高三英语二轮复习-第二篇-分类写作6-感谢-祝福信课件

分类写作六、感谢/祝福信分类写作六、感谢/祝福信1recallthosebeautifuldays回忆那些美好的日子haveaninjection打针helpmewithmylessons帮助我的功课failintheexamination考试不合格blessings祝福expressone’ssinceregratitude表达真诚的谢意afeelingofanxiety焦虑感takeadeepbreath深深呼一口气calmdown冷静下来【必备词语】recallthosebeautifuldays回2applause掌声remindsb.of...使某人想起expressone’sthanksfor表达某人的感谢hospitality好客strictdiscipline严格的纪律treatsb.款待某人motherlycare母亲般的关怀returnone’skindness回报某人的善意【必备词语】applause掌声【必备词语】31.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.先谢谢您！2.Mayallyourdreamscometrue!祝您梦想成真！3.Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse!祝我们的友谊天长地久！4.I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong.我写信来表达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢！5.Withoutyourhelp,theperformancecouldn’thavebeenthatsuccessful.没有您的帮助，表演不会有那么成功。6.Weallmissyouandareverygratefulforwhatyoudidforus.我们都很想念您，也很感激您为我们做的一切。【好句朗诵】1.Thankyouverymuchinadva47.Howiseverythingwithyoulately?您最近如何？8.I’dliketoexpressmythanksforyourhospitalityandkindnesswhenIwasinAmerica.我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。9.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.给您和家人致以良好的祝福！10.Inaddition,whathasimpressedmemostis...而且，最让我感动的是……11.IhopesomedayyouwillcometovisitChinaandIcanreturnyourkindness.我希望有一天你能够来中国，我可以回报你的友好。【好句朗诵】7.Howiseverythingwithyou51.Iamwritingtoexpressmythankforyouradvice.1.thank改为thanks2.Terested改为interesting【单句改错】3.Withoutyourhelp,Icouldn’tpassadrivingtest.3.a改为the1.Iamwritingtoexpressmy64.IwouldlikeyoutoknowhowgratefulIamtoyouforyourkindnessandgenerous.4.generous改为generosity5.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltthanksforyoukindletterofsympathy.5.you改为your【单句改错】6.Nothinghasgivenmemorepleasantthantheletteryousentmeontheoccasionofmyillness.6.pleasant改为pleasure4.Iwouldlikeyoutoknowho77.Ithankyoubythedeepconcernyouhaveshownaboutmyhealth.7.by改为for8.Yourfriendshiplikeawarmfireintheicywinter,whichwillremainacomfortandgivemestrength.8.like前面加上is【单句改错】7.Ithankyoubythedeepcon89.WithyourhelpwewereabletovisittheNationalPeresting改为interest10.Yourkindnessandhospitalitywillforeverbecherishedinourmemorize.10.memorize改为memory【单句改错】9.Withyourhelpwewereable9【2008全国Ⅰ卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1.自我介绍；2.祝贺苏琳生日；3.感谢工作人员；4.索取苏琳三岁生日照。【真题满分佳作赏析】【2008全国Ⅰ卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾】【真题满分佳作赏析】10满分佳作（一）DearSir/Madam,

GreetingsfromChina!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.①AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethree.②I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?③Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua满分佳作（一）11满分赏析①用到Iwasdelightedtolearnthat…这个宾语从句句型；givebirthto(产子)使用得当，像这种短语如果用错，会给老师留下不好的印象，可能使作文降低一个档次。②用到表示感谢的句型toexpressmythankstosb.；后面becauseofwhich介词加which的定语从句使句子显得更加高级。③Thankyouverymuchinadvance是表示感谢的套语，inadvance(提前)显得语气真切。满分赏析12满分佳作（二）DearSir/Madam,

GreetingsfromChina!ThisisLiHua,astudentinChina.①I’vebeenfondofpandassincemychildhood.②Sincethreeyearsago,whenthepandaBaiyungavebirthtoababypandaSulin,Ihavebeenvisitingyourwebsitetokeepmyselfinformedabouthowthingsaregoingforthem.IfIrememberclearly,shewillturnthreesoon.③Iwanttosayhappybirthdaytoherandexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,withwhichshehasbeenbroughtupandhasbeenlivinghappilywithherparentsintheUS.④Bytheway,IwonderifIcouldhaveaphototakenofSulinonherthirdbirthday.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua满分佳作（二）13满分赏析①短语befondof，表示“喜欢”，比简单的like显得更好，符合“短语优先”的原则。②tokeepmyselfinformedaboutsth.(让我对……情况有及时的了解)，用得非常地道。③expressmythankstosb.forsth.作为表示感谢的句型，运用准确；withwhich的定语从句更显语法功力。④IwonderifIcould…这样的句型表示请求，更显语气委婉礼貌。满分赏析14【2007湖南卷改编：毕业祝福】作文原题假设你叫李华，王平是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给王平写一篇毕业留言。要点：1.简要表述王平在你心目中的印象；2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；3.对王平表示美好的祝愿。【模仿翻译】【2007湖南卷改编：毕业祝福】【模仿翻译】15作文翻译亲爱的王平，

