中考英语写作公开课课件

ALessonofWritingALessonofWriting1假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组2Howtowriteacomposition.Howtowriteacomposition.3认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。写作第一步审写作第一步审4假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

主题字数人称体裁提示要点补充信息一般现在时时态假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组5用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步6YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.Mydreamistoworkatschool.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.7加加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：8YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Writingbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.aniceheadanicetailanicebodyYiKe'shobbyiswriting.She9连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作10英语写作时常用的过渡语:

表并列或递进：and,besides,both…and，notonly…butalso，what’smore,…表转折：but,yet,however,though，although…表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,…表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表总结陈词：ingeneral,allinall,inaword,generallyspeaking…英语写作时常用的过渡语:

表并列或递进：and,besid11

Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.alsoInthiswayBecauseBoysandgirls，alsoInthiswa12美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写13Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Soshethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditalsobringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Inthiswayhecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.Shewantstobeawriter.Shewantstobeasuccessfulwriterinthefuture,justlikeMoYan.

Hewantstobeaguide.

Heislookingforwardtotravellingabroadsohewantstobeaguideinforeigncountries.

HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.

Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeaWWFworkertosavetheanimalsindangerandhelpanimalsliveinpeace.Boysandgirls，Shewantstobe14适当运用名言或俗语Timeismoney.一寸光阴一寸金Timewaitsfornoman.岁月不待人Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老……适当运用名言或俗语Timeismoney.一寸光阴一寸15SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.WatchTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekWatchingbeachieveSkillOneMakeyoursentences16SkillTwoExpressindifferentways

Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.SkillTwoExpressindiffere17

他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistene18

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisv19书面表达写作技巧审列加连美书面表达写作技巧审列加连美20中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（25-21分）完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（20-16分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）（15-11分）基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（10-6分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第一档（差）（5-0分）

未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（25-21分）21Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tips:1.卷面工整。2.规范写作过程。3.多背诵美文，积累素材。Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tip22HaveaTry!HaveaTry!23书面表达以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供参考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue…书面表达以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于24Thanks!Thanks!251.新闻特写则是用形象的事实说话。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面进行描述，比消息更细腻、更生动、更形象。2.由于新闻特写的画面感特别强，因此常给读者以身临其境的感受。3.“花香蝶自来，题好一半文”，一篇文章有一个好的标题，就像一个人有一双明亮有神的眼睛一样，留给别人的是将是十分美好而深刻的印象，同时也是文学修养，语言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，从考试的角度来说，更是作文质量高底的一杆标尺。4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多一些有针对性的训练，掌握一定的技巧，达到需要应用时信手拈来，出语不俗的效果，感动自己，征服读者。5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步挖深、提炼出来的题目，源源源于材料而高于材料，加进去个体的感悟与理解，充满了理性的光辉，于平凡中见奇倔，也是很多喜欢定议论文的同学拟题一种好方法，很有思想深度。6.路在脚下，更在心中，“前方转弯”的路牌不是要你停下，而是提醒你该转弯了，心随路转，心路常宽。让思维转弯是人生的智慧，因为挫折往往是转折，危机同时也是转机。

7.自主性是天才的基本特征。正如居里夫人所说：“我们每个人都有能力干好一件事。”古今中外，多少仁人志士以自主为经，以勤奋为纬，编织成功。8.生存于宇宙间，同顶烈日炎炎，共沐明月清辉，我不比别人多，也不比别人少。只要勇于展示自己的个性与风采，我就没必要仰视任何人。1.新闻特写则是用形象的事实说话。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面26ALessonofWritingALessonofWriting27假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组28Howtowriteacomposition.Howtowriteacomposition.29认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。写作第一步审写作第一步审30假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

主题字数人称体裁提示要点补充信息一般现在时时态假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组31用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步32YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.Mydreamistoworkatschool.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.33加加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：34YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Writingbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.aniceheadanicetailanicebodyYiKe'shobbyiswriting.She35连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作36英语写作时常用的过渡语:

表并列或递进：and,besides,both…and，notonly…butalso，what’smore,…表转折：but,yet,however,though，although…表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,…表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表总结陈词：ingeneral,allinall,inaword,generallyspeaking…英语写作时常用的过渡语:

表并列或递进：and,besid37

Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.alsoInthiswayBecauseBoysandgirls，alsoInthiswa38美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写39Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Soshethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditalsobringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Inthiswayhecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.Shewantstobeawriter.Shewantstobeasuccessfulwriterinthefuture,justlikeMoYan.

Hewantstobeaguide.

Heislookingforwardtotravellingabroadsohewantstobeaguideinforeigncountries.

HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.

Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeaWWFworkertosavetheanimalsindangerandhelpanimalsliveinpeace.Boysandgirls，Shewantstobe40适当运用名言或俗语Timeismoney.一寸光阴一寸金Timewaitsfornoman.岁月不待人Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老……适当运用名言或俗语Timeismoney.一寸光阴一寸41SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.WatchTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekWatchingbeachieveSkillOneMakeyoursentences42SkillTwoExpressindifferentways

Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.SkillTwoExpressindiffere43

他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistene44

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarry