读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-高三英语写作专项复习

读后续写阅读下面材料,

根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,

使之构成一篇完整的短文。Countingthevotestookaboutfiveminutes,butitseemedlikehours.Atlast,afterthreelongyears,the“PCHS”lettersonmyuniformwouldsoonbeedgedwithgoldcording(金线),identifyingmeastheimportantCaptainofPolkCountyHighSchoolcheerleaders(啦啦队员),whichwasquiteanaccomplishmentbeforeIendedmyschooldaysinablazeofglory.“Girls,”shebegan,“itismypleasuretoannouncethatTerryShawhasbeenelectedCaptainofPolkCountyHighSchoolcheerleadingteam.”Aresoundingcheerwasheardthroughoutthegym.Howcouldthisbe?Ihadn'tmissedapracticeoragameinthreeyears.Terrycouldn'tclaimthisflawlessrecord.EveryonegatheredaroundTerrywithcongratulations,butIwasgluedtomyseatthatonlymomentsbeforewasthespringboardtomythrone(宝座).Shehadstolenmythunderandsweptmydreamrightoutfromunderme.Finally,IwalkedovertoTerryonshakylegsandmanageda“Goodluck,Terry,”inawhisperthatbarelymaskedmyurgetocry.Terryhuggedmecloseandsaid,“Iwasn'texpectingthis,Annie.Whatashock.”Ididn’treplyherwithmeanwordsbutdeepinsideIwantedtodojustthat.Allthewayhome,Isobbed.TherewasnowayIwasgoingtostayonateamsoblindthattheycouldn'tseetheonemostdeservingofbeingnamedcaptain.Islammedthefrontdoor,stompedupthestepsandthrewmyselfontomybedinadramaticdisplayofsobsandsighsthateventuallygavewaytosleep.ThenextmorningImarchedovertomyclosetandtookoutmyuniform.OnceitwasinmyhandsandIhelditclosetome,IknewIcouldn'tquit.HeartbrokenasIwas,mytruelovewascheeringwithmyteammates.HowharditwastogotothatfirstpracticeafterTerryhadbeennamedcaptain.ThemomentIarrived,CoachMaguireaskedmetotakethreeofthenewgirlsandworkwiththemonourbasicpractice.Terrywasassignedthreeaswell.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。para1:

Just

thenTerryaskedmeifwecould

gatherallthegirlsandwordwiththem

together.para2:

Attheendoftheyear,theAnnualSportsAward

Ceremony

washeldtohonorthevaluable

playersand

cheerleaders.一、文本分析---readingforwriting(DCWPanalysis)1.

discourseanalysis:

1)

mainidea:

2)

writingfeature2.Characteranalysis:

1)Maincharacter

2)falsecharacter

3.

Wordfrequencyanalysis

4.

Perspectiveanalysis:I---thefirstaddress

topic:competitionandcooperation（竞争与合作）

theme:

correctattitudetowards

"winandlose"（正确的“输赢观”）二、遣词造句---语料库配对（wordbank）para1:1.情绪诅丧，但仍旧以大局为重(坚持带领队员、与Terry合作训练)

1)ReluctantasIwas,astrongurge/senseofresponsibilitytookholdofme,makingmenodmyheadautomatically/unconsciously.(倒装/无灵主语/非谓语)2)Thoughmymindwasstillfeelingbitterfortheelectionloss,disappointmentandgriefinstantlygavewaytoasenseofresponsibilityatTerry’srequest.(状从/无灵主语)3)Althoughutterlyburdenedwithgriefandgrievanceinmymind,Ihesitatedbutimmediatelynoddedmyheadfirmly,tryinghardtoconcealmynegativefeelingsinarationalway.(非谓语)4)Mysorrowfultearssparklinginmyeyes,Iquicklysqueezedafalsesmileandagreedinnotime,

attemptingtoleaveadecentimpressiononnewgirls.（独立主格/非谓语）2.展示技能和品质Asaseniorandexperiencedcheerleader,IwassofamiliarandskilledateverymovementandgesturethatundoubtedlyIcooperatedwithTerryflawlesslytogiveaperfectdemonstrationtonewly-recruitedgirls.3.

破冰，与Terry成为朋友Withtimegoingby,whatsurprisedmemostwasthatmygrievancegraduallyfadedawaywhilemyadmirationforTerry’scapabilityandleadershipgrewstronger.Itseemedasifwehadestablishedaclosebondduringdailyroutinepracticeunknowingly.para2:

1.宣布之前---心情忐忑与期待

Beforetheannouncement,seatedrestlesslyanduneasily,Iduckeddownmyheadwithmyheartthumpingwildly,aflushofanxietymingledwithexpectationfloodedmeover.(非谓语/动作描写/无灵主语)2.宣布时---全场掌声1)Mymindwaswanderingoffaimlesslywhensuddenlyaburstofthunderousapplauseeruptedfromtheaudiencethemomentourcoachdeclaredmynameasthevaluablecheerleader.2)NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimagineIwouldtakeuptheawardinsuchamovingwaythatmymindwentblankwithecstasy，mytearsgleaminginmyeyes.（倒装/独立主格）3.宣布后---收获祝福Terrywasthefirsttohugmefirmlyandotherteammatessurroundedme,genuinecongratulationsfloodingmeover,“Annie,youreallydeservetheprizeforyourdedicationandcooperation.Weallloveyou!”（独立主格/点题）三、书写成文---注意卷面（neatlayout）

JustthenTerryaskedmeifIcouldgatherallthegirlsandworkwiththemtogether.

Thoughmyheartwasstillfeelingbitter/beingtorturedfortheelectionloss,disappointmentandgrieffinallygavewaytoasenseofresponsibilityatTerry’srequest.Asaseniorandexperiencedcheerleader,Iwassofamiliarandskilled/professionalateverymovement/gesturethatundoubtedlyIcooperatedwithTerryflawlesslytogiveaperfectdemonstrationtonewly-recruitedgirls.Withtimegoingby/Asourcooperationprogressed,whatstartledmemostwasthatmygrievancegraduallyfadedawaywhilemyadmirationforTerry’scapabilityandleadershipgrewstronger.Itseemedasifwehadestablishedaclosebondduringdailyroutinepracticeunknowingly.

Attheendoftheyear,theAnnualSportsAwardCeremonywasheldtohonorthevaluableplaysandcheerleaders.

Beforetheannouncement,restlessanduneasy,Iduckeddownmyheadwithmyheartthumpingwildly,aflushofanxietymingledwithexpectationfloodedmeover.Mymindwaswanderingoffaimlesslywhensuddenlyaburstofthunde