是时候说再见了。是时候回忆我们一起度过的美好时光了。你正是在我需要的时候给我帮助的那个人。

还记得两年前的那个晚上吗？我突然生病时，是你背着我到附近的医院。我打针时，你把我照顾很好。后来，你设法帮助我学习。没有你的帮助，我考试不会通过了。

我依然有数百个故事和你分享。我依然有数千个祝福给你。愿你所有梦想成真！愿我们的友谊直到永远！你的，李华作文翻译16DearWangPing,It’stimetosaygoodbye.It’stimetorecallthosebeautifuldayswespendtogether.Youaretheverypersonwhogivesmeahandwhennecessary.Stillrememberthatnighttwoyearsago?WhenIsuddenlyfellill,itwasyouwhocarriedmeonyourbacktoanearbyhospital.YoutookgoodcareofmewhileIwashavinganinjection.Later,youmanagedtohelpmewithmylessons.Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldhavefailedintheexamination.Istillhavehundredsofstoriestosharewithyou.Istillhavethousandsofblessingsforyou.Mayallyourdreamscometrue!Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse!Yours,LiHuaDearWangPing,17【模拟真题：感谢外教帮忙】作文原题假如你是李华，你的外教Bill帮你排练了一首英文歌曲，在学校的圣诞派对上你的表演取得了成功，请你写一封电子邮件，向他描述一下晚会及你的情况，并向他表示感谢。【模拟真题：感谢外教帮忙】18作文翻译亲爱的Bill，

我写这封信来表达我对您教我英文歌的衷心感谢，也与你分享我的经历。

因为今天是圣诞节，我们学校早上举办了一个圣诞派对，在派对上老师和学生表演了很多精彩的节目。我唱了您教我的那首英文歌。我走上舞台的那一刻，一种紧张感袭来。然而，深呼吸之后，我冷静了下来。我的歌刚唱完，掌声如雷。我的表演棒极了。

这是我第一次在公众场合进行这样好的表演。没有您的帮助，这次表演不可能这么成功。

再次感谢，圣诞快乐！您真挚的，李华作文翻译19DearBill,I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong,andtosharemyexperiencewithyou.SinceitisChristmastoday,ourschoolheldaChristmaspartyinthemorning,wherethereweresomanyamazingperformancesbystudentsandteachers.Isangthesongyoutaughtme.ThemomentIgotonthestage,afeelingofanxietycameovertome.However,takingadeepbreath,Icalmeddown.Rightaftermysong,applauseoverwhelmedme!Myperformancewasabsolutelyfantastic.Itisthefirsttimeformetogivesuchawonderfulperformanceinpublic.Withoutyourhelp,theperformancecouldn’thavebeenthatsuccessful.ThanksagainandmerryChristmas!Sincerely,LiHuaDearBill,20【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的SueWood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。写作要点：

1.对她表达感谢之意； 2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情； 3.希望了解她的近况。DearSue,……Allthebest!LiHua【全真考场】【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】【全真考场】21【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】DearSue,I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinChina.It’sbeenalmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallmissyouandareverygratefulforwhatyoudidforuswhenweweretogether.Wearebusyasusual.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize!Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowingwell.Willyoucomebacktoseeit?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouandyourAmericanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest!LiHua【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】22【模拟真题：感谢外国学生的招待】假设你是李华，暑假你随学校组织的访问团去美国参观访问了几所中学，并与纽约州长岛市NewcomersHighSchool的学生Tina成了好朋友。回国后，你打算给Tina写一封信，主要内容如下：

1.表达你的感激之情，以及邀请和祝愿；

2.赞叹该校美丽的环境和严谨的学风；

3.谈一下你的志愿。DearTina, Howareyou?IamnowbackinChina.……Yours,LiHua【模拟真题：感谢外国学生的招待】23【模拟真题：感谢外国学生的招待】DearTina,

Howareyou?IamnowbackinChina.IhadawonderfultimeinAmerica,whichIwillalwaystreasure.First,I’dliketoexpressmythanksforyourhospitalityandkindnesswhenIwasinAmerica.Itwassoniceofyoutoshowmearoundyourschoolandintroduceitshistorytome.Yourschoolisamazinginthatithasnotonlyabeautifulcampusbutalsostrictdiscipline.Besides,thedeliciousfoodtowhichyoutreatedmeimpressedmedeeply.HopefullyyoucancometoChinasomedayandIhavethechancetorepayyouinthesameway.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.Yours,LiHua【模拟真题：感谢外国学生的招待】24【模拟真题：感谢接待家庭】假设你是李华，刚结束学校安排的“加拿大之旅”返回长沙。请给你在加拿大时接待家庭的主人Johnson夫妇写一封信，主要内容包括：

