强调和谐的宿舍环境对大学生的重要性上出发,然后就如何创造和谐宿舍提出自己的建议,最后落脚到和谐的宿舍生活需要大家的共同努力。第一段:对在校住宿的大学生来说,拥有一个温馨和谐的宿舍环境是至关重要的。第二段:就如何营建自己心目中的和谐宿舍提出二至三条建议。第三段:总结全文,指出一个和谐良好的宿舍氛围需要大家共同努力来营造。HarmoniousDormitoryLifeinMyMindAharmoniousdormitorylifeisnecessaryandimportanttothestudentswholivethere.Tolearnhowtogetalongwithroommatesisthefirstthingstudentshavetodealwithatcollege.Inmyopinion,anidealandharmoniousdormitorylifecouldbeachievedinthefollowingways.(综述和谐宿舍的重要性,点明题旨,并引出下文)Firstandthemostimportantpointistorespectyourroommatessothatyourdoormatswillrespectyou'(分论点一,应尊重室友)Bekindtoeachotherandtakecareofthemiftheyneed.Doingthiscanhelpustocreateafriendlyandwarmenvironment.Second,wehavetolearntocompromise'(分论点二,应学会妥协)Forexample,ifyouliketotalkwithfriends,butyourroommateswanttostudy,takeyourfriendsout.Talkaboutyourhabitsandaskyourroommatesabouttheirs.Atlast,wemustlearntocommunicate.(分论点三,应学会通)Adormitoryismadeupofpeoplewithdifferencesinhabits,characterandbackground,soitissometimesinevitableforthemtorunintoconflicts.Whenmisunderstandingoccurs,wehadbettertrytocommunicatewitheachother.Onlyinthiswaywecanlivetogetherharmoniously.( 用列举法描述自己心中的和谐宿舍生活为此和谐的建立提出三点建议)Itcanbeconcludedthataharmoniousandwarmdormitorylifecomesfromallroommemberscooperation'onlybyrespect,compromiseandcommunicationcanweliveaharmoniousandhappydormitorylife.（总结上文，和谐的宿舍生活需要大家的共同努力.）亮点词句I'Tolearntogetalongwithroommatesthefirstthingstudentshavetodealwithatcollege.学会如何和室友相处是大学生在学校里要处理的第一件事。2'Itcanbeconcludedthataharmoniousandwarmdormitorylifecomesformallroommembers ’cooperation.综上所述，一种和谐温馨的宿舍生活需要大家共同合作与努力来营造。WiththedevelopmentofChineseeconomy,moreandmorepeopleliketraveling.SomePeopleliketowithacompanion,whileothersprefertotravelalone.Whichonedoyouprefer?Writeacompositionofabout200wordstostateyourview.【写作指导】本题是一个对比选择型题目。要求就独自旅游还是结伴出游作出选择,并为此选择提供充足理由。本题可发挥的空间很大,仁者见仁,智者见智,结合实际生活形成两种思路:思路一:独自旅游,好处在于可以拥有更多独立的空间。思路二:结伴出游,好处在于可以获得更多交流的乐趣。TheBenefitofTravelingwithFriendsNowadaysmoreandmorepeoplebecomeinterestedintraveling.Somepeopleprefertotravelalone,whileothersprefertogooutwithfriends.Personally,Iliketotravelwithfriends.(引出论点)Firstly,Icanenjoythepleasureoftalkingwithapartner'(提出第一分论点,指出结伴出游可以享受畅谈的乐趣)Ononehand'travelingwithfriendsprovidesmeopportunitiestotalkwiththemandalsosharemyjoyandgriefwiththem.Friends,ontheotherhand,canalsoprovideemotionalsupportformewhenwearriveinanewplace.Secondly,travelingwithfriendsenablesmetogetmoresafetyontheroad,forwecouldhelpeachotherwhenencounteringtroublesandaccidents. (提出第二分论点,指出结伴出游可以在紧急情况时获得伴的帮助,从而使旅游更加安全)Forexample,whenI’mfallingill,Imaygetcarefrommyfriends,otherwiseIwillsuffermorepainbothphysicallyandspiritually.Thirdly,travelingwithfriendsismoreeconomical.