1.你已安全返回长沙；

2.感谢他们的盛情款待和照顾;

3.希望他们有时间来长沙游玩。DearMr.andMrs.Johnson, I’mwritingtotellyouthatIhadasafejourneybacktoChangsha. … Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua【模拟真题：感谢接待家庭】25【模拟真题：感谢接待家庭】DearMr.andMrs.Johnson,

I’mwritingtotellyouthatIhadasafejourneybacktoChangsha.Thankstoyourhospitality,IhadawonderfultimeinCanada.ItwasmyfirsttimetogoabroadandIwasnaturallyabitnervouswhenIfirstarrived.ThefirsttimeIsawyouattheairport,Iknewfromyourwarmsmilethateverythingwouldbeallright.Withyourhelp,IvisitedsomanyplacesofinterestinCanada,ofwhichIhavegoodmemories.Inaddition,whathasimpressedmemostisyourmotherlycarewhenIwasill,whichmademefeelathome.IhopesomedayyouwillcometovisitChangshaandIcanreturnyourkindness.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua【模拟真题：感谢接待家庭】26ThankYou!ThankYou!27分类写作六、感谢/祝福信分类写作六、感谢/祝福信28recallthosebeautifuldays回忆那些美好的日子haveaninjection打针helpmewithmylessons帮助我的功课failintheexamination考试不合格blessings祝福expressone’ssinceregratitude表达真诚的谢意afeelingofanxiety焦虑感takeadeepbreath深深呼一口气calmdown冷静下来【必备词语】recallthosebeautifuldays回29applause掌声remindsb.of...使某人想起expressone’sthanksfor表达某人的感谢hospitality好客strictdiscipline严格的纪律treatsb.款待某人motherlycare母亲般的关怀returnone’skindness回报某人的善意【必备词语】applause掌声【必备词语】301.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.先谢谢您！2.Mayallyourdreamscometrue!祝您梦想成真！3.Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse!祝我们的友谊天长地久！4.I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong.我写信来表达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢！5.Withoutyourhelp,theperformancecouldn’thavebeenthatsuccessful.没有您的帮助，表演不会有那么成功。6.Weallmissyouandareverygratefulforwhatyoudidforus.我们都很想念您，也很感激您为我们做的一切。【好句朗诵】1.Thankyouverymuchinadva317.Howiseverythingwithyoulately?您最近如何？8.I’dliketoexpressmythanksforyourhospitalityandkindnesswhenIwasinAmerica.我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。9.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.给您和家人致以良好的祝福！10.Inaddition,whathasimpressedmemostis...而且，最让我感动的是……11.IhopesomedayyouwillcometovisitChinaandIcanreturnyourkindness.我希望有一天你能够来中国，我可以回报你的友好。【好句朗诵】7.Howiseverythingwithyou321.Iamwritingtoexpressmythankforyouradvice.1.thank改为thanks2.Terested改为interesting【单句改错】3.Withoutyourhelp,Icouldn’tpassadrivingtest.3.a改为the1.Iamwritingtoexpressmy334.IwouldlikeyoutoknowhowgratefulIamtoyouforyourkindnessandgenerous.4.generous改为generosity5.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltthanksforyoukindletterofsympathy.5.you改为your【单句改错】6.Nothinghasgivenmemorepleasantthantheletteryousentmeontheoccasionofmyillness.6.pleasant改为pleasure4.Iwouldlikeyoutoknowho347.Ithankyoubythedeepconcernyouhaveshownaboutmyhealth.7.by改为for8.Yourfriendshiplikeawarmfireintheicywinter,whichwillremainacomfortandgivemestrength.8.like前面加上is【单句改错】7.Ithankyoubythedeepcon359.WithyourhelpwewereabletovisittheNationalPeresting改为interest10.Yourkindnessandhospitalitywillforeverbecherishedinourmemorize.10.memorize改为memory【单句改错】9.Withyourhelpwewereable36【2008全国Ⅰ卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1.自我介绍；2.祝贺苏琳生日；3.感谢工作人员；4.索取苏琳三岁生日照。【真题满分佳作赏析】【2008全国Ⅰ卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾】【真题满分佳作赏析】37满分佳作（一）DearSir/Madam,

GreetingsfromChina!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.①AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethree.②I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?③Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua满分佳作（一）38满分赏析①用到Iwasdelightedtolearnthat…这个宾语从句句型；givebirthto(产子)使用得当，像这种短语如果用错，会给老师留下不好的印象，可能使作文降低一个档次。②用到表示感谢的句型toexpressmythankstosb.；后面becauseofwhich介词加which的定语从句使句子显得更加高级。③Thankyouverymuchinadvance是表示感谢的套语，inadvance(提前)显得语气真切。满分赏析39满分佳作（二）DearSir/Madam,

GreetingsfromChina!ThisisLiHua,astudentinChina.①I’vebeenfondofpandassincemychildhood.②Sincethreeyearsago,whenthepandaBaiyungavebirthtoababypandaSulin,Ihavebeenvisitingyourwebsitetokeepmyselfinformedabouthowthingsaregoingforthem.IfIrememberclearly,shewillturnthreesoon.③Iwanttosayhappybirthdaytoherandexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,withwhichshehasbeenbroughtupandhasbeenlivinghappilywithherparentsintheUS.④Bytheway,IwonderifIcouldhaveaphototakenofSulinonherthirdbirthday.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua满分佳作（二）40满分赏析①短语befondof，表示“喜欢”，比简单的like显得更好，符合“短语优先”的原则。②tokeepmyselfinformedaboutsth.(让我对……情况有及时的了解)，用得非常地道。③expressmythankstosb.forsth.作为表示感谢的句型，运用准确；withwhich的定语从句更显语法功力。④IwonderifIcould…这样的句型表示请求，更显语气委婉礼貌。满分赏析41【2007湖南卷改编：毕业祝福】作文原题假设你叫李华，王平是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给王平写一篇毕业留言。要点：1.简要表述王平在你心目中的印象；2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；3.对王平表示美好的祝愿。【模仿翻译】【2007湖南卷改编：毕业祝福】【模仿翻译】42作文翻译亲爱的王平，

是时候说再见了。是时候回忆我们一起度过的美好时光了。你正是在我需要的时候给我帮助的那个人。

还记得两年前的那个晚上吗？我突然生病时，是你背着我到附近的医院。我打针时，你把我照顾很好。后来，你设法帮助我学习。没有你的帮助，我考试不会通过了。

我依然有数百个故事和你分享。我依然有数千个祝福给你。愿你所有梦想成真！愿我们的友谊直到永远！你的，李华作文翻译43DearWangPing,It’stimetosaygoodbye.It’stimetorecallthosebeautifuldayswespendtogether.Youaretheverypersonwhogivesmeahandwhennecessary.Stillrememberthatnighttwoyearsago?WhenIsuddenlyfellill,itwasyouwhocarriedmeonyourbacktoanearbyhospital.YoutookgoodcareofmewhileIwashavinganinjection.Later,youmanagedtohelpmewithmylessons.Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldhavefailedintheexamination.Istillhavehundredsofstoriestosharewithyou.Istillhavethousandsofblessingsforyou.Mayallyourdreamscometrue!Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse!Yours,LiHuaDearWangPing,44【模拟真题：感谢外教帮忙】作文原题假如你是李华，你的外教Bill帮你排练了一首英文歌曲，在学校的圣诞派对上你的表演取得了成功，请你写一封电子邮件，向他描述一下晚会及你的情况，并向他表示感谢。【模拟真题：感谢外教帮忙】45作文翻译亲爱的Bill，

我写这封信来表达我对您教我英文歌的衷心感谢，也与你分享我的经历。

因为今天是圣诞节，我们学校早上举办了一个圣诞派对，在派对上老师和学生表演了很多精彩的节目。我唱了您教我的那首英文歌。我走上舞台的那一刻，一种紧张感袭来。然而，深呼吸之后，我冷静了下来。我的歌刚唱完，掌声如雷。我的表演棒极了。

这是我第一次在公众场合进行这样好的表演。没有您的帮助，这次表演不可能这么成功。

再次感谢，圣诞快乐！您真挚的，李华作文翻译46DearBill,I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong,andtosharemyexperiencewithyou.SinceitisChristmastoday,ourschoolheldaChristmaspartyinthemorning,wherethereweresomanyamazingperformancesbystudentsandteachers.Isangthesongyoutaughtme.ThemomentIgotonthestage,afeelingofanxietycameovertome.However,takingadeepbreath,Icalmeddown.Rightaftermysong,applauseoverwhelmedme!Myperformancewasabsolutelyfantastic.Itisthefirsttimeformetogivesuchawonderfulperformanceinpublic.Withoutyourhelp,theperformancecouldn’thavebeenthatsuccessful.ThanksagainandmerryChristmas!Sincerely,LiHuaDearBill,47【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的SueWood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。写作要点：

1.对她表达感谢之意； 2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情； 3.希望了解她的近况。DearSue,……Allthebest!LiHua【全真考场】【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】【全真考场】48【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】DearSue,I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinChina.It’sbeenalmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallmissyouandareverygratefulforwhatyoudidforuswhenweweretogether.Wearebusyasusual.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize!Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowingwell.Willyoucomebacktoseeit?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouandyourAmericanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest!LiHua【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】49【模拟真题：