提第三分论点,指出结伴出游可以获得更多经济上的实惠Thetour-groupwilloftengetmorediscountthanthatofasingletravelerwhenvisitingafamoustoursite,havingboardandlodginginahotel.Moreover,friendscanalsoprovideeconomichelpifemergencyoccurs.Forinstance,ifoneloseshisorherpurseortheybringalongwithinadequatemoney,friendscouldalwaysdothemafavor.Therefore,it’seasyforonetodrawtheconclusionthattravelingwithfriendsisbetterthangoingoutalone.Travelingwithfriendscanmakethejourneymorefunnyandenjoyable.(总体概括并强调论点)Directions:Ascanbeseen,theemploymentsituationIgettingsevereinChinatheseyears.Whenmoststudentsswarmintovariousjobfairs,somejustturntosetuptheirownbusiness.Shouldnewlygraduatedcollegestudentsgettoworkorestablishabusiness?What youropiniononthisissue?Writeacompositionabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:ShouldNewlyGraduatedCollegeStudentsShouldNewlyGraduatedCollegestudentsGettoWorkorEstablishaBusiness?Atpresent,careerplanningbecomesasignificantquestionfornewlygraduatedcollegestudents.Asamatterofact,mostofthemprefertofindajobincompany,whileothersprefertosetuptheirownbusiness.Asforme,Iwouldliketofirstworkasanemployeeratherthanriskmyprecioustimetocreateabusiness.Gettingtoworkaftergraduationisabsolutelybetterthanestablishingabusiness.First,newlygraduatedcollegestudentsarefarfrompossessingthenecessaryassetssuchascapital,technology,andpublicrelationsiftheywanttoestablishabusiness.Operatingabusinessisaverycomprehensiveandcomplicatedproject.Manyelementsarerequiredandanyoneofthemmayeasilybringthebusinesstoahaulorevenandend.Second,workingasanemployeecangivestudentsprofessionalexperienceandpracticalcapacities.Whatcollegestudentslackisnotopportunitybutsuperiorability?Evengivenanalreadyprofitablebusiness,theycan’toperateitwellforabsenceofstrongleadershipandrelevantexperience.Thus,collegestudentsmustfirstimprovethemselvesbyaccumulatingalotofexperienceandleadershipinjobs.Third,establishingabusinessisveryrisky,whileafull-timejobcould guaranteeastablelife. Asmentionedabove,abusinessneedsahugeinputofmanyelements.Accordingtoanauthoritativesurvey,justfivepercentbeginningentrepreneurssucceedatlast.Thisissoriskythattoofewpeoplecanbeartheburdenoffailure. However,ajobcanmakeenjoyaregularandstablelife.Inaword,itisbetterfornewlygraduatedcollegestudentstofindajobinsteadofrashlyestablishingabusiness.Itisnotablethatworkingasanemployeeislessriskyandcouldfosterallkindsofabilities.Direction:Inrecentyears,moreandmoregraduateschoosetoworkabroad,whilesomechoosetostayathome.Everycoinhastwosides.What’syouropinionongraduate'sworkplace,homeorabroad?Givereasonsforyouranswer.Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:WorkingatHomeorAbroad【写作指导】,理由。本题可结合实际生活形成两种思路:思路一:出国,优势在于一些发达国家的科技水平比较高,给个人提供更高的发展空间,可选择性也大,各项设施的配备也较国内先进,更有利于个人的成功;但不好的地方在于,发达国家接收世界各国的高级人才,竞争激烈,工作压力大,生存成本高,如果没有足够的经济做后盾,很难生存。思路二:留在国内,,关系网比较广泛,做起工作比较得心应手,对国情比较了解,能随时应对一些变化,,境与发达国家相比有差距。就个人而言,工资收人较低。范文采用思路二,根据自己的实际情况,作为没有任何社会经验刚毕业的大学生,应该先在国内积累一定的社会经验再考虑出国发展。第一段:引出大学生毕业后回何处发展的话题,明确表示愿意留在国内工作。第二段:给出选择留在国内工作的理由并作出论